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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Alittleboywaswalkingaroundonthestreetinsearchoffood.HisnamewasLiam,andhisstomachhadbeengrowlingfortwodays.Theautumnwindbithischeeks,andhisoldjacketwastoothintokeepoutthecold.Hewalkedpastabakery,wherethesweetsmelloffreshlybakedbreadfloatedoutgoldenloavessatinthewindow,makinghismouthwater.Hisfeetstoppedautomatically,buthehesitatedhehadnomoney,andhewasafraidtheownerwouldshoutathim.Hehadbeenturnedawaybyshopkeepersbefore,andthatmadehimshrinkback,handsholdingtightlytothebottomedgeofhisjacket.Justthen,thebakerydooropened.Awomanwithbrownhairsteppedout,wipingherhandsonawhiteapron,hereyessoftwithkindness.“Hithere,kid,”shesaid,hervoicesoft.“Youlooklikeyoucouldusesomethingwarm.”Liam’seyeslookedquicklytotheground;hedidn’tknowhowtoanswernoonehadspokentohimsogentlyinalongtime.Thewoman,wholatertoldhimhernamewasMrsCarter,smiledandheldoutasmallloafofbread.“It’sonthehouse(免費提供的),”shesaid.Liamtookitslowly,hisfingerstrembling,andsaidsoftlyaquiet“thankyou”beforehuggingtheloaftohischestquickly,likeitwasapreciousgift.MrsCarternoticedhisshynessandadded,“Ifyouwant,youcaneinlatertohelpmetidytheshelvesIcoulduseanextrahand,andI’llgiveyouanotherloafforyourwork.”Liamnodded.Thatafternoon,heshowedupatthebakery,hisshoeswipedcleanasbesthecould.Hewipedtheglasscasescarefully,piledbreadbagsneatly,andtriednottomakeasoundhecheckedeachshelftwicetomakesurenothingwasoutofplace.MrsCarterchattedwithhimsometimes,askingabouthisday,andLiamgraduallystartedtorelax.Forthefirsttimeinweeks,hedidn’tfeellikeaburden.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Buttroublecamewhenhewascarryingajarofflour._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Insteadofscolding,shekneltdownandpickedupthebrokenjarpiecesgently._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析角色:_____________________________視角:第________人稱3.時空線:fromthestreet(searchingforfood)______________thebakery(carryingflour)4.請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來。HowwasLiam'slivingconditionwhenhewasonthestreet?:______________________________________________WhydidLiamhesitateoutsidethebakery?:____________________________________________HowdidMrsCartertreatLiamwhentheyfirstmet?:_______________________HowdidLiamperformwhenworkinginthebakery?:___________________________________HowdidLiamfeelwhenworkinginthebakery?:_______________________WhattroublehappenedtoLiamwhileworking?:__________________________________________________WhatdidLiamdoafterthetroublehappened?:___________________HowdidMrsCarterdealwiththetrouble?:_______________________________________5.情節(jié)線:我(Liam)在街上尋找食物?!鷂__________________________________→____________________________________→________________________________→(續(xù)寫)Liam搬面粉時出意外摔碎罐子?!ɡm(xù)寫)MrsCarter沒有責罵,而是安慰Liam并一起清理,還送他禮物。6.情感線:I:hungry&cold&scared→___________________→___________________→(續(xù)寫)____________________→(續(xù)寫)7.綜合以上信息,請用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個)中文:________________________________________________________________________英文:________________________________________________________________________8.句式:請從文中找出或結合續(xù)寫內(nèi)容寫出符合要求的句式(賓語從句;非謂語;感嘆句;同位語;比喻;夸張)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文屬于人與他人:_______________________________________情節(jié)構造第一段提示句:Buttroublecamewhenhewascarryingajarofflour.銜接句1———對前面的"carryingajarofflour"提問“出了什么具體意外?”:Whatspecificaccidenthappened?過渡句推演:銜接1→?←銜接2銜接句2———對"trouble"提問“Liam當時的反應和心理活動是什么?”:WhatwasLiam'sreactionandpsychologicalactivitythen?第二段提示句:Insteadofscolding,shekneltdownandpickedupthebrokenjarpiecesgently.銜接3———對"Insteadofscolding"提問“MrsCarter具體做了什么和說了什么?”:WhatdidMrsCarterspecificallydoandsay?過渡句推演:銜接3→?←主題主題:_________________________________段落構思第一段:Buttroublecamewhenhewascarryingajarofflour.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:Insteadofscolding,shekneltdownandpickedupthebrokenjarpiecesgently.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析1.角色:Liam(饑餓寒冷的小男孩)、MrsCarter(善良的面包店女主人)、曾經(jīng)驅趕過Liam的店主(提及)2.視角:第一人稱3.時空線:fromthestreet(searchingforfood)outsidethebakery→insidethebakery(helpingtidyshelves)thebakery(carryingflour)4.請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來。HowwasLiam'slivingconditionwhenhewasonthestreet?:Hewasextremelyhungry(stomachgrowlingfortwodays)andcold(autumnwindbitingcheeks,oldandthinjacket),withnomoney.WhydidLiamhesitateoutsidethebakery?:Hehadnomoneyandwasafraidofbeingshoutedatbytheowner,ashehadbeenturnedawaybyshopkeepersbefore.HowdidMrsCartertreatLiamwhentheyfirstmet?:Shespoketohimsoftly,gavehimafreeloafofbread,andofferedhimaparttimejob(tidyingshelvesinexchangeforanotherloaf).HowdidLiamperformwhenworkinginthebakery?:Hewipedhisshoescleanbeforeing,wipedglasscasescarefully,piledbreadbagsneatly,avoidedmakingnoise,andcheckedshelvestwicetoensureorder.HowdidLiamfeelwhenworkinginthebakery?:Hegraduallyrelaxedanddidn'tfeellikeaburdenforthefirsttimeinweeks.WhattroublehappenedtoLiamwhileworking?:Hestumbledoveraloosenailandbrokeajarofflour,whichspilledallovertheground.WhatdidLiamdoafterthetroublehappened?:Hefrozeatfirst,thenfeltscaredandguilty,stammeredanapology,andbentdowntopickupthebrokenpieces.HowdidMrsCarterdealwiththetrouble?:Shedidn'tscoldhim,kneltdowntopickupthepiecesgently,fortedhim,cleanedupwithhim,sharedhersimilarexperience,andlatergavehimbreadandascarf.5.情節(jié)線:我(Liam)在街上尋找食物。→被面包店香味吸引但因沒錢和膽怯而猶豫→面包店女主人MrsCarter友善給予免費面包并提供工作→我認真工作,逐漸放松不再覺得是負擔→(續(xù)寫)我搬面粉時出意外摔碎罐子。→(續(xù)寫)MrsCarter沒有責罵,而是安慰我并一起清理,還送我禮物。6.情感線:I:hungry&cold&scared→hesitant→grateful­→relaxed(續(xù)寫)→panicked&guilty→forted&warm7.綜合以上信息,請用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個)中文:饑餓寒冷的小男孩Liam在街上尋找食物時,被面包店的香味吸引卻因沒錢和過往經(jīng)歷而不敢上前。善良的面包店女主人MrsCarter主動給了他免費面包,還讓他幫忙整理貨架以換取另一塊面包。Liam認真工作并逐漸放松,不料搬面粉時摔碎了罐子,他十分恐慌,但MrsCarter不僅沒責罵,還安慰他并一起清理,最后送他面包和圍巾,讓他感受到久違的溫暖。英文:AhungryandcoldlittleboynamedLiamwassearchingforfoodonthestreet.Hewasattractedbythesmellofabakerybuthesitatedtoapproachduetolackofmoneyandpastbadexperiences.MrsCarter,thekindbakeryowner,gavehimafreeloafofbreadandofferedhimajobtidyingshelvesforanotherloaf.Liamworkedhardandgraduallyrelaxed,butaccidentallybrokeaflourjarwhilecarryingit.Hewaspanicked,butMrsCarterdidn'tscoldhim;instead,shefortedhim,cleanedupwithhim,andfinallygavehimbreadandascarf,makinghimfeellonglostwarmth.8.句式:賓語從句;非謂語;感嘆句;同位語;完全倒裝句;比喻;夸張賓語從句:Herememberedhowshopkeepershadshoutedathimbefore.(how引導賓語從句作remembered的賓語)非謂語:Hisfeetstoppedautomatically,buthehesitated—hehadnomoney,andhewasafraidtheownerwouldshoutathim.(現(xiàn)在分詞shouting作賓語補足語)感嘆句:WhatakindwomanMrsCarteris!(what引導感嘆句贊美MrsCarter的善良)同位語:Thewoman,wholatertoldhimhernamewasMrsCarter,smiledandheldoutasmallloafofbread.(who引導的定語從句相當于同位語,補充說明thewoman的身份)比喻:Liamtookitslowly,hisfingerstrembling,andsaidsoftlyaquiet"thankyou"beforehuggingtheloaftohischestquickly,likeitwasapreciousgift.(將面包比作珍貴的禮物)夸張:Memoriesofshopkeepersyellingathimfloodedin—heclenchedhisfists,tearswellingup.(用floodedin夸張體現(xiàn)不好的回憶瞬間涌現(xiàn))9.本文屬于人與他人:陌生人之間的善意傳遞與溫暖互助情節(jié)構造第一段提示句:Buttroublecamewhenhewascarryingajarofflour.銜接句1———對前面的"carryingajarofflour"提問“出了什么具體意外?”:Whatspecificaccidenthappened?過渡句推演:銜接1→意外發(fā)生的過程和現(xiàn)場狀況如何?←銜接2銜接句2———對"trouble"提問“Liam當時的反應和心理活動是什么?”:WhatwasLiam'sreactionandpsychologicalactivity

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