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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。I’mnotknowntobeaparticularlyluckyperson.Raffles(抽獎(jiǎng)),tshirtcannons,radiocalls,randomroommateselections—noneoftheseeverseemtoworkoutinmyfavor.ButmyfortuneseemedtohitanalltimelowlastMonday.Thedaystartedniceenough.Iwenttowork,gotoffatfiveanddecidedtoheadtothebeach.Itwasswelteringhot,andIknewthecoolwatersofLakeMichiganwouldhelpwashawaymysweat.Thefirstsignoftroublewaswhenmycellphonenavigationstoppedworkingproperlyandshowedthewrongdirections.Iwasnewtotheareaanddidn’tquiteknowmywayaroundyet,soIendeduptakingawrongturnanddrivingthroughawebofneighborhoods,turninga10minutedriveintoa40minuteone.Butfine,Igetlostoften.Imadeittothebeacheventually.Tookaquickdipinthewater,hadabiteofthebutterpaneerIhadpickedupearlier.Imadeitbacktomycar,pullingsomeclothesouttochangeinto.AsIheadedtotherestroom,IrealizedIhadforgottenashirt.SoIwalkedback,tuggedonthehandleandrealizedwithhorrorthatmykeysweresittinginthepassengerseatofmycar.IcalledAAA(AmericanAutomobileAssociation).Asitturnsout,Idon’thaveanAAAmembership.Icalledmyparentsandtheyanxiouslytriedtofigureouthowtoaddmetotheircard,whilemyphonebatterywasat21%anddropping.IcalledAAAagain,andtheyinformedmethattheywouldbethereinaboutanhourandahalf,whichseemedlikealongtimeasIsatontopofthetrunkofmycar.Thesunwasloweringintheskyandtheparkinglotwasemptyingout.Iheardthunder,andIsawpeopleexitingthebeachatanincreasingrate.WhenIcheckedmyweatherapp,Isawanalarmingupdate:aheatadvisory(預(yù)警),a100%chanceofalightningstorm,andatornadowarning.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Fearfulandalone,Istoodfrozenasthunderrolledcloser.________________________________________________________________________________ThekindladydrovemethroughthepoundingraintowardanearbyStarbucks.________________________________________________________________________________文本分析1.角色:_____________________________2.視角:第________人稱(chēng)3.時(shí)空線(xiàn):fromwork______________thebeachparkinglot4.請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮袑⒖赡艿木€(xiàn)索都找出來(lái)。What'sthenarrator'susuallucklike?:______________________________________________Whydidthenarratorgotothebeach?:____________________________________________Whattroublesdidthenarratormeetonthewaytothebeach?:_______________________Whatwastheterriblethingthathappenedafterthenarratorwenttothebeach?:___________________________________WhatproblemdidthenarratorfacewhencallingAAAforthefirsttime?:_______________________HowlongwouldAAAtaketoarriveafterthesecondcall?:__________________________________________________Whatweatherconditionswereingaccordingtotheweatherapp?:___________________Whatwasthenarrator'ssituationwhenthunderrolledcloser?:_______________________________________情節(jié)線(xiàn):我向來(lái)運(yùn)氣不好,上周一再陷低谷?!鷂___________→______________→___________________→(續(xù)寫(xiě))雷聲漸近,我又怕又孤獨(dú),僵在原地。一位善良的女士開(kāi)車(chē)帶我穿過(guò)瓢潑大雨去附近的星巴克。6.情感線(xiàn):I:frustrated→___________→___________→___________(續(xù)寫(xiě))→___________(續(xù)寫(xiě))7.綜合以上信息,請(qǐng)用34句話(huà)概括文章大意。(中英各一個(gè))中文:______________________________________________________________英文:______________________________________________________________8.句式:賓語(yǔ)從句;非謂語(yǔ);感嘆句;同位語(yǔ);完全倒裝句;比喻;夸張_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________本文屬于人與自我、人與環(huán)境:_______________________________________情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:Fearfulandalone,Istoodfrozenasthunderrolledcloser.銜接句1———對(duì)前面的"weatherappwarning"提問(wèn)“現(xiàn)場(chǎng)環(huán)境如何?”:What'stheonsiteenvironmentlike?現(xiàn)場(chǎng)環(huán)境:烏云迅速籠罩天空,陽(yáng)光完全消失,天地間一片昏暗??耧L(fēng)呼嘯著卷起沙灘上的沙粒和雜物,雨點(diǎn)密集地砸下來(lái),瞬間打濕衣物。過(guò)渡句推演:銜接1→______?______←銜接2銜接句2———對(duì)"Thekindlady"提問(wèn)“誰(shuí)會(huì)出現(xiàn)幫助我?”:Whowillappeartohelpme?出現(xiàn)的幫助者:一位看起來(lái)約四十歲的陌生女士,她剛從海灘收拾東西準(zhǔn)備離開(kāi)。她注意到我獨(dú)自站在車(chē)旁,被暴雨困住,且神情慌亂,于是主動(dòng)停車(chē)詢(xún)問(wèn)情況,伸出援手。第二段提示句:ThekindladydrovemethroughthepoundingraintowardanearbyStarbucks.銜接3———對(duì)"drovemetoStarbucks"提問(wèn)“到星巴克后發(fā)生了什么?”:WhathappenedafterarrivingatStarbucks?到星巴克后發(fā)生的事:女士先給我遞了紙巾擦去身上的雨水,然后幫我點(diǎn)了熱飲暖身,還拿出手機(jī)充電器讓我給即將關(guān)機(jī)的手機(jī)充電。我們聊起了我被困的緣由,她耐心安慰我,告訴我這種天氣下等待救援是最安全的。期間,我聯(lián)系上AAA確認(rèn)了救援時(shí)間,女士一直陪著我,沒(méi)有急于離開(kāi)。過(guò)渡句推演:銜接3→_____?_____←主題主題:_________________________________段落構(gòu)思第一段:雷聲漸近,我又怕又孤獨(dú),僵在原地?!賍_________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:一位善良的女士開(kāi)車(chē)帶我穿過(guò)瓢潑大雨去附近的星巴克?!躝_________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案文本分析角色:Thenarrator(主角)、thenarrator’sparents、thekindlady(續(xù)寫(xiě)出現(xiàn))、AAAstaff視角:第一人稱(chēng)3.時(shí)空線(xiàn):fromworkonthewaytothebeach
thebeachparkinglot4.線(xiàn)索答案:What'sthenarrator'susuallucklike?:Notgood.Raffles,tshirtcannons,radiocallsandrandomroommateselectionsneverworkoutinhis/herfavor.Whydidthenarratorgotothebeach?:Itwasswelteringhot,andhe/shewantedtocooldowninthewatersofLakeMichiganandwashawaysweat.Whattroublesdidthenarratormeetonthewaytothebeach?:Cellphonenavigationdidn’tworkproperly,showedwrongdirections,leadingtoawrongturnanda40minutedriveinsteadof10minutes.Whatwastheterriblethingthathappenedafterthenarratorwenttothebeach?:He/sheforgotkeysinthepassengerseatandlockedthecar.WhatproblemdidthenarratorfacewhencallingAAAforthefirsttime?:He/shedidn’thaveanAAAmembership.HowlongwouldAAAtaketoarriveafterthesecondcall?:Aboutanhourandahalf.Whatweatherconditionswereingaccordingtotheweatherapp?:Aheatadvisory,a100%chanceofalightningstorm,andatornadowarning.Whatwasthenarrator'ssituationwhenthunderrolledcloser?:Fearful,alone,stuckintheemptyingparkinglotwithadyingphonebattery.5.情節(jié)線(xiàn):我向來(lái)運(yùn)氣不好,上周一再陷低谷?!掳鄾Q定去海灘避暑,導(dǎo)航出錯(cuò)繞路→到達(dá)海灘后不慎將鑰匙鎖在車(chē)內(nèi)→聯(lián)系A(chǔ)AA無(wú)果,手機(jī)沒(méi)電,還收到惡劣天氣預(yù)警→(續(xù)寫(xiě))雷聲漸近,我又怕又孤獨(dú),僵在原地。一位善良的女士開(kāi)車(chē)帶我穿過(guò)瓢潑大雨去附近的星巴克。6.情感線(xiàn):I:frustrated→anxious→fearful→desperate(續(xù)寫(xiě))→grateful(續(xù)寫(xiě))7.文章大意:中文:向來(lái)運(yùn)氣不佳的“我”,上周一下班后想去密歇根湖海灘避暑。途中導(dǎo)航出錯(cuò)繞了遠(yuǎn)路,到達(dá)后又不慎將鑰匙鎖在車(chē)內(nèi)。“我”沒(méi)有AAA會(huì)員,聯(lián)系救援需等一個(gè)半小時(shí),手機(jī)電量告急,此時(shí)還收到高溫、雷暴和龍卷風(fēng)預(yù)警,陷入困境。英文:Thenarrator,whoisusuallyunlucky,decidedtogotoLakeMichiganbeachtocooldownafterworklastMonday.Ontheway,thenavigationfailed,makinghim/hertakeadetour.Afterarriving,he/sheaccidentallylockedthekeysinthecar.WithoutanAAAmembership,thenarratorhadtowaitanhourandahalfforrescue,withadyingphonebattery.Meanwhile,aheatadvisory,lightningstormandtornadowarningwereissued,leavinghim/herintrouble.8.句式示例:賓語(yǔ)從句:IknewthecoolwatersofLakeMichiganwouldhelpwashawaymysweat.非謂語(yǔ):Turninga10minutedriveintoa40minuteone.感嘆句:WhatterribleluckIhadthatday!同位語(yǔ):Raffles,tshirtcannons,radiocalls,randomroommateselections—noneoftheseeverseemtoworkoutinmyfavor.完全倒裝:Therecameasuddenthunderclapthatmademejump.比喻:Theparkinglotwaslikeadesertedislandaspeopleleftinahurry.夸張:Myphonebatterywasdroppingsofastthatitfeltlikeitwoulddieinaminute.9.本文屬于人與自我、人與環(huán)境:面對(duì)困境時(shí)的意外溫暖與自我救贖情節(jié)構(gòu)造主題:困境中的善意能驅(qū)散無(wú)助,運(yùn)氣雖差但人間有愛(ài)段落構(gòu)思第一段:雷聲漸近,我又怕又孤獨(dú),僵在原地?!儆挈c(diǎn)開(kāi)始砸落,手機(jī)僅
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