閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mymumonlyhadoneeye.Ihatedher.Shewassuchanembarrassment.Sheranasmallshopatafleamarketandcollectedoldclothesandsomeotherthingstosellforthemoneyweneeded.Onceduringelementaryschool,itwasafieldday,andmymumcame.Iwassoembarrassedandwonderedhowcouldshedothistome?Ithrewherahatefullookandranout.Thenextdayatschool,myschoolmatesaskedme.“Yourmumonlyhasoneeye?”andlaughedatme.Iwassoangrywithmymum.SoIsaidtomymum,“Whydon’tyouhavetheothereye?Youonlymakemeajoke!”Mymumtrembled(顫抖)withshock,andsaidinanapologetictone,“I’msosorrythatIonlyhaveoneeye,andIwasanembarrassmentforyou.ButIwassoproudofmysontoseeawholenewworldformewiththateye.Iwillleaverightnow.Sorry!”Mymumturnedaroundandleft.ForthewordsIhadsaidtoherearlier,therewassomethingbitingmeinthecornerofmyheart.Evenso,Ihatedmyoneeyedmumandourpoorlife.Maybebecausemymumhadn’tpunishedme,Ididn’tthinkIhadhurtherfeelingsverybadly.ItoldmyselfthatIwouldbeesuccessfulinthenearfuture,soIstudiedveryhard.LaterIgotacceptedbyafamousuniversity.Ileftmymotherandcametoabigcitytostudy.Ineverwentbacktovisitmymum.ThenIgotmarriedthere.Iboughtahouseofmyown.ThenIhadkids,too.AtthemomentIwaslivinghappilyasasuccessfulman.Ienjoyedthelifeinthecitybecauseitwasaplacethatdidn’tremindmeofmymumandmypast.Thiskindofhappinesswasgettingbiggerandbigger,untilonedaysomeoneknockedatmydoor.Itwasmymum!Andstillwithheroneeye!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Holdingtheletter,Icriedforthepersonwhoonlylivedforme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析1．角色：_____________________________2．視角：第________人稱3．時(shí)空線：fromthehometown(elementaryschool)______________thebigcity(aftergettingmarriedwithkids)4.請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮袑⒖赡艿木€索都找出來。Whydidthenarratorhatehismumatfirst?：______________________________________________Howdidthenarrator’smummakealiving?：____________________________________________Whathappenedontheelementaryschoolfieldday?：_______________________Whatcruelwordsdidthenarratorsaytohismum?：___________________________________Whatwasthemum’sreactiontothenarrator’swords?：_______________________Howdidthenarratorchangehislife?：__________________________________________________Whydidthenarratorenjoythecitylife?：___________________Whatwastheunexpectedthingthathappenedtothenarrator?：_______________________________________Whatconfusingstatementdidthemummakewhenleaving?：_______________________________________5．情節(jié)線：“我”因母親只有一只眼睛而厭惡她，認(rèn)為她讓自己難堪?！鷂_______________________________________→“我”雖心生一絲不安，但仍厭惡母親和貧困生活，決心刻苦學(xué)習(xí)改變命運(yùn)?！鷂_______________________________________________________________________→（續(xù)寫）門口站著的是母親，她依然只有一只眼睛。握著信，我為這個(gè)只為我而活的人痛哭流涕。6．情感線：I：hateful&embarrassed→___________→___________→___________（續(xù)寫）→___________（續(xù)寫）7.綜合以上信息，請(qǐng)用34句話概括文章大意。（中英各一個(gè)）中文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.句式：賓語從句；非謂語；感嘆句；同位語；完全倒裝句；比喻；夸張_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文屬于人與自我、人與家庭：_______________________________________情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句：Itwasmymum!Andstillwithheroneeye!銜接句1———對(duì)前面的"narrator’sinitialreaction"提問“看到多年未見的獨(dú)眼母親，‘我’最初是尷尬厭煩還是心生觸動(dòng)？”：Wasthenarrator’sinitialreactionembarrassment,annoyanceortouchwhenseeinghisoneeyedmumafteryears?Thenarrator'sinitialreactionwasembarrassmentandannoyance,ashepanickedabouthiswifeandkidsseeinghisoneeyedmotherandthoughtsheruinedhisperfectlife.過渡句推演：銜接1→______？______←銜接2銜接句2———對(duì)"mum’sbehavior&leavingthings"提問“母親上門后說了什么做了什么？是否留下物品后匆匆離開？”：Whatdidthemumsayanddoafterarriving,anddidsheleavesomethingbeforeleavinginahurry?Themumactedawkwardly,cautiouslyofferedaclothbagofsnacksforthenarratorandhiskids.Whenthenarratordidn'ttakeit,shemumbledanapologyfordisturbing,placedanenvelopeontheshoecabinet,andleftinahurrywithatremblinghunchedback.第二段提示句：Holdingtheletter,Icriedforthepersonwhoonlylivedforme.銜接3———對(duì)"letter’skeycontent"提問“信中揭示了母親獨(dú)眼的什么驚天秘密？與‘我’有關(guān)嗎？”：Whatshockingsecretaboutthemum’soneeyewasrevealedintheletter,andwasitrelatedtothenarrator?Theletterrevealedtheshockingsecretthatthemumgavehereyetothenarrator—whenhewasfive,helosteyesightinoneeyeduetoahighfever,andthemumdonatedhereyetohimtoavoidhimgrowingupwithadisability.過渡句推演：銜接3→_____？_____←主題主題：_________________________________段落構(gòu)思第一段：門口站著的是母親，她依然只有一只眼睛?！賍_________________→②__________________→③__________________；英文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段：握著信，我為這個(gè)只為我而活的人痛哭流涕。→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文：_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案文本分析角色：Thenarrator（主角）、Mum（主角的母親）、thenarrator’sschoolmates（主角的同學(xué)）、thenarrator’sspouse&kids（主角的配偶與孩子）視角：第一人稱3．時(shí)空線：fromthehometown(elementaryschool)thefamousuniversity(studying)

thebigcity(aftergettingmarriedwithkids)4．線索答案：Whydidthenarratorhatehismumatfirst?：Becausehismumonlyhadoneeye,andhethoughtshewasanembarrassment.Howdidthenarrator’smummakealiving?：Sheranasmallshopatafleamarketandcollectedoldclothesandotherthingstosell.Whathappenedontheelementaryschoolfieldday?：Thenarrator’smumcametothefieldday,whichmadehimfeelembarrassed.Hethrewherahatefullookandranout,andhisschoolmateslaughedathimthenextday.Whatcruelwordsdidthenarratorsaytohismum?：Whydon’tyouhavetheothereye?Youonlymakemeajoke!Whatwasthemum’sreactiontothenarrator’swords?：Shetrembledwithshock,spokeinanapologetictone,andthenturnedaroundandleft.Howdidthenarratorchangehislife?：Hestudiedveryhard,gotacceptedbyafamousuniversity,wenttoabigcitytostudy,andlatergotmarried,boughtahouse,andhadkids.Whydidthenarratorenjoythecitylife?：Becauseitdidn’tremindhimofhismumandhispast.Whatwastheunexpectedthingthathappenedtothenarrator?：Hisoneeyedmumcametovisithimathishomeinthebigcity.Whatconfusingstatementdidthemummakewhenleaving?：Iwassoproudofmysontoseeawholenewworldformewiththateye.5．情節(jié)線：“我”因母親只有一只眼睛而厭惡她，認(rèn)為她讓自己難堪?！W(xué)運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)母親到場(chǎng)，“我”因同學(xué)嘲笑對(duì)母親說出殘忍話語，母親震驚后愧疚離開?！拔摇彪m心生一絲不安，但仍厭惡母親和貧困生活，決心刻苦學(xué)習(xí)改變命運(yùn)?！拔摇笨忌厦拼髮W(xué)后遠(yuǎn)赴大城市，從未探望母親，隨后結(jié)婚生子、購置房產(chǎn)，過上看似成功的幸福生活。→（續(xù)寫）門口站著的是母親，她依然只有一只眼睛。握著信，我為這個(gè)只為我而活的人痛哭流涕。6．情感線：I：hateful&embarrassed→uneasybutresentful→indifferent&evasive→shocked&flustered（續(xù)寫）→guilty&remorseful（續(xù)寫）7．文章大意：中文：主角因母親只有一只眼睛而深感難堪，甚至厭惡她。小學(xué)運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)上母親的出現(xiàn)引發(fā)同學(xué)嘲笑，主角對(duì)母親說出殘忍話語，母親愧疚離開。此后主角發(fā)奮學(xué)習(xí)，考上名牌大學(xué)后前往大城市，從未探望母親，結(jié)婚生子后過上看似幸福的生活。直到某天，多年未見的獨(dú)眼母親突然找上門，揭開了隱藏多年的秘密。英文：Thenarratorhatedhismumbecausesheonlyhadoneeyeandhefoundherembarrassing.Whenhismumcametohiselementaryschoolfieldday,hisclassmateslaughedathim,sohesaidcruelwordstoher,andsheleftguiltily.Later,thenarratorstudiedhard,gotadmittedtoafamousuniversity,movedtoabigcity,andnevervisitedhismum.Hegotmarried,boughtahouse,andhadkids,livingaseeminglyhappylifeuntilhisoneeyedmumsuddenlycametohisdooroneday,revealingalonghiddensecret.8．句式示例：賓語從句：Iwonderedhowcouldshedothistome?/Ididn’tthinkIhadhurtherfeelingsverybadly.非謂語：Sheranasmallshopatafleamarketandcollectedoldclothesandsomeotherthingstosellforthemoneyweneeded.感嘆句：Shewassuchanembarrassment!/Whataselflesslovemymumgaveme!同位語：Mymum,thepersonwhoonlylivedforme,sacrificedhereyeformyfuture.完全倒裝：Atthedoorstoodmymum,stillwithheroneeye.比喻：Theguiltinmyheartwaslikeaheavystone,pressingmebreathless.夸張：Herwordsstabbedmyheartlikeaknife,makingmeunabletobreathe.9．本文屬于人與自我、人與家庭：母愛如燈，照亮子女前行之路，而子女往往在失去后才懂得珍惜，愧疚與反思是成長(zhǎng)的必經(jīng)之路情節(jié)構(gòu)造主題：母愛是無私的犧牲，子女的誤解與逃避終會(huì)被真相喚醒，愧疚之后的反思與救贖才是對(duì)母愛最好的回應(yīng)段落構(gòu)思第一段：門口站著的是母親，她依然只有一只眼睛?！傥毅蹲×?，尷尬與厭煩瞬間涌上心頭，下意識(shí)想關(guān)上門→②母親穿著破舊的衣服，頭發(fā)花白，手里緊緊攥著一個(gè)信封，聲音沙啞地說“我只是想看看你”→③沒等我多說，她把信封塞到我手里，轉(zhuǎn)身慢慢走開，瘦弱的背影在樓道里漸漸消失；英文：Ifroze,