讀后續(xù)寫微技巧之“環(huán)境描寫”Part1一、動(dòng)詞及動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)1.對(duì)風(fēng)的描述：blow刮；roar/howl怒號(hào)/咆哮；roar呼嘯；whip鞭打；kiss親吻2.對(duì)雨的描述：beatagainst拍打；pourdown傾盆而下；fall落下；raincatsanddogs下傾盆大雨；becaughtintherain被雨淋3.對(duì)雪的描述：dance跳舞；float/fall飄落；meltaway融化；blanket裹?。籦ecoveredwith被...覆蓋4.對(duì)星星的描述：shine發(fā)光；twinkle閃耀；glitter閃爍；decorate裝飾；hide躲藏bedottedwith點(diǎn)綴著5.對(duì)太陽(yáng)的描述：comeout出來(lái)；rise升起；set落下；bebathedin沐浴在；floodin照射進(jìn)來(lái)；sweatlikeapig（汗流浹背）二、形容詞及形容詞短語(yǔ)1.對(duì)風(fēng)雨的描述：gentle/soft輕柔的；warm溫暖的；pleasant令人愉悅的；howling呼嘯的；icy/freezing冰冷的；strong/violent猛烈的；bone-chilling刺骨的；dreadful可怕的2.對(duì)雪的描述：feathery鵝毛般的；tiny極小的；pure純潔的；clean干凈的3.對(duì)星星的描述：lovely可愛的；shining/glowing亮閃閃的；pale/faint暗淡的；starless沒(méi)有星星的4.對(duì)太陽(yáng)的描述：warm溫暖的；burning火辣辣的；hot炙熱；melt融化三、名詞及及名詞短語(yǔ)thebluesky藍(lán)天；therisingsun冉冉升起的太陽(yáng)；thesettingsun落日；thefragrantflowers/rose芬香的花/玫瑰；thegreengrass青草；thesongofthebirds鳥鳴；heavyrain大雨；aheavydownpour大暴雨P(guān)art2一、時(shí)間順序（一）黎明、清晨1.Itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.

仿佛黑夜和白晝已成為一個(gè)美麗的時(shí)刻。黎明已經(jīng)來(lái)臨。2.Thesunbegantoriseinthesky,bathingthemountainingoldenlight.太陽(yáng)開始緩緩升起，把山沐浴在金光之中。（沐浴bathsth.in）3.Birdsongwelcomesinanewday,sweetchoruscamethroughthebranches,flowingintothesurroundingcountrysidelikeagreatriverofmusic.鳥鳴中迎來(lái)了新的一天，悅耳的合唱聲穿過(guò)樹枝，像一條流動(dòng)的音樂(lè)之河流入周圍的鄉(xiāng)村。（二）中午1.Thesunwasatitshighest.TheheatbeatdownonmyheadasifIwasbaconunderthegrill.太陽(yáng)處于最高點(diǎn)，熱浪擊打在我的頭上，我好像烤架下的熏肉一樣。2.Inthisheat,eventhetreesappeareddefeated,withleavesdroopinglifelessly. 在這種炎熱的天氣里，連樹木都顯得萎靡不振，樹葉都毫無(wú)生氣地垂落著。（三）黃昏、日落1.Thesunsetlookslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落看起來(lái)像藍(lán)色畫布上的橙色顏料。2.Thesettingsuncastanorangeglowoverthemountains.夕陽(yáng)在山上投下橙色的光輝。（四）夜晚1.Themoonwasheldupabovethesky,shininghersmoothandcharmingmoonlight.月亮被高舉在天空的上方，閃耀著她光滑而迷人的月光。2.Twinklingstarswereblinking,andfragrantbreezewasgentlyblowing.閃爍的星星眨著眼，芬芳的微風(fēng)輕輕地吹著。3.Themoonsurroundedbybrightstarslitupthedarknight.月亮被明亮的星星圍繞著，照亮了漆黑的夜晚。4.Theendlessblacknessconsumed/swallowedupeverything.無(wú)盡的黑暗吞噬了一切。Everythinghadbeenswallowedupbythedarkness.—切都被黑暗所吞噬。5.

Dottedwithglitteringstars,theskygavethesceneafairytalequality.

點(diǎn)綴著閃爍的星星的天空給這一場(chǎng)景賦予了童話般的色彩。6.Thenightbroughtendlessdarkness,buryingtheworldunderastarlesssky.Thetemperaturedroppedandnowherewasthereacomfortingsound.夜帶來(lái)無(wú)盡的黑暗，把世界埋在沒(méi)有星星的天空下。氣溫下降了，哪兒也聽不到舒適的聲音。二、意象順序（一）太陽(yáng)1.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.我沐浴在陽(yáng)光下，琥珀色的陽(yáng)光親吻著我每寸肌膚。2.Flowerswerestartingtobloom,wakingupafteralongwinter’ssleep.Thegardenlookedsobeautifulwiththesettingsunreflectedinthewindows.花兒經(jīng)過(guò)漫長(zhǎng)的冬眠期后開始盛開,落日映照在窗戶上讓院子顯得格外美.3.Thesunshoneonthesea,thewavesdancingandsparkling.太陽(yáng)照耀在海面上，波浪起舞，閃閃發(fā)光。4.Raysofsunlightfilteredthroughthetreebranches/leaves.陽(yáng)光穿過(guò)樹林/樹葉。5.Bathedinthegoldensunlight,thesearippledandsparkledcharmingly.大海沐浴在金色的陽(yáng)光下，蕩漾著迷人的波光。（二）星月1.Twinklingstarswereblinking,andfragrantbreezegentlystrokedmyhead,asifcomfortingallthetirednessalongthetrip.星星在閃爍，芬芳的微風(fēng)輕輕地?fù)崦业念^，仿佛在安慰我一路的疲憊。2.Theskyisdottedwithnumeroustwinklingstars.天空中點(diǎn)綴著無(wú)數(shù)閃爍的星星。3.Themoonlitupthecloudlessskyandcastabeamoflightonthesurfaceoftheriver,whichglitteredlikemillionsofstars.月亮照亮了萬(wàn)里無(wú)云的天空，并且在河面上投下了一束光，像百萬(wàn)顆星星一樣閃爍著。4.Themoonappearedforamomentandseemedtothrowmeamistyanddullglance,andburiedherselfagaininstantlyinthickcloud.月亮出現(xiàn)了一會(huì)兒，似乎向我投來(lái)了朦朧而暗淡的一瞥，隨即又埋沒(méi)在厚厚的云層里。（三）雨1.Rainandtearsmixedtogetheronmyface.Onlymyswolleneyesgaveanycluetomysadness.雨水和淚水交織在一起，只有我的紅腫的眼睛能暗示出我內(nèi)心的悲傷。三、地點(diǎn)順序（一）山海1.Ilookedoutofthewindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleysholdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.我望向窗外，蜿艇的河流，高聳的山脈，陽(yáng)光明媚的海灘和深深的山谷，讓我完全沉浸在它們的魅力之中。（二）荒野1.Surroundedbystrangesoundsofwildbeastsandendlessdarkness,Janewasfullofregretanddespair.被野獸奇怪的聲音和無(wú)盡的黑暗包圍著，Jane充滿了悔恨和絕望。四、氛圍順序（一）安靜祥和的環(huán)境1.Standingontheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromthebottomofheart.站在空曠的道路上，他們抬頭仰望天空，從心底感受到珍貴的平和。2.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsunandburstintotearsexcitedly.他們?cè)诼淙沼鄷熤芯o緊相擁，并且激動(dòng)得哭了起來(lái)。3.Inaninstant,everythinghadsuddenlygonequiet.Birdsdidn’tchirp,leavesdidn’trustleandinsectsdidn’tsing.Afeelingofstillnesscreptuponme.剎那間，萬(wàn)物都突然寂靜無(wú)聲，鳥兒不再歌唱，樹葉不再沙沙作響，昆蟲也停止了歡唱。一種寂靜的感覺(jué)悄悄向我襲來(lái)。4.Atmidnighttheskybecameclearerandthestarsgrewbrighter.Therewaslittlewind,onlytheflamesofourfirecrackled.Itwassosilent.AsIwaslyingbeneaththestars,Ithoughtabouthowfarwehadalreadytravelled.午夜時(shí)分，天空變得更清晰了，星星也更亮了。風(fēng)很小，只有我們火焰噼啪作響。太安靜了。我躺在星空下，想著我們已經(jīng)走了多遠(yuǎn)。5.Atdusk,wegatheredaroundwithothercampers,exchangingyummysnackswitheachotherinthecompanyoffire.Ourheartylaughterrangthroughthefields.黃昏時(shí)分，我們和其他露營(yíng)者聚一起，在火的陪伴下互相交換美味的零食。我們的歡聲笑語(yǔ)響徹田野。（二）凄慘悲涼的環(huán)境1.Shesatonthedampgrassandstaredupatthepalestarsinthevastsky,withtearsrollingdownherdirtyface.Thebone-chillingwindforcedhertocurlup.她坐在潮濕的草地上，抬頭望著廣闊的天空中暗淡的星星，淚水從她骯臟的臉上滾落下來(lái)。刺骨的寒風(fēng)迫使她蜷縮起來(lái)。（三）風(fēng)雨交加的環(huán)境1.Thewindwas

howlinghorriblyandtherainwas

pouring

down,

flappingagainstthetrees.風(fēng)可怕地怒吼著，大雨傾盆而下，拍打著樹枝。2.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature.Asenseofhorror

creepingupon

me.我被自然發(fā)怒的力量抓住了。一種恐懼感悄悄爬到我身上。3.Outside,thewindsblewthetreesandbeatagainstthehouse,whichmadepeopleunabletoopentheireyes.外面，風(fēng)吹著樹，拍打著房子，使人們無(wú)法睜開眼睛。4.ItwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdayafterwhenschoolwasoverandIwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放學(xué)的時(shí)候在下著傾盆大雨，我到家時(shí)全身都濕了。5.Therewasaheavydownpour.Unfortunately,Tomwascaughtintheheavyrain.下了大暴雨，真不幸，湯姆在暴雨中被淋成了落湯雞。6.Theweatherinsummerisunpredictable.Justnow,itwassunny.Inaflash,lightningandthunderbrokeout,andthestormbegantorain.夏天的天氣真是變幻莫測(cè)。剛才還是晴空萬(wàn)里，一霎時(shí)就電閃雷鳴，開始了狂風(fēng)暴雨。7.Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling.在那個(gè)黑暗的暴風(fēng)雨的夜晚，海浪拍打，狂風(fēng)呼嘯。（三）炙熱嚴(yán)寒的環(huán)境1.Theweatherwassohotthattherewasnowin