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IVAnalysisofStudentsIIIIIIAnalysisofExaminationSyllabusOutline55VTeachingProceduresTeachingObjectivsGeneralstrengths:EnthusiasticandEagerGeneralWeaknessesNotFluentandunskiledIAnalysisofStudentsRequirementsIIAnalysisofExaminationSyllabusExaminationSyllabusCharacteristicsScoringCriteriaIITeachingobjectivesTeachingkeypointsanddiffuculties延時符TheWritingProcessTeachingMethod(過程寫作法)TeachingmethodPre-writing(8’)While-writing(20’)Post-writing(12’)TeachingmaterialNarrativetextAMother’sDaySurpriseWhile-WritingPre-WritingPost-WritingIVTeachingProcedures

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