SectionⅥWriting目錄寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目——Describeaplacethatyoulikelike課時(shí)跟蹤檢測(cè)寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目——Describeaplacethatyoulike本單元的寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目是“描述一個(gè)你喜歡的地方”，屬于“景物描寫(xiě)類(lèi)”說(shuō)明文。這類(lèi)文章的寫(xiě)作要求是能比較生動(dòng)、細(xì)致地描寫(xiě)所熟悉地點(diǎn)的景物，并恰當(dāng)?shù)乇磉_(dá)自己的感受。為突出“描寫(xiě)”，建議從視覺(jué)、聽(tīng)覺(jué)、觸覺(jué)、嗅覺(jué)等角度進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)。好的景物描寫(xiě)不僅能引導(dǎo)讀者和作者一起欣賞美麗的風(fēng)景，使讀者產(chǎn)生身臨其境的感受，還能啟迪人的思想，陶冶人的情操，給人以美的享受。由教材學(xué)寫(xiě)作一、學(xué)文體架構(gòu)二、學(xué)邏輯組材1．開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾交相呼應(yīng)。文章開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山：愛(ài)爾蘭美麗的鄉(xiāng)村對(duì)當(dāng)?shù)厝嗣窈蛡鹘y(tǒng)有著深遠(yuǎn)的影響。在結(jié)尾處作者講到親身體驗(yàn)當(dāng)?shù)匚幕土?xí)俗的感受，呼應(yīng)了開(kāi)頭，也給讀者留下了深刻的印象。2．主體部分描述生動(dòng)。主體部分作者生動(dòng)地描述了鄉(xiāng)村美景和風(fēng)土人情，從視覺(jué)、嗅覺(jué)、味覺(jué)、聽(tīng)覺(jué)和觸覺(jué)等多種感官的角度惟妙惟肖地描寫(xiě)了愛(ài)爾蘭的優(yōu)美的自然風(fēng)光以及濃郁的文化氣息。三、學(xué)亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)1．Itsbeautifulcountrysideexcitesandinspiresall,offeringsomethingforeachofthesenses.賞析：本句作者使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，介紹了愛(ài)爾蘭美麗的鄉(xiāng)村給人以激情和靈感，滿足各種感官享受，為下文細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)做好鋪墊。2．Thepeacefullandscapeofthe“EmeraldIsle”anditsmanygreencountiesisatruefeastfortheeyes,withitsrollinggreenhillsdottedwithsheepandcattle.賞析：作者運(yùn)用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，描述了“綠寶石島”的風(fēng)光，連綿起伏的山丘上點(diǎn)綴著牛羊，讓讀者仿佛置身其中，流連忘返。3．Withallthisbeauty,itisnotsurprisingthatIrelandhasdevelopedstrongtraditionsthatincludemusic,dancing,anddining.賞析：作者使用了itisnotsurprisingthat句型，表達(dá)了正是有了這些自然美景，愛(ài)爾蘭具有濃厚的民間傳統(tǒng)就順其自然了。第二個(gè)that引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明了傳統(tǒng)的具體內(nèi)容，即音樂(lè)、舞蹈和餐飲。4．Betteryet,enjoyadelicioustraditionalIrishBeefStew.賞析：Betteryet用得非常靈巧，yet是副詞，與比較級(jí)連用加強(qiáng)比較程度，意思是“更好的是”，突出了愛(ài)爾蘭傳統(tǒng)特色美食——燉牛肉。針對(duì)練筆/完成句子①Themusicmovesthroughtechnicallydifficultsectionswithease,____________________________.即使技術(shù)難度很高的段落，音樂(lè)也都輕松流過(guò)，展現(xiàn)了他作為作曲家的天賦。②____________________,

theweatherisgettingcolderandcolder.隨著冬天的來(lái)臨，天氣變得越來(lái)越冷。showinghisgiftasacomposerWiththewintercoming③____________,

ifyoudon'tfindany,createthem!更好的是，如果你找不到的話，那就創(chuàng)作出來(lái)吧！Betteryet四、學(xué)細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)Anddownbythesea,theroaroftheoceanwavesandcriesoftheseabirdsmakeupthemusicofthecoast.Onaquietmorninginthemountains,feelthesunonyourskin,andbreatheinthesweetscentoffreshflowerswhilebirdsgreetthenewdaywiththeirmorningsong.賞析：作者從多種感官角度，生動(dòng)地描寫(xiě)了愛(ài)爾蘭優(yōu)美的風(fēng)景。在海邊，海浪的咆哮和海鳥(niǎo)的叫聲(聽(tīng)覺(jué))構(gòu)成了海岸的音樂(lè)。在山上一個(gè)寧?kù)o的早晨(視覺(jué))，感受陽(yáng)光照射在你的皮膚上(觸覺(jué))，呼吸鮮花的芳香(嗅覺(jué))，而鳥(niǎo)兒則用清晨的歌聲迎接新的一天(聽(tīng)覺(jué))。作者運(yùn)用了擬人的修辭手法，用寥寥數(shù)筆勾勒出一幅鄉(xiāng)村清晨充滿鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)花香的風(fēng)景畫(huà)。針對(duì)練筆/翻譯并體會(huì)景物描寫(xiě)的句子Theleavescrunched(發(fā)出嘎吱聲)beneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswaying(搖晃)astheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步時(shí)，_______________________。偶爾，有葉子會(huì)從我身邊掉下來(lái)，____________，慢悠悠地落到地面上。樹(shù)葉在我腳下嘎吱作響輕輕地?fù)u晃寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目指導(dǎo)Howtodescribeaninteresting,exciting,orsurprisingplace——如何描述一個(gè)有趣、激動(dòng)人心或令人贊嘆的地方第一步：構(gòu)思謀篇Part1IntroduceaplacePart2DescribetheplaceyoulikeindetailPart3Expresspersonalfeelings第二步：要點(diǎn)表達(dá)第一部分引出要介紹的地方

1．多角度描述一個(gè)地方2．選取某角度引出這個(gè)地方(以坐落的位置為例)①be________________in

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1．常用的詞匯①tourist__________

旅游景點(diǎn)②_______

ofinterest 名勝古跡③athomeand________

國(guó)內(nèi)外④befamous/well-known_____

因……聞名⑤________thearchitecture/scenery 欣賞建筑/風(fēng)景attractionsplacesabroadforadmire

⑥_________/breathtaking/________/excellent驚奇的/令人驚嘆的/獨(dú)特的/極好的⑦leavea_______________onsb. 給某人留下深刻印象⑧___________agreatreputationas 享有……盛譽(yù)amazinguniquedeepimpression

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weweredeeplyattractedbythebeautifulsceneryhere.一到達(dá)山頂，我們就深深地被這里的美麗風(fēng)景吸引住了。②Moreover,thescenery_______________________,

withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.而且，沿江的景色令人驚奇，有很多著名的游覽景點(diǎn)。arrivingatthetopofthehillalongtheriverisamazing③Iwas______________________,

whichwaskissingmyskin.我沐浴在陽(yáng)光下，陽(yáng)光親吻著我的肌膚。④Mist-coveredmountainsweredottedwith________________________.霧蒙蒙的山上點(diǎn)綴著小農(nóng)場(chǎng)和小村莊。bathedinthesunlightsmallfarmsandvillages⑤Asaphotographer,Ilovethe_____________andamazingcolours:redrocks,greenplants,blue-greenwatersandblueskies.作為一名攝影師，我鐘愛(ài)那里明亮的光線和絢麗的色彩：紅巖綠樹(shù)，碧水藍(lán)天。brightlight第三部分表達(dá)個(gè)人感受

①Byvisitingthiscity,notonlycanyouknowmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture,butyoucanalso_______________________________.游覽這座城市，你不僅能更多地了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化，還能欣賞到令人驚奇的風(fēng)光。admiretheamazingscenery②Whenvisitingthisexcellentcity,youcannotonlyhaveanopportunitytosatisfyyourappetite,butalso_____________________.當(dāng)你游覽這座優(yōu)秀的城市時(shí)，你不僅有機(jī)會(huì)滿足胃欲，還能拓寬眼界。③Youaresuretoenjoyyourselfby_________________________andfascinatingtraditionsofthisplace.通過(guò)體驗(yàn)這個(gè)地方深厚的文化和迷人的傳統(tǒng)，你一定會(huì)玩得開(kāi)心。broadenyourhorizonsexperiencingthedeepculture④I'mfullyconvincedthatthisplace_________________________.我深信這個(gè)地方最好地滿足了我的要求。meetsmyrequirementsbest[隨堂針對(duì)練筆]暑假里，媽媽帶你去江南旅游。江南美麗的風(fēng)景至今令你無(wú)法忘記。請(qǐng)對(duì)江南美景進(jìn)行描述，讓讀者跟隨你一起去欣賞。根據(jù)提示完成下面習(xí)作，選擇合適的句子并認(rèn)真抄寫(xiě)在文中空白處。JiangnanSunriseSceneryInthesummervacation,mymothertookmetotraveltoJiangnan,whichisreallybeautiful!Istillcan'tforgetthebeautifulscenery.Onemorning,①

.Atthattime,thedeepblueoftheriverseemedtobetheblueeyes.Inalittlewhile,agoldenlightappearedatthecrossingoftheskyandthewater,andthentheskybecameveryred.②

.Inthesky,thesunseemedtobecarryingaheavyburdenwhenrisingbitbybit,andfinallyjumpedoutofthewater.Atthistime,aslongasweraisedourheads③

.Theflowersbytheriverseemedtohavebeenpaintedbythesun:orange,red,pink.④

.Jiangnansunrisesceneryissobeautifulandcharming.Whatalastandunforgettableimpressionitleftonme!A．wecouldseethewildgeeseflyingfreelyintheskyB．IwaswatchingthesunrisebytheriverC．TheyopeneduptouswithabigsmileD．Thewhitecloudswerealsodyedred答案：①～④

BDAC寫(xiě)作素材儲(chǔ)備(一)介紹北京ABeautifulPlaceinChinaAsthecapitalandtheeconomicandpoliticalcenterofChina,BeijingisoneofthemostdevelopedcitiesinChina,withlotsofplacesofinterest,suchastheTian'anmenSquareandtheForbiddenCity.TheForbiddenCityiswheretheemperorsandtheirroyalfamilylivedduringtheancienttimes,whichisofgreathistoricalandculturalsignificance.Also,itreflectsthewisdomandhardworkofChinesepeople.AsfortheTian'anmenSquare,withthenationalflagswinginginthewind,oncepeoplearrivethere,afeelingofrespectwouldriseintheirhearts.AsfarasIamconcerned,BeijingrepresentstherapiddevelopmentofChinainthepastfewdecades.I'msureChinawillbecomemorepowerfulandbeautifulinthefuture.(二)介紹四川ABeautifulPlaceinChinaAsweallknow,SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina,whichenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouValleyandDujiangyanIrrigationProject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.Besides,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedthere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.Amazingly,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinlocalirrigationtoday.I'msurevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiuzhaigouandtheconstructionofDujiangyanIrrigationProject.課時(shí)跟蹤檢測(cè)[寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練]Ⅰ.完成句子1．TherearethreeplacesIwantto__________________.我想向你推薦三個(gè)地方。2．Youcan_________________________Chineseculturefromitsstory.你可以從中國(guó)故事中對(duì)中國(guó)文化有一個(gè)很好的了解。recommendtoyouhaveagoodknowledgeof3．ThenyoucangotovisittheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,which____________a“Chinesetreasurehouse”！

然后你可以去參觀陜西歷史博物館，它被稱(chēng)為“華夏寶庫(kù)”！4．YoucanalsogototheXi'anCityWalland____________________________.你也可以去西安城墻和其他一些著名的景點(diǎn)。isknownasafewotherfamoussights5．Ican_______yourguideandIam_________________meetingyou.我可以當(dāng)你的向?qū)?，并期待與你見(jiàn)面。actas

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Ⅱ.完成語(yǔ)段Lastweekend①______________________________________

(見(jiàn)證了我們難忘的經(jīng)歷)ofattendingtheactivity②________________

(以……為主題)promotingtraditionalChineseculture.ThewonderfulperformanceofPekingOpera,theflexibilityofTaiChi③__________

(以及)thevividdesignsofpapercutting④_______________________

(給……留下深刻的印象)me.However,witnessedourunforgettableexperience

withthethemeofaswellasleftadeepimpressionon⑤____________________________

(最吸引我的是)ourhands-onexperienceofpapercutting.Istillrememberthefishyoucut.Ithinkthisactivityisagreatsuccess,whichprovidesusaplatformwherewecan⑥___________________(拓寬我們的視野)andappreciatetheprofoundChineseculture.Ihopeyoucan⑦_(dá)_____________________

______(對(duì)……有更好的理解)Chinesecultureafterthisactivity.whatappealedtomemostwas

broadenourhorizonshaveabetterunderstandingofⅢ.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)一段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TwoCanadianboys,AlderandGreg,bothof13,hadtheirfriendshiptestedonarecenttriptotheRockyMountains.OnSundaymorning,thetwoboysdecidedtoclimbthemountainnearthecampbythemselveswhiletheirparentspreparedlunchatthecamp.Aftertwohours,theyreachedthetopandenjoyedthebreathtakingview,completelyrelaxedandfeelinglikebirds.However,troublebeganwhentheystartedtheclimbdown.Gregaccidentallyfelldownandtwistedhisankle(腳踝).Hecouldmovebutithurt.GregtoldAldertoleavehimandgobacktotheirparentstogethelp.“Butisitsafeforyoutobealone？”AldercleanedthedirtfromGreg'shandsandtriedtohelphimstandup.“IsitOK？”Alderasked.“Abittroublesome,Iguess.”Gregforcedasmile.Alderdidnotwanttoleavehisfriend.“WhatshouldIdo？”hethoughttohimself.MountainclimberspassedbyandAlderwasnotsureiftheywouldliketobedisturbedonthewaytotheirdestinations.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．重點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)Alder的心理活動(dòng)，要求邏輯合理。Alder

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wait.HeloweredhimselfandaskedGregtoclimbontohisback.AlthoughGregrefused,Alderinsistedoncarryinghimonhisback.Finally,theystruggledontheirway.ThewaydownthehillwasnotsoeasyastheyexpectedandafewminuteslaterAlderwasexhausted.Theysatonthegroundlookingateachother.“AreyouOK？”Gregasked.“Whateverhappened,Iwillnotleaveyoualone！”Aldersaidfirmly.Withtearsdownhischeek,GregclimbedontoAlder'sbackagainandtheymovedwithdifficultydownthehill.Whenthetwoboyswerefoundbytheirparents,theyheldtheirhandstogether.AldersmiledtoGregandsaid,“Atleastwearetogether！”[閱讀拓展訓(xùn)練]閱讀七選五Travellingisagreatwaytointeractwithaculturewhichmightbecompletelydifferentfromyourown.1BeforeImovedtoSicilyIhadtravelledaroundthewholeofItaly,thesouthandthenorth,andIabsolutelyfellinlovewiththecultureandthelanguage,soIwasinspiredtolearnthelanguageandalsotomovehere.AndhereIamnow,livinginSicily.2Whenyougetbackhome,you'llhavelotsofstoriestotellyourfriendsandfamily.Evenifsomethingisn'tveryfun,itwillbefunnytolookbackandlaughatthoseawkwardorharshmoments.Forexample,IwastravellingwithagroupoffriendsinPisaandwetookthewrongbustogettothebeacharea,soweendedupbeingstuckintherainandhavingtowalkback.Whenyoutravel,youexposeyourselftodifferentpeople.3It'sagreatlearningexperienceforbothyouandtheotherpersonbecauseyoucanshareandexchangeyourownideasandopinionsonarangeoftopics.Forexample,ImetanIranianphilosopherandwetalkedaboutthemagicofnature.AlotofhisideaswereshapedbyhisIranianbackgroundandIranianphilosophy.4Travellingistherealizationofhome.5SinceI'vebeenawayfr