初中英語作文專項訓練：MyFavouriteSport一、寫作思路解析這類作文的核心是圍繞“最喜歡的運動”，清晰呈現(xiàn)“喜歡的原因”“運動帶來的影響”“個人與運動的關聯(lián)經(jīng)歷”，體現(xiàn)運動對身心、社交等方面的積極作用。結構建議（總分總邏輯）：開頭（Introduction）：簡潔點明最愛運動，用細節(jié)（如接觸契機）引發(fā)興趣。示例：*“Myfavouritesportisbasketball.IthasbeenabigpartofmylifesinceIwatchedmyfirstNBAgameatseven.”*主體（Body）：分2-3段，從“運動的魅力（規(guī)則、協(xié)作）”“運動帶來的改變（健康、性格、友誼）”“難忘經(jīng)歷（比賽、訓練故事）”等角度切入，用具體場景/細節(jié)增強真實感。結尾（Conclusion）：總結運動的意義，升華主題（如運動教會的品質(zhì)、對生活的影響）。二、范文示例（以Basketball為例，語言生動+結構清晰）MyFavouriteSportAmongallsports,basketballismyabsolutefavourite.IfellinlovewithitwhenIwatchedathrillingNBAgamewithmydadatseven—thewayplayersworkedtogethertoscoreanddefendamazedme,soIstartedplayingatourschool’splayground.Besides,basketballhelpsmefacechallenges.TherewasatimeIcouldn’tmakeafreethrow,butIpracticedeverydayafterschool.Afterweeksoftrying,Ifinallysucceeded—thistaughtmethat“practicemakesperfect”andnevergivingupisthekeytosuccess.Ibelievebasketballwillstaywithmeforever.It’snotjustaboutwinningorlosing;it’saboutgrowingthrougheveryjump,everypass,andeverysmilewithmyteammates.范文亮點分析：細節(jié)支撐：用“看NBA比賽”“校隊奪冠”“罰球練習”等具體經(jīng)歷，避免內(nèi)容空洞；語言層次：運用復合句（*when,so,because*等）、情感表達（*amazed,joy,believe*），從“身體→心理→社交”多維度展開；主題升華：結尾跳出“運動本身”，強調(diào)“成長”，提升作文深度。三、寫作技巧提煉1.詞匯升級：從“基礎”到“精準生動”替換普通動詞：*play*→*dribble(帶球)*/*shoot(投籃)*/*sprint(沖刺)*（運動場景化詞匯）；替換抽象形容詞：*good*→*beneficial(有益的)*/*rewarding(有意義的)*；主題詞匯積累：*teamwork(團隊協(xié)作)*,*perseverance(堅持)*,*relievestress(緩解壓力)*,*buildupstrength(增強體力)*。2.句式優(yōu)化：讓表達更豐富原因表達：用定語從句升級邏輯，如*“OnereasonwhyIlovebasketballisthatitteachesmetoworkwithothers.”*倒裝結構：增強文采，如*“Notonlydoesbasketballkeepmefit,butitalsohelpsmemakefriends.”*3.細節(jié)填充：用“五感/場景”替代“泛泛而談”視覺+動作：*“Thebrightorangeballbouncedonthesun-bakedcourt,andmyteammates’smilesgavemecourage.”*情感+轉(zhuǎn)折：*“WhenImissedtheshot,myheartsank.Butmycoach’swords,‘Tryagain!’,liftedmyspirits.”*四、常見錯誤修正（結合初中生易錯點）錯誤示例1（語法：主謂一致+時態(tài)混亂）原句：*“Ilikeplayingbasketball.Everyday,Iplaysitwithmyfriends.Lastweek,weplayagameandwin.”*修正：*“Ilikeplayingbasketball.Everyday,Iplayitwithmyfriends.Lastweek,weplayedagameandwon.”*錯誤原因：一般現(xiàn)在時中，主語“I”后動詞用原形；一般過去時中，*play*/*win*需變?yōu)檫^去式。錯誤示例2（詞匯：sport與game混淆+中式表達）原句：*“Basketballismyfavouritegame.IoftenwatchNBAgamesonTV.Itmakesmefeelrelax.”*修正：*“Basketballismyfavouritesport.IoftenwatchNBAmatchesonTV.Itmakesmefeelrelaxed.”*錯誤原因：*sport*指體育運動類別，*game*指具體比賽；“feel”后接形容詞*relaxed*（*relax*是動詞）。錯誤示例3（結構：內(nèi)容堆砌無邏輯）原句：*“Ilikeswimming.It’sfun.Iswiminthepool.Myfriendalsolikesswimming.Swimmingisgoodforhealth.Iswimeveryweek.”*修正思路：用連接詞（*because,and,which*）梳理邏輯，將“朋友、頻率、好處”整合，突出“我”與游泳的關聯(lián)。五、拓展練習1.仿寫訓練以“MyFavouriteSport”為主題，模仿范文結構，介紹你喜歡的運動（如*soccer,badminton,running*等）。要求：包含“喜歡的契機”“運動帶來的改變”“一次難忘經(jīng)歷”；至少使用2個進階詞匯（如*perseverance,beneficial*）和1個復合句（如*when/because引導的從句*）。2.詞匯/句式填空①Myfavouritesportis______(*tabletennis*).I______(*fellinlovewith*)itwhenIsawmygrandmaplayitinthepark.②______(*Notonly*)doesrunningmakemehealthy,______(*butalso*)ithelpsmeclearmymind.③Themostunforgettablemomentwas______(*whenIfinisheda3-kilometerrunforthefirsttime*).Ifeltsoproudofmyself!3