1、如何進(jìn)行圖表式作文寫作,條形或柱狀圖(bar chart) 曲線圖(graph) 餅形圖(pie chart) 圖表作文 要求考生將圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)、圖形轉(zhuǎn)換成文字，并就圖表中所反映的情況作出分析或發(fā)表議論。,1.讀取信息。 仔細(xì)讀圖，掌握圖表上提供的信息,2.處理信息。對信息進(jìn)行分析與,對比，考慮文章的布局。,3.文章結(jié)構(gòu)。,Part 1：General idea (conclusion/tendency) (圖表反映的問,題或總體趨勢),Part 2：Facts (to support the idea) (具體數(shù)據(jù)或事實(shí)) slight, slightly; quick, quickly;

2、steady, steadily; sharp ( 急 劇 的 ), sharply ( 急 劇 地 ); dramatically ( 顯 著 地 ); remarkably (顯著地),6.趨勢：upward trend (上漲趨勢), downward trend (下跌趨勢) 7.不變：stay, remain (依然是),8.其他：account for 30% of the total (占總量的 30%), at the same rate (以相同的速率), average (平均的), annual (每年的), figure/number (數(shù)字), amount (數(shù)量)

3、, percentage (百分比),常用句式結(jié)構(gòu): Topic sentences .,I have recently made a survey among. A research has been made recently among. Im writing to tell you about my research about. Different people have different ideas about.,Body sentences,Somebodys favorite is.while others. What somebody likes to do most is

4、. Both .and .would like to . As for., the number .equal. The second largest group would like to . The second choice for somebody is to .,歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表評論(有時(shí)第三步可省略)常用詞匯有: to sum up , finally ,in conclusion ,at last , in summary , on the whole , in short , all in all , in a word , in the end , in other words

5、 , therefore , as a result , generally speaking , As I have shown ., As has been stated ,得出結(jié)論,Conclusion sentences,As I have shown. As has been stated In my opinion. I think.,三要： 1.要找出對比最為明顯的突破點(diǎn)。 2.要找出對比較明顯的要點(diǎn)。 3.要找出雙方非常相似的要點(diǎn) 。 三忌： 1.忌流水帳式依次描述。 2.忌反復(fù)使用同一句型。 3.忌反復(fù)出現(xiàn)紛繁復(fù)雜的數(shù)據(jù)。,柱狀圖式作文寫作要注意：,下面是某高中對該校200名

6、學(xué)生（男女各半）的擇業(yè)觀做出調(diào)查后繪制的圖表，根據(jù)該圖所反映的情況用英語寫一則報(bào)道。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.參考詞匯：鮮明的對比striking contrast,書面表達(dá)審題 體裁：說明文 時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 人稱：第三人稱,下面是某高中對該校200名學(xué)生（男女各半）的擇業(yè)觀做出調(diào)查后繪制的圖表，根據(jù)該圖所反映的情況用英語寫一則報(bào)道。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.參考詞匯：鮮明的對比striking contrast,I have recently made a survey about middle school students choice of their future

7、jobs. They have different ideas about it. The most striking contrast is in teaching. 30% of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5% of the boys want to do this job. 20% of the boys want to do business and another 20% want to become lawyers while girls take up 15% in these fields . What

8、 boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists .Besides teaching , the second choice for girls is to be scientists and managers .The number is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.,A possible version,假設(shè)你于 4 月 2

9、3 日的“世界讀書日”(World Reading Day) 在你所在的學(xué)校進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)閱讀習(xí)慣調(diào)查，以下是其中的一項(xiàng) 調(diào)查結(jié)果。請用英語寫一篇短文，說明相關(guān)內(nèi)容及結(jié)果等。,A買書閱讀,B網(wǎng)上下載或在線閱讀,C從朋友處或圖書館借閱,D學(xué)校閱覽室閱讀,1.調(diào)查內(nèi)容及時(shí)間； 2.調(diào)查結(jié)果；,3.問題：閱覽室的使用率(use rate)不高； 4.建議：(1)延長閱覽室的開放時(shí)間； (2)書店送書到校，方便學(xué)生購買。,On World Reading Day, we carried out a survey about the reading habits of high school student

10、s. According to the survey,45.75% of the students read books they buy and 8.5% of them download e-books or read online.35.75% of the students borrow books from friends or the library and 11% of them read in the school reading-room. From the survey we can see that the use rate of the school rea-ding-

11、room is not high enough. We suggest that its opening hours be extended and meanwhile bookstores be invited into the school to make it convenient for students to buy books.,日前，針對學(xué)生的零用錢（pocket money）的消費(fèi)方向，你對你們市某中學(xué)的高中和初中的部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查得出數(shù)據(jù)如下表?，F(xiàn)請你用英文給某報(bào)社編輯寫一封信，反映這一情況，并呼吁中學(xué)生樹立正確的消費(fèi)觀。 注意：1書信中不必一一列舉具體數(shù)字，只要 抓住

12、主要問題和數(shù)據(jù)說明問題即可。 2字?jǐn)?shù)：100字左右。開頭已給出,不計(jì) 人總詞數(shù)。,Dear editor, Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money _.,Dear editor, Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money. In this survey, both junior students

13、and senior students spend most their money on books, sacks and playing games, still some money goes to clothes, banks, sports, and so on. The survey shows that about 44 of seniors prefer books to sacks （37%）and playing games （31%）.On the other hand, only 32 of juniors will spend their pocket money b

14、uying books, while over a half buy sacks and 44 spend on playing games. Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money in clothes or put it in banks. I think too many sacks will not only make us put on weight but also do harm to our health. In addition, if we play games without limit, well

15、lose much precious time, which results in low grades. Furthermore, the money is hard-earned. I hope we students value our money as well as our time.,假如你叫Jim Lee，你最近對你班60名同學(xué)(男女各半)進(jìn)行了上網(wǎng)目的調(diào)查?，F(xiàn)將調(diào)查結(jié)果(如下表所示)用英語給某報(bào)社的編輯寫一封信報(bào)告此事，以引起輿論關(guān)注。 注意：報(bào)告應(yīng)包括圖表所示全部內(nèi)容 敘述結(jié)果時(shí)要避免重復(fù)使用百分比。 敘述過程中要適當(dāng)添加評語。詞數(shù)100左右。,學(xué)生習(xí)作點(diǎn)評 Dear edi

16、tor, My name is Jim lee. I am a middle school student. Now, I did a research about the purpose of my classmates go on the line. There are 30% of boys and 20% girls read news on the computer. Have 20% boys and 15% girls send e-mails on-line. There are more girls (about 35%) than boys (about 5%) have

17、a chat. About 10% boys and 10% girls used computers study. More boys than girls play games . Yours Jim,Common mistakes,1. Most of the boys in order to play games while most girls in order to have a chat. 2. About 10% boys and 10% girls used computer study.,漢語式英語,？,1. 20% of boys get on the Internet

18、to send e-mails while 15% of girls get on the Internet to send e -mails . 2.The number of boys who like to play games is larger than the number of girls .,重復(fù)累贅,句式單一, 平鋪直敘,A. 30% boys and 20% girls go on-line in order to read news. 20% boys and girls go on-line to send e-mails. 5%boys and 35% girls want to chat with ot