1、Characteristics Steps The right signs,Q1: How to do proof reading?,短文改錯(cuò)多選用100詞左右的記敘文和應(yīng)用文，話題貼近生活，淺顯易懂，無超綱的詞匯，句子結(jié)構(gòu)較簡單。此題型意在從詞法、句法和行文邏輯角度考察考生在語篇中綜合運(yùn)用英語的能力，同時(shí)兼顧句型結(jié)構(gòu)、習(xí)慣搭配等。 考生平時(shí)在書面表達(dá)中常出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤就是短文改錯(cuò)考查的重點(diǎn)。,Characteristics 改錯(cuò)題型特點(diǎn),Steps,Skimming,Scanning,Checking,Go through the whole passage to get a general i

2、dea 改前通讀 理清大意 Read the passage carefully sentence by sentence and find the mistakes 改中細(xì)讀 先易后難 Read the passage for the third time and check the answers 改后復(fù)讀 仔細(xì)檢查,The right signs,1. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself. 2.Im sure you will find one you like it. 3. I like playing piano.,Wrong word,Unne

3、cessary word,Missing word,talking,the,2013-2015年 811,Q2: How to do proof reading well?,skills,避免母語干擾 固定搭配 完整性 一致性,Coherence 一致性,Task 1,Coherence in the sentences,1. The understanding between two friends means both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other. 2. When I was a child, I hoped to

4、live in the city. I think I would be happy there. 3. Bill was standing at the side of the car, talking to two men who was helping him to repair it. 4. The population of China is much larger than it of the USA.,trust,thought,that,were,1a,Note-taking: trust：v./ n.,5. Today, it is much easier to be hea

5、lthy than it is in the past. 6. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and a fish was caught. 7. Yesterday afternoon, I paid a visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. 8. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. 9. Dont panic or get out o

6、f line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. (2 mistakes),was,his,calm,was,is,try,Note-taking: panic：v./ adj. / n. panic-panicked-panicked, panicking,Group Learning,Discuss，match the mistakes with types of coherence and find the tips,Types of coherence,指代一致 詞性一致 時(shí)態(tài)一致 主謂一致,Sentence 1 Sentence 2 Sen

7、tence 3 Sentence 4 Sentence 5 Sentence 6 Sentence 7 Sentence 8 Sentence 9,Sentences,Tips 1:文中出現(xiàn)的每個(gè)代詞要注意與其所指代的名詞在人稱、數(shù)量和性別上保持一致。,指代一致,Sentence4, Sentence 7,詞性一致,Tips 2: 1.關(guān)注詞語與其在句中的功能、修飾語是否相一致。尤其是名詞的數(shù)（單復(fù)數(shù)、可不可數(shù)） 2.由并列連接詞連接的前后兩部分在詞性和功能作用上保持一致(形容詞、副詞、謂語、非謂語前后一致)。,Sentence 1, Sentence 9,Tips 3: 要有目的地去檢查文中

8、每一個(gè)謂語動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)與上下文、語境以及該句的時(shí)間狀語是否一致,時(shí)態(tài)一致,Sentence2, Sentence 5,Tips 4:謂語要與主語在人稱、數(shù)和語態(tài)上保持一致；注意較為復(fù)雜的主語（有插入語，從句、非謂語作主語）；定語從句，there be句式,主謂一致,Sentence3, Sentence 6, Sentence8,Analyze the mistakes and find the type of coherence and the tips,1 b,1. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. 2. Thank you

9、 for all you have done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. 3. To deal with the problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. 4. I am good at all the subjects, and always ready to help othersAt school I get along well with my classma

10、tesTherefore, I have a problem that troubles me all the time,However,because,not,and,邏輯,Tips 5 上下文邏輯關(guān)系的一致。 but，and，or等的使用。 冠詞（an/ a 與the）的混用 重點(diǎn)在連詞，肯定與否定等。,一致,Task 2,Coherence in the passage,My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in t

11、he afternoon. We didnt need to do so much homework. However, we have more time for after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hours and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of flowers and trees around the clas

12、sroom buildings. They can lie on the grass for a rest, or sit by the lake listening to music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(5mistakes),dont,Therefore,looks,We,helpful,時(shí)態(tài)一致,邏輯一致,主謂一致,指代一致,詞性一致,Practice makes perfect,What to make sure?,T

13、he steps (skimming-scanning-checking) The skill (coherence) The right signs,Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result,

14、 the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing

15、wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!,The author shared us his experience of growing tomatoes.,Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they plea

16、se. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. W

17、e are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!,years,have,everywhere,tasty,many,ago,of,a,wonderful,Extension,apply coherence to writing,Daily Practice,Mr. Cai, our physics teacher, is kind, patient and responsible. He always makes his classes lively and interesting. He prepares his lessons well and is strict with us. I used to be poor in physics in the past. But with the help of Mr. Cai, I have made great progress. Mr. Cai is not only our teacher but also our friend.,Conclusion,Steps of doing proof readi