1、see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, a

2、nd headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green p

3、ine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(編織的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意: 1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語; 3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好; 4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。,Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out i

4、n front of my horse. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.,答案 寫作提示 根據(jù)續(xù)寫第一段所給的段首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.可知,本段 應(yīng)該主要描寫突然出現(xiàn)一只小兔子之后的故事。按照常理,突然出現(xiàn)的兔子一般會讓馬受驚。故本段應(yīng)該描寫馬受驚后發(fā)生的事。 從第二段的段首句We had no idea where we were and it got dark.可以看出,作者和父親迷路了。那么本段的故事主要根據(jù)

5、迷路之后的情況展開。本段的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是從迷路到回家的故事。 寫作時一定要注意以下兩點(diǎn): 第一,從本故事的發(fā)展來看,第一段是馬受驚后發(fā)生的事,而第二段是迷路之后的故事,因此要注意人物心理和情感的描寫。 第二,注意兩段的邏輯關(guān)系。要注意第一段的內(nèi)容,尤其是段尾的內(nèi)容和第二段段首句之間的銜接要合理,即第一段的最后一定要有迷路的情節(jié)設(shè)計(jì)。,One possible version: Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened m

6、y horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I

7、was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didnt know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in,such a dark situation. Just as w

8、e were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul,” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride! 精彩語句 1.精美詞匯 in vain 白費(fèi)力氣previous adj. 之前的at the point of desperation 將要絕望之際a faint v

9、oice 微弱的聲音 2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu) Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off.(部分倒裝) What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.(what引導(dǎo)主語從句),Writing 2(2017浙江11月) 閱讀下面短文. 根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 A Vacation with My Mother I had an interesting childhood. It w

10、as filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks drivi

11、ng to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, bo

12、oks, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and trav-,elers checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving whi

13、le Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a

14、 strange city, but we werent about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? Dav

15、id and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反對). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next tow

16、n.,注意: 1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語; 3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好; 4.續(xù)寫完成后. 請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.,答案 Paragraph 1： The next day

17、 we remembered the brand-new tent we brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surpassingly beautifulthe warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappoint

18、ed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping. Paragraph 2： We drove through several states and saw lots of sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laug

19、hing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-m

20、inded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.,Writing 3(2017浙江6月) 閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycl

21、e repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(騎行) a-long alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that

22、s a big dog!”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, a

23、nd to Macs relief, it fell back, shak-,ing its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追趕). Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved

24、 and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt

25、 think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in fron

26、t of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. 注意: 1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;,3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好; 4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived.,答案 Paragraph 1:

27、 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved at the peo-ple inside the car for help. Paul and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb in-to the car, in spite of the danger that the fierce wolf was running near. They quickly pushed Mac into

28、their car and closed all the doors as hard as possible, legs trembling and breathless. Seeing this, the wolf still howled outside the car for some time and then left unwillingly. Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. Macs friends were shocked to hear the story and very gratef

29、ul to the young couple. Mac invited all of them back to his home for dinner and he in-troduced his wife and daughters to his two new friends who saved his life. During the dinner they recalled the adventure and talked about the ways to deal with such dangerous situations.,Writing 4(2016浙江10月) 閱讀下面短文

30、,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “

31、Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top.

32、She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!”she cried.“Help!”,No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.

33、 Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To he

34、r great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter.

35、Is that for me?Unfortu-nately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.,注意: 1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中

36、標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語; 3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好; 4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Paragraph 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.,答案 Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. She had to stay alone in the forest for a

37、nother cold night.Jane was so tired and disappointed, but she didnt lose heart. She knew Tom must be trying his best to search for her. She believed that the helicopter must have been called by Tom and was sure it would come back again tomorrow. She found a place near thestream and slept. Paragraph

38、2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Shewalkedalong the stream, hoping to find a suitable place so that the helicopter could find her. She was so lucky that before long a big rock appeared, which was high above the trees. There she climbed and waited with heryellow blouse in hand for the heli-copte

39、r to come again.To her great joy,she didnt wait long before she saw the helicopter in the sky. She waved hard with the yellow blouse and the helicopter quickly found her. She was right and it was Tom who called the helicopter and saved her.,Writing 1(2018浙江寧波5月模擬) 閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 Jenn

40、y was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scold-ing from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished fo

41、r something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes, but

42、I dont have money on me,” she replied. “Thats nothing. Ill treat you today,” said the man.“Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly.,三年模擬,A組 20162018年高考模擬基礎(chǔ)題組,“Nothing. Actually I was just

43、 touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really

44、think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mothers fa

45、miliar face and weathered hands. “Why didnt I think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted. Why havent I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 注意:

46、1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;,3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好; 4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: Approaching the doorway,. Paragraph 2: A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.,答案 寫作提示 本文是一篇充滿教育意義的故事。Jenny因和母親爭吵而負(fù)氣離家,在街上得到陌生的面店老板贈予的面條而心生感激,在面店老板的提醒下,她終于認(rèn)識到了母親的偉大。原文最后一段提到Jenny決定回家向母親道

47、歉,那么后文的續(xù)寫一定要圍繞這一線索展開。續(xù)寫第一段的提示句告訴我們這一段是Jenny到家門口后的情景,而又根據(jù)第二段的提示句“一個在她頭發(fā)上的溫柔的撫摸拉回了她的思緒”可知上一段最后一定要出現(xiàn)Jenny沉思的語境。充分利用這 些信息并結(jié)合自己的想象應(yīng)該可以構(gòu)思出合理的結(jié)尾。 本文原文的基調(diào)暗示整個故事是一個內(nèi)容健康向上,具有很好的教育意義的故事。所以續(xù)寫一定要延續(xù)這個主題。,One possible version: Paragraph 1: Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. Tired and sad, she sat d

48、own in front of the house. “Where might my mother be?” she wondered. “Is she really so angry with me that she doesnt want to show any care for me?” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother, and she just realized that all the scolding from her mo

49、ther was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her. Tears rolled down her cheeks. Paragraph 2: A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head to see the familiar face and the worried eyes. “Here you come! Ive been looking for you,” came the tired voice. Jenny

50、 couldnt help but throw herself into her mothers arms. “Im sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed the sincere apology and the great gratitude. Then she felt the hug tightened.,Writing 2(2018浙江六校協(xié)作體) 閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 It was Christmas Day. Robin was working alon

51、e fixing an old lantern in the back room when he heard the ringing of his bell on the shop door. The bell, which produced a uniquely pleasant sound, had been in Robins family for over a hundred years. He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop. Although the bell w

52、as hung on the inside of the main door, Robin had tied a wire to the screen door so that it would ring whether the inner door was open or not. Hearing the bell ring, he left the back room to greet his customer. “How can I help you, little lady?” Robins voice was joyful. “Hello, sir.” The little girl

53、 spoke almost in a whisper. She looked at Robin with her big brown eyes, and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special. Shyly she told him, “Id,like to buy a present, sir.” “Well, lets see,” Robin said. “who is this present for?” “My grandpa. Its for my grandpa. But I dont know wha

54、t to get.” Robin began to make suggestions. “How about a pocket watch? Its in good condition.” The lit-tle girl didnt answer. She walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door. She shook the door gently to ring the bell. Robins face seemed to glow as he saw her smiling with excite-ment. “

55、This is just right,” the little girl said. “Momma says my grandpa loves music.” Just then, Robins expression changed. Fearful of breaking the little girls heart, he told her, “Im sorry, missy. Thats not for sale. Maybe your grandpa would like this little radio.” The girl looked at the radio, bowed h

56、er head, and sadly sighed, “No, I dont think so.” In an effort to help her understand, Robin told her that the bell had been his only companion, for the rest of his family were all gone now, except for his estranged (疏遠(yuǎn)的)daughter whom he had not seen for nearly a decade.,注意: 1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2.至少使

57、用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語; 3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好; 4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him.,Paragraph 2: Later that evening when Robin was closing up the shop, he heard a familiar ring.,答案 寫作提示 文章原文主要介紹了門鈴的特別以及它對Robin的意義,而由小女孩與Robin的對話可知小女 孩看中的是Ro

58、bin的門鈴。續(xù)寫的第一段的第一句話已經(jīng)給出,從這句話可以看出當(dāng)小女孩得知門鈴不賣后很失望,再看下一段第一句,Robin又聽到了熟悉的聲音,顯然Robin最后還是把門鈴賣給小女孩了。因此第一段主要寫Robin忍痛割愛,把門鈴賣給小女孩的過程,而第二段應(yīng)該是賣了門鈴之后,小女孩為Robin做的事情。 One possible version: Paragraph 1: With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him. She managed a forced smile, murmur-ing “Thank you, anyway” and turned toward the doorway. Suddenly Robin thought of his es-tranged daughter. Looking at the leaving girl, Robin called out, “How much have you got to,s