1、六級寫作,聽力249分， 閱讀249分， 完型填空或改錯70分， 作文142分。,寫作,寫作的突破點,審題角度,Why people attend college?,Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags,1.一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛的使用 2.造成的問題 3.限制使用的意義,造成的問題,限制使用的意義,How to improve students mental health,1、 大學生的心理健康十分重要 2、 因此，學校可以. 3、 我們自己應(yīng)當.,因此，學?？梢?,The Benefits of Volunteering,寫作常用角度,生活角

2、度 we always consider recreational activities as something to relax ourselves or something that can add color to the dull routine of every day life.,Sth will make our life more enjoyable and pleasant, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.,生活的樂趣,For the majority of p

3、eople, reading or learning a new skill has become the source of their happiness and contentment 對大多數(shù)人來講，閱讀或?qū)W習一項新技術(shù)已成為他們快樂的來源,時間角度,Collecting, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.,It provides relaxation for leisure hours, as just looking at on

4、es treasures is always a joy.,Furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a comfortable life and have more opportunities to communicate with their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character. 而且，學生生活在自己家中，有舒適的生活，并有更多機會和父母交流，這對他們個性的培養(yǎng)是有利的。,

5、知識角度,Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched and our horizons will be greatly broadened.,For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn. 對于那些想過上健康而有

6、意義的生活的人們來說，找時間學習一些新知識是很重要的，正如那句老話：活到老，學到老,The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets. 大部分學生相信業(yè)余工作會使他們有更多機會發(fā)展人際交往能力，而這對他們未來找工作是非常有好處的。,Skill角度

7、,Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up. 許多家長

8、相信額外的教育活動有許多優(yōu)點，通過學習，他們的孩子可以獲得很多實踐技能和有用的知識，當他們長大后，這些對他們就業(yè)是大有好處的。,經(jīng)驗角度,By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks. 通過做一份和專業(yè)相關(guān)的工作，學生不僅能夠提高他們的專業(yè)能力，而且能獲得從課本上得不到的經(jīng)驗。,Now pe

9、ople in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities. 現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始相信學習新的技術(shù)和知識能直接幫助他們獲得工作就會或提升的機會。,Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that some certain sports cont

10、ribute directly to our body health by giving us some physical exercises.,健康角度,合作角度,Extracurricular activities can give students team-spirit and teach them how to cooperate with others. Because in those activities, students usually need to cooperate with others in order to get good achievement.,主題句的寫

11、法,Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism. 許多人認為國際旅游對經(jīng)濟發(fā)展有積極作用，應(yīng)鼓勵地方政府發(fā)展國際旅游。,主題句一,Sth is very important. Sth is of great importance. Sth plays an important role in peoples l

12、ife/study,主題句二,Sth can produce positive effects on in more than one way. Sth may bring about some negative impacts on ,Whats more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their acade

13、mic work. 而且，生活在學校里能節(jié)省大量每天往返于學校和家的路上的時間，這會使他們有更多的時間和精力放在學習上。,時間角度之好 intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.,Moreover, children will have less time t

14、o play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop their interpersonal skills and cultivate their character. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness. 而且，由于要額外地學習，孩子們沒有多少時間和同齡的孩子玩耍和交流，很難培養(yǎng)他們的個性和交際能力。他們可能變得孤僻甚至產(chǎn)生某些心理

15、疾病。,壞處之-個性，技能，孤僻，心理,萬能理由之重要性,Punctuality is a necessary habit in all public affairs in civilized society. Without it, nothing could ever be brought to a conclusion; everything would be in a state of chaos. (抽象),Keeping mental health is an important condition in all public affairs in civilized societ

16、y, especially to university students. Without it nothing could be brought to a conclusion, everything would be in a state of chaos.,And recently the issue of disorder in brains has been aroused wide concern on campus.,具體,It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indis

17、pensable part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious. 人們普遍認為計算機和其他機器已經(jīng)成為我們社會必不可少的一部分。 它們使我們的生活更舒適，減少了大量勞動。,At the same time, young people should be encouraged to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly

18、 to reduce dependence on their parents and are essential in the maintenance of healthy mental condition. 同時，應(yīng)該鼓勵年輕人和他們的同齡人交往，發(fā)展他們的交際能力，這將幫助他們極大地減少對父母的倚賴并且保持健康的精神狀態(tài)。,付出代價,Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price. 任何政府忽視這一點都將付出巨大的代價。,得知,When reports came into London Zoo that

19、 a wild puma had been spotted forty-five miles south of London, they were not taken seriously.,機會,As she is not rich, the chances that she will ever be able to afford such purchases are remote.,采取措施,Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be

20、 made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism. 應(yīng)該采取適當?shù)拇胧┫拗仆鈬糜握叩臄?shù)量，努力保護當?shù)丨h(huán)境和歷史不受國際旅游業(yè)的不利影響。,In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. 考慮到問題的嚴重性，在事態(tài)進一步惡化之前，必須采取有效的措施。,萬能理由之喜歡,Cats never fa

21、il to fascinate human beings.,The quiet life of the country has never appealed to me.,They always go into raptures at the mere mention of the country.,The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework. 最近的調(diào)查顯示相當多的孩子對家庭作業(yè)沒什么好感。,An investigation shows that fe

22、male workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement. 一項調(diào)查顯示婦女歡迎退休。,萬能理由之影響,Antique shops exert a great fascination on a great many people.,萬能理由之表示事實、現(xiàn)狀,1）We cannot ignore the fact that. 2）No one can deny the fact that. 3）There is no denying the fact that.（壞）,Say no to pirated products,T

23、here is no denying the fact that piracy is a grave problem with which this country is confronted. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. In many places we see people peddling pirated books or disks.,例如：We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the prob

24、lems of pollution. To solve these problems，we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.,There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city auth

25、orities should take strong measures to deal with it. 無可否認，空氣污染是一個極其嚴重的問題：城市當局應(yīng)該采取有力措施來解決它。,萬能理由之表示比較,Compared with A，B.,例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.,萬能理由之表示結(jié)論,從上述討論中，我們可以自然地得出這樣的結(jié)論_ From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at th

26、e conclusion that _.,單一內(nèi)容，論述好壞,From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society. 通過以上討論，我們可以得出結(jié)論：自行車的優(yōu)點遠大于缺點，并且在現(xiàn)代社會它仍將發(fā)揮重要作用。,單一內(nèi)容，趨利避害,Computers do play a positiv

27、e role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should，therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.（有替換表達）,What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish the weaknesses to the least extent. 我們必須盡可能發(fā)揮其優(yōu)勢，趨吉避兇。,單一內(nèi)容，無傷無害,In a wo

28、rd, digital products, like everything else, have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Whatever effects they have, one thing is certain: digital products in themselves are neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine their value to the society.,單一內(nèi)容，發(fā)表觀點,From what has bee

29、n discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole. 通過上面的討論，我們不難得出結(jié)論：業(yè)余工作對學生們會產(chǎn)生深遠的影響，我們應(yīng)鼓勵學生從事業(yè)余工作，這將有利于學生和

30、他們的家庭，甚至整個社會。,二、萬能短語,欣賞大自然的風景 to appreciate the scenery of nature,欣賞古典文學 to appreciate the classical literature,開拓視野 to broaden the horizon,開拓心胸 to broaden the mind,擴大知識面 expand ones scope of knowledge,啟迪心靈 to enlighten the mind,陶冶品德 to cultivate the character,培養(yǎng)公德心 to cultivate the public mindednes

31、s,cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培養(yǎng)了強烈的責任感,undertake the due obligations 承擔責任,grasp good communication skills 掌握良好的交流技能,promote social skills and competence 提高了社會能力和競爭力,競爭與合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation,維護健康 to maintain health,松散身心 to relax oneself,調(diào)劑生活 to make life pleasant,提

32、升生活質(zhì)量 to promote the qualities of life,提升生活的水平 to raise the standard of living （比較少）,增加生活的情趣 to increase the pleasures of life,解除緊張和焦慮 to relieve the tension and anxiety both from the society and the schoolwork,lighten the burden of 減輕了的負擔,financial burden psychological burden 經(jīng)濟/心理負擔,較好地駕馭生活 be a b

33、etter pilot of ones life,關(guān)心社會 to be concerned about the society,貢獻國家 to contribute oneself to the country,adapt oneself to the development of 使自己適應(yīng)的發(fā)展,面臨困難 to be confronted with the difficulty,克服困難 to overcome the difficulty,注意衛(wèi)生 to emphasize the importance of hygiene,重視： attach much importance/sign

34、ificance to,對有益 to be beneficial to,對有害 to be harmful to,采取步驟 to take steps to take measures,有很深的了解 to have a deep understanding of,有廣泛的知識 to have a wide range of knowledge,give a big push to the development of education 給予教育極大的推動,扮演重要角色 to play an important role in,強烈愿望 express a strong desire to,A

35、ccording to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family. 根據(jù)最近的一項調(diào)查，越來越多的人表達了想從事另外的工作或加班以賺取更多的錢來補貼家用的強烈愿望。,不遺余力 to spare no efforts to,不辭辛勞 to take the pains to,經(jīng)不起推敲 cannot

36、bear closer analysis cannot hold water,社會進步的反映 mirror of social progress,提高大眾的環(huán)保意識 promote the public awareness of environmental protection; arouse peoples awareness of environmental protection,考慮到諸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration,從另一個角度 from another perspective,在人類生活的方方面面 in all as

37、pects of human life,社會進步的體現(xiàn) a symbol of society progress,社會進步的反映 mirror of social progress,科技的飛速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology,日益激烈的社會競爭 the increasingly fierce social competition,有其自身的優(yōu)缺點 has its merits and demerits advantages and disadvantages,把時間和精力放在上 focus time and e

38、nergy on,許多問題： a host of problems,接觸社會： come into frequent contact with the society,作文的展開按照三步走：,1)題目涉及的現(xiàn)象進行簡單的描述，在描述的述可以自己控制過程中將寫作引向文章的主題(這樣的描，如果第一段落字數(shù)單薄，可以適當使描述具體化)。 2)在第一步的基礎(chǔ)上給出觀點，觀點視文章主旨可以分為：個人觀點(包括方法、途徑)，和多方觀點(觀點從正反兩方面或者一個方面的多個層次闡述;在交待觀點是需要有原因和支持)。 3)個人觀點總結(jié)點題(同意或不同意)，簡要指出方法途徑，如果找不到具體的解決方法，則將話講得圓

39、滑(如果正文中間觀點沒有必然沖突，則可以融合)。,對立觀點型,背景句,展現(xiàn)問題,問題的常用詞：question, problem, issue 1.Recently, the issue of . has been brought into public focus. 近來，_的問題引起了社會的廣泛關(guān)注。,Recently the issue of (whether or not) has been in the limelight（成為引人注目的中心） and has aroused wide concern in the public. 近來，是否_的問題已經(jīng)非常明確而且引起了社會的廣泛關(guān)

40、注。,Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is . 隨著社會的不斷發(fā)展，出現(xiàn)了越來越多的問題，其中之一便是_。,Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional pra

41、ctice. 現(xiàn)在我們進入了一個充滿機遇和創(chuàng)新的嶄新時代，很多人對某些傳統(tǒng)的看法也發(fā)生了很大改變。,_已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當中，將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。 _ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.,改寫題目,“花開兩朵”句型,Most of us ，however，have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island.,Most of us

42、，however，have formed a different picture ofsome people think they are beneficial, while others hold the opposite view.,第三句,And we rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue. 對于這種極具爭議的話題，我們很難作出絕對的回答。,People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the sa

43、me case. 不同行業(yè)的人對同一種問題的解釋不盡相同。,harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that,Some people take the attitude that can produce positive effects on us in more than one way. Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it. First of all Furthermore Whats more ,

44、過渡句,The other side of the picture is quite the opposite.,Others harbor the idea that, may bring about negative impacts on us. Those who strongly disapprove of . have cogent reasons for it.have their own reason for it. For one thing , For another,第四段,第四段,Perhaps there is an element of truth in both t

45、hese pictures.,處理方式一,From my own perspective, I am inclined to be on the side of the former view. 在我看來，我較同意前一種觀點。,After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the former view. 經(jīng)過深思熟慮，我較支持前一種看法，,“吶喊”句型,One of the things that fascinates us most about cats is the popular belief that th

46、ey have nine lives.,處理方式二,From my own perspective, computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should，therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish t

47、he weaknesses to the least extent.,訓練正反對立型.doc,問題解決型,注意： 該題目不是針對問題的爭議性，針對問題產(chǎn)生的原因和解決辦法 背景句相似，二三句不同,What are the causes and solutions of the problem of the scarcity of water resource?,背景句： Recently the issue of (whether or not ) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.,改寫題

48、目：關(guān)注原因： A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. 或者 交待討論內(nèi)容： There are some factors leading to this problem. A number of factors are responsible for this problem. Some of the most common factors will be discussed below, followed by some responsi

49、ble/reasonable solutions.,First of all. Furthermore Whats more.,法律，意識,In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.,For one thing, it is essential that laws (rules) and regulations be worked out and enforced to ban/reduce,For another, the pub

50、lic should enhance their awareness of the importance of . With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem caused by will be solved in the near future.,訓練問題解決型.doc,環(huán)境類,what are the cause of water scarcity? Present your own solutions to it.,In present-day society, the hu

51、man race is advancing at a staggering rate in a host of arena. Along with all the boons brought about by high-tech wonders there have come some sufferings; and the lack of fresh water is manifest among them. Over two thirds of the nations worldwide are afflicted with severe water shortage. Hence, it

52、 is crucial that we ascertain the cause of water scarcity and identify the effective remedies of this phenomenon. As I see it, the cause of the current water crisis are manifold.,First and foremost, the population explosion is the root cause of the crisis. Over the past half century, the world popul

53、ation explosion has more than doubled and this growth rate is showing no sign of slowing down; therefore, household and industrial consumption has been shooting up.,Secondly, the deterioration of the Earths ecosystem also contributes to this disturbing situation. The rampant practice of deforestatio

54、n has engendered massive soil erosion and multitude of chemical works, sewage disposal and textile factories discharge their toxic waste into streams, rivers or lakes.,Thirdly, the overexploitation water resource also plays a pivotal role in water scarcity. Awareness of the significance of water con

55、servation is weak or non-existent on household, community and national levels.,Given the severity of the water crisis, we have no alternative but to take vigorous measures to address the situation. To begin with, controlling the drastic increase of world population is of paramount importance. It is

56、imperative that other populous nations learned from Chinas success in curbing its population surge over the past two decades and introduce more effective birth control methods.,Further, the concept of sustainable development ought to be spread in the international community. Any form of over tapping

57、 natural resources must be strictly prohibited.,Lastly, mankind must strive to find alternative source of fresh water. For instance, both glacial melt water and desalinated salt water hold huge potential as vast sources of water.,To summarize, causes of the shortage of fresh water are multiple. Birt

58、h-control measures, promotion of sustainable development and research about alternative water resources are all effective ways to alleviate this modern-day scourge.,給定觀點型,一種看法或者觀點,一,Nowadays, with 現(xiàn)象，people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of 主題詞. In my point of view, 改寫題目.,There

59、are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary causes is that 支持論點的理由,Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持論點的理由， 闡述理由 Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that 重述標題. Therefore, 提出意見或建議,The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood,Nowadays, with the surging cases of mental problem, committing suicide