1、七年級（上）Units 5-9 與朋友共度時光,第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo),從全國近5年“與朋友共度時光”相關(guān)話題書面表達(dá)的命題來看，通常會從以下兩方面的角度命題： 1. 結(jié)合初中學(xué)習(xí)生活，從班級活動、與同學(xué)感動瞬間、與同學(xué)度過的美好時光、初中畢業(yè)留言等角度進(jìn)行考查。,寫作導(dǎo)圖,2. 結(jié)合作者親身經(jīng)歷，從生日聚會、自己一天的生活、參加某種活動等角度進(jìn)行考查。 分析近3年60套四川真題可知，四川對此話題的書面表達(dá)是以介紹我的初中好友，與朋友共度的美好時光為主，下面以（2014資陽）為例：,Spending time with friends,Basic information,Reasons,F

2、eeling,Name: Li Ping,Look: long hair; white skin,Personality: quiet,smile to us; encourage me; worked hard,Hobby: reading,We can be good friends forever,亮點句型速成,常用句型：,Thanks for telling me about your best friend.,推薦句型：,Thanks for staying with me very much.,Thanks for staying with me very much during

3、these days. Thank you very much for staying with me during these days and I do feel happy.,開頭句：,1. My best friend in junior middle school is Li Ping. 2. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friendLi Ming.,正文句：,1. She is a beautiful girl with long hair and white skin.,2. Playing with her i

4、s an important part in my spare time. 3. I can get/receive many/lots of presents/ gifts. 4. I still remember that we went to the movies together on Sunday. 5. Im very happy to go to the cinema with Mike last weekend. 6. I love it because its very useful for me.,7. I really enjoy that we got together

5、 during these days.,結(jié)尾句： 1. I hope we can be good friends forever. 2. I hope she will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.,典例剖析,假如你叫李華。你的美國筆友Nick在來信中談到他中學(xué)時的好朋友。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給他回信，介紹你初中時的一位好朋友。 1. 外貌、性格、愛好； 2. 喜歡他（她）的理由； 3. 和他（她）一起做過的一件難忘的事； 4. 希望永遠(yuǎn)和他（她）做好朋友。,注意：1. 詞數(shù)60左右； 2.

6、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名及學(xué)校名，好朋友 的姓名一律用Li Ping指代; 3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Nick, Thanks for telling me about your best friend. My best friend in junior middle school is Li Ping. _ Best wishes. Li Hua,細(xì)讀所給文字提示，提取信息： 1.本文要求寫一封書信，介紹你的初中好友。 敘述過去的事用一般過去時，其它部分用 一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱為第一人稱。 2. 根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，開頭寫出我初中好友是李萍；然后正文介紹她的外貌、性格、愛好，喜歡她

7、的理由，和她一起做過的一件難忘的事；最后表明自己希望和她永遠(yuǎn)做好朋友。,【審題指導(dǎo)】,【高分范文】,Dear Nick, Thanks for telling me about your best friend. My best friend in junior middle school is Li Ping. She is a beautiful girl with long hair and white skin. She is thin, so she can wear many colorful dresses. She is very quiet. She loves readin

8、g, too. She always reads books in the library. She is very,Friendly. When we meet her, she often smiles to us. So we all love her. Playing with her is an important part in my spare time. She is a kind and nice girl. Once I failed in my English test. She encouraged me to be happy and we worked hard t

9、ogether. We stayed up learning English,together, did English exercises together, asked our teacher for help together, and she often encouraged me to study hard, so we would get good grades. With her help, I passed my next test. I was thankful for her. Li Ping is important in my life. I hope we can be good friends forever. Best wishes. Li Hua,1. 一起努力_ 2. 向老師尋求幫助 _ 3. 她是一個漂亮的女孩，有長長的頭發(fā)，白皙的皮膚。 _ 4. 與她玩耍是我業(yè)余時間最重要的一部分。 _ 5. 我希望我們永遠(yuǎn)是好朋友。_,work hard together,ask our teacher for help together,She i