1、Approaches and Strategies to Academic Writing Task 1,UNIT 6,- 流程圖,IELTS WRITING,流程圖寫作要點(diǎn),找到流程圖的過程，起點(diǎn)，終點(diǎn)。 找到圖上標(biāo)出的已知動作，如果出現(xiàn)生詞，盡量猜測。 流程圖里面存在生詞是完全正常的。生詞多數(shù)都是名詞或者動詞，而且生詞旁邊還配有解釋性的圖畫，所以大致方向是可以猜出來的。最好方法是直接抄到文章里。 按照步驟，分段描述，千萬不能省略任何一步。 切記！加入流暢合理的表示順序的關(guān)聯(lián)詞。 句型以主動為主，搭配被動，以及主語從句（例如：It can be seen from the graph tha

2、t）。 時(shí)態(tài)要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。,Writing task 1,You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.,【高分范文及深度點(diǎn)評】,The diagram shows the stages in the process of making c

3、hocolate. 【所有的小作文第一句話都要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。流程圖必備三個(gè)詞：process整個(gè)過程；stage階段；step步驟】 【流程圖特點(diǎn)之一：介紹過程要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)】,Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia. The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans. 【開頭不能一上來就直接介紹cacao tree，而是通過主題詞chocolate引出，

4、否則顯得太唐突】 【流程圖特點(diǎn)之二：大量使用定語從句，將有關(guān)聯(lián)的兩句話連接?！?【流程圖特點(diǎn)之三：大量使用被動語態(tài)】,Firstly，when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes. During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown. 【流程圖特點(diǎn)之四：使用一些表示順序的連接詞】 【三個(gè)句子的并列：“句子A, 句子B and 句子C”。

5、 【流程圖特點(diǎn)之五：要適當(dāng)?shù)靥砑觽€(gè)別圖中沒有交代但能從圖片中直接讀出來的一些內(nèi)容，否則可能達(dá)不到字?jǐn)?shù)要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千萬不要加上自己的主觀觀點(diǎn)，否則會扣分】,Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temp

6、eratures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.,After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced. 【流程圖特點(diǎn)之六：一般不需要寫總結(jié)】,Writing task 2,You should spend

7、 about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant . Write at least 150 words.,Brick manufacturing,* Clay: type of

8、sticky earth that is used for making bricks, pots, etc.,【滿分范文】,The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a di

9、gger. Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either

10、formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.,Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high

11、 temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 -1300 . This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber. Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, be

12、it a building site or storage. (215 words),【考官評語】,Band 9 This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features of each stage of the process are appropriately and accurately presented. An excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporat

13、es part of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. The message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed. The language used is very fluent and sophistic

14、ated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor slips can be found and these do not detract from the high rating.,雅思流程圖的重點(diǎn)詞匯解析：,表述時(shí)間： in 10 days during the period of 10 days The process lasts for up to 10 days after 10 days 10 days passed

15、until something happened.,表示然后：,then, next, in the next state, following that, after that, the next step in the stage is .,表示過程：,process, procedure, formation, Development 表示步驟： step, stage, phase,時(shí)間階段：,after a period of months/days/minutes, during,順序連詞：,first, first of all, in the first stage, initially, to begin with second, then, next, also after that, at