1、Picture writing,1,簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片內(nèi)容，就圖片主題談?wù)勛约焊邢搿?你們讓我自己騎好嗎？,2,Three steps to write the beginning of a picture writing i) Describe the _ . ii) Relate the _ to a certain _ iii) Present your _,picture,picture,phenomenon,opinion,簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片內(nèi)容，就圖片主題談?wù)勛约焊邢搿?3,Useful skills to describe a picture,1.在圖中， 2.正如我們?cè)趫D片 中所能看到的，

2、 3.正如圖片所示，,As we can see in the picture, ,As is vividly shown in the picture, ,In the picture,4,Useful skills to introduce a phenomenon,4. 當(dāng)談到時(shí) 5. 是很普遍的 6. 最近現(xiàn)象引起了廣泛的關(guān)注,When it comes to,Its common that,Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that,5,Useful skills to present your opinion,7. 就

3、我而言 8. 我認(rèn)為 9. 我的理由如下,In my opinion/In my view/As far as Im concerned / From my point of view,I hold the view/opinion that My opinion is that I think/believe/consider that,My reasons are listed as follows. The following are my reasons.,6,Practice writing the first paragraph,Write a clear beginning of

4、 a composition, following the 3 steps.,picture,phenomenon,opinion,briefly,reasonably,clearly,7,Polish the beginning,Step I Step 2 Step 3,Describe the picture briefly.,Relate the picture to a certain phenomenon reasonably.,Present your opinion clearly,8,Polish the beginning,_ ， when a young girl was

5、riding a bike, almost all her family members were around, protecting her _ anything unexpected should happen, which did _ the girl as she really wanted to manage it herself. Its a common _ that parents care too much about their children. _, I dont think it wise for parents to _. My reasons are_:,As

6、is vividly shown in the picture,in case,annoy,phenomenon,As far as Im concerned,overprotect their children,listed as follows,9,（首先）_, too much love from parents will _ a child and _(使孩子很難)to _ with others . _,(其次) if parents take pains to pave way for their children , _ (很有可能) they will be _ how to

7、deal with a tough problem in future. _,（最后） overprotection will prevent children from further _ their overall ability, thus having a _ effect on their _ development.,To begin with,spoil,makes it hard for children,get along well,Whats more,Chances are that,at a loss as to,Finally,developing,negative,

8、all-round,10,_ （總之），its parents duty to show love for their children; however, they should find the balance between _.,In conclusion,holding and letting-go,11,Q1. What do you see in the picture?,Q2. What phenomenon do you think of in real life after seeing the picture?,Q3. Whats your opinion on this phenomenon?,Practice,12,Practice,13,reference version,As is vividly revealed in the cartoon picture, the boy is tied up with so many belts of extra classes that he feels tired and depressed. Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that students are burdened with a lot of ext