1、You can make it!,How to Improve Your Writing Skills,寧波市2012年初中畢業(yè)生學(xué)業(yè)考試 . 書面表達(dá)（共15分） 小組活動(dòng)（group work）是我們英語課堂中的一個(gè)重要學(xué)習(xí)方式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，寫一篇短文，介紹我們應(yīng)如何在課堂中開展小組活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀阆矚g或不喜歡這種學(xué)習(xí)方式的理由。 注意：1. 文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)。2. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。3. 詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,滿分作文 Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show

2、you how to do it. Firstly, we have different tasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, one of us comes to the front to make a report. At last, we must finish the task in time. In my opinion, I l

3、ike the way we study, because it is very interesting and useful. I can talk freely. I can improve my English. I like group work in my English class.,如何謀篇布局,開頭：開門見山 主體：枝繁葉茂 結(jié)尾：畫龍點(diǎn)睛,Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it. Firstly, we have different tasks i

4、n group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, one of us comes to the front to make a report. At last, we must finish the task in time. In my opinion, I like the way we study, because it is very interesting

5、 and useful. I can talk freely. I can improve my English. I like group work in my English class.,開頭：開門見山,1.確定文章所需用的時(shí)態(tài)。,主體：枝繁葉茂,小組活動(dòng)（group work）是我們英語課堂中的一個(gè)重要學(xué)習(xí)方式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，寫一篇短文，介紹我們應(yīng)如何在課堂中開展小組活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀阆矚g或不喜歡這種學(xué)習(xí)方式的理由。,Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it.

6、 Firstly, we have different tasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, one of us comes to the front to make a report. At last, we must finish the task in time. In my opinion, I like the way we st

7、udy, because it is very interesting and useful. I can talk freely. I can improve my English. I like group work in my English class.,2.仔細(xì)審題，不遺留要點(diǎn)。,主體：枝繁葉茂,小組活動(dòng)（group work）是我們英語課堂中的一個(gè)重要學(xué)習(xí)方式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，寫一篇短文，介紹我們應(yīng)如何在課堂中開展小組活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀阆矚g或不喜歡這種學(xué)習(xí)方式的理由。 注意：1. 文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)。2. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。3. 詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,Gr

8、oup work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it. Firstly, we have different tasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, one of us comes to the front to make a re

9、port. At last, we must finish the task in time. In my opinion, I dont like the way we study, because I think its boring. Whats more, I am afraid of making mistakes while talking. I dont like group work in my English class.,Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how t

10、o do it. Firstly, we have different tasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, one of us comes to the front to make a report. At last, we must finish the task in time. In my opinion, I like the w

11、ay we study, because it is very interesting and useful. I can talk freely. I can improve my English. I like group work in my English class.,主體：枝繁葉茂,3.主題句清楚、支撐句豐富，并能緊扣主題句。,Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it. Firstly, we have different tasks in group w

12、ork; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, one of us comes to the front to make a report. At last, we must finish the task in time. In my opinion, I like the way we study, because it is very interesting and usef

13、ul. I can talk freely. I can improve my English. I like group work in my English class.,主體：枝繁葉茂,4.注意句子與句子之間的連接，過渡要自然。,主體：枝繁葉茂,1.確定文章所需用的時(shí)態(tài)。 2.仔細(xì)審題，不遺留要點(diǎn)。 3.主題句清楚、支撐句豐富，并能緊扣主題句。 4.注意句子與句子之間的連接，過渡要自然。,結(jié)尾：畫龍點(diǎn)睛,1) 可用簡短的句子來結(jié)束文章，注意與文章主題的呼應(yīng)，避免照搬前面的原話。 2) 畫龍點(diǎn)睛，最好能對(duì)主體有所提升。如對(duì)未來的展望、號(hào)召正確的做法等。,Group work is ofte

14、n organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it. Firstly, we have different tasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, one of us comes to the front to make a report. At last, w

15、e must finish the task in time. In my opinion, I like the way we study, because it is very interesting and useful. I can talk freely. I can improve my English. I like group work in my English class.,Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it. Firstly, we hav

16、e different tasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, one of us comes to the front to make a report. At last, we must finish the task in time. In my opinion, I dont like the way we study, becaus

17、e I think its boring. Whats more, I am afraid of making mistakes while talking. I dont like group work in my English class.,寧波市2011年初中畢業(yè)生學(xué)業(yè)考試 . 書面表達(dá)（共15分） 為了使同學(xué)們更加健康快樂地成長，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議。假如你是劉波，用英語向校長寫一篇80個(gè)詞左右的建議信。注意：文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,Practice,2011年英語滿分作文。 Dear Headmaster, I

18、m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us

19、 more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time t

20、o practice. Whats more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter! Yours sincerely, Liu Bo,開頭：開門見山 主體：枝繁葉茂 結(jié)尾：畫龍點(diǎn)睛,2011年英語滿分作文。 Dear Headmaster, Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking

21、 about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school

22、should organize fewer exams as well. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. Whats more, I hope they will give us less homework

23、and finish classes on time. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter! Yours sincerely, Liu Bo,開頭：開門見山 主體：枝繁葉茂 結(jié)尾：畫龍點(diǎn)睛,2011年英語滿分作文。 Dear Headmaster, Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my su

24、ggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well. As for our teachers, I hop

25、e they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. Whats more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time. Hope my suggestions will be helpful

26、. Thanks for reading my letter! Yours sincerely, Liu Bo,開頭：開門見山 主體：枝繁葉茂 結(jié)尾：畫龍點(diǎn)睛,2011年英語滿分作文。 Dear Headmaster, Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more

27、often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. A

28、nd if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. Whats more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter! Yours sincerely, Liu Bo,開頭：開門見山

29、 主體：枝繁葉茂 結(jié)尾：畫龍點(diǎn)睛,寫作能力的提升,1. 多使用一些過渡性詞語，會(huì)使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)密，增強(qiáng)說服力，感染力以保持行文的流暢。,Tips,1）并列遞進(jìn)： and, whats more, besides, in addition 2）轉(zhuǎn)折：however, but, after all 3）總結(jié)：in a word, finally, at last, in short 4）強(qiáng)調(diào)：really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all 5）對(duì)比： on the one hand, on the other hand 6 ) 因果：because, be

30、cause of, since, so, thus, therefore，as a result. 7) 列舉：for example, for instance, such as. 8) 順序：first, second, secondly, thirdly, then, next, last, finally.,2. 平時(shí)記憶一些常用的名言警句或俗語。,1. Knowledge is power. 知識(shí)就是力量。 2.Think twice before you do. 三思而后行。 3.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 4.Where there is a wi

31、ll, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 5.Do as the Romans do. 入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。 6.The early bird catches the worm.早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。 7.Failure is the mother of success. 失敗是成功之母。 8.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作，不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。 9.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一個(gè)蘋果， 醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。 10.All roads lead to Rome. 條條大路通羅馬。,

32、Tips,3適當(dāng)使用一些從句，如賓語從句，定語從句，狀語從句等。使文章上一個(gè)臺(tái)階。,Tips,1. Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides.,2. I hope our school will open the library more often.,3. If they can talk less but more clearly in class,we will be more interested in studying .,4. 用多種表示法去表達(dá)同一種意思。,Reading is fun. Reading is enjoyable. Reading is a pleasure. Reading makes us happy. Reading offers us a lot of fun. We can get great fun by reading (f