1、How to write a good composition (III) -Using complex sentences,書面表達高分卷特點,外在美 結(jié)構(gòu)美 詞匯美 句式美 銜接美,巧用復(fù)雜句式，提高文章品味,火眼金睛,Which one is better? Why?,She always sings while doing her work. She always sings when she does her work.,After everything was finished, they began to chat with the elderly people. With ev

2、erything finished, they began to chat with the elderly people.,If you study hard, you will make remarkable progress. Study hard, and you will make remarkable progress.,（狀從省略）,(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)),(祈使句+ and),1.,2.,3.,(A),(B),(A),(A),(B),(B),To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things. What surprised h

3、im was that the little girl knew so many things.,I passed the English exam because of your help. I would not have passed the English exam but for your help.,(名詞性從句）,（虛擬語氣）,4.,5.,(A),(A),(B),(B),Brain Storm,What advanced structures can we use when writing compositions?,非謂語動詞 ：-ing, -ed, -to do 三種從句 ：

4、名詞性從句， 定語從句， 狀語從句 各種句式：倒裝句， 強調(diào)句，祈使句，感嘆句， 省略句，虛擬語氣， 被動語態(tài)等,Practice makes perfect,通過使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)與家人聯(lián)系是很方便的. 2.我們需要冷靜下來,反思我們的學(xué)習(xí)方法。 3.他很聰明，但他從不努力。 4.我們對自己的態(tài)度才是最關(guān)鍵的。 5.坐在一盤子粽子前，這個男孩不知道如何打開 （unwrap) 它們。 6.正如圖中所示，愛就像黑暗中(in the dark)的一盞燈。 7. 他建議孩子們要避免過度用眼，多做戶外活動。 8.當他爬到更高的地方時，他感到呼吸更困難了.,Translate the sentences,1. 通

5、過使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)與家人聯(lián)系是很方便的。,It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using the Internet.,2.我們需要冷靜下來,反思(reflect)我們的學(xué)習(xí)方法。,What we need to do is calm down and reflect our learning method.,3. 他很聰明，但他從來不努力。,Clever as he is, he never works hard.,Practice makes perfect,4.我們對自己的態(tài)度才是最關(guān)鍵的。,It is our attitud

6、e to ourselves that matters/ counts.,5.坐在一盤(plate)粽子(zongzi)前，這個男孩不 知道如何打開（unwrap)它們。,Sitting before a plate of zongzi, the boy didnt know how to unwrap them.,6.正如圖中所示，愛就像黑暗中的一盞燈。,As is shown in the picture, love is like a lamp in the dark.,7. 他建議學(xué)校里的孩子要避免過度用眼，多做戶外活動。,He suggests that school childre

7、n avoid overusing their eyes and do more outdoor activities.,8.當他爬到更高的地方時，他感到呼吸更困難了.,The higher he climbed, the more breathless he felt.,點石成金,目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬 對此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”. 請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。 內(nèi)容要點如下： 主要原因 考試偏多、偏難 不用功、懶惰 取悅父母、老師 個人看法 作弊不對，違反校規(guī) 要誠實，努力學(xué)

8、習(xí) (其他看法） 注意：1短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮； 2短文標題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 3詞數(shù)：100左右。 4參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v.）,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations,At present, there are a lot of students cheating in the examinations. The reasons can be listed as followed. First, there are too many ex

9、aminations. They are too difficult for us. Second, some students pay little attention to their study. They are lazy and dont work hard. Besides, they do it because they want to make their parents and teachers happy. As far as Im concerned, its wrong to cheat in the exams. It breaks the schools rules

10、. We should treat the exams in a right way. We should be honest and work hard. Only in this way can we get good marks.,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations,At present, there are a lot of students cheating in the examinations. The reasons can be listed as foll

11、ows. First, there are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us. Second, some students pay little attention to their study. They are lazy and dont work hard. Besides, they do it because they want to make their parents and teachers happy. As far as Im concerned, its wrong to cheat in the e

12、xams. It breaks the schools rules. We should treat the exams in a right way. We should be honest and work hard. Only in this way can we get good marks.,the Important Points,考試偏多、偏難 There are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us. 不用功、懶惰 Some students are lazy and dont work hard .,bett

13、er: Sometimes we have too many examinations, which are too difficult for us.,better: Not only are some students lazy but they also dont work hard at their lessons.,取悅父母、老師 They do it because they want to make their parents and teachers happy. 作弊不對、違反校規(guī) 要誠實，努力學(xué)習(xí),Better: In order to please their paren

14、ts and teachers, they sometimes cheat when taking examinations.,Cheating in examinations is wrong. It breaks the rules of schools.,Better : It is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.,We students should be honest and study hard.,Better: What we students should do is

15、to be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations.,我們要改進學(xué)習(xí)方法 We should improve our study methods. 我們要為考試作好充分準備，取得好的成績. We should get well prepared for examinations to get better results.,Better: Our study methods should be improved.,Better: Only when we ge

16、t well prepared for examinations can we get better results.,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.

17、On the other hand, not only are some students lazy but they also dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.,In my opinion, its wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of sc

18、hools. What we students should do is be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. Whats more, our study methods should be improved and only when we get well prepared for examinations can we get better results.,佳句共賞,Nowadays there is a phenomenon that some students often cheat in their examinations. 2. There are many factors contributing to / accounting for the phenomenon. 3. These reasons give a rise to the phenomenon. 4.