1、Non- finite Verbs in writing 非謂語動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用,Teaching goal: Master the use of non-finite verbs in writing. Teaching important point: Three forms of non-finite verbs. Teaching important difficult point: How to use non-finite verbs to make sentences.,Forms of non-finite verbs,V-ing V-ed to V,Eg. work-wor

2、king-worked-to work,Revision. Do 1-15 on Page 21-22. 總復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo),Revion.,1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I am given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies harder.,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,Given another

3、 chance, I will succeed.,To improve his English, he studies harder.,Join the sentences with non-finitive verbs.,On National Day, I had very bad luck. When I woke up , I found it was too late for school. And I found the alarm clock was turned off. I hurried downstairs and found my bike which was brok

4、en was stolen. I felt exhausted when I arrived at school. After the school guard told me, I knew it was holiday for National Day. Then when I came back home, I realized I had left my keys in the door and I found my house was broken into.,Read the passage aloud.,On National Day , I had very bad luck.

5、 _ (wake) up, I found it was too late for school and the alarm clock _ (turn) off. I hurried downstairs and found my _ (break) bike _(lose).So I had to run to school. _ (exhaust), I arrived at school. _ (tell) by the school guard, I knew it was holiday for National Day. Then when _ (come) back home,

6、 I realized I had made my keys _ (leave) in the door and I found my house _ (break into).,Waking,turned,broken,lost,Exhausted,Told,coming,left,broken into,Read again and compare.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,1.因?yàn)樵谶@國家沒有朋友，她覺得要想找到工作是不可能的。 用連詞because Because she had no friend in the country, she found it impossible t

7、o find a job. 用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu) Having no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.,2.這本用簡易英語寫成的書很容易讀懂 用定語從句 The book, is easy to understand. 用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu) The book , is easy to understand,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,which was written in simple English,written in simple English,3. 他們是來自于幾個(gè)國家的游客。 用定語從句 They are

8、visitors who come from several countries. 用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu) They are visitors coming from several countries.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,4.發(fā)現(xiàn)他好朋友沮喪，他竭盡所能讓他朋友開心。 用并列句 He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy. 用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu) Finding his best friend frustrated, he did everything he could to

9、make him happy.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子, It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy.,It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.,4. 用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)合并下列句子,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among stud

10、ents who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,Nowadays, some students ofte

11、n cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.,Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired

12、.,They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.,Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat

13、in exams.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in e

14、xams.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化后的文章,要求：1. 用2- 3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容 2. 2- 3句話要有連貫性,necessary,an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,the basis for our further study and work.,高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣 。,Having a try,翻譯: 高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣 。,高考臨近。 (National College Entrance Examination) 保持良好的心態(tài)很

15、重要。 (have a right attitude) 它有助于減輕焦慮（relax）和勇敢地克服困難。,Step2：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡單句,National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Having a try,Step1：拆分成幾個(gè)簡單句(中文),Step3：合并句子,With National College Entrance Examina

16、tion coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely., National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence1:,Having a try,Step3：合并句子,With College Entr

17、ance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence2:,Tip: Try to use differen

18、t ways to express.,Having a try,要求：1. 用2- 3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容 2. 2- 3句話要有連貫性（2011高考模擬）,Having a try,necessary,an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,the basis for our further study and work.,Having a try,It is necessary to have enough sleep . Having enough sleep is necessary.,It will be an eff

19、ective way to improve our learning in the class.,Keeping healthy is the basis for our further study and work.,To Keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.,Passage： Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to

20、 keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.,Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.,Having a try,With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will b

21、e an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work. Besides, doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health. Last but not least, it is very important to keep a balanced diet.,二. 使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔,三. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力,四. 嘗

22、試多 樣化表達(dá)方式,一.使用較高級(jí)詞匯使文章增加吸引力,強(qiáng)調(diào)句,With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),定語從句,名詞性從句(主賓表同從句),各種狀語從句,被動(dòng)語態(tài),書面表達(dá)評(píng)分檔次,情景作文共分6檔給分 第1檔 18-20 分 第2檔 15-17 分 第3檔 12-14 分 第4檔 6 -11 分 第5檔 1 - 5 分 第6檔 0 分,08北京高考： 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為 “Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過程。 注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。 提示詞：游樂園 amusement park

23、垃圾箱 bin,討論,爬山,撿拾別人的垃圾,投放垃圾,常用語： 1.Last Friday left me a deep impression, which I will never forget. Last week, I / my brother had an unforgettable experience. 2. In order to improve our abilities of facing danger, our school organized an activity. 按時(shí)間順序描寫 3. Early in the morning, we met at the schoo

24、l gate and went toby bus. One Sunday morning, my classmates and I went to the park for an picnic. 4 After doing, we went to do. 5.Having done,we. 6. And then, we.,結(jié)尾語： I was tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed. I have learned a great deal through the activity. It is an unforgettable day /

25、experience 評(píng)論語/感慨 I think the activity is both necessary and meaningful. It not only makes us aware of the importance of self- protection/helping others/protecting our environment but also develop our abilities of dealing with things /communicating with others. 2.The activity can develop /promote ou

26、r sense of social responsibility.,.心情語 We were in high spirit. With excitement filling our heart, we said thanks/goodbye to sb. With our hearts filled with excitement, we. To our joy/delight, we saw. 景色： 1. The view was beautiful. 2. The sun was shining. 3. Gently came the soft wind. 4. The weather

27、was clear , the wind calm and the sun shining,時(shí)間順序： 要點(diǎn)： 細(xì)節(jié)： 適當(dāng)添加：,時(shí)間順序： 要點(diǎn)： 細(xì)節(jié)： 適當(dāng)添加：,時(shí)間順序： 要點(diǎn)： 細(xì)節(jié)： 適當(dāng)添加：,時(shí)間順序： 要點(diǎn)： 細(xì)節(jié)： 適當(dāng)添加：,Early in the morning set off climb 爬山、天氣 心情，景色,When we got to the top of 到處垃圾 情緒-驚訝 心情,Finally或few hours later,或After. 投放垃圾 可回收, 不可回收 感受,Before the Spring outing 討論 不同的想法 心情,

28、好作文的要素：具體生動(dòng),We started our spring outing on a fine day., In high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. In high spirits, we started our spring outing early in the morning on a fine day. Flowers greeted us with their sweetest smiles and we were soaked up in the warm sunshine.,上周我們班組織了一次

29、春游。 我們先召開了班會(huì)討論春游去哪兒。 我們提出了很多不同的想法,例如去游樂園,去劃出和去爬山。,Last week our class organized a spring outing. We first held a class meeting, discussing where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices, such as going to an amusement park, going boating and going mountain climbing. Finally, we de

30、cided to go mountain climbing.,1.第二天，我們一大早兒就出發(fā)了。 2.當(dāng)我們爬山的時(shí)候,我們享受著溫暖的陽光和欣賞著美麗的景色。 3.沒過多久我們便來到了山頂。,The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. It didnt take us long to arrive at the top of the mountain.,4. 最后我們決定去爬山。,然而

31、，當(dāng)我們到達(dá)山頂?shù)哪且豢涛覀凅@訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)這里到處都是游客留下的垃圾。 我們毫不遲疑地開始撿垃圾。,However, we were shocked to see litter here and there left by tourists the moment we reached there. Without any hesitation, we set out to pick up the litter at once.,撿完所有垃圾后，我們把垃圾分別扔到附近的可回收和不可回收的垃圾桶里。 雖然很累，但我們很有成就感。 因?yàn)槲覀優(yōu)楸Ｗo(hù)環(huán)境盡了我們的綿薄之力。,Having collected

32、 all the rubbish, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. Tired as we were, we had a sense of achievement because we did our small part to protect the environment.,最基本的范文,Last Thursday, we_ a class meeting _where to go for our spring outing. We _up with s

33、everal choices, such as_ boating, _a mountain, and _to an amusement park. Finally we decided_ mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning, while _the mountain, we _ the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we _the top, we _to see litter here and there, such as bottl

34、es and bananas peels. Then we started _the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby _bin and_ bin respectively. We _tired but happy.,had,to discuss,came,going,climbing,going,to go,climbing,enjoyed,reached,were shocked,to pick up,recycling,non-recycling,were,37,Last week, our class orga

35、nized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating. With high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. Flowe

36、rs presented us with their sweetest smiles and were soaked up in the warm sunshine. However, we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain. Waste bottles and used packages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty of the nature. Feeling a great pity for the tourists, we picked

37、 up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups: the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones. After that, we put the rubbish,38,into the bin differently. We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance. Though cleaning up the rubbish was a tough task, our hea

38、rts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.,19,Gently comes the Spring. As the wind softly blows, it brings back the vitality to the great outdoor. Students in our class were excited, too, and eager to have a spring outing in the weekend last week. A heated discussion was hel

39、d: Some students suggested we go boating, some insisted that going hiking was the best idea, while some thought the amusement park was of more fun. Finally, we decided to go hiking in the mountains on a sunny day. The flowers were blooming happily and sent their welcome to us. With excitement in our

40、 heart, we climbed the mountain easily and reached the peak soon.,優(yōu)秀作文欣賞,To our surprise, what we found on the peak was not only beautiful scenery, but also rubbish here and there. Feeling so bad for the environment spot, we changed our plan and began picking up the rubbish. Afterwards, we brought t

41、he rubbish down the mountain and sorted them into “can be recycled” and “cant be recycled”. We finally dropped them into different bins set at the foot of the mountain. Fun as we had during the trip, we still felt so sorry for the ruined nature. I think it is everyones duty to take care of the envir

42、onment so that we can contribute to a better living and relaxing space for others.,得分：18分 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，連貫，恰當(dāng)使用了連接成分，所用句式和詞匯較豐富；體現(xiàn)了較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。,假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為?？⒄Z園地寫一篇題為“Our Social Practice Activity”的英語稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備參觀首都博物館到參觀結(jié)束的完整過程。注意：次數(shù)不少于60,Our class visited the Capital Museum last week, and it is one of the most impressive social practice activ