1、【例五】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）的學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的信息，為?？⒄Z園地寫一篇英文稿件，敘述上周六你參加學(xué)校組織的“career day”的活動過程及感受。注意：1文章的開頭已為你寫好。2詞數(shù)不少于60。our school holds careerday once a year in march, offering us a chance to get familiar with different businesses and career optionslast saturday,【寫作點(diǎn)撥】這四幅圖都是場景，我們要寫出一篇情感充沛、細(xì)節(jié)豐富的文章，務(wù)必要結(jié)文

2、章“職業(yè)發(fā)展教育”的主題，重點(diǎn)談我們在每一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)的收獲。只有這樣，才能將簡略的場景中人物的心情描寫得無比動人。_【范文賞析】our school holds career day once a year in march, offering us a chance to get familiar with different business and career options.last saturday, we arrived at the library punctually at 9am where the whole-day activities were to be held. g

3、athering at the gate , some of the students watched the arrangement on the poster hanging on the wall, trying to figure out the schedule of the day, the content seemed so attracting that we could hardly wait to step into the conference hall.coming first was a lecture given by a well-known professor

4、with the theme titled “career introduction”. impressed by not only the experienced analysis on the information of occupations of various kinds, but also, we got captured by the professors humorous tone. thus, none of us were absent-minded and took down useful tips on the note book.next came the cons

5、ulting meeting which offered us an awesome opportunity to work out our questions on job-choosing. seeking advice from the skillful consultant, we had a deeper knowledge of the vocations that we took great interests in.last but not the least, we were given a chance to experience the work under the co

6、nsultants guidance, which was really meaningful for it helped us have a better picture of our future as well as having a clearer goal.the time elapsed while we were enjoying the career day. needless to say, the life road ahead will be long, our climb will be step, but with the great passion and stro

7、ng determination, i felt sure that we will earn the valuable career through our industrious effort.【例六】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班的班長李華，去年冬天你們班開展了“為西藏希望小學(xué)獻(xiàn)愛心”的活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文短文向某中學(xué)生英語報(bào)投稿，介紹你們本次獻(xiàn)愛心活動的全過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。last winter, we carried out an activity themed “helping the children in the hope primaryscho

8、olintibet”._【范文賞析】last week, we carried out an activity themed “helping the children in the hope primary school in tibet”. in order to light the love in our heart, we held a class-meeting to share our hope. during the meeting, we watched a tv program posted by cctv news about the life in tibets hope

9、 primary school. seeing the hard life of those poor children, we all felt its our duty to change their lives. to make more people participate in this program, we wrote urging letters to call for helps. we put up the poster in the school exhibit board and handed out messages, telling everyone passing

10、 by about the unimaginable situation.after weeks of broad out works, we held a donating party in our school. its really beyond our imagination that nearly everyone in our school gave out part of their efforts. not only did we donate our pocket money, but also a lot of useful goods were donated, such

11、 as school bags and quilts.as soon as the donating party ended, we carried the goods and money, which embodied our sincerely love and hope for the poor children to the post office. when i was filling the post list, i felt so proud of my classmates and me. though the little donations from us wouldnt completely change the life of the