1、應(yīng)用文寫作,-書信和電子郵件,技法指導(dǎo) 書信、電子郵件的寫作是高考中出現(xiàn)頻率最高的一種題型。從內(nèi)容上看，近幾年高考書信寫作主要包括致歉信、致謝信、筆友信、慰問信、投訴信、邀請信、介紹信、求職信、讀者請求的解答信及其答復(fù)讀者的信等。,，,a letter of,suggestion,application,introduction,sai,invitation,a letter of application? suggestion? introduction?,石景山期末： 請你代表你班同學(xué)給校長寫一封信，反映一下你校食堂的幾點(diǎn)問題，并針對所提問題提出2條合理建議。,suggestion,海淀期

2、末： 你校正在招募志愿者，為中外學(xué)生交流活動做準(zhǔn)備。請用英語寫一封信，向?qū)W校外事辦公室提出申請。,application,a letter of application? suggestion? introduction?,西城期末： 你的英國朋友Tom要來你校任教， 打算在學(xué)校附近租房子。發(fā)來郵件向你咨詢合適的房源。 請你根據(jù)回復(fù)信件，向他介紹找到的房子。,introduction,a letter of application? suggestion? introduction?,朝陽一模 你的美國朋友Chris目前在北京學(xué)習(xí)漢語，他對中國傳統(tǒng)文化非常感興趣。本周五下午你校將要舉辦一個文化

3、講座，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封電子郵件，邀請他來參加。,invitation,a letter of application? suggestion? introduction?,Dear Tom,(address) I am writing to tell you that Ive found a house which may meet your needs. The house which is on the second floor covers an area of 70 square meters. It faces south so that you can enjoy eno

4、ugh sunshine.If you are interested in it, please call 15382. If you need any more help, just let me know. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua(signature),Structure of a letter,主體 (body),目的 (purpose),交際性語句 (communicative sentence),結(jié)尾語(ending),內(nèi)容,條理,交際,內(nèi)容,條理,交際,語言,語言,應(yīng)用文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),高考應(yīng)用文評分原則,內(nèi)容

5、是否_ 條理是否_ 交際是否_ 語言是否_,完整,清楚,得體,準(zhǔn)確,假定你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的李華， 假期里你參加了一次“倫敦游學(xué)”活動。請根據(jù)下列提示給你的同學(xué)王明寫封信，向他介紹整個游學(xué)過程。,注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50； 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,Tell the advantages &disadvantages give them marks!,letter structure& evaluation standards!,Passage A: Dear Wang Min, During the vacation, I took

6、 part in an interesting activity. My school organized us to went to London. In July20th morning we arrived at airport and the home-stay family welcome us heartedly. The second day, we were visited Oxford University and listened to the professor introduced their school. The third day, we visited Big

7、Ben, which is the most famous building in London. All of took photo to record the unforgettable moments. The last day, we held a party to say goodbye with England students. This activity is very meaningful.,缺少交際性語句、未寫結(jié)尾語,二檔,Passage B： I had an unforgettable experience in winter vacation and I will s

8、hare this activity with you. I went to London to study this vacation. On July 20th, As soon as I arrived at the airport, my home-stay family welcome me warmly The second day, we visited Oxford University which is a famous school in the world. The professor was enthusiastic and I hoped that I could s

9、tudy there. The third day, we went to the Big Ben. . The day before I left, students in London held a party with us to say goodbye. Everyone enjoyed the party. It was a meaningful experience for me. Do you think it was interesting? Looking forward to your letter.,交際性語句,結(jié)尾語,一檔,你是紅星中學(xué)的李華， 假期里你參加了一次“倫敦

10、游學(xué)”活動。請給你的同學(xué)王明寫封信，向他介紹整個游學(xué)過程。,a letter-introducing an activity,I think it is a meaningful experience. Do you think it is interesting? What do you think of my experience? Do you have similar experience? I am eager to hear that!,communicative sentences,1. I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.

11、 Thank you! 2. I would appreciate it if you can give me the chance. 3. I think its going to be great! Are you satisfied with it? 4. If you can kindly give me the opportunity, I will do my work well.,application? suggestion? introduction?,suggestion,application,introduction,application,cm,communicati

12、ve sentences,On July 20th morning, we arrived at the airport. The home-stay family gave me a heated welcome. 3. A professor took us around the university. 4. I visited the Oxford University and listened to the introduce of the school.,On the morning of July20,warm welcome,showed us around,introducti

13、on,gave us a,correct mistakes,Sentence appreciation,* The following day, we visited the well-known Oxford University. A professor introduced this college to us. I was attracted and really benefited a lot from it! * On the third day, I paid a visit to Big Ben. I was amazed at it and couldnt help taki

14、ng photos! * On the last day, we held a farewell party with England students. All of us were unwilling to say goodbye.,細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充,Im writing to share an experience with you, which is about a study tour to London. This is my unforgettable experience. Do you think it is interesting?,點(diǎn)明目的,得體的交際,準(zhǔn)確的語言,On the

15、morning of July 20th I arrived at the airport. The home-stay family picked me up and gave me a warm welcome. The third day was the most exciting day because we went to Big Ben for sightseeing.,技法指導(dǎo) 書信、電子郵件的寫作: 不論哪種書信、電子郵件，一般都有固定的寫作模式，只要記住其特定的寫作模板，并能在具體的寫作中加以融會貫通，一定能讓你的作文水平快速提高，從而在考場上寫出檔次較高的文章。下面介紹一下

16、幾種?？紩诺哪０?，供大家寫作時借鑒。,，,1投訴信 Dear _， My name is/I am _. I am writing to you for _. Firstly, _. Secondly, _. Thirdly, _. Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. To be honest/Honestly speaking, _. Therefore, I do require (hope) _. Thank you for your consideratio

17、n. Sincerely yours, Li Ming,2建議信 Dear _， I am _. Your collection of suggestion on _ is _. As is known, _. My suggestions are _： First, _. (People can _.) Second, (to make economic profits, ) _. Third, _. (As many of them _.),I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discus

18、s this matter with you to further details (Or：Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated) Good luck with your _(祝愿) Yours sincerely, Li Ming,3求職信 Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in _(報紙名稱) of _(廣告發(fā)布時間) I am _ from _.

19、As a/an _， I have been _.Besides, I won _ in _. If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at _.,4邀請信 Dear _， How is everything with you? I am writing to tell you that there will be a _(內(nèi)容) at/in _(地點(diǎn)) on _(時間)We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at

20、_(具體時間). This will be followed by a _(進(jìn)一步的安排)At around _(時間)，_(另一個安排),Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? I really hope you can make it. My phone number is _.Looking forward to _. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,5感謝信 Dear _， I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _(感謝的原因

21、) If it had not been for your assistance in _(對方給你的具體幫助)，I fear that I would have been _(沒有對方幫助的后果) Everyone agrees that it was you who _(給出細(xì)節(jié))Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,6道歉信 Dear _， I am truly sorry that _(道歉的原因) The re

22、ason is that _(介紹原因). Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,邀請信： 1開頭：說明計劃并邀請某人參加 我們打算本周六去爬香山并邀請你參加。 We are going to climb Xiangshan this Saturday, and we sincerely invite you to join us. 我們將在學(xué)校禮堂舉行成

23、人儀式并邀請你參加。 We will hold the coming-of-age ceremony in our lecture hall at 3:30 pm on March 30th and we sincerely invite you to come. 歡迎你來參加 You are (more than)welcome to come to join us. 2說明活動時間 我們早8點(diǎn)在門口集合，下午5點(diǎn)回來。 We will gather at the gate at 8 am and will come back at 5 pm. 活動8點(diǎn)開始下午3點(diǎn)結(jié)束，將持續(xù)7個小時。,O

24、ur activity begins at 8 am and ends at 3 pm and it will last 7 hours. 3結(jié)尾: 如果你能參加，我們會很高興 . Well be more than happy if you can come. 我保證你會玩得高興。 Im sure you will have a lot of fun./ You are sure to have a lot of fun. 如果你能來我們將不勝感激。 Id appreciate it if you can come and give us a speech. 建議信： 1開頭：得知，現(xiàn)在我來

25、給你提些實(shí)際建議 Learning , Im very happy. Now Id like to give / offer you some practical advice. 2正文：你可以在校園張貼海報 You can/may/had better put up a poster in the school.,課間聽聽音樂不錯。 Its a good idea to listen to some music between classes. Listening to some music between classes is a good idea. 是時候調(diào)整你的學(xué)習(xí)方法了 Its t

26、ime to adjust your learning methods. 定期鍛煉很有用 Taking exercise regularly is very useful/helpful. Why not take exercise regularly ? I suggest taking exercise regularly. What about taking exercise regularly ? 3. 結(jié)尾：希望我的建議對你有幫助。 I hope my advice will help you. I hope my advice will be of some help/will b

27、e helpful to you. 如果你需要更多信息，別猶豫告訴我,If you need more/further information, dont hesitate to tell me/contact me. 我會盡最大努力幫助你 I will try best to help you/ give you a hand. Im more than willing to help you. 申請信： 1表達(dá)意愿：我寫信是申請英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)編輯。 Im writing to apply to be a web editor. 我寫信是申請成為寄宿家庭 Im writing to apply to be a host family. 我想申請做導(dǎo)游志愿者 I want to apply to be a volunteer guide. 我的理由如下。 My reasons