1、2020/9/21,2015屆高三英語二模,應(yīng)用文講評,2020/9/21,你剛剛從美國游學(xué)歸來，請你給美國朋友Chris寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括： 1. 告知旅途順利，你安全到家； 2. 感謝他們一家對你寄宿期間的悉心照顧; 3. 邀請他今年暑假來北京游覽，你提供食宿。,第一節(jié) （15分）,一、評分原則 1本題總分15分，按4個檔次給分。 2評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言質(zhì)量初步確定其檔次，然后以檔次的要求來衡量，確定或降低檔次，最后給分。 3評分時應(yīng)考慮：內(nèi)容是否完整，條理是否清楚，交際是否得體，語言是否準(zhǔn)確。 4拼寫、標(biāo)點符號或書寫影響內(nèi)容表達(dá)時，應(yīng)視其影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均

2、可以接受。 5詞數(shù)少于50，從總分中減去1分。,二、內(nèi)容要點 1. 告知旅途順利，你安全到家； 2. 感謝他們一家對你寄宿期間的悉心照顧; 3. 邀請他今年暑假來北京游覽，你提供食宿。,三、語言 (今天講評的重點) 通過審題確定語言風(fēng)格： 你剛剛從美國游學(xué)歸來，請你給美國朋友Chris 寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括： 寫信的對象-你的朋友Chris 語言風(fēng)格-informal (非正式信件) -感謝信,2020/9/21,好的書信，語言有什么特點呢？,官方范文（14分）,I had a pleasant journey back from America and I just arrived home

3、safe. I want to thank you and your family for taking such good care of me during my time in America. I would like to return the favour and invite you to come sightseeing in Beijing this summer. You would also be welcome to stay at my home during the visit. I hope to hear from you soon.,2020/9/21,一起欣

4、賞我們的一類文吧 學(xué)習(xí)好的語言,2020/9/21,1. 簡潔明了；不羅嗦 2. 交際得體；表達(dá)委婉,14.5 分,2020/9/21,101詞,2020/9/21,13.5 分,3. 表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、靈活轉(zhuǎn)換 怎么表達(dá)“提供食宿”呢？,2020/9/21,語言積累素材,1. 回家的旅途非常順利，我已安全到家。 -I have already got back home safe and sound. Everything was fine during the flight. -My trip back home was all fine and Im now at home. -The jour

5、ney back home was alright and I have returned home safely.,2020/9/21,2020/9/21,-Im writing to inform you that I have arrived home safely after a pleasant journey 語言挺好的，但是作為這篇作文的開頭是否很適合呢？ 改成這樣的開頭是否更合適? I have arrived home safely after a pleasant journey. Im writing this letter to say thank you for yo

6、ur tender care.,2020/9/21,2. 感謝你們一家對我寄宿期間的悉心照顧; - I want to thank you and your family again for letting me stay and taking care of me. -Looking back on the past few weeks we spent together, I really want to convey my deep gratitude for your tender care through this letter to you and your family.,202

7、0/9/21,3. 今年暑假來北京游覽吧，我來提供食宿。 -Id like to invite you to come to Beijing this summer vacation. Id like to provide you meals and place to rest. 怎樣表達(dá)更通俗呢？ -If you are free this summer vacation, Id like to invite you to come to Beijing. You can stay with my family. -Id like to invite you to come to Beiji

8、ng this summer vacation, and this time we will be your host family. -I know that you are interested in Chinese cultures, so would you like to visit Beijng this summer vacation? You can stay at my place, and my mum cooks the best dishes. I bet youll love it.,2020/9/21,閱卷中發(fā)現(xiàn)的問題和正確的表達(dá)： 1.功能句： I have to

9、 thank you. I invite you guys staying in my home. I cant refuse to appreciate you. To pay you back, I invite you. 2.旅途愉快，安全到家 I had a peaceful/successful trip and arrived at home safely. 正：I had a pleasant trip and arrived home safe and sound. 3. 感激 I appreciate you. (appreciate表示欣賞+sb；表示感激+sth.) 正確

10、：I will appreciate it if you I appreciate your help. Im grateful for the tender care and your generous hospitality. extend/convey/express my profound/hearty/sincere gratitude/thanks,2020/9/21,4.邀請你到中國旅行 I invite you to go/do sightseeing in China. I sincerely invite you to pay a visit/take a trip to China. Visit v./n. 盡量不用visitin