1、.原 ：盡量 ，用以前背 的 ，沒有必要的生 ，就 掉黃金句型：the fact that the american girl wears traditional chinese costume indicates that national culture can be accepted internationally.it is well- known that/there. is no denying that .（一）第一段：引言/起始 / 淘金段， 畫描述，3 句1、 體描述：人物/ 物 /事物 作 境，1 句as is vividly illustrated in the pict

2、ure/ statistics,the set of pictures vividly depicts that多用 行 2、挖掘 、串 成句：1 2 句 ( 與多越好)獨立主格：tools left behind and legs bound together, they are supporting each other with their firm hands. 充 明：the flower soon fades, with the petals cast about on the grounds.3、文字 明 /象征寓意： 1 句the caption indicates thati

3、t is obvious thatundoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.（二）第二段：主體段，意 ，5 句1、主 句：象征寓意，1 句simple as it is, the drawing does reflect a thought-provoking phenomenon that( 同位 從句 )in china.the impressive drawing has subtly revea

4、led theduality ofthe relationship between man andinternet.it is apparent that the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the importance ofcooperation inour daily life.2、 ： 3-4 句1）因果 withthe rapidsocial and economicdevelopment,the numberof the young who sharply decreases/increases.with the rapid developm

5、ent of market economy system,if we let this situation go as it is, we dontknow where the aged will be in the future.2） 例 as a college student, i get on line every day to discuss news with other people on bbs, to study english by registering for web courses, to chat freely through msn messenger with

6、my friends.作 一名大學生，我每天上網(wǎng)與他人在 bbs 上 新 ，通 注冊網(wǎng) 程來學 英 ，借助 msn 和我的朋友 免 聊天。as an illustration of the power of love, we should remember how the chinese people respond to the call to help the victims of the deadly earthquake in sichuan province. although their incomes are still low by international standard

7、s, people all over the country do not hesitate to contribute to their needy fellow partners. 一個例子 明 心的力量，我 得中國人民如何響 號召去支援四川地震中的受 者。盡管他 的收入按照國 準衡量 是 于低水平，但是全國人民毫不猶豫捐款 那些.受難的同胞們。take basketball hero yao mingfor an example, he can slam the dunk smartlybecause all histeammates contributemore orless to h

8、is outstanding performance. likewise,the successfullaunching of chang e no.1 lunar probe should be attributed to the chinese scientists t efforts joiinstead of individual accomplishment.take track hero liu xiang for an example, he can come back to the field and run faster because his spirit contribu

9、tes to his outstanding performance. likewise, the successful host of beijing 2008 olympic games should be attributed to the chinese joint efforts instead of individual accomplishment.以籃球英雄姚明為例，他能夠瀟灑地扣籃，是因為他的隊友或多或少成就了他杰出的表現(xiàn)。同樣，嫦娥一號探月衛(wèi)星的成功發(fā)射要歸功于中國科學家們的集體努力，而不是個人成就。take us for example; the entrance exa

10、m for graduate students even seems to be a horrible monster before us. some people give up, some persist. so, with confidence and the right assessment of the difficulties, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems.以我們自己為例，研究生入學考試似乎是我們面前的一個可怕的怪物。有些人放棄了， 而有些人則堅持了下來。因此，擁有信心和對困

11、難的正確估計，并且竭盡全力，我們就將解決所有的問題。3）聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實the american girl represents a great many foreigners（定語從句）.the traditional chinese costume symbolizes chinese culture （定語從句）.the fact that the american girl wears traditional chinese costume indicates that national culturecan be accepted internationally.undoubtedly,th

12、e spider web serves as a symbol of internet, both connecting people and isolatingthem from each other.the delicate floweris naturally associated withyoung people,to be specific,the only childrenin our current society;thegreenhouse represents parentsdoting care and abundant materialsupplies that can

13、protect the children from the storms, or the harsh reality.4）正反論證on the contrary, while, however/on the one hand, on the other hand3、小結(jié)： 1 句，概括論證，總結(jié)本段（三）第三段：結(jié)論段，建議措施，4 句1、結(jié)論句： 1 句2、針對雙方提建議：2 句3、包裝結(jié)尾、展望未來：1 句accordingly,it isessential for us to gainpositiveimplicationsfromthese impressivecartoons. on

14、 the one hand,we can frequentlyuse themtoenlightentheyouth to be moreindependent in life.on the other hand,parents/authorities should be sensible enough togivetheir children more freedomto dealwith troubles and problems. only byundergoingmorechallenges and toils in troublecan young people cultivate

15、strong personality and ability, andonly in this way can they become winners in this competitive world.it is my view that名言：just as an old saying goes,“ all work and no play make jack a dull boy.”just as an old saying goes, “ god only helps those who help themselves. ”（天助自助者/自助者.天助之?。﹔ome was not bui

16、lt in a day. 冰凍三尺非一日之寒。where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。關(guān)聯(lián)詞：順序： 1. to beginning with, moreover, last but not least2. firstly, in addition轉(zhuǎn)折： on the contrary, while, howeveron the one hand, on the other hand原因 :for one thing, for another書信常用語i would be much grateful if you couldhelp me

17、seek out a girl who has just started schoolingi would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as totake my suggestionsinto consideration.書信格式：（一）稱呼1、題目無人名：dear sir or madam,2、題目有人名：dear人名 ,（二）正文：3 段、 7 句、 100 120 詞、 35 關(guān)聯(lián)詞、 3 5 從句1、第一段： 1 2 句1）自我介紹 (可不寫 )（ 1） i am a student in thi

18、s university who regularly comes to the library to spendmy spare time.2）寫作目的：（ 2 句，總分）（ 1）道歉： i m writing to apologize forhaving forgotten to return the cd toyou when i left canada.（ 2） i am writing to inform you that i wish to requestif you could help mefind a potential beneficiary of the project hope.3）表示感謝（可不寫）i would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as totake my suggestionsinto consideration.2、第二段： 3-6 句（總分 -看水平了，主動被動結(jié)合，關(guān)聯(lián)詞）1）改寫提綱一：1 句2）改寫提綱二：1 句3）改寫提綱三：1 句3、第三段1）表示感謝（私人建議信除外）i really w