1、2013高考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1 本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。 2 評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次 的 要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 3 詞數(shù)少于 80和多于 120的，從總分中減去2分。 4 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn) 確性、上下文的連貫性。 5 拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程 度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞匯用法均可接受。 6 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。 各檔次的給分范圍和要求 . 第五檔(很好)；(21-25分)： 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 覆蓋所有內(nèi)

2、容要點(diǎn) 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯， 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力， 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 ， 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的 . 第四檔(好)：(16-20分) 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn)，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的 . 第三檔(適當(dāng))：(11-15分) 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容 應(yīng)用

3、的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫 整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的 . 第二檔(較差)：(6-10分) 未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解 較少使用語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性 信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者 . 第一檔(差)：(1-5分) 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限 較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響

4、對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解 缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫 信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。 . 不得分：（0分） 未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無法評(píng)判；寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。三點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵定檔因素(不跑題是前提) 詞匯多樣性 語法復(fù)雜性 文章連貫性 書面表達(dá)的五項(xiàng)秘訣： 審題，遣詞，造句，潤(rùn)色，謀篇 既然知道了這些關(guān)鍵因素和高分秘訣，我們要如何從這些方面入手呢? 審題的概念 拿到試卷后，首先瀏覽書面表達(dá)的題目，研究題目要求。正確的審題內(nèi)容包括A、審標(biāo)題B、審體裁C、審要點(diǎn)。審標(biāo)題：看文章是否要求有題目(title)或者主題(topic)能夠確保你不跑題;審體裁：確能夠定文章的文體，為你寫

5、作提供方向。審要點(diǎn)：如果英語作文中，有要求要點(diǎn)的，一般打分時(shí)是踩點(diǎn)給分的，準(zhǔn)確把握住要點(diǎn)，是高分的一個(gè)訣竅。 如何審要點(diǎn)?要做到以下兩個(gè)方面： 總結(jié)歸納要點(diǎn)：不是所有內(nèi)容都要寫出來，而是抓住其中的關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)、銜接要點(diǎn)! 理順要點(diǎn)：將提煉的要點(diǎn)按邏輯關(guān)系(如時(shí)間關(guān)系、因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系等)重新安排，這樣整篇文章看起來就整體有序，流暢自然，更加容易打動(dòng)評(píng)分老師，從而作文分?jǐn)?shù)提升一檔。 構(gòu)思文章提綱：根據(jù)題目的要點(diǎn)，安排好段落和主次關(guān)系。要形成良好的分段意識(shí)，寫作分段是必須要進(jìn)行的(2至4段為佳)，這樣顯得文章不會(huì)擁擠并且層次分明。在行文意識(shí)上，要注意突出要點(diǎn)。 遣詞的注意點(diǎn) 不出現(xiàn)語言錯(cuò)誤 詞語和短

6、語搭配 適度使用加分詞匯 避免詞語重復(fù) 注意詞語和短語搭配使用 可以適度的使用加分詞句：高級(jí)詞、同義詞、短語等替代 造句的原則 表達(dá)意思要清楚無誤。 多種表達(dá)方式表達(dá)相同含義 避免句式單調(diào)(簡(jiǎn)單句，并列句，復(fù)合句等適度調(diào)整) 表達(dá)意思清楚無誤：具體化，細(xì)節(jié)化 可以用形象思維來表達(dá)(什么叫形象思維?比如說你朗讀的“很好聽”，用“抑揚(yáng)頓挫”來表達(dá)就是形象思維) 謀篇的攻略 注意分段、詳略搭配、注意連貫 行文時(shí)多用關(guān)聯(lián)詞、引導(dǎo)詞，把文章句子通過各種關(guān)系整合起來，達(dá)到起承轉(zhuǎn)合，運(yùn)用自如的目的，從而獲取高分。 具體的連接關(guān)系有：并列關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系、因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系、讓步關(guān)系、列舉關(guān)系、條件關(guān)系、舉例關(guān)

7、系、時(shí)間關(guān)系等。 2015年高考英語全國(guó)I卷寫作閱卷評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及各檔次作文示例領(lǐng)會(huì)高考閱卷要求，有效指導(dǎo)學(xué)生高考寫作備考 【作文題】假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國(guó)文化”欄目擬刊登美國(guó)節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請(qǐng)給美國(guó)朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點(diǎn)如下： 1.欄目介紹; 2. 稿件內(nèi)容; 3. 稿件長(zhǎng)度：約 400 詞; 4. 交稿日期：6 月 28 日前。 注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English

8、 newspaper._2015年普通高考評(píng)卷英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分總則： 1、本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。 2、評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定是否達(dá)到及格線（15分），然后確定其所屬的具體檔次，以該檔次的要求來衡量，最后給分。其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 3、詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。 4、評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。 5、若缺少要點(diǎn)，分?jǐn)?shù)降一檔處理。 6、拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 7

9、、書寫較差以至于影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。評(píng)分細(xì)則： 優(yōu)秀（22-25）：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富，行文流暢，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力，允許有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。 良好（18-21）：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容較充實(shí)，行文較流暢，語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，但基本不影響意思表達(dá)。 一般（15-17）：緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤已影響了部分意思的表達(dá)，但多數(shù)句子基本正確；基本達(dá)到預(yù)期寫作目的。 較差（11-14）：要點(diǎn)不全，內(nèi)容不完整，行文不夠連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤較多，半數(shù)句子基本正確。 差（6-10）：內(nèi)容混亂，或主要內(nèi)容偏離主題，尚能夠?qū)懗錾贁?shù)與內(nèi)

10、容相關(guān)的可讀句。 極差（0-5）：只能寫出與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的詞語，沒有有效信息；抄寫其他文章，或只是寫出與作文無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。高考命題組提供的參考范文：Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cul

11、tures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long

12、 as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. （95words）Yours,Li Hua 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】該參考范文語言簡(jiǎn)練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，但從高考考場(chǎng)作文考慮應(yīng)提示學(xué)生詞數(shù)再增加一些，句式可再豐富一些，這樣才更有利于得高分。各檔次打分參考范文示例：1.閱卷組確定的24分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an ar

13、ticle for our schools English newspaper. Recently a refreshing program has been established in our schools English newspaper which is named “The Foreign Culture”. Im inclined to invite you to write an article. The importance concerning this issue is listed as follows. This program is aiming to intro

14、duce the festivals and habits in America, especially including the life of students in high school. Consequently, I intend to inquest you to write some matters. Such as what the individuals tend to do when significant events are forthcoming. Additionally, its universally acknowledged that American s

15、tudents have extremely active thoughts. Considering that how they study in school is what we indeed intend to attain. Whats more, it must be beared in mind that the articles are supposed to be around 400 words. Meanwhile, I anticipate you can finish it before 28th, June. Im looking forward to your c

16、onclusive reply.(140 words)2. 閱卷組確定的22分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. It will be put on the part of Foreign Culture, which aims to introduce many other countries culture. This article needs to be concerned with America festival custom and mi

17、ddle school students life. As you are American student, its certain that you can teach us a large amount of knowledge about it. As is known to all, only if we learn American Culture well, can we truly understand the country. Therefore, Id appreciate it if you write article. There are some requiremen

18、ts below. The essay is around 400 words. Besides, it has to be sent before June, the 28th. If you have other questions, please write to me as soon as possible.(112 words)3. 閱卷組確定的18分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. We have an area named “Forei

19、gn Culture”. Its used to introduce Americas customs and students daily life. Could you write an essay for me.Initially please write some traditional festivals to enlarge our horizons. Some interesting things in your school life is also fine. Moreover, please write more than 400 words. So we can edid

20、ate is better. Eventually, the deadline is 6,28 because our work must be finished in these days. Dont be late please？ Here are my words. Thanks for attention. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(92 words)4. 閱卷組確定的15分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for o

21、ur schools English newspaper. The English newspaper have a “foreign culture” program. If your article is written well, it will be select in newspaper. The article is about American festivals and customs, besides inclouded media school students life. There is no doubt that you can make it. Because yo

22、u is familiar with them. In opinion, you can also increase students how to study. Most importantly, your article can help us broaden horizon and let us know more American culture. You need to write about 400 words. Last but not least, you must hand in it before June, 28th. Im looking forward to your

23、 early reply.(101 words)5. 閱卷組確定的12分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The English newspaper has a show which is made describes for American Traditional Day Culture and middle school students school life. I think you had much knowledge about the

24、m. Therefore, I want to that you could write a paragraph for them. You can write about 400 words. In addition, the paragraph should finished and put on before June, 28th. I believe you are able to do well. Im looking forward to your information. Thanks about your favour.(77 words)6. 閱卷組確定的9分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The newspapers “Foreign Cult