1、稿件 for Miss Gu寫作一招鮮：句句貫通，寫作成功如何增強句子之間的連貫性在英語寫作中連貫性是好文章的基本要素之一，而句子的連貫性是文章連貫 性的基礎。下面我們結合 2009 年高考書面表達部分參考范文對高中階段增加句子 之間連貫性的常用手段做一下簡要總結，希望能對大家的寫作起到“推波助瀾”的 作用。一、使用合理的連接詞增加句子之間的連貫性：連接詞是增加句子之間連貫 性的重要手段，它主要包括并列連詞和從屬連詞的合理使用。1、并列連詞：用來連接地位基本并列的分句與分句和句子與句子，常用的并 歹U連詞有： and, or, but, yet, for, so, while, nor, no

2、t onlybut also,not but。如：?She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some othertime for the meeting ? （全國卷 I ） At first glance, I think it? s a bit funny, for we Chinese take forgranted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles?（ J 匕京） They have probably heard some horrible s

3、tories about other kids and thought we might do the same ? Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong ? （安徽） If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want tosmile at all whenever and wherever possible? s5u （福建）2、從屬連詞：主要用來引導各種狀語從句，在高考書面表達參考范文中得到了廣泛的應用。 口

4、： Whe n it was time for the volun teers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness? （浙江） It' s even better if you could share more of the housework, such ascleaning, washing and cooking ? （陜西）（3）As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south ofTian* anmen Square,

5、it' s very convenient to get there by bus? （全國卷 II ） He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating alot. （北京）門 Be open-minded to different opinions even though you don* t likethem.（江蘇）三、貼切使用過渡性詞匯：貼切使用過渡性詞匯可大幅增強句子之間的連貫 性段，它主要包括起連接作用的副詞和起過渡作用的插入語。例如： In my opinion, we don' t

6、n eed to copy others' ways of thinking?Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.（j 匕京）In a word, let' s greet every day with a smile? （福建） Anyhow, different cultures, different customs? If you "Do as theRomans do when in Romen , you' 11 enjoy more of your stay her

7、e? （四川）I' d like to point out.?However, I ' m afraid there is one mistake（湖北） Anyway, I' m amazed at the progress you' ve made.（胡 j 匕） With their help, I have made great progress? （福建） It can even help us email people, shop online and find friends around the world ? （江蘇）?0n May Day,

8、Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work? Upontheir arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits? Then, they startedworking at once, cleaning the w

9、indows and sweeping the floor? Everythingdone, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people? （浙江）【擴展與總結】在寫作中常用的過渡語：1? 表時間： At first, then, afterwards, before, after, in the end, later, in the future, inimediately2. 表順序： first, second, then, lastly, finally, last but not the least3. 表并列或遞進：

10、besides, what' s more, in addition, also, moreover, furthermore, worse still4? 表個人觀點： in my opinion/view, from my point of view, as far asI' m concerned5? 表總結： in a word, in general, to sum up, all in all, in summary,in conclusion, generally speaking, in brief6. 表轉折或對比： however, on the contr

11、ary, yet, by comparison, by contrast, on the other hand7. 表因果： therefore, thus, as a result, so, as a result of, thanksto, because of, owing to四、通過調(diào)整語序增加句子之間的連貫性：在不影響句意表達的前提下通過 適當調(diào)整語序可以使上下句之間的關系更加緊密從而達到增強句子連貫性的 LI 的。 例如：Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old? Along this800-meter str

12、eet, there are more than 300 shops? （全國卷 II ）【賞析】 Along this 800-meter street這一地點狀語的提前使后面的句子 與Qianmen Street 的關系更加緊湊，有效地增強了前后兩個句子之間的連貫性。五、合理使用過渡句：恰當使用過渡句可以使句子之間的邏輯關系更加清楚 與緊密從而有效提升句子之間的連貫性。如： Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Oianmen Street. Here is something about it. Qianmen Street

13、 is a famous street of over 600 years old ? Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops.（全國卷 II ）?However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings ? Here are a few suggestions? First, it' s advisable to talk morewith your mom ? （陜西） Glad to hear from you and you' re welcome to Chin