1、 假設(shè)你是艾學(xué)習(xí)，上個(gè)星期天去市圖假設(shè)你是艾學(xué)習(xí)，上個(gè)星期天去市圖書館看書時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)以下問(wèn)題，你寫信向館長(zhǎng)書館看書時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)以下問(wèn)題，你寫信向館長(zhǎng)Mr. WangMr. Wang反映：反映：1. 1. 實(shí)用性的書、新書太少；實(shí)用性的書、新書太少；2. 2. 書架上的書比較混亂；書架上的書比較混亂；3. 3. 閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有害；閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有害；4. 4. 管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。Dear Mr. Wang, Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library._ So, for the sake of reade

2、rs, I suggest that you change all those mentioned as soon as possible. Yours, Ai XuexiDear Mr. Wang, Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library. I found some problems in your library. To start with, I didnt find too many books that are practical, and new books might be too few. In additi

3、on, books on the shelves are a little bit out of order, which makes it hard for readers to find what they need. What is also not good is the light from outside, the light is a little dark, which can easily do harm to the readers eyes. Moreover, the fact that the workers chat with each other really m

4、akes me disappointed. After all, their voices not only disturb the readers reading but also their moods. They have a bad effect on the image of your library. So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all those mentioned as soon as possible. Yours, Ai XuexiStudent ADear Mr. Wang, Last Su

5、nday, I went to do some reading in your library. I found some problems in your library. To start with, I didnt find too many books that are practical, and new books might be too few. In addition, books on the shelves are a little bit out of order, which makes it hard for readers to find what they ne

6、ed. What is also not good is the light from outside, the light is a little dark, which can easily do harm to the readers eyes. Moreover, the fact that the workers chat with each other really makes me disappointed. After all, their voices not only disturb the readers reading but also their moods. The

7、y have a bad effect on the image of your library. So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all those mentioned as soon as possible. Yours, Ai XuexiStudent A 要求考生根據(jù)所給情景，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇要求考生根據(jù)所給情景，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100100個(gè)單詞左右的短文。個(gè)單詞左右的短文。 情景包括目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)情景包括目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、

8、提綱等。等。 本部分滿分本部分滿分2525分，所需時(shí)間約為分，所需時(shí)間約為3030分分鐘。鐘。NMET的要求1 1、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定檔次。檔次。第五檔：第五檔： 21 25分分第四檔：第四檔： 16 20分分第三檔：第三檔： 11 15分分第二檔：第二檔： 6 10分分第一檔：第一檔： 1 5 分分 0分分語(yǔ)言地道，語(yǔ)言地道，規(guī)范規(guī)范覆蓋所有內(nèi)覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)容要點(diǎn)2 2、主要內(nèi)容：、主要內(nèi)容： 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 詞匯和語(yǔ)法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性；詞匯和語(yǔ)法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性； 上下文的連貫；上下文的連貫； 語(yǔ)言的得體性語(yǔ)言的得體性應(yīng)用了較多應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)

9、法結(jié)構(gòu)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯和詞匯有效地使有效地使用了語(yǔ)句用了語(yǔ)句間的連接間的連接成分成分3 3、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。予以考慮。4 4、詞數(shù)少于、詞數(shù)少于8080和多于和多于120120的，從總分中的，從總分中減去減去2 2分。分。5 5、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。數(shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。 Something important for a good articleStructure InformationShinning points給

10、閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分整體三部分 IntroductionIntroduction點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示或開門見山2. Body2. Body 中心敘述部分；層次分明3. Ending3. Ending 小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題；要求或呼吁給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分整體三部分 IntroductionIntroductionWhy?Find some problemsWhy?Find some problems2. Body2. Body Four problemsFour problems3. Ending3. Endi

11、ng Purpose:Purpose:expect some improvementsexpect some improvementsPrepare necessary informationProblems: 1. 實(shí)用性的書、新書太少；實(shí)用性的書、新書太少； 1. newly-published, practical 2. 書架上的書比較混亂；書架上的書比較混亂； 2. on the shelves, in a mess, out of order 3. 閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有害；閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有害； 3. reading room, light, dim, do harm to 4.

12、管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。 4. workers, chat with, while workingAdd possible informationHow do you find itProblemsBad effectsWhen search for When search for something new something new not enough not enough new booksnew bookscan not attract can not attract readersreadersWhen look for When look for what I

13、 wantwhat I wantout of orderout of orderhard to find hard to find the right bookthe right bookWhile readingWhile readingdim lightdim lightdo harm to eyesdo harm to eyesWhile readingWhile readingchatting chatting workersworkerscannot enjoy cannot enjoy readingreadingDear Mr. Wang, Last Sunday, I went

14、 to do some reading in your library. Over the Over the time I was there, I found something unpleasant. Therefore, Itime I was there, I found something unpleasant. Therefore, Id d like to voice my opinions, which, I hope, would be useful for you like to voice my opinions, which, I hope, would be usef

15、ul for you to create a more comfortable place for readers.to create a more comfortable place for readers. First, there are few new and practical books on the shelves, First, there are few new and practical books on the shelves, and most books are not popular today. Second, some books are not and mos

16、t books are not popular today. Second, some books are not sorted in proper order, making it difficult for readers to find sorted in proper order, making it difficult for readers to find what they want quickly. Third, the assistants didnwhat they want quickly. Third, the assistants didnt offer good t

17、 offer good services. Instead, they were always chatting. In addition, poor services. Instead, they were always chatting. In addition, poor light in the reading room is bad for eyes.light in the reading room is bad for eyes. So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all those mentioned

18、as soon as possible. Yours, Ai XuexiOne Possible VersionPossible PatternDear XX, but I did not enjoy it because over the time I was there I found something unpleasant. First, _ as _. Then, _, making it difficult for _ to _. In addition,_for_. It was rather annoying. To make matters worse, _ so _ tha

19、t I could hardly bear it. As a _ to your _, Im disappointed with my experience in your _. Im writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make some improvements. Yours faithfully, XX 假設(shè)你是艾學(xué)習(xí)，上個(gè)星假設(shè)你是艾學(xué)習(xí)，上個(gè)星期天去市圖書館看書時(shí)發(fā)期天去市圖書館看書時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)以下問(wèn)題，你寫信向館現(xiàn)以下問(wèn)題，你寫信向館長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)Mr. WangMr. Wang反映：反映：

20、1.1.實(shí)用性的書、新書太少；實(shí)用性的書、新書太少；2.2.書架上的書比較混亂；書架上的書比較混亂；3.3.閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有害；害；4.4.管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。Practice 模板填空：模板填空：Dear Mr. Wang,Dear Mr. Wang,but I did not enjoy it because over but I did not enjoy it because over the time I was there I found something the time I was there I found something

21、 unpleasant.unpleasant. First, _ as/for _. First, _ as/for _. Then, _, making it difficult Then, _, making it difficult for _ to _. for _ to _. In addition,_. It was In addition,_. It was rather annoying. rather annoying. To make matters worse, _ To make matters worse, _ so _ that I could hardly bea

22、r it. so _ that I could hardly bear it. As a _ to your _, I As a _ to your _, Im m disappointed with my experience in your disappointed with my experience in your _. _. I Im writing the letter in the hope m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and that you can consider

23、 these problems and make some improvements. make some improvements. Yours faithfully, Yours faithfully, Ai Xuexi Ai XuexiExercise假設(shè)你是李華，在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間，到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译娪霸嚎戳艘患僭O(shè)你是李華，在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間，到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译娪霸嚎戳艘粓?chǎng)精彩的電影，但在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列場(chǎng)精彩的電影，但在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。提示用英語(yǔ)給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。1. 1. 因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)；因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映

24、晚點(diǎn)；2. 2. 影片播放音量過(guò)大；影片播放音量過(guò)大；3. 3. 安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；4. 4. 適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。參考詞匯：安全出口參考詞匯：安全出口exitexit 安全隱患安全隱患potential safety hazardpotential safety hazardDear Manager,Dear Manager, I Im an exchange student from China. Yesterday, m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cin

25、ema to see a film. The film wasI went to your cinema to see a film. The film wasvery good,but_ very good,but_ _ Yours faithfully, Yours faithfully, Li Hua Li HuaPrepare necessary information 1.因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)；因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)； the film was delayed, too many ads 2. 影片播放音量過(guò)大；影片播放音量過(guò)大； sound too loud 3. 安全出口標(biāo)

26、識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患； the EXIT signs not seen clearly, present potential safety hazards. 4. 適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。參考詞匯：安全出口參考詞匯：安全出口exit 安全隱患安全隱患potential safety hazardAdd possible informationHow do you find itProblemsBad effectsthe delayed the delayed filmfilmtoo loud soundtoo loud soundEXIT signs not EX

27、IT signs not seen clearlyseen clearlypotential potential safety hazardsafety hazard假設(shè)你是李華，在出國(guó)交流假設(shè)你是李華，在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間，到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译娪皩W(xué)習(xí)期間，到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译娪霸嚎戳艘粓?chǎng)精彩的電影，但院看了一場(chǎng)精彩的電影，但在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。語(yǔ)給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。1. 1. 因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)；點(diǎn)；2. 2. 影片播放音量過(guò)大；影片播放音量過(guò)大；3. 3. 安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全

28、出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；安全隱患；4. 4. 適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。參考詞匯：安全出口參考詞匯：安全出口exitexit 安全隱患安全隱患potential safety hazardpotential safety hazardPractice 模板填空：模板填空：Dear Mr. Wang,Dear Mr. Wang,The firm was good but I did not enjoy The firm was good but I did not enjoy it because over the time I was there I it because over the ti

29、me I was there I found something unpleasant.found something unpleasant. First, _ as/for _. First, _ as/for _. Then, _, making it difficult Then, _, making it difficult for _ to _. for _ to _. In addition,_. It was In addition,_. It was rather annoying. rather annoying. To make matters worse, _ To ma

30、ke matters worse, _ so _ that I could hardly bear it. so _ that I could hardly bear it. As a _ to your _, I As a _ to your _, Im m disappointed with my experience in your disappointed with my experience in your _. _. I Im writing the letter in the hope m writing the letter in the hope that you can c

31、onsider these problems and that you can consider these problems and make some improvements. make some improvements. Yours faithfully, Yours faithfully, Ai Xuexi Ai XuexiDear Manager, Im an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I did

32、not enjoy it I did not enjoy it because over the time I was there, I found something unpleasant.because over the time I was there, I found something unpleasant. First,First, the film was delayed the film was delayed as as there were so many advertisements there were so many advertisements at the beg

33、inning. at the beginning. It was rather annoying.It was rather annoying. Second,Second, the sound of the film was the sound of the film was so so loud loud that I could hardlythat I could hardly bear it. bear it. Third, Third, the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, the EXIT signs could not be see

34、n clearly, which which presented presented potential safety hazards. And if something terrible should happen, potential safety hazards. And if something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.it would be difficult for people to get out quickly. As a As a visitor visitor toto your city, your city, I Im disappointed with my experience m disappointed with my experience in yourin yo