1、湖南師大附中海口中學(xué) 熊苗高考作文的華麗變身句式篇 最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。(2013屆一模)60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1、不應(yīng)收門票2、公園是公眾休閑的地方3、如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1、應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不宜高2、支付園林工人工資3、購新花木注意：1、信的開頭已為你寫好 2、詞數(shù)：100左右。3、參考詞匯：門票：entrance fee Recently, our school has held a discussion. The topic is about

2、 whether the park should charge the entrance fee or not. Sixty percent of the students think the park shouldnt charge the entrance fee. They think the park is a place for the public to relax themselves. And if they charge the fee, they have to built the gates and walls. This is bad for our citys ima

3、ge. The other forty percent of the students think the park should charge the entrance fee but it shouldnt be high. So they can use the money to pay for the workers and buy more new plants.思考：什么樣的作文會(huì)成為一篇好作文 無遺漏信息點(diǎn)（審題）篇章條理清晰：分段和過渡詞句式多樣地道的高級(jí)詞匯和恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~組思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？ 應(yīng)收門票，支付工人工資，購置新花木。 The park need prote

4、cting. The entrance fee will pay for the workers and buy some new plants for the park. The park need protecting, so 一、將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為并列句 操作難度 寫作效果并列連詞（副詞）1 表示聯(lián)合關(guān)系：and, neithernor, not onlybut also等。2 表示選擇關(guān)系：or, either. or, neithernor, otherwise等。3 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but, yet, however, nevertheless, while, whereas等。4

5、表示因果關(guān)系：for, so, therefore等。5 表示條件或結(jié)果:and, or等。6 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：besides, furthermore, moreover等。二、主動(dòng)句與被動(dòng)句的互換。 操作難度 寫作效果 最近，我們參加了一個(gè)英語報(bào)社組織的討論， 討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？ Recently, my classmates and I have taken part in a discussion which is organized by an English newspaper. Our topic is whether the park should charge t

6、he entrance fee. Recently, a discussion on whether parks should charge entrance fees was held by an English newspaper.（宋學(xué)敏） 60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為不應(yīng)收門票 Sixty percent of the classmates take the view that the park shouldnt charge the entrance fee. Sixty percent of the students hold the view that entrance fees shoul

7、d not be charged (宋學(xué)敏)二、主動(dòng)句與被動(dòng)句的互換。 操作難度 寫作效果 應(yīng)收門票，支付園林工人工資，購新花木 It is very necessary to charge the entrance fee, because the parks not only have to pay for salary of the workers but also buy some new plants. Not only should the administrators pay the salary of the workers, but they should buy some

8、new plants as well. Thus, it is of vital importance to get some income by entrance fee.(戴偉) Only by charging the entrance fee can the park afford to pay the salary of the worker and buy more new plants.(黃浩南) 三、將陳述句改為倒裝句。 操作難度 寫作效果 應(yīng)收門票，支付園林工人工資，購新花木。 It is by charging the entrance fee that the park

9、can afford to pay the workers and buy more plants.（湯力專）四、將簡(jiǎn)單句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句。 操作難度 寫作效果1. 同位語和同位語從句（常用于描述人物、地點(diǎn)等介紹性文段） 60%的人認(rèn)為不應(yīng)收門票，公園是公眾休閑的地方 Nearly sixty percent of students suppose that the park shouldnt charge the entrance fee. The hold the view that park is a place for the public to relax themselves. Near

10、ly sixty percent of students suppose that the park, _, shouldnt charge the entrance fee.（黃丹蕙）五、將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為復(fù)合句。 操作難度寫作效果a place for the public to relax themselves2. 主語從句 如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象 They worried that if the entrance fee is charged, more gates and walls have to be built, which may have bad effec

11、t on the appearance of the city. _is that if .What worried them 3. 定語從句 （限制性/ 非限制性） 公園是公眾休閑的地方 In their view, the park is a place where we can have a rest rather than a money-maker.（陳俊屹） 如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象And if the entrance is taken, parks need to build gates, walls and so on. They may have a bad

12、effect on the image of the city. If parks must charge fees, new gates and walls will be built, which may have a negative effect on our citys appearance. (陳云言) 最近，我們參加了一個(gè)英語報(bào)社組織的討論，討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？ Recently, my classmates have attended a debate held by an English newspaper. The theme of the debate is

13、whether the park should charge the entrance fee or not. Recently, my classmates have attended a debate held by an English newspaper， the theme of which/whose them is whether the park should charge the entrance fee or not. 然而40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為應(yīng)收門票 while other forty percent of us think that it is necessary to c

14、harge the entrance fee.(鐘佳邑) while other forty percent of us think it necessary to charge the entrance fee.六 It作形式主語或形式賓語句型 操作難度寫作效果用it做形式主語的常用句型：1. It + 系動(dòng)詞+形容詞（necessary/right/likely/unlikely/wrong/important/certain等）+ that2. It + be +名詞（短語）（a pity/a shame/no wonder等）+ that3. It +be +過去分詞（said/tol

15、d/reported/decided等）+ that4. It + 特殊動(dòng)詞（seem/appear/happen/matter）+ that常接形式賓語的一些動(dòng)詞：1 sb. find/feel/ think/consider/ make/believe+ it +that2 sb. hate/enjoy/like/love/dislike/appreciate/see to/insist on/depend on + it +that 最近我們參加了由你們報(bào)社組織的一個(gè)討論。 Recently, our classmates have taken part in a discussion

16、which is organized by your newspaper. Recently, my classmates have taken part in a discussion held by your newspaper.（祝然） 七、非謂語動(dòng)詞充當(dāng)定語、狀語等 操作難度寫作效果 應(yīng)收門票，支付園林工人工資，購新花木。 If they charge the entrance fee, they can have enough money to pay the salary of the workers and purchase more plants. Charging the e

17、ntrance fee,（冷曉喬） 如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象If the entrance fees are taken, the gates and walls will be built, which will do harm to the appearance of the city With the entrance fee charged, .（丁昱丹）八、 with 引導(dǎo)的短語或者復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)做狀語 操作難度 寫作效果 Recently, my classmates have attended a discussion held by an English newspap

18、er, whose them is whether the park should charge the entrance fee or not. Sixty percent of the students hold the view that entrance fees should not be charged. In their view, the park is a place where we can have a rest rather than a money-maker. Whats more, if the entrance fees are taken, the gates

19、 and walls will be built, which will do harm to the appearance of the city while other forty percent of us think it necessary to charge the entrance fee. Not only should the administrators pay the salary of the workers, but they should buy some new plants as well. Thus, it is of vital importance to get some income