1、UNIT 1PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENTIntroduce someone you admire一、審題定調(diào) 本寫作要求介紹一位自己崇拜的偉人，屬于記敘文。介紹崇拜的偉人關(guān)鍵之處在于突出其主要經(jīng)歷和成就，并點(diǎn)明為何使你欽佩。介紹其生平事跡時(shí)一般用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主，但有時(shí)要根據(jù)實(shí)際情況有所變化。二、謀篇布局 針對(duì)本篇寫作任務(wù)，我們可以列出以下提綱：第一部分：簡(jiǎn)單介紹人物背景；第二部分：重點(diǎn)講述該人物的主要經(jīng)歷和重要成就；第三部分：你崇拜他她的原因。三、常用表達(dá)第一部分：簡(jiǎn)單介紹人物背景。When talking about., I cant help but thin

2、k of., a famous.eg: When talking about “The Admirable”, I cant help but think of Yuan Longping, an famous agricultural scientist. 當(dāng)談到“令人欽佩的人”，我情不自禁想起農(nóng)業(yè)科學(xué)家袁隆平。1. .(人名), who was born in.(時(shí)間), graduated from.(學(xué)校).eg: Yuan Longping, who was born in September 1930, graduated from Agriculture Department i

3、n Southwest Agricultural Institute.袁隆平，1930年9月出生，畢業(yè)于西南農(nóng)學(xué)院農(nóng)業(yè)系。第二部分：重點(diǎn)講述該人物的主要經(jīng)歷和重要成就。2. After leaving the university, .(人名) became a . in .(地名).eg: After leaving the University, Yuan Longping became a teacher in a remote school in Hunan.離開大學(xué)后，袁隆平在湖南一所偏遠(yuǎn)學(xué)校當(dāng)了老師。3. In those years, he/she had a lot of ex

4、perience when .eg: In those years, he had a lot of experience when he educated people and did agricultural researches.在那些年里，他在教育人民和從事農(nóng)業(yè)研究方面有了很多經(jīng)驗(yàn)。4. In .(年份), .(事情). He came up with the idea of ., which .eg: In the 1960s, China was suffering serious famine. 20世紀(jì)60年代, 中國(guó)遭受嚴(yán)重饑荒。 He came up with the id

5、ea of hybrid rice, which has a high yield. 他提出了雜交水稻的想法, 這種水稻產(chǎn)量很高。5. .(時(shí)間) later, he succeeded in .(發(fā)明或發(fā)現(xiàn)) that.(作用).eg: Ten years later, he succeeded in inventing a new species that produced a 20 percent higher yield than common types of rice. Ten years later, he succeeded in inventing a new species

6、. It produced a 20 percent higher yield than common types of rice.十年后，他成功地發(fā)明了一種新品種，其產(chǎn)量比普通水稻高20%。6. Because., (人名) is known as .eg: Because this solved the food crisis, Yuan Longping is known as “the father of hybrid rice”.因?yàn)檫@解決了糧食危機(jī)，袁隆平被稱為“雜交水稻之父”。1. .(人名) experienced many failures, but he did not g

7、ive up. eg: Yuan Longping experienced many failures, but he did not give up. 袁隆平經(jīng)歷了多次失敗，但他沒有放棄。第三部分：你崇拜他她的原因。2. I am inspired by.eg: I am inspired by his perseverance and scientific spirit. 他的毅力和科學(xué)精神鼓舞了我?！就卣埂棵枋鋈说钠焚|(zhì)patriotism 愛國(guó)精神 self-sacrifice 自我犧牲精神perseverance 堅(jiān)韌不拔 scientific spirit科學(xué)精神 patience

8、耐心 persistence 堅(jiān)持 determination 果斷 selflessness 無(wú)私 sense of responsibility 責(zé)任心 kindness 善良 3. .(人名) made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world. eg: Yuan Longping made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world. 袁隆平不僅對(duì)中國(guó)，而且對(duì)整個(gè)世界在農(nóng)業(yè)方面做出了

9、貢獻(xiàn)。4. As far as I am concerned, he is .eg: As far as I am concerned, he is a hero. 就我而言, 他是個(gè)英雄。 When talking about., I cant help but think of., a famous. .(人名), who was born in.(時(shí)間), graduated from.(學(xué)校).After leaving the university, .(人名) became a . in .(地名).In those years, he had a lot of experienc

10、e when . In .(年份), .(事情). He came up with the idea of ., which . .(時(shí)間) later, he succeeded in .(發(fā)明或發(fā)現(xiàn)) . Because., (人名) is known as . .(人名) experienced many failures, but he did not give up. I am inspired by. .(人名) made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world. As far as I am concerned, he is .【寫作模板】袁隆平生于1930年9月，在北京協(xié)和醫(yī)院出生，長(zhǎng)大后跟隨父母輾轉(zhuǎn)多地。1949年，袁隆平以優(yōu)異的成績(jī)考入西南農(nóng)學(xué)院(現(xiàn)西南大學(xué))，學(xué)習(xí)農(nóng)作物專業(yè)。1953年，23歲的袁隆平被分配到了湖南懷化的一所農(nóng)校當(dāng)老師。同時(shí)繼續(xù)研究他喜愛的雜交水稻，此后袁隆平經(jīng)過不懈努力和鉆研，克服