1、優(yōu)秀資料歡迎下載閱卷老師的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)切題，把段落當(dāng)中每一個標(biāo)題都要覆蓋用詞不重復(fù)句式變化多杜絕中國式的英文文章當(dāng)中的閃光點卷面的整潔，正確的修改形式閱卷老師的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一、切題，把段落當(dāng)中每一個標(biāo)題都要覆蓋。Whatwouldhappeniftherewerenopower?ItpaystobehonestAletterinreplytoafriendSchedulefortheday二、句式變化多(Expressions)句子的多樣性（簡單句，復(fù)合句，及省略句、倒裝句)例:在簡單句當(dāng)中運用幾種結(jié)構(gòu):主語+謂語+賓語主語+謂語+雙賓語（直接賓語，間接賓語）主語+謂語+賓補(bǔ)注意運用Therebe的句

2、型Onecarcome,onecargo,twocarbangbang,onecardie.盡量多用一些被動語態(tài)，多用名詞做主語，用被動代替主動,豐富文章當(dāng)中的句式變化。例：Heisveryinterestedinpopmusic.Heshowsgreatinterestsinpopmusic.Popmusiciswhatheisinterestedin.Greatinterestshasbeenshownbyhiminpopmusic.六大從句的運用:賓語從句定語從句狀語從句主語從句表語從句同位語從句AsfarasIamconcernedIagreewiththepointthat-Itgo

3、eswithoutsayingthat-優(yōu)秀資料歡迎下載AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopinionthat-三、用詞不重復(fù)必須要注意寫作的具體元素及，用詞切記多余重復(fù)(redundancy)一個詞下一次提到表示相同的意思應(yīng)該用不同的詞來表達(dá)。盡量用詞組和從句代替一個詞的用法:forexample/forinstance/asanillustration./Acaseinpointisthatgood/wonderful/great/fantastic/surprisingnice/incredible/fabulous/incredibleinterviewee/jo

4、bapplicant/jobhunter/jobseeker/thepeoplewhoaregoingtofindajob.用句子和詞組來代替一個詞inthefirstplace,inthesecondplaceTherearemanypeoplewhohold/argue/maintainthat-Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopinionthat-四、文章當(dāng)中的閃光點在四級考試作文題目當(dāng)中適當(dāng)?shù)剡\用諺語可以起到畫龍點睛的作用，增加文章當(dāng)中的閃光點。但是諺語引用在文章中最多不能超過三次，引用的諺語也不能太偏。Eachc

5、oinhastwosides.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.Wherethereisawillthereisaway.“Godhelpsthosethathelpthemselves”Alittlelearningisaverydangerousthing.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.五、杜絕中國式的英文Asaproverbsays:“AmericaandChinanotenough.”Isawabreadcarkissawalkmanintheman-line.Leftseesee,rightseesee.Thedriverish

6、orsehorsetigertiger.Onestop,twosee,threeacross.Iwilldoanhonestman.Nomoney,notalk.Dr.KongshusbandMiaoYounoseeme,younogo.Inoseeyou,Inogo.Noseenogo.WritingModelsNowadays/atpresent,withthedevelopmentofhumancivilization,aswellasthesignificantimprovementofthescienceoftechnology,andduetotherapidchangesinou

7、rsociallives,moreandmorepeopleareconcerningaboutwhether文章主題，Asa優(yōu)秀資料歡迎下載result,thetopicof把主題改寫為被動，isincreasinglybecomingthemostpopularcontroversyrecently,whichraisesmanyissuesinthesociety.ThatremindsmeofanoldChinesesayingwhichgoes:“Eachcoinhastwosides.”Differentpeopleholddifferentkindsofopinionstowar

8、dit.Asaresult,theattitudestowardthisissuevaryfrompersontoperson.切題與審題四級考試當(dāng)中對時間和篇幅都有嚴(yán)格的限制，因為考場上的氣氛比較緊張，作文又是考試的第一項，所以考生一定要注意是在是否你的作文里題目的每一個選項都進(jìn)行了覆蓋，不要漏掉了任何一個段落標(biāo)題。建議考生在讀完題目之后，快速確立自己的觀點，把他寫在草稿上，或在胸中打一個腹稿，由于試題當(dāng)中一般都給出了中文線索，你所列舉的理由和例子一定要與他們相一致，千萬不要跑題在圖表作文當(dāng)中，不要怕耽誤時間，一定要看清并且吃透圖表的意思，不要匆忙動筆，避免跑題。注意看清楚圖表當(dāng)中的提示和說

9、明?？忌谛薷臅r的注意事項語法，全篇時態(tài)是否一致，主謂是否一致是否把所有的標(biāo)題都已經(jīng)覆蓋。拼寫，詞組搭配，大小寫。檢查一下句中的句式是否有變化，用詞是否重復(fù)在四級考試當(dāng)中用詞的注意現(xiàn)象必須要注意寫作的具體元素既，用詞切記不要重復(fù)(redundancy)既一個詞下一次提到表示相同的意思應(yīng)該用不同的詞來表達(dá)。盡量用詞組和從句代替一個詞的用法:例：forexample/forinstance/asanillustration./Acaseinpointisthatgood/wonderful/great/fantastic/surprising/niceincredible/fabulous/inc

10、redibleinterviewee/jobhunter/jobseeker/thepeoplewhoaregoingtofindajob.Jobapplicant用句子和詞組來代替一個詞用法inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,Therearemanypeoplewhohold/argue/maintain/that-AsfarasIamconcernedIagreewiththeopinionthat-Iaminfavoroftheopinionthat-Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopi

11、nionthat-frommypointofview,Intheopinionofmine,在四級考試當(dāng)中句式的運用（Expressions)注意句子的多樣性：（簡單句，并列句，復(fù)合句，省略，六大從句，非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)）優(yōu)秀資料歡迎下載例:在簡單句當(dāng)中運用五種結(jié)構(gòu):主語+謂語MrSongisreading主語+謂語+賓語MrSongisreadinganEnglishbook.主語+謂語+雙賓語（直接賓語，間接賓語）MrLiisteachingusEnglish.主語+謂語+賓補(bǔ)MrLiisteachingustopassCet-4.注意運用Therebe的句型高分作文的表達(dá)作文用詞當(dāng)中即不能太淺，

12、太口語化，也不能用怪詞偏詞，即太多的專有名詞。例：Heisveryinterestedinpopmusic.HeshowsgreatinterestsinpopmusicHeexpressesthegreatenthusiasminpopmusic.盡量在多用一些被動語態(tài)，多用名詞做主語，用被動代替主動。豐富文章當(dāng)中的句式變化。Popmusiciswhatheisinterestedin.Greatinterestshasbeenshownbyhiminpopmusic.例1：JohnisgoodatwritinginEnglish.WritinginEnglishiswhatJohnisgo

13、odat.例2：ItisveryimportanttolearnEnglish.TolearnEnglishisveryimportantEnglishisofgreatimportance.GreatimportanceshouldbeattachedtoEnglish.LearningEnglishisveryessential.LearningEnglishshouldbepaidmuchattention.Moreandmorehighschoolstudentshavethechancetogotouniversity.Moreandmorehighschoolstudentshav

14、etheopportunitytoattendtheuniversity.Moreandmorehighschoolgraduateshavetheopportunitytoreceive/participatehighereducationMoreandmorehighschoolgraduateshaveaccesstohighereducation.Highereducationbecomesaccessibletohighschoolgraduates.四級作文當(dāng)中諺語的運用Asapopularsayinggoesthat.Asisknowntoall,“.”Asaproverbsay

15、s,“.”Asapopularsayinggoes,“.”Thereisafamousoldsayingwhichgoes“”Thatremindsmeofanoldfamoussayingwhichgoes,“.”Asapopularsayinggoes,“.”eachcoinhastwosides.一個事情有兩個方面Agoodbeginningishalfdone好的開始是成功的一半。優(yōu)秀資料歡迎下載Knowledgeispower知識就是力量wherethereisawillthereisaway。有志者事竟成。Asaproverbsays:opportunityknocksatthed

16、ooronlyonce機(jī)不可失，失不再來。Asapopularsayinggoes,“Amanisknownbythecompanyhekeeps.”物以類聚，人以群分Asapopularsayinggoes,“Godhelpsthosethathelpthemselves”上帝幫助那些自救的人。Earlytobed,andearlytorise,makesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.實際的意思是我們應(yīng)該發(fā)奮圖強(qiáng)，只爭朝夕。Whatcanbedonetodayneverputoffuntiltomorrow.今天做的事情應(yīng)該今天完成，我們必須只爭朝夕。Asisknow

17、ntoall,“nopains,nogains”沒有耕耘，就沒有收獲Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗是成功之母。Itsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，學(xué)到老。Toopenabookisalwaysbeneficial意思是我們應(yīng)該不斷的看書、學(xué)習(xí)/開卷有益。Timeandtidewaitfornoman時不待我或時不我待Alittlelearningisadangerousthing一知半解是非常危險的事(常常用于圖表作文當(dāng)中)。Morehaste,lessspeed欲速而不達(dá)。說明我們做什么事情都應(yīng)該循序漸進(jìn)。Seeingisbelieving.眼見

18、為實。Well-begunishalfdone.好的開始是成功的一半。Agoodbeginningishalfdone.好的開始是成功的一半。Honestyisthebestpolicy.誠實是最好的準(zhǔn)則。Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事實勝于雄辯。Theshortestanswerisdoing.最好的回答就是去做。Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart心之所愿，無事不成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事盡成。Knowledgeispower.知識就是力量。Nopainsnogains,painpa

19、stispleasure不經(jīng)風(fēng)雨，不見彩虹。WheninRome,doasRomans入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。作文當(dāng)中的常用的一些套話Broadenmyvision/expandmyvision擴(kuò)展我的視野Enlargemyscopeofknowledge擴(kuò)充我的知識Purifymysoul凈化我的心靈優(yōu)秀資料歡迎下載圖表作文的命題形式圖表作文的?？碱}目類型有：用正確的語言分析描述圖表的變化分析變化的原因你的觀點，以及應(yīng)該采取的措施圖表作文的注意事項：圖表作文一定要審清圖表的對象，看清楚對象是什么。圖表常見表示變化的線段表示圖表變化的句型有表示上升的句型：一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)Itrises/slightly/ste

20、adily/rapidly/significantly/dramatically.Itincreases/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/sharply.Itgoesupslowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/sharply.Thereisaslightsteady/rapid/significant/dramatical/rise.Thereisaslow/steady/rapid/significant/increase/.在描述圖表當(dāng)中（過去時）的運用Itrose/slightly/steadily/rapi

21、dly/significantly.Itincreased/slowly/steadily/rapidly/dramatically.Therewasaslightsteady/rapid/significant/dramatical/rise.Therewasaslow/steady/rapid/significant/increase.表示下降的描述(一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)）Itdrops/slightly/dramaticallysignificantly/rapidly/Itgoesdown/slightly/rapidly/significantly/dramaticallyItfalls/s

22、lightly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/dramaticallyItdecreases/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/Itdeclines/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/Thereisaslight/slow/rapid/significant/dropThereisaslight/slow/rapid/significant/fallThereisaslight/slow/rapid/significant/decreaseThereisaslight/slow/

23、rapid/decline表示下降的描述(一般過去時態(tài)）Itdropped/slightly/dramaticallyItfell/slightlysteadily/rapidly/significantlyItdecreased/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/Itdeclined/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/Therewasaslightsteady/rapid/dramatical/dropTherewasaslow/steady/rapid/significant/decreaseTherewa

24、saslow/steady/rapid/significant/decline圖表當(dāng)中表示不變和波動的描述優(yōu)秀資料歡迎下載ItstaysatthesameplaceItremainsstable/unchangedItfluctuatesslowlyThereisaslow/slight/dramatical/fluctuationTherewasaslowfluctuation(過）inthenumberof-Itfluctuatedslightly/slowly/sharply/unexpectedlyThesameisthecasewiththeformerinJuneandJulyas

25、teadyrisefollowedaslowfluctuationfollowedasignificantrisefollowedarapiddecreasecomeafteraslightincreasefollowedadramaticalrisecame表示圖表當(dāng)中時間的表達(dá)從-到哪一年:from-tobetween-and-intheperiodof-and-intermsof-inthecaseof-FromJunetoJulybetweenJuneand/toJulyIntheperiodofJuneandJulyIntermsofJuneandJulyInthecaseofJun

26、eandJuly表示“大約、差不多”的習(xí)語justabout/overapproximately/probablynearly/almost/hardly/scarcelyThesameastheformer/latterItdoesnotmakeanydifferencefromto-Therearenotmuchdifferencebetween-and-注意描述當(dāng)中插入語的運用Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-Itisobviousthat-Tooursurprise，Toourrelief，Itissostrangethat-Itisveryinterestingtono

27、tedownthat-Weareveryhappytoseethat-Itisworthnoticingthat-優(yōu)秀資料歡迎下載圖表作文的一些模式開頭的一些模式：Ascanbeseenfromthegraph/figures/chart/statistics/givenabove/below,Itisagraphof把題目抄上去，抄的恰倒好處注意進(jìn)行適當(dāng)改寫。圖表作文當(dāng)中的一些模式Thatremindsmeofanoldfamoussayingwhichgoes“alittlelearningisadangerousthing.”Itwouldbeimperativeforustoinves

28、tigateitintensively.Frommypointofview,Istronglyarguethatthemoreweunderstandthefigures/graph,thebetterwecanmanagetoimproveourselvestosolvetherelatedproblems.Withthedevelopmentofhumancivilizationandscienceandtechnology,Aslongaswetrytobepersistent,Iamconfidentofthefactthatabrightfutureisawaitingus.wear

29、eworkingonittogetourselveswell-preparedtofaceuptoallkindsofchallengesinthesociety.(108words)Iamfirmlyinfavoroftheopinionthattheinformationdoesnotgiveusreasonsforthismovingtrend,therefore,Itwouldbenotinterestingbutworthwhileforustogointoitintensively.Frommypointofview,Istronglyarguethatthesignificant

30、growth/changeintermsof圖表主題canbeattributedtothefollowingfactors,including:-或者用suchas,或acaseinpointisthat-如何開頭：Ascanbeseenfromthegraphgivenbelow,ItisthegraphoftheprofitofAnAutomobileCointhecarsalesindustryintheUnitedStatesfromtheyearbetweenJanandJune1999.Itcanbeclearlyseenthat對圖表的變化進(jìn)行描述注意語言不要重復(fù),動詞+副詞和

31、therebe結(jié)構(gòu)的互換。2002.6Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:StudentUseofComputer.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositiononthechartandtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.上圖所示為1990年、1995年、2000年某大學(xué)生使用計算機(jī)的情況，請描述其變化：請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因(可從計算機(jī)的用途、價格或社會發(fā)展等方面加以說明）：你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題。

32、范文：Ascanbeseenfromthegraph/table/chartgivenabove.ItisthechartofAveragenumberofhoursastudentspendingonthecomputereveryweekfrom1990to2000,theaveragehourastudentspentoncomputerwasabouttwohoursperweekin1990,itiseasytoseethatcomparedwiththeformer,thenumberofhoursrosesteadilytonearlyfourhourseveryweekin1995.However,Itisworthnoticingthattherewasasignificantincreaseinthenumberofhou