1、中考英語作文指導(dǎo) 九 （2）2017年4月26日中考英語作文指導(dǎo) 九 （2）2017年4月26英語寫作在中考英語中占據(jù)重要的地位，寫作分值的高低直接影響到英語測試的成績，怎樣才能寫出一篇優(yōu)秀作文，在中考中獲取高分呢？ 英語寫作在中考英語中占據(jù)重要的地位，寫作分值的高低直接影響到習(xí)作范例 Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.What exactly your hobby is;When and how you beca

2、me interested in this hobby;Why you enjoy your hobby;About your hopes and plans for the future.寫作要求：1.根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。2.條理清楚，語句通順，書寫清晰、規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)60-80. 習(xí)作范例 Choose one of your hobbie一、寫作要點“一審”即審題。 “二寫”即列綱或打腹稿。 “三連”即連詞和句成文。 “四改”即修改潤色全文。 一、寫作要點“一審”即審題。 審題：做到三審體裁看清楚題目要求，讀懂題目所表達(dá)的含義，抓住要點，注

3、意文體是什么 時態(tài)、人稱如果是日記和故事，宜采用過去時態(tài)；如是簡介之類的，宜采用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 審題：做到三審列綱：做到三思 詞匯短語句式 列個提綱，考慮所要選用的單詞、詞組、句型，要能根據(jù)自己的英語水平，盡量揚長避短，避難就易。遇到想不起的詞、句時，就用同（近）義詞或同義句代替，不要使用沒有把握的詞句，并且要綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場合，語言要地道。 列綱：做到三思 詞匯短語句式 連句成文根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的 句子，劃分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的靈活運用，長、短句，簡單句，復(fù)合句要搭配運用。 連句成文文章

4、分3段：綜述：概括性強(qiáng)，最多2句話引入主題 正文主要內(nèi)容：層次性強(qiáng)，一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個方面，每個方面最多2句話 結(jié)尾：緊扣主題，2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，盡量升華 文章分3段：綜述：概括性強(qiáng)，最多2句話引入主題 修改潤色全文做到三查 要點、拼寫、語法是否連貫看全文符不符合題目要求，行文是否流暢，有沒有遺漏要點；語法是不是正確，包括單詞的拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點符號、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致、冠詞等。 修改潤色全文做到三查 要點、拼寫、語法是否連貫二、各類作文常用框架1、話題作文，演講 總-分-總 Its adj for us to. On the one hand,On the other

5、hand, Whats more, In a word,/In short,.二、各類作文常用框架1、話題作文，演講2、討論報告，列舉不同觀點 總-A方-B方-我方-總 Recently, we have a discussion about. Different people have different opinions. A thinks. B thinks differently. As for me,/In my opinion, . All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to.2、討論報告，列舉不同觀點3、寫信，

6、建議 總-分-總 Im adj to hear that you Here is some advice for you. Firstly,. Secondly,. Finally,. In a word,If you, you will3、寫信，建議學(xué)生習(xí)作AMy hobby is read books. When I was seven years old, I became interested in reading books. I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can l

7、earn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me how to be a good person. Books even can solve many problems for me. I will read more good books to improve myself. 改為reading books，動詞作表語時應(yīng)該用動名詞。also的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。12學(xué)生習(xí)作A改為reading books，動詞作表語時點評：檔次10-15分。要點不全，漏掉最后一個要點。句子基本無誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者 但文章不流暢，

8、句子與句子之間過渡不自 然，給讀者感覺在回答上述問題。有少量錯誤。 中考英語寫作指導(dǎo)公開課課件共25張PPT學(xué)生習(xí)作BMy hobby is reading. Reading books is very enjoyable. When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before. I went to bed every night. The stories were so interesting that I always felt they werent enough. So I began to read books by m

9、yself. Little by little I became interested in reading. I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world. When I read books, I can enjoy the beautiful sentences. At the same time I can improve my writing. I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read mor

10、e books so that my dream can come true. 學(xué)生習(xí)作B 開門見山、點題。真情流露，理由充分。文中帶圈的連詞使用得恰當(dāng)，使文章過渡 自然、巧妙使用句型以表決心。 點評：檔次15-25分。清楚表達(dá)寫作目的，要點齊全。語言表達(dá)靈活多樣，字里行間流露出真情實 感，文章有感染力。恰當(dāng)使用連詞和從句，語言流暢，且無錯 誤，是一 篇高質(zhì)量的作文。 開門見山、點題。三、提高寫作的方法（造句）三、提高寫作的方法（造句）句型轉(zhuǎn)換，句式多樣性 Tom is a student. He is 16 years old. He likes running Tom, a 16-year

11、-old student, likes running. 句型轉(zhuǎn)換，句式多樣性 Tom is a student. T多使用短語 I got up quickly. I got up as quickly as possible. He studies English well. He is good at English. He does well in English.多使用短語 I got up quickly. I got The girl likes reading.The pretty girl likes reading novels.The pretty girl likes

12、reading novels carefully.The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.擴(kuò)寫 The girl likes reading.擴(kuò)寫 句子的銜接詞 并列關(guān)系：and，or，either . or，both . and，not only . but also. as well as轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but，however，yet，although條件關(guān)系：if, whether，unless時間關(guān)系：when，as，before，after， while，until，since，as s

13、oon as因果關(guān)系：because，as，since，for，so句子的銜接詞 并列關(guān)系：and，or，either . In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will t

14、hank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much. In my life, I will thank my moIn my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. (But) she does housework and works hard in the factory. (When) I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. (When) I am ill, she looks after me carefully. (In a word), I will (not only) thank my mother for giving me life, (but also) thank her for helping me. (So) I love my mother very much. In my