第1頁WritingskillsHowtoimproveyourwriting第2頁1.關(guān)鍵點齊全2.語言正確3.表示生動4.行文流暢5.適當發(fā)揮Payattentiontothefollowinginstructionswhenwriting.3.表示生動4.行文流暢第3頁

專題復習：書面表示訓練之三

怎樣使句子優(yōu)美怎樣使文章流暢

寶應(yīng)縣中學高三英語備課組第4頁Sample1

Thestudentsliketochoosemajors.Theycanlearninterestingthings.Theywillhavegoodjobsinthefuture.Thestudentsbelievethattheenvironmentisimportanttous.Theygraduatefromuniversities.Theycanfindgoodjobs.Theycangetmuchmoney.Ithink

studentsshouldgotoagooduniversity.Welikeitandwestudyhardatit.

Sample2

Somestudentsprefertochoosemajorstheycanlearnwhattheyareinterestedin.Itwillmakeitpossibleforthemtohavetheirfavoritejobsinthefuture.,thosewhothinkdifferentlybelievethattheenvironmentisimportanttoone’sdevelopmentgraduatesfromleadinguniversitiesareoftenlikelytofindagoodjob.sothatalsoHoweverandthat第5頁

Sample2

Somestudentsprefertochoosemajorstheycanlearn.Itwilltheirfavoritejobsinthefuture.,theenvironmentisimportanttoone’sdevelopmentgraduatesfromleadinguniversitiesareoftenlikelytofindagoodjob.,thebestchoiceisagoodmajoratagooduniversity.Ifwecan’tobtainboth,thefirstthingtoconsiderisagoodmajor,westudy,wecanstillachievealotinacertainfieldifwetryourbest.sothatalsoHoweverandthatInmyopinionbecausewhattheyareinterestedinmakeitpossibleforthemtohavethosewhothinkdifferentlybelievethatnomatterwheresothatalsoHoweverInmyopinionwhattheyareinterestedinmakeitpossibleforthemtohavethosewhothinkdifferentlybelievethatnomatterwhere第6頁Elegance（語言優(yōu)美）Coherence（行文連貫）第7頁句式多改變作文更優(yōu)美第8頁怎樣用不一樣表示方式表示相同意義怎樣經(jīng)過對句子結(jié)構(gòu)改變,使文章顯得愈加豐富多彩

怎樣利用高級詞匯，給文章增加亮點怎樣使句式多變語言優(yōu)美呢？第9頁1.Whatsurprisedmemostwasthathedidn'tknowmeatall.→=

surprisedme

hedidn'tknowmeatall.=

,hedidn'tknowmeatall.不同的表達相同的意義ItthatTomygreatsurprise第10頁2.Toomanypeopletothezoowillcausetrafficjam.Toomanypeopletothezoowill_________trafficjam.Toomanypeopletothezoowill__________trafficjam.leadto

resultin

第11頁3.Themandidn'tknowwhatheshoulddonext.=Themandidn'tknow_______________next.

4.Hurryup,oryou'llmissthetrain.=Youwon'tcatchthetrain_____you________hurry.=Youwillmissthetrain________youhurry.whatto

do

if

don’t

unless第12頁

5.即使他是個孩子，但他知道很多．(一句多譯)1)___________________________________________________________________2)__________________________________Although/Thoughheisachild,heknowsalot.Childas(though)heis,heknowsalot.第13頁6.這本書是如此有趣，以致于我讀了一遍又一遍。1)________________________________2)________________________________3)_________________________________4)________________________________ThisbookwassointerestingthatIreaditagainandagain.

ThiswassuchaninterestingbookthatIreaditagainandagain.SointerestingwasthisbookthatIreaditagainandagain.ThiswassointerestingabookthatIreaditagainandagain.第14頁7.Theteachertookabookinhishandandcameintotheclassroom.=Theteachercameintotheclassroom,________________________．(用with復合結(jié)構(gòu))＝Theteachercameintotheclassroom,________________.（用獨立結(jié)構(gòu)）withabookinhishandbookinhand第15頁句子開頭改變變一變更好1.Theboywassurprisedatwhathehadseen,hestoodthereandcouldn’tsayaword.=__________whathehadseen,theboystoodthere,_______________aword.(形容詞做狀語)

Surprisedatunabletosay第16頁2.Ididn'trealizemymistakeuntilyoupointeditout.→=________notuntilyoupointeditout_____Irealizedmymistake.(強調(diào)句型）=_________youpointeditout______________mymistake.（倒裝句）NotuntildidIrealizeItwasthat第17頁3．Youaresuretosucceedonlybyworkinghard.=____________________________suretosucceed.(only

+狀語提前)4.Weallknowthatheishonest.=____________________________(It做形式主語)=

.(as引導非限制性定語從句)

Itisknowntousallthatheishonest.Asisknowntoall,heishonestOnlybyworkinghardareyou

第18頁5.Ipassedthephysicsexamwithyourhelp.1).Ipassedtheexam__________yourhelp2).Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexam__________ourhelp.

3).Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsyourexam_________help.

thankstobutforwithout第19頁

1.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefree.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbe_______________.2.Therailwayinourcountyisbeingbuilt.Therailwayinourcountyis_________________.

freeofcharge

underconstruction第20頁3.Wethinkthemeetingisveryimportant.=We______________thatthemeetingis_____________________.4.Theresultisnotsatisfyingatall.=Theresultis_______satisfying

holdtheview

ofgreatimportancefarfrom

第21頁Somepeopleclaimthatreadingselectivelyismorehelpful,sincetheybelievethatreadingwithoutchoiceisawasteoftime.However,someotherpeoplearguethatweshouldreadextensively,fortheyholdthe

viewthatinsucharapiddevelopingsociety,weneedtoenlargetherangeofourknowledgeinsteadofrestrictingittooneortwofields.Inmyopinion,bothsidesaregoingtoextremes.觀賞一下第22頁起承轉(zhuǎn)合好作文更流暢第23頁Task1在以下句子空白處填入恰當過渡用語,使行文連貫流暢。第24頁1)Idon’twanttogo.

,Ihavesomethingimportanttodo.2)I’dliketocome,

I’mafraidIcan’t.3)LucyistwelveandLilyiseleven;

,LucyisoneyearolderthanLily.4)Somepeoplewastefood

othersdon’thaveenough.Besides

butthereforewhile第25頁在下面短文空白處填入恰當過渡用語,使行文連貫流暢.Task2第26頁However,Inaword,Besidesthat,But

Alotofpeoplesmoke.Theysaythatsmokingcanbringthemhappiness.____Iamstronglyagainstsmoking.Maybesmokingcangivepeoplealittlepleasure._____,itbringsmuchmoreharmtopeople’shealth.Everyyearmanypeoplediefromsmoking-relateddiseases.__________,smokingisalsooneofthecausesofpollution._________,IamstronglyagainstsmokingandIcallonallthepeopletodosomethingaboutit.ButHoweverBesidesthatInaword第27頁在文中需要地方加上適當過渡用語，使行文連貫流暢。Task3第28頁May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.Shedidn’tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.ShesaidthatImadeitdirty.Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.Igotangry.Iquarreledwithher.Themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.Heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized（批評）thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.HoweverAtthebeginning,InawordsothatJustthen/JustatthatmomentAfterAtlast(Intheend),SoAndthen第29頁May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.__________，thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.______________，shedidn’tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.________，ShesaidthatImadeitdirty._____________，Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.___________________Iquarreledwithher.___________________,themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.______________________heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批評)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.HoweverAtthebeginningAndthenInawordIgotsoangrythatAssoonas/ThemomentJustatthatmoment第30頁

怎樣使書面表示愈加優(yōu)美流暢?1.學會不一樣方式表示2.注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)改變3.適當使用高級詞匯4.合理使用連接用語想一想:EleganceCoherence第31頁

Practicemakesperfect!第32頁

Makeourwritingbetter

Let’sbegin

第33頁Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peoplehere

③arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.

Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peoplehere③

liveabetterlifethanbefore.書面表示：Sample1Nowitistakingonanewlook.Sample2第34頁Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrenhadnomoney.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.

⑥

But

nowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧

whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifulone

inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨

What’smore,

theyenjoyfreeeducation.thenewlybuiltteachingbuildingThankyou.

第35頁

HomeworkNextperiodwe’lldiscusshowtoexpressyourownopinionsinyourcomposition.Ify