Unit3AhealthylifeWritingUnit3AhealthylifeWriting1Goalstoday:Trytowriteabeautifulpassage!Goalstoday:2Puttheminorder:__designingthehouse__decorating__materialcollecting__buildingBuildingahouse:1423Step1.Pre-writing__outline-drawingofanarticle__beautifying__materialcollecting__writing1234Writinganarticle:Writingarticlesisjustlikebuildinghouses.Puttheminorder:__designing3簡(jiǎn)單句：只含一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子。主語(yǔ)：n.謂語(yǔ)：v.賓語(yǔ)：n.并列句：主謂結(jié)構(gòu)＋主謂結(jié)構(gòu)（或更多主謂結(jié)構(gòu)…)并列并列（之間用and,but,or等詞連接）復(fù)合句：主謂結(jié)構(gòu)＋主謂結(jié)構(gòu)（或更多主謂結(jié)構(gòu)…)有主從之分從句做句子的某一（些）成分Sentencepatterns簡(jiǎn)單句：只含一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子。并列并列（之間用and,b41.Whatisyourlifestyle?Doyouhaveagoodhabit?Astome,Ithinkmylifestyleishealthy,Ialwaysgetupandgotobedinastrictregulation.Thankstomygoodhabit,Iamhealthyandenergetic.Therefore,mygoodhabitplaysaveryimportantpartinourdailylife.Asasayinggoes,healthisbetterthanwealth.Franklyspeaking,Ireallybenefitalotfrommygoodhabit.Step2Discussion

1.Whatisyourlifestyle?Do52.Whatdoyouthinkofotherpeople’shabitsaroundyou?Aretheyhealthyorunhealthy?Itisgenerallybelievedthatdifferentpeoplehavedifferenthabits.Somepeopleareaddictedtohabitslikedrinkingandsmoking,whileotherspayspecialattentiontohealthydietandnevertastethingslikealcoholandcigarettes.Ihavemanyfriendswhoareoverweight,besides,theyarenotwillingtodoexercise,soIthinktheirlifestyleandhabitarenotgoodenough.2.Whatdoyouthinkofother63.Doyouagreethatabadhabithassomethingtodowithdisease?Icouldn’tagreemore,abadbeginningmakesabadending.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereiscloserelationshipbetweenpersonalhabitsandpublichealth.Ononehand,goodhabitsserveasthenecessarybasisofpublichealth,thatistosay,withoutgoodhabits,publichealthcan’tbeassured.Ontheotherhand,catchingdiseaseisthenaturalresultbroughtbydirtyhabits,likeAIDS,SARS,H1N1fluandsoon.3.Doyouagreethatabadhab74.Asanoldsayinggoes,afallintoapit,againinyourwit.DowelearnalessonfromtheH1N1?Thesayingisabsolutelyright.Asweallknow,H1N1hasaffectedourlivesseriously,anditevenaffectsourrecoveringeconomy.However,suchdiseasesarenotrareinhumanhistory,soitisnotnecessarytofear;especiallywehavelearnedlessonsfromthebattlewithSARSseveralyearsago.Thepublicknewtheimportanceofchangingtheirunhealthyhabitsandcustomsanddevelopinggoodones.ThegovernmentlearnedhowtodealwithemergenciesfromtheSARSspread.Medicalstaffgotlotsofexperienceinanalyzing,savinglivesandstoppingtransmission.4.Asanoldsayinggoes,afa8【寫作內(nèi)容】

健康問(wèn)題越來(lái)越受到關(guān)注。在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)里如何保持健康呢？請(qǐng)看醫(yī)學(xué)專家的建議：研究顯示，每天鍛煉絕對(duì)是有必要的。鍛煉能增強(qiáng)心臟功能，減少心臟病的機(jī)會(huì)，并且能幫助降低血壓。這就是為何越來(lái)越多的人積極參與各種鍛煉。其次，已經(jīng)得到證明的是人們吃的東西影響健康。專家建議人們少吃點(diǎn)鹽、糖和肉，但是應(yīng)該多吃點(diǎn)新鮮蔬菜、水果和魚，因?yàn)檫@些富含對(duì)人體很重要的營(yíng)養(yǎng)素和維他命。再者，抽煙喝酒沒(méi)什么好處，改掉像抽煙喝酒這樣的壞習(xí)慣也是一個(gè)保持健康的好方法。Step4Writing【寫作內(nèi)容】Step4Writing9首句已經(jīng)給出：Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheirhealth.Buthowtokeephealthy？首句已經(jīng)給出：Nowadaysmoreandmore10【任務(wù)分析】此文是一篇有關(guān)如何保持健康的幾條建議，因此時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，而語(yǔ)態(tài)同時(shí)可運(yùn)用主動(dòng)和被動(dòng)兩種。還可以運(yùn)用it作形式主語(yǔ)的句型，如“It’s+adj/n.todo…”?！緦懽饕蟆恐荒苁褂?個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。【任務(wù)分析】此文是一篇有關(guān)如何保持健康的幾條建議，【寫作要求11【信息組合與翻譯】研究顯示，每天鍛煉絕對(duì)是有必要的。鍛煉能增強(qiáng)心臟功能，減少心臟病的機(jī)會(huì)，并且能幫助降低血壓。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.這就是為何越來(lái)越多的人積極參與各種鍛煉。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________First,Researchshowsthatitisabsolutelynecessarytotakesomeexerciseeverydaybecauseitcanstrengthentheheart,reducethechanceofheartattack,andhelplowerbloodpressure.That’swhymoreandmorepeoplearetakinganactivepartinvariouskindsofexercises.【信息組合與翻譯】研究顯示，每天鍛煉絕對(duì)是有必要的。鍛煉能增123.其次，已經(jīng)得到證明的是人們吃的東西影響健康。__________________________________________________________________________4.專家建議人們少吃點(diǎn)鹽、糖和肉，但是應(yīng)該多吃點(diǎn)新鮮蔬菜、水果和魚，因?yàn)檫@些富含對(duì)人體很重要的營(yíng)養(yǎng)素和維他命。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Besides,ithasbeenprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth.Asaresult,peopleareadvisedtoeatlesssalt,sugarandmeat,butmorefreshvegetables,fruits,andfish,astheyarerichinnutritionalelementsandvitamins,whichareimportanttothebody.3.其次，已經(jīng)得到證明的是人們吃的東西影響健康。_____135.再者，抽煙喝酒沒(méi)什么好處，改掉像抽煙喝酒這樣的壞習(xí)慣也是一個(gè)保持健康的好方法。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【句子銜接】

這篇文章是介紹如何保持健康，可以用asfor（至于……）、asisknowntoall、accordingtotheexperts、That’swhy…It’ssaidthat/It’s

good(necessary/agoodidea)todo…等引出話題。也可以用besides,what’smore,but,asa

result等表示遞進(jìn)，轉(zhuǎn)折或因果關(guān)系。What’smore,it’snogoodsmokinganddrinkingalcohol,sogettingridofbadhabitslikesmokinganddrinkingalcoholisalsoanimportantwaytokeephealthy.

5.再者，抽煙喝酒沒(méi)什么好處，改掉像抽煙喝酒這樣的壞習(xí)慣也14Whatmakesthepassagemorebeautiful?variety(句式多樣化)fullness（內(nèi)容充實(shí)完整）conciseness（簡(jiǎn)潔）elegance（優(yōu)雅）Step5.BeautifyingWhatmakesthepassagemorebe15【連句成篇】

First,accordingtoresearch,itisabsolutelynecessarytotakesomeexerciseeverydaybecauseitcanstrengthentheheart,reducethechanceofheartattack,andhelplowerbloodpressure.That’swhymoreandmorepeoplearebecomingactiveinvariouskindsofexercises.Besides,ithasbeenprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth.Asaresult,people

areadvisedtoeat【連句成篇】First,accordingto16lesssalt,

sugarandmeat,butmorefreshvegetables,fruits,andfish,astheyarerichinnutritionalelementsandvitamins,whichareimportanttothebody.What’smore,it’snogoodsmokinganddrinkingalcohol,sogettingridofbadhabitslikesmokinganddrinkingalcoholisalsoanimportantwaytokeephealthy.lesssalt,sugarandmeat,but17HomeworkImproveyourwritingafterclassHomeworkImproveyourwritinga189、春去春又回，新桃換舊符。在那桃花盛開的地方，在這醉人芬芳的季節(jié)，愿你生活像春天一樣陽(yáng)光，心情像桃花一樣美麗，日子像桃子一樣甜蜜。2022/11/72022/11/7Monday,November7,202210、人的志向通常和他們的能力成正比例。2022/11/72022/11/72022/11/711/7/20222:14:13AM11、夫?qū)W須志也，才須學(xué)也，非學(xué)無(wú)以廣才，非志無(wú)以成學(xué)。2022/11/72022/11/72022/11/7Nov-2207-Nov-2212、越是無(wú)能的人，越喜歡挑剔別人的錯(cuò)兒。2022/11/72022/11/72022/11/7Monday,November7,202213、志不立，天下無(wú)可成之事。2022/11/72022/11/72022/11/72022/11/711/7/202214、ThankyouverymuchfortakingmewithyouonthatsplendidoutingtoLondon.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadseentheToweroranyoftheotherfamoussights.IfI'dgonealone,Icouldn'thaveseennearlyasmuch,becauseIwouldn'thaveknownmywayabout.。07十一月20222022/11/72022/11/72022/11/715、會(huì)當(dāng)凌絕頂，一覽眾山小。十一月222022/11/72022/11/72022/11/711/7/202216、如果一個(gè)人不知道他要駛向哪頭，那么任何風(fēng)都不是順風(fēng)。2022/11/72022/11/707November202217、一個(gè)人如果不到最高峰，他就沒(méi)有片刻的安寧，他也就不會(huì)感到生命的恬靜和光榮。2022/11/72022/11/72022/11/72022/11/7謝謝觀看THEEND9、春去春又回，新桃換舊符。在那桃花盛開的地方，在這醉人芬芳19Unit3AhealthylifeWritingUnit3AhealthylifeWriting20Goalstoday:Trytowriteabeautifulpassage!Goalstoday:21Puttheminorder:__designingthehouse__decorating__materialcollecting__buildingBuildingahouse:1423Step1.Pre-writing__outline-drawingofanarticle__beautifying__materialcollecting__writing1234Writinganarticle:Writingarticlesisjustlikebuildinghouses.Puttheminorder:__designing22簡(jiǎn)單句：只含一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子。主語(yǔ)：n.謂語(yǔ)：v.賓語(yǔ)：n.并列句：主謂結(jié)構(gòu)＋主謂結(jié)構(gòu)（或更多主謂結(jié)構(gòu)…)并列并列（之間用and,but,or等詞連接）復(fù)合句：主謂結(jié)構(gòu)＋主謂結(jié)構(gòu)（或更多主謂結(jié)構(gòu)…)有主從之分從句做句子的某一（些）成分Sentencepatterns簡(jiǎn)單句：只含一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子。并列并列（之間用and,b231.Whatisyourlifestyle?Doyouhaveagoodhabit?Astome,Ithinkmylifestyleishealthy,Ialwaysgetupandgotobedinastrictregulation.Thankstomygoodhabit,Iamhealthyandenergetic.Therefore,mygoodhabitplaysaveryimportantpartinourdailylife.Asasayinggoes,healthisbetterthanwealth.Franklyspeaking,Ireallybenefitalotfrommygoodhabit.Step2Discussion

1.Whatisyourlifestyle?Do242.Whatdoyouthinkofotherpeople’shabitsaroundyou?Aretheyhealthyorunhealthy?Itisgenerallybelievedthatdifferentpeoplehavedifferenthabits.Somepeopleareaddictedtohabitslikedrinkingandsmoking,whileotherspayspecialattentiontohealthydietandnevertastethingslikealcoholandcigarettes.Ihavemanyfriendswhoareoverweight,besides,theyarenotwillingtodoexercise,soIthinktheirlifestyleandhabitarenotgoodenough.2.Whatdoyouthinkofother253.Doyouagreethatabadhabithassomethingtodowithdisease?Icouldn’tagreemore,abadbeginningmakesabadending.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereiscloserelationshipbetweenpersonalhabitsandpublichealth.Ononehand,goodhabitsserveasthenecessarybasisofpublichealth,thatistosay,withoutgoodhabits,publichealthcan’tbeassured.Ontheotherhand,catchingdiseaseisthenaturalresultbroughtbydirtyhabits,likeAIDS,SARS,H1N1fluandsoon.3.Doyouagreethatabadhab264.Asanoldsayinggoes,afallintoapit,againinyourwit.DowelearnalessonfromtheH1N1?Thesayingisabsolutelyright.Asweallknow,H1N1hasaffectedourlivesseriously,anditevenaffectsourrecoveringeconomy.However,suchdiseasesarenotrareinhumanhistory,soitisnotnecessarytofear;especiallywehavelearnedlessonsfromthebattlewithSARSseveralyearsago.Thepublicknewtheimportanceofchangingtheirunhealthyhabitsandcustomsanddevelopinggoodones.ThegovernmentlearnedhowtodealwithemergenciesfromtheSARSspread.Medicalstaffgotlotsofexperienceinanalyzing,savinglivesandstoppingtransmission.4.Asanoldsayinggoes,afa27【寫作內(nèi)容】

健康問(wèn)題越來(lái)越受到關(guān)注。在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)里如何保持健康呢？請(qǐng)看醫(yī)學(xué)專家的建議：研究顯示，每天鍛煉絕對(duì)是有必要的。鍛煉能增強(qiáng)心臟功能，減少心臟病的機(jī)會(huì)，并且能幫助降低血壓。這就是為何越來(lái)越多的人積極參與各種鍛煉。其次，已經(jīng)得到證明的是人們吃的東西影響健康。專家建議人們少吃點(diǎn)鹽、糖和肉，但是應(yīng)該多吃點(diǎn)新鮮蔬菜、水果和魚，因?yàn)檫@些富含對(duì)人體很重要的營(yíng)養(yǎng)素和維他命。再者，抽煙喝酒沒(méi)什么好處，改掉像抽煙喝酒這樣的壞習(xí)慣也是一個(gè)保持健康的好方法。Step4Writing【寫作內(nèi)容】Step4Writing28首句已經(jīng)給出：Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheirhealth.Buthowtokeephealthy？首句已經(jīng)給出：Nowadaysmoreandmore29【任務(wù)分析】此文是一篇有關(guān)如何保持健康的幾條建議，因此時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，而語(yǔ)態(tài)同時(shí)可運(yùn)用主動(dòng)和被動(dòng)兩種。還可以運(yùn)用it作形式主語(yǔ)的句型，如“It’s+adj/n.todo…”?！緦懽饕蟆恐荒苁褂?個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫?！救蝿?wù)分析】此文是一篇有關(guān)如何保持健康的幾條建議，【寫作要求30【信息組合與翻譯】研究顯示，每天鍛煉絕對(duì)是有必要的。鍛煉能增強(qiáng)心臟功能，減少心臟病的機(jī)會(huì)，并且能幫助降低血壓。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.這就是為何越來(lái)越多的人積極參與各種鍛煉。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________First,Researchshowsthatitisabsolutelynecessarytotakesomeexerciseeverydaybecauseitcanstrengthentheheart,reducethechanceofheartattack,andhelplowerbloodpressure.That’swhymoreandmorepeoplearetakinganactivepartinvariouskindsofexercises.【信息組合與翻譯】研究顯示，每天鍛煉絕對(duì)是有必要的。鍛煉能增313.其次，已經(jīng)得到證明的是人們吃的東西影響健康。__________________________________________________________________________4.專家建議人們少吃點(diǎn)鹽、糖和肉，但是應(yīng)該多吃點(diǎn)新鮮蔬菜、水果和魚，因?yàn)檫@些富含對(duì)人體很重要的營(yíng)養(yǎng)素和維他命。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Besides,ithasbeenprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth.Asaresult,peopleareadvisedtoeatlesssalt,sugarandmeat,butmorefreshvegetables,fruits,andfish,astheyarerichinnutritionalelementsandvitamins,whichareimportanttothebody.3.其次，已經(jīng)得到證明的是人們吃的東西影響健康。_____325.再者，抽煙喝酒沒(méi)什么好處，改掉像抽煙喝酒這樣的壞習(xí)慣也是一個(gè)保持健康的好方法。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【句子銜接】

這篇文章是介紹如何保持健康，可以用asfor（至于……）、asisknowntoall、accordingtotheexperts、That’swhy…It’ssaidthat/It’s

good(necessary/agoodidea)todo…等引出話題。也可以用besides,what’smore,but,asa

result等表示遞進(jìn)，轉(zhuǎn)折或因果關(guān)系。What’smore,it’snogoodsmokinganddrinkingalcohol,sogettingridofbadhabitslikesmokinganddrinkingalcoholisalsoanimportantwaytokeephealthy.

5.再者，抽煙喝酒沒(méi)什么好處，改掉像抽煙喝酒這樣的壞習(xí)慣也33Whatmakesthepassagemorebeautiful?variety(句式多樣化)fullness（內(nèi)容充實(shí)完整）conciseness（簡(jiǎn)潔）elegance（優(yōu)雅）Step5.BeautifyingWhatmakesthepassagemorebe34【連句成篇】

First,accordingtoresearch,itisabsolutelynecessarytotakesomeexerciseeverydaybecauseitcanstrengthentheheart,reducethechanceofheartattack,andhelplowerbloodpressure.That’swhymoreandmorepeoplearebecomingactiveinvariouskindsofexercises.Besides,ithasbeenprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth.Asaresult,people

areadvisedtoeat