讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。KellywasdrivingthroughruralAlabamawithherfive-year-old

son,RockyLyons.Hewasasleeponthefrontseatoftheirpickup

truck,withhisfeetrestingonherlap.AsKellydrovecarefullydownthewindingtwo-lanecountry

road,sheturnedontoanarrowbridge.Asshedid,thetruckhitalargeholeandslidofftheroad,andtherightfrontwheelgotstuckinadeeptrack.Fearingthetruckwouldtipover,sheattemptedtojerk(急拉)itbackupontotheroadbypressinghardonthegaspedal（腳踏板）andspinning（旋轉(zhuǎn)）thesteeringwheel（方向盤）totheleft.ButRocky'sfootgotcaughtbetweenherlegandthesteeringwheelandshelostcontrolofthepickuptruck.Thetruckflippedoverandoverdowna20-footnarrowvalley.Whenithitbottom,Rockywokeup."What

happened,Mama?"heasked."Ourwheelsarepointingtowardthesky.”Kellywasblindedbyblood.Thegearshift(變速桿)hadjammedintoher

face,ripping（撕裂）itopenfrom

lip

toforehead.Hergums（牙床）weretornout,hercheekspulverized(粉狀的),hershoulderscrushed（壓碎）.Withonebrokenrib（肋骨）stickingoutofherbody,shewaspinnedagainstthecrusheddoor.“I'llgetyouout,Mama,”announcedRocky,whohadmiraculouslyescaped

injury.HecrawledoutfromunderKelly,slidthroughtheopenwindowandtriedtopullhismotherout.Butshedidn'tmove.“Justletmesleep,”beggedKelly,whowasdriftinginandoutofconsciousness.“No,Mama,”Rocky

insisted.“Youcan'tgotosleep.”Rockywriggledbackintothetruckand

managed

to

pushKellyoutofthewreckage.Hethentoldherhe'dclimbuptotheroadandstopacartoget

help.Fearingthatnoonewouldbeabletoseeherlittleboyinthedark,Kellyrefusedtolethimgoalone.Insteadtheyslowlycreptuptheembankment(路堤),withRockyusinghisthin40-poundframetopushhis104-poundmother.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

Paragraph1:Theycrawledinchesatatime._______________Paragraph2:Ittook8hoursand344stitches(縫針)torebuildKelly’sface._______________試題·分析█上文情節(jié)分析●人物：Kelly：媽媽Rocky：兒子，5歲●主要情節(jié)：Kelly開著一輛小貨車經(jīng)過Alabama鄉(xiāng)下一條只有兩個車道彎彎曲曲的山路時發(fā)生了車禍，車子滾到很深的山谷谷底，Kelly嚴(yán)重受傷，臉被變速桿劃破，肩膀粉碎性骨折，一根肋骨斷了伸出體外。幸運的是，兒子Rocky并無大礙。因為是山路，經(jīng)過車輛不多，通過母子倆的自救，不知道花了多少時間，終于爬到了路邊，等待過路人（車）的救援。●主題：人與人的關(guān)系：自救與他救，突出媽媽的堅持和兒子的幫助鼓勵。█下文情節(jié)安排●兩段開頭：段1：Theycrawledinchesatatime....段2：Ittook8hoursand344stitches(縫針)torebuildKelly'sface....●兩段情節(jié)安排：段1：①Kelly受傷狀況（行為+心理）②她和兒子進行自救的情況③獲得好心人的幫助，被送往醫(yī)院段2：①媽媽Kelly被送出手術(shù)室時，兒子Rocky的所見②多年后，人們問起“臉面”的事情，媽媽的反應(yīng)③突出對兒子Rocky所作所為的肯定范文1Paragraph1:Theycrawledinchesatatime.Soseriouswasthe

injury

thattheseverepainbroughtKellytotheedgeofgivingup.Butherfive-year-old

son,Rocky,gaveherthecouragetoliveherself.Shegatheredallherstrength,draggingherselftowardsthe

road.Rockypushedagainsther,singingsongstoshademumcomfortandencouragement.Itseemedyearsbeforetheyreachedtheembankment,waitingforaids.Luckyenough,a

truck

passingbystopped.Knowingwhathad

happened,withoutdelay,thedriversentthemtoanearbyhospital.(83words)Paragraph2:Ittook8hoursand344stitches（縫針）torebuildKelly'sface.Whenshewassentoutoftheoperationroom,whatRockysawwasacompletelystrangemum---apersonwrappedwithbandageswaslyinginthebed.However,whatmadeRockyrelievedwasthathismothermanagedto

survive.Yearslater,whensomeoneaskedKellyaboutwhathadhappenedtoher

face

and

lips,shewasalwaysfeelingproudofthe

help

andencouragementhersonprovided.Indeed,itwasRocky’sinsisting

andinspiringthatleftherthechanceofsurvivalandrecovery.(83words)范文2Paragraph1：Theycrawledinchesatatime.

ThepainwassogreatthatKellywantedtogiveup,butRockywouldn'tlether.Tourgehismotheron,Rockytoldhertothinkabouthow,once,sheencouragedhimtobebraverwhenheencountereddifficulties.Toremindhermom,Rockyevenrepeatedlyricsofasongfromhermom,“Iknowyoucan.”Whentheyfinallyreachedthe

road,Rockywasabletoseehismother'storn

face

clearly.Hebrokeintotearsatonce.Luckily,a

truck

cametowardsthem.“Stop!Pleasestop!”Wavinghisarmsandpleading,Rockyhailedthetruck.“Getmymamatoahospital,”heimploredthedriver,whorushedthemtothenearesthospital.(114words)Paragraph2:Ittook8hoursand344stitches(縫針)torebuildKelly'sface.

Shelookedquitedifferenttoday.Sheusedtohaveastraightlongnose,thinlipsandhighcheekbones;nowshegotapugnose,flatcheeksandmuchbigger

lips

instead.Shealsohadafewothervisiblescars.Butwhatever,Kellyrecoveredfromher

injuries

andshecouldn'tbeprouderofher

son,ormoregrateful,“Ifit