專題專題十一應(yīng)用文（建議信、申請(qǐng)信與告知信）XXXXXXXXX【范文解析】你的英國(guó)朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來(lái)中國(guó)旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長(zhǎng)江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來(lái)信希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的線路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作思維模板Step1“五定”審題定體裁半開放式應(yīng)用文(建議信)定話題建議旅游路線定人稱第一、二人稱為主定時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)定結(jié)構(gòu)開頭：建議的路線；主體：理由；結(jié)尾：祝愿Step2斟詞酌句◆醒目詞匯1.文明_________2.建議_________3.很好了解_________4.風(fēng)景_________5.總之_________6.相信_(tái)________◆句式升級(jí)1.長(zhǎng)江是世界第三大河流，中國(guó)第一大河流，中華民族的母親河。慣用表達(dá)：YangtzeRiver,themotherriverofChinesecivilization,isthelongestriverinchinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworld.高級(jí)表達(dá)：(用主語(yǔ)從句和notonly...butalso...句型改寫上面的句子)____________________________________________________2.我強(qiáng)烈建議你選這一條。從中你可以更好地了解中國(guó)和中國(guó)的歷史。慣用表達(dá)：Istronglyadviseyoutochoosethisone.Fromit,youcanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.高級(jí)表達(dá)：(用定語(yǔ)從句改寫上面的句子)____________________________________________________Step3完美成篇：認(rèn)真工整，謄寫在卷DearJim,I’mpleasedtohearthatyouaregoingtoChinaforatrip.Inyourletter,youaskedformysuggestionsonhowtochooseabetteronefromthetworoutes“TriptotheYangtzeRiver”and“TriptoMountTai”,asforwhich,Ihavethefollowingopinions.WhatiswellknowntousisthatYangtzeRiverisnotonlythelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworldbutalsothemotherriverofChinesecivilization.Therefore,Istronglyrecommendthatyouchoosethisone,fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.Inaddition,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,whichcanmakeyouhaveanunforgettablemomentafteryourvisit.Thus,I’msureyouareeagertocomeheretomakeasecondtrip.Inconclusion,IamconvincedthatthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice.WishyouwouldenjoyyourselfinChina.Yours,LiHua【答案】醒目詞匯：1.civilization2.recommend3.haveabetterunderstandingof4.scenery5.inconclusion6.beconvincedthat句式升級(jí)：1.WhatiswellknowntousisthatYangtzeRiverisnotonlythelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworldbutalsothemotherriverofChinesecivilization.2.Istronglyrecommendthatyouchoosethisone,fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.【寫作模板】?建議信模板與套用句式Dear_________,I’msorry/gladtohearthatyou_________(事由).Inyourletter,yousaidthat_________(問(wèn)題信息).Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,_________because_________.Secondly,youshould_________,for_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter_________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou_________.What’smore,_________.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.Bestwishes.Yourstruly,LiHua?申請(qǐng)信模板與套用句式DearSir/Madam,IamLiHua,anoutgoingboy_________.I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositionthatyouareadvertising.Foronething,I_________(優(yōu)勢(shì)一).Foranother,I_________(優(yōu)勢(shì)二).Myabilityto_________(優(yōu)勢(shì)三)isoutofquestion.IfI’mluckyenoughtohavetheopportunitytoworkinyour_________(對(duì)方單位),Iwould_________(表達(dá)決心).Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua?告知信模板與套用句式Dear_________,Gladthatyou’veheardofthegoodnewsaboutthecoming_________.I’mwritingtoinformyouofthedetails.Asscheduled,the_________(活動(dòng)或項(xiàng)目)willtakeplaceat_________(地點(diǎn))on_________(時(shí)間).Youareexpectedto_________(具體要求或期望).Besides,attentionsshouldbepaidto_________.Hopefullyyouwillbewellpreparedforitandenjoyyourself/haveagoodtime.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetoaskme.Yourssincerely,LiHua【模擬演練】1假設(shè)你是高中生李華，欲給你在英國(guó)的朋友Peter提如何學(xué)習(xí)中文的建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫一封建議信。信件包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.寫信目的；2.給出建議（至少兩條）；3.表示祝愿?？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。詞數(shù)：100-120左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPeter,LearningyouhaveapassionforChineselearning,I’mwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtopromoteyourproficiencyinChinese.Firstly,Chineseclassicalliteratureworksarehighlyrecommended,throughwhichyouwillundoubtedlyacquireaglimpseof/getadeeperinsightintoChinesetraditionsandcultures.Besides,TVprogramsandnewspaperconcerningChinaarealsoadvisable,helpingyouhaveabetterunderstandingofChina’strueimage.Lastly,engagingwithyourChinesefriendsalwaysservesthepurposetoenhanceyourfluencyinoralChinese.SincerelyhopemysuggestionsareworkabletoyouandIwishyoucouldmakegreatprogress.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給在英國(guó)的朋友Peter提如何學(xué)習(xí)中文的建議。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.寫信目的；2.給出建議（至少兩條）；3.表示祝愿。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）offeryousomepracticalsuggestions;aglimpseof;haveabetterunderstandingof;toenhanceyourfluencyinoralChinese;makegreatprogress;haveapassionfor第三步：連詞成句1.LearningyouhaveapassionforChineselearning,I’mwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtopromoteyourproficiencyinChinese.2.Firstly,Chineseclassicalliteratureworksarehighlyrecommended,throughwhichyouwillundoubtedlyacquireaglimpseof/getadeeperinsightintoChinesetraditionsandcultures.3.Besides,TVprogramsandnewspaperconcerningChinaarealsoadvisable,helpingyouhaveabetterunderstandingofChina’strueimage.4.Lastly,engagingwithyourChinesefriendsalwaysservesthepurposetoenhanceyourfluencyinoralChinese.5.SincerelyhopemysuggestionsareworkabletoyouandIwishyoucouldmakegreatprogress.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstly,Besides,Lastly連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】[高分句型1]LearningyouhaveapassionforChineselearning,I’mwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtopromoteyourproficiencyinChinese.（分詞作狀語(yǔ)）[高分句型2]Firstly,Chineseclassicalliteratureworksarehighlyrecommended,throughwhichyouwillundoubtedlyacquireaglimpseof/getadeeperinsightintoChinesetraditionsandcultures.（介詞+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型3]SincerelyhopemysuggestionsareworkabletoyouandIwishyoucouldmakegreatprogress.（and連接的并列句）2假定你是李華，新落成的外文書店為增加訪客量現(xiàn)向市民征求建議，請(qǐng)給書店經(jīng)理Mr.Bowie寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1.擁有寬敞的空間以提供良好的閱讀體驗(yàn)；2.提供公益講座（publiclecture）等服務(wù)；3.其他建議（至少一條）。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMr.Bowie,Iknowthatnew-builtForeignLanguageBookstoresarenowseekingadvicefromthepublictoincreasethenumberofvisitors.Asabookfan,Iwouldliketooffersomeadvice.First,thebookstoreshouldhaveenoughspacetoprovidegoodreadingexperienceforourreaders.Second,publiclecturesshouldbeincludedintheactivitiestoraisethereaders’interest.Third,thebookstorecandonatesomebookstothepoorstudentssoastoattractthemtothebookstore.Hopefully,thebookstorewillbetheonewherewecanenrichourknowledgeandrelax.Yours,LiHua【解析】本題考查的作文類型是建議信。題目要求假定你是李華，新落成的外文書店為增加訪客量現(xiàn)向市民征求建議，請(qǐng)給書店經(jīng)理Mr．Bowie寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1.擁有寬敞的空間以提供良好的閱讀體驗(yàn)；2.提供公益講座（publiclecture）等服務(wù)；3.其他建議（至少一條）。解析可知，應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫作。要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，要求考生根據(jù)提綱自己發(fā)揮拓展，考生要先想好寫哪幾點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。[高分句型1]Ithinkthatitisnecessarytooffergoodreadingexperiencetoourreaders,whichmakesthemcomfortable.我認(rèn)為有必要為我們的讀者提供良好的閱讀體驗(yàn)，這會(huì)他們感到舒服。that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和it作形式主語(yǔ)。[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaymentionedabovethebookstorewillbetheplacewherewecanenrichourknowledgeandrelaxourselves.只有這樣，書店才是我們豐富知識(shí)、放松身心的地方。部分倒裝和where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。3假如你叫李華，今年暑假一家外企要招聘兼職英語(yǔ)翻譯，你想申請(qǐng)這個(gè)職位。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一封英文申請(qǐng)信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.英語(yǔ)水平；2.工作經(jīng)歷；3.與人交往的能力；注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：申請(qǐng)applyfor申請(qǐng)書applicationDearSirorMadam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSirormadam,Iknowthatyourcompanyislookingforapart-timeEnglishtranslatorinthesummervacation.I’dliketoapplyforthejob.First,havinglearnedEnglishforsevenyearsorso,Iamabletoexpressmyselffreely.Second,mypreviousworkingexperienceasatranslatormakesmeconvincedthatIcanwellmanagethejobthistime.What’smore,asanoutgoingperson,Iamalwaysreadytomakefriendswithmanykindsofpeoplefromallwalksoflife.IameagerforthejobtobeofferedbyyourcompanyandIamsurethatIwillsatisfyallyourrequirements.ThanksforyourreadingmyapplicationandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封申請(qǐng)信。首先，本文要求寫一封申請(qǐng)信，因此時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，人稱應(yīng)以第一人稱為主；其次，要點(diǎn)主要包括介紹自己的英語(yǔ)水平、談?wù)劰ぷ鹘?jīng)歷以及本人的交際能力，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意適當(dāng)?shù)赝卣?，盡量使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句式；最后，要注意語(yǔ)句的連貫。【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文較好地完成了寫作任務(wù)，段落清晰、要點(diǎn)全面、語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。此外文章亮點(diǎn)紛呈、可讀性強(qiáng)，如：1.文中使用了一些高級(jí)詞匯express，convinced，applyfor，allwalksoflife，satisfyallyourrequirements，lookforwardto，application等；2.文中使用了動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)havinglearnedEnglishforsevenyearsorso，動(dòng)詞不定式短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)tobeofferedbyyourcompany等；3.文中使用了高級(jí)句式Iamsurethat等；4.文中恰到好處地使用了過(guò)渡詞，使得文章語(yǔ)句跡貫，如first，second，what’smore等。4假如你是李華，南昌二中的一名學(xué)生，得知可向國(guó)際兒童基金會(huì)（Foundation）申請(qǐng)一個(gè)經(jīng)費(fèi)為2000元的扶貧項(xiàng)目（poverty-reliefprogram），幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。你感興趣，準(zhǔn)備申請(qǐng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇文章。1）個(gè)人的基本情況和申請(qǐng)理由；2）你對(duì)申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目的具體設(shè)想和項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)的使用計(jì)劃；3）你的愿望。聯(lián)系方式：2016hope@注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)尾語(yǔ)已為你寫好。DearSirorMadam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua,astudentcurrentlystudyingatNanchangNo.2MiddleSchool.Iamwritingtoapplyforthe2000yuan’sworthoffundaimedathelpingthosestudentswhoarefinanciallydisadvantaged.Beingraisedinfamiliesthatdon’thavetoworryaboutputtingfoodonthetableneednotmeanignoringourlessfortunatepeers.Onthisaccount,wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldsponsorourpoverty-reliefendeavor.Thefollowingishowwewouldgoaboutusingthemoney.Wewouldspend1500yuanpurchasingsomestationeryfortheneedystudentsinapoverty-strickenarea.Theremainderofthefundwouldbeusedtoinviteamotivationalspeakerwhowastotalkabouthowtoliftoneselfoutofpovertybymakingrightacademicandprofessionaldecisions.Oureffortsmightmakeadifferenceinthelivesofsomeyoungpeople,butwhoknowswhatbutterflyeffectstheseyoungmindsmayhaveontomorrow'sworld?Wewouldbegratefulifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Youcouldcontactmeat2016hope@.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】該文體屬于書信作文。首先明確的是一封申請(qǐng)信，所以在措辭時(shí)應(yīng)該保持尊敬，謙和地語(yǔ)氣，切記語(yǔ)氣生硬，這時(shí)在商務(wù)交流時(shí)需切記的一點(diǎn)。其次囊括文本所要求的三個(gè)方面，但不代表不可以發(fā)揮自己的想法，總歸來(lái)看文章還是有自己的發(fā)揮之處：經(jīng)費(fèi)的具體設(shè)想和使用方法，本方面需要考生能夠結(jié)合實(shí)際情況給出具體的可行操作方案，考查學(xué)生的思辨能力和跨文化交際能力。在過(guò)渡時(shí)，用詞能夠銜接自然。最后要注明自己的聯(lián)系方式已確保收到回信。【范文亮點(diǎn)】astudentcurrentlystudyingatNanchangNo.2MiddleSchool使用了同位語(yǔ)從句，studentswhoarefinanciallydisadvantaged.使用了定語(yǔ)從句等，這些都豐富了整篇的句式多樣化；applyfor，Onthisaccount，makeadifference等使用了固定搭配短語(yǔ)。Wewouldspend1500yuanpurchasingsomestationeryfortheneedystudentsinapoverty-strickenarea.這里明確點(diǎn)出了基金的具體用途，避免了空話現(xiàn)象。5假定你是李華，由于新冠病毒（COVID-19）爆發(fā)，你校決定推遲開學(xué)，請(qǐng)你給回國(guó)度假的留學(xué)生Jack寫封郵件，告知此事。內(nèi)容包括：1.告知推遲開學(xué)；2.介紹疫情；3.開學(xué)日期另行通知。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJack,Iamsosorrytoinformyouthatwe’llhavetopostponethestartofschoolthistermduetotheoutbreakofCOVID-19duringthiswintervacation.YoumusthaveknownthatCOVID-19isspreadingallovertheworld,andthatthesituationisverybad.Manypeoplehavebeeninfectedanddied.Itisgenerallyacceptedthatthebestwaytoavoidbeinginfectedisnottogatherandstayathome.Soinordertodefeatthisinfectiousdisease,we’vedecidedtodelaythestartofschool.Theschoolwillnotbeginuntiltheoutbreakisover.Thespecifictimewillbeannouncedlater.Yours,LiHua【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生給留學(xué)生Jack寫信，告知他因?yàn)橐咔楸l(fā)學(xué)校推遲開學(xué)的決定，以及后續(xù)安排。并給他介紹疫情。體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總要求：1.告知推遲開學(xué)；2.介紹疫情；3.開學(xué)日期另行通知。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）informsb.ofsth./postpone/outbreak/dueto/spread/infect/avoiddoingsth./gather/decidetodosth./delaytodosth.第三步：連詞成句1.IamsosorrytoinformyouthatduetotheoutbreakofCOVID-19duringthiswintervacationthestartofthistermhastobepostponed.2.YoumusthaveknownthatCOVID-19isspreadingallovertheworld,andthatthesituationisverybad.3.Unfortunately,manypeoplehavebeeninfectedanddied.4.Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatthebestwaytoavoidbeinginfectedisnotgatheringbutstayingathome.5.Soinordertodefeatthisinfectiousdisease,we'vedecidedtodelaythestartofschool.6.Theschoolwillnotbeginuntiltheoutbreakisover.7.Thespecifictimewillbeannouncedonlinelater.第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…狀語(yǔ)從句連詞：because/if/though/although…定語(yǔ)從句連詞：which/that/when/where…第五步：修改潤(rùn)色（加入高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)）【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，例如：Iamsosorrytoinformyouthatwe'llhavetopostponethestartofschoolthistermduetotheoutbreakofCOVID-19duringthiswintervacation.中that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句；Itisgenerallyacceptedthatthebestwaytoavoidbeinginfectedisnottogatherandstayathome.中that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句。6假定你是李華，為方便學(xué)生為偏遠(yuǎn)山區(qū)學(xué)校捐贈(zèng)舊書、雜志等，校學(xué)生會(huì)決定設(shè)置舊書回收角。請(qǐng)你寫一封信給生病休假的留學(xué)生Tom告知此事，內(nèi)容包