學(xué)會感恩從我做起中考英語熱點時文書面表達(dá)專項訓(xùn)練【熱點材料】在人生的成長中，我們或許要懂得內(nèi)心強(qiáng)大的一個心法，那就是感恩的力量。感恩實際上是生命中最大的正能量。一個懂得感恩的人，一定內(nèi)心會變得越來越強(qiáng)大，因為感恩會帶給我們生命充足的發(fā)現(xiàn)，也會重塑我們的資源，讓我們擁抱生活的美好。感恩能夠給予我們生命最大的滋養(yǎng)。一個善于感恩的人，會看到內(nèi)在生命的富足。一個喜樂的人會感謝生命中所有經(jīng)歷的一切。感恩會讓我們從生命的更高系統(tǒng)來看待自我的人生，當(dāng)我們明白生命就是一場偉大的奇跡，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)活著每天都是最美好的，無論我們經(jīng)歷什么，我們都需要體會到生命的美好。感恩能夠打破語言的狹隘，放下對自我的批判，而是全然看到道在我們生命中的運行，體會到生老病死這一切的發(fā)生，覺悟到生命的高貴，更深刻體會到人類生生不息的創(chuàng)造力?！镜湫头段摹考偃缒闶抢钊A，你們學(xué)校就“感恩父母，從我做起”這一話題展開討論。請你用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)劄槭裁匆卸鞲改?，你和父母之間發(fā)生的最難忘的事以及你的感受。提示詞語：think，bringup,

preparefor，encourage，confident，happy,

proud提示問題：·Whydoyouwanttothankyourparents?·Whatwasthemostunforgettableexperiencebetweenyouandyourparents?·Howdoyoufeel?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ithinkit’simportantforustothankourparents.SinceIwasborn,myparentshavegivenmealltheirloveandcare,butneverexpectanythinginreturn.Theyhavebroughtmeupandtakengoodcareofmecarefullyandpatiently.Lastyear,Iwaschosentotakepartinaspeechcompetition.Ifeltverynervous.Myparentstriedhardtohelpmeprepareforit.Theyencouragedmetobeconfidentandtoldmenottocaremuchabouttheresult.Theysaidtheprocessoflearningwasmoremeaningful.Withtheirhelp,Ididverywellthattime.Ifelthappyandproud.I’dliketosay“Thanksalot!You’regreat!Iwillloveyouforever!”tomumanddad.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要圍繞“感恩父母，從我做起”展開，并根據(jù)題干中給出的三個問題進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主。第一段講述為什么要感恩父母；第二段講述自己和父母之間發(fā)生的最難忘的事情；第三段講述自己的感受。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。【拓展訓(xùn)練】A由賈玲導(dǎo)演及主演的電影《你好，李煥英》是一部充滿溫情的電影，激發(fā)了觀影者對身邊人感情的共鳴。你觀影之后感觸頗多，發(fā)現(xiàn)許多感恩的人和事，要就此寫一份日志。感恩父母悉心照顧、不辭辛勞……感恩老師耐心教導(dǎo)、善于激勵……感恩同學(xué)合作分享、互相幫助、共同進(jìn)步感想和打算我很幸運……（請結(jié)合自身實際，但不得提及自己的姓名相關(guān)信息）要求：1.上面的提示供參考，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要使語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚；2.段落開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；要求寫100個詞左右。TodayIwatchedafilmcalledHi,Mom.IttellsastoryofJiaandhermothershowingherlongingandregretatfailingtoseehermotherbeforeshedied.Iwastouchedbyitsrawemotion.Ihavebecomea15-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent.Duringthepastfewyears,IhavegainedalotandIdon’twanttobeapersonfullofregretlikeJiainthefilm.Sofirst,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TodayIwatchedafilmcalledHi,Mom.IttellsastoryofJiaandhermothershowingherlongingandregretatfailingtoseehermotherbeforeshedied.Iwastouchedbyitsrawemotion.Ihavebecomea15-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent.Duringthepastfewyears,IhavegainedalotandIdon’twanttobeapersonfullofregretlikeJiainthefilm.Sofirst,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.Theytakecareofmewithoutanycomplaint.Theyworkhardtosupportthewholefamily.Theyarealwaystryingtheirbesttomakemeliveabetterlife.Second,I’mthankfultoallmyteachersfortheirgreathelpandsupport.Theyarepatientenoughtospendlotsoftimeexplainingproblemstome.Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.It’sselflessofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.Finally,Ialsofeelverygratefultomyclassmates.Weworktogetherandsharethingswitheachother.Weoftenhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Asaresult,wehavemadegreatprogress.IthinkIamluckytohavesomuchloveandcare.Iwillneverforgetthesehappydaystogether.Iamgoingtodowellinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇日志，屬于材料作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點逐點闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，首先表達(dá)要感謝父母，接著按照要點闡述父母如何照顧和關(guān)愛我們；其次表達(dá)感謝師長，結(jié)合具體事例闡述老師們的耐心教導(dǎo)和鼓勵；接著再表達(dá)對同學(xué)的感謝，可結(jié)合具體事例闡述同學(xué)間的互幫互助、共同成長；第三步，抒發(fā)自己的感情及打算并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①takecareofmewithoutanycomplaint毫無怨言地照顧我②bethankfultosbforsth因某事感激某人③beintrouble遇到困難④devoteone’stimetosth把某人的時間奉獻(xiàn)在某事上[高分句型]①Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.（when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）②It’sselflessofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.（it作形式主語，動詞不定式作真正的主語）③Iamgoingtodowellinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.（sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句）B同學(xué)們，回想這三年的初中生活，你一定感慨萬千。在初中畢業(yè)典禮上，學(xué)校將舉行“感恩教育儀式”，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語為該活動寫一篇短文，簡述這三年來要感恩的人和事，以及你的感想和未來打算。注意事項：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。SayingthankstoyouHowtimeflies!ThreeyearshaspassedsinceIcametothesecondaryschool.Duringthepastthreeyears,Ihavegainedalotandgrownalot.Imustsaythankstomanypeoplewhohavehelpedme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】SayingthankstoyouHowtimeflies!ThreeyearshaspassedsinceIcametothesecondaryschool.Duringthepastthreeyears,Ihavegainedalotandgrownalot.Imustsaythankstomanypeoplewhohavehelpedme.First,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.TheyprovideeverythingIneedforme.Theytakegoodcareofmewithoutanycomplaint.Theyworkhardtosupportthewholefamily.Theyarealwaystryingtheirbesttomakemeliveabetterlife.Second,I’mthankfultoallmyteachersfortheirgreathelpandsupport.Theyarepatientenoughtospendslotsoftimeexplainingproblemstome.Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.It’sunselfishofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.Finally,Ialsofeelgratefultomyfriendsandclassmates.Weworktogetherandsharehappinessandworrieswitheachother.Weoftenhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Asaresult,wehavemadegreatprogress.IthinkI’mluckytohavesomuchloveandcare.Iwillneverforgetthesehappydays.Iamgoingtodobetterinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)題干提示，感恩父母、老師、朋友和同學(xué)，并談?wù)勛约何磥淼拇蛩恪?.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱。寫作時可按照“總分總”的結(jié)構(gòu)，首先點明要感謝那些曾幫助過自己的人，然后分段表達(dá)自己對父母、老師、朋友和同學(xué)的感激之情，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)和闡述未來的打算。注意行文連貫、條理清晰、無拼寫和語法錯誤。C假如你是李華，在過去的三年，英語老師教會了你很多英語知識和技能，開拓了你的視野。你感激英語老師的付出，決定將來繼續(xù)學(xué)好并用好英語。請你結(jié)合以下提示和要求，用英語寫一篇短文。提示：你的英語老師1.外貌

2.性格……你學(xué)會了1.唱英文歌，欣賞英文電影

2.用英語講小故事

3.用英語進(jìn)行簡單交流……感恩和決心1.感恩老師的教導(dǎo)

2.繼續(xù)努力學(xué)習(xí)英語

3.用英語向世界講述中國故事……要求：1.文章必須包括所給提示內(nèi)容，可展開思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息；3.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。I’mLiHua.MyEnglishteacheris____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I’mLiHua.MyEnglishteacherisMs.Zhang.Sheisatallandoutgoingladywhoisverypatientwithallofus.Ms.ZhanghastaughtmeEnglishfor3years.Ilikeherinterestingclasses.LearningEnglishhelpsmebecomemoreopen-minded.NowIcantalkwithothersinEnglishfluentlyandreadsomeEnglishbooks.IcanalsotellsomestoriesinEnglish.Besides,enjoyingEnglishsongsandmovieshasbecomeoneofmyhobbies.Ms.Zhangisanexcellentteacher,towhomIwanttosaythanks.IdecidetolearnmoreEnglishinthefuture,andtrymybesttotellthestoryofChinainEnglishtotheworld.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)要點提示，介紹下你的英語老師，描述你所學(xué)會的東西，以及感激英語老師的付出，決定將來繼續(xù)學(xué)好并用好英語。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。敘述時可適當(dāng)運用短語句型或從句，使文章出彩有亮點。寫作時確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯誤。D在你的成長歷程中，有許多值得感恩的人，如父母，老師，同學(xué)……他們或幫助過你，或影響到你，你最想感恩誰？請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。要點提示：1.他/她有什么特點（外貌，性格……）？2.他/她對你影響最深的一件事是什么？3.你想怎樣感謝他/她？寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)90左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.根據(jù)要點提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名及校名。參考詞匯：begratefulto對……心存感激；haveaninfluenceon對……有影響；careabout關(guān)心；unforgettable難以忘懷的ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostis____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostismyEnglishteacherMr.Lee.Heistallandthin.Hehasshortblackhairandwearsglasses.Heisalwaysfriendlyandpatientwithus.WhenIwasinGrade8,myEnglishwasverypoor.Oneday,heaskedmetotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontest.Hesaid,“Yourpronunciationisreallygood.Tryyourbest.Ibelieveinyou”.WiththehelpofMr.Lee,Igotthefirstprize.MyEnglishimprovedalot.Mr.Leehasagreatinfluenceonme,Iamgratefultohim.Iwillworkhardtobecomebetter.Ithinkthat’sthebestgiftformydearteacher.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要以“ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanks”為題并結(jié)合題干中的問題進(jìn)行寫作，介紹你最想感謝的人，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主，人稱以第二人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段介紹自己想感謝的人的特點；第二段講述他對你影響最深的一件事；第三段講述你會如何感謝他。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。E生命中總有一些值得我們感恩的人。最近，無錫教育電視臺將舉辦題為“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英語演講比賽。假如你想感謝身邊某位對你有影響的人(父/母親、老師、朋友……)，請根據(jù)以下流程圖寫一篇英文演講稿參加比賽。注意事項：1.演講稿須根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.流程圖中括號部分為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；3.詞數(shù)在100個左右，演講稿的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4.演講稿中不得使用真實的個人及學(xué)校信息；5.演講稿必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________