讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文：JamesSeltonwasoneofthe

rudest

boysinthevillagewherehelived.Ifapersoninthe

street

waswelldressed,hewouldcryout,“Dandy(花花公子)!”Ifaperson’sclothesweredirtyortorn,hewouldthrowstonesathim,andannoyhimineveryway.

Oneafternoon,justastheschoolwasdismissed,astranger

passedthroughthevillage.Hisdresswasplainandsomewhatold,butneatandclean.Hecarriedacaneinhishand,ontheendofwhichwasaparcel,andheworeabroad-brimmed（寬邊的）hat.

NosoonerhadJamesseenthe

stranger

thanhewinkedtohisplaymates,andsaid,“Nowforsomefun!”Hethensilently

went

towardthestrangerfrombehind,and,knockingoffhishat,ranaway.

Themanturnedandsawhim,but

James

wasoutofhearingbeforehecouldspeak.Thestrangerputonhishat,andwentonhisway.AgaindidJames

approach;butthistime,themancaughthimbythearm,andheldhimtightly.However,hecontentedhimselfwithlookingJamesamomentintheface,andthenpushedhimfromhim.Nosoonerhadthenaughtyboyfoundhimselffreeagainthanhebegantopelt(連續(xù)投擲)thestrangerwithdirtandstones.

ButJameswasfrightenedwhenthemanwas

struck

ontheheadbyabrickandbadlyhurt.Alltheboysnowranaway,andJamesskulledacrossthefieldstohishome.

Ashedrewnearthehouse,hissisterCarolinecameouttomeethim,holdingupabeautifulgoldchainandsomenewbooksforhimtosee.ShetoldJames,asfastasshecouldtalk,thattheir

uncle,whohadbeenawayseveralyears,hadcomehome,andwasnowinthehouse;thathehadboughtbeautiful

presents

forthewholefamily;thathehadlefthiscarriageatthetavern(客棧)，amileortwooff,andwalkedonfoot,soastosurprisehisbrother,their

father.P1：Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.P2：Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.續(xù)寫(xiě)思路1.

確立主題：本文選自Mc.Guffey’sThirdEclecticReader一書(shū)中的第62個(gè)故事TheInsolentBoy。本文以第三人稱的視角敘述了主人公James是個(gè)生性頑皮的小男孩，有一次竟用石頭砸傷了一個(gè)陌生男人，當(dāng)James知道被自己砸傷的人是自己的叔叔時(shí)會(huì)發(fā)生什么事情呢？主題很明顯就是forgiveness。2.

續(xù)寫(xiě)難點(diǎn)：本文總體而言難度中等，第一段主要描寫(xiě)James得知真相后的羞愧；第二段則是叔叔對(duì)James的諒解，結(jié)尾再進(jìn)行點(diǎn)題即可。同樣地，需要圍繞人物的動(dòng)作，情感，語(yǔ)言及心理進(jìn)行展開(kāi)。連句成篇P1：Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.1.

“Itwasthoseinsolentandnaughtykidswhomade

uncle

severelyinjured,”shecontinuedina

higher

toneasifshewereanirritatedlion.2.

Uponhearingthis,it

struck

himthatthe

stranger

hejusthadmetmustbehisuncle.3.

“IfonlyIcouldgobackintime!”James

thoughtoverwhelmedwithguiltandshame,hisheadloweringdownandfaceblushingunconsciously.4.

“Dearbrother,areyouallright?”sisterCaroline

asked,strokinghisshouldersgentlywithcare.5.

Theguiltyboyshookhisheadtomotionthateverythingwasfine,however,notdaring

enterintothehouseatthisverymoment.6.

Unfortunately,hearinghis

father

callinghimtocomein,tremblingfromheadtotoe,hehadnoalternativebuttoobey.7.

ReluctantaslittleJameswas,hewent

intothechamberwithstompyfootstepstogreethisunclewhohehadn’tseeninalongtime.P2：Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.1.

“Oh,gosh,it’syou!”hisunclecriedwithdisbelief,

turningtofatherasifeagertoexplainthewholethinginaflash.

2.

“YouhavealreadymetJames?”fatheraskedwithpuzzledlook,staringatunclethenatJames.3.

Uncle

approached

father,explainingwhathadhappenedtohiminthe

street

justnow,andofcourse,hetoldfatherhowrudeJameswas.4.Withsurpriseandgriefdidthegoodfatherandmotherlearnthis,hisunclewasreadytoforgivehim,andforgettheinjury.5.ScarcelycouldJamesbelievethatuncleshouldforgivehim.6.Butfatherstillgavehimpunishmentthathe

wouldneverbepermittedto

havethegoldwatch,northebeautifulbooks,whichhisunclehadbroughtforhim.7.Fromthenon,Jameswasnotthe

rudest

boyatall;itwasthislecturethatledhimtobeawell-behavedperson.成品賞析

Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.“Itwasthoseinsolentandnaughtykidswhomade

uncle

severelyinjured,”shecontinuedina

highertoneasifshewereanirritatedlion.

Uponhearingthis,it

struck

himthatthestrangerhejusthadmetmustbehisuncle.“IfonlyIcouldgobackintime!”

James

thoughtoverwhelmedwithguiltandshame,hisheadloweringdownandfaceblushingunconsciously.“Dearbrother,areyouallright?”sisterCaroline

asked,strokinghisshouldersgentlywithcare.Theguiltyboyshookhisheadtomotionthateverythingwasfine,however,notdaring

enterintothehouseatthisverymoment.Unfortunately,hearinghis

father

callinghimtocomein,tremblingfromheadtotoe,hehadnoalternativebuttoobey.ReluctantaslittleJameswas,hewent

intothechamberwithstompyfootstepstogreethisunclewhohehadn’tseeninalongtime.

Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.“Oh,gosh,it’syou!”hisunclecriedwithdisbelief,

turningtofatherasifeagertoexplainthewholethinginaflash.

“YouhavealreadymetJames?”fatheraskedwithpuzzledlook,staringatunclethenatJames.

Uncle

approached

father,explainingwhathadhappenedtohiminthe

street

justnow,andofcourse,hetoldfatherhowrudeJameswas.Withsurpriseandgriefdidthegoodfatherandmotherlearnthis,hisunclewasreadytoforgivehim,andforgettheinjury.ScarcelycouldJamesbelievethatuncleshouldforgivehim.Butfatherstillgavehimpunishmentthathe

wouldneverbepermittedto

havethegoldwatch,northebeautifulbooks,whichhisunclehadbroughtforhim.

Fromthenon,Jameswasnotthe

rudest

boyatall;itwasthislecturethatledhimtobeawell-behavedperson.原文好詞好句積累：Ifaperson

were

welldressedhe

would

cryout,"Dandy（花花公子）!"Ifaperson'sclothesweredirtyortorn,hewouldthrowstonesathim,andannoyhimineveryway.（虛擬語(yǔ)氣，排比）Hethensilently

went

towardthest