英語書面表達EnglishCompositionWriting1第一頁，共32頁。Whatmakesagoodessay?Theessay2第二頁，共32頁。Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.TopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph3Concludingparagraph3第三頁，共32頁。Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.generalstatementtopicstatementTopicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)GeneralstatementTopicstatement4第四頁，共32頁。

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition,…Furthermore,...5第五頁，共32頁。ConclusionPersonally,…inconclusion,inbrief,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat...

Insummary,itiswiser...

6第六頁，共32頁。TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?7第七頁，共32頁。Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall…topicsentence8第八頁，共32頁。Whereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:________________justlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolis9第九頁，共32頁。Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2019OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…10第十頁，共32頁。正確使用有關連接詞

時間先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile轉(zhuǎn)折關系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果關系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat讓步關系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat遞進關系：what’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,條件關系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…表列舉：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollows表總結(jié)：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated11第十一頁，共32頁。Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.12第十二頁，共32頁。豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)〕

利用不同的句型來表達同一個意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What

akindboyheis!

How

disappointedhewas!

感慨句強調(diào)句e.g.It

wasthisyoungboythat

helpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.13第十三頁，共32頁。e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyou

solvethisproblem.There

comesthepolicecar.

Hardly

hadtheygottothestation

when

theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet

withahandbaginherhand.倒裝句省略句with短語14第十四頁，共32頁。e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecan

findmuchusefulinformation.

Let’scometothemainteaching

building,atthebackofwhichstands

theschoollibrary.定語從句e.g.That’swhat

Ishoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoever

needshelpatpresent.各種名詞性從句15第十五頁，共32頁。

e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.

Solongas

weworkharderatourlessons,

we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各種狀語從句16第十六頁，共32頁。1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.〔使用名詞性從句〕2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒裝句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強調(diào)句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虛擬語氣〕What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

17第十七頁，共32頁。5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用過去分詞)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.〔nomatterwhat狀語從句〕

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.〔祈使句+and…〕Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.18第十八頁，共32頁。9．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒裝句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Nosoonerhadhecome

backfromBeijing

than

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.19第十九頁，共32頁。Summary:Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraph

isonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.20第二十頁，共32頁。ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切題)?

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高級詞匯）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:21第二十一頁，共32頁。Goodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool〞.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…_______._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnot

leastD.what’smore

E.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEF22第二十二頁，共32頁。蘇州市2019屆高三教學調(diào)研測試

最近，國家教育部要求中小學生參加冬季長跑活動：建議小學生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。對此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反對。請你根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?〞為題的短文，談談你的看法。支持方的理由反對方的理由你的看法及理由1．可以促進對體育的重視；2．可以增強學生的體魄；3．更有利于提高學習效率。

1．學生以學習為主，考試成績決定個人前途；2．過高的要求學生難以達到；3．長跑可能引起感冒或傷害。(考生自行發(fā)揮2—3點)注意：1．詞數(shù)150左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2．對所給要點，逐一陳述，設當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。23第二十三頁，共32頁。1.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.2.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs.3.You’dbetterusesomelinkingwords.4.Handwritingisofgreatimportance.Suggestions:24第二十四頁，共32頁。第一段：1.SomepeopleagreetoNO.One,becausetheyusuallythinkthat...Inthemeantime,...Inaddition...2.

SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause...3.

Somepeoplesuggest/saythat...Atthesametimetheypointoutthefactthat...What’smore...4.

SomepeoplepreferNO.One.IntheiropinionA...Inaddition...25第二十五頁，共32頁。第二段：1.

Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdthatBisright.Theythink...2.Butmanymorepeopledon’tagreewiththem.TheypreferB.Theysaythat...Thereasonisthat...3.Onthecontrary,somepeopleholdthat...4.SomepeoplethinkthatBisbetter.Itisclearthat...What’smore,...Also...

在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列舉等方式展開段落。26第二十六頁，共32頁。第三段：提出自己的見解并且加以論證1.InmyopinionBisbetterthanA.Thereisnodoubtthat...2.IsupportA.Thereasongoesasfollows...3.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetothelatter.First...Second...Finally...4.Itislikelythatpeoplewillgoonarguingoverthesequestions.Ithinkthateverythinghasbothitspositiveandnegativesides.Weshouldkeepanopenmind.27第二十七頁，共32頁。5.Peoplewillcontinuetoargueoverthequestions,Ithinkwe’dbetterkeepanopenmindbecauseeverythinghastwosides.Itallrelieson...

6.Ofthesetwowaysof...Iprefer...Firstofall,...Second,...28第二十八頁，共32頁。Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?

TheMinistryofEducationofChinahasurgedallthestudentstoparticipateinthewinterlong-distancerunningactivity.Itissuggestedthatprimaryschoolstudentsshouldrun1,000metersaday,juniorschoolstudents,1,500andseniorschoolstudents,2,000.Differentpeoplealwaysoffervariousviews.

Somepeoplesay"yes"tothisactivity.Theythink,foronething,itcanmakepeoplepaymoreattentiontophysicaleducation;

foranother,runningcanimprovestudents’healthandhelpthemstudyefficientlyso