社會服務(wù)Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文寫作感謝信(2019·浙江卷6月)假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.回顧Alex對你的幫助；3.臨別祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【高分范文】DearAlex，①Learningthatyou'releavingfortheUnitedStatessoon,I'meagerlywritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourhelp.Honestlyspeaking,it'ssoniceofyoutooffermeaclassofpracticallearningskills.Underyourprofessionalguidance,IhavemadeunbelievableprogressinEnglish.It'sindeedapleasantsurpriseformetoevenrankfirstinarecentEnglishspeechcontest.②WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youalwayscheermeupandhelpmeout,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmandconfidence.③NowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam.Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours，LiHua點(diǎn)評：1.詞匯美：文章運(yùn)用了很多高級詞匯，如leavefor,eagerly,expressone'sheartfeltgratitudeto,honestlyspeaking,underone'sprofessionalguidance,makeprogress,unbelievable,rankfirst,encounter,cheersb.up,helpsb.out,fuel,enthusiasm,convey等。2.句式美：①句Learningthat...是動詞-ing形式短語作狀語。②句Whenever引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。③句enough后接不定式作結(jié)果狀語，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)賓語從句，這兩處表達(dá)增強(qiáng)了感情色彩。練習(xí)：假定你是李華，國慶節(jié)期間參加了Angela公司的旅游團(tuán)。你感到該公司的旅行路線物有所值，你對導(dǎo)游Lily的服務(wù)感到尤其滿意。請給Angela公司寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.表示感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【參考范文】DearAngela，I'mLiHua.IjoinedagrouptourprovidedbyyourcompanyduringtheNationalDayholiday.Myexperiencewiththetourisreallygood.IamparticularlyimpressedwiththehighstandardofserviceandtheattentiontodetailgiventousbyyourguideLily.IthinkitiswellworththemoneyanditisatourIwillneverforget.Iwillbequitereadytorecommendyourcompanytomyfriendswhowanttotakeatriptothesameattractions.I'msuretheywillenjoyittoo.Thankyou.Yourssincerely，LiHuaⅡ.讀后續(xù)寫(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.[懸念1]Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim，”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”[懸念2]Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney，”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI，”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成)．”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando，”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.[懸念3]”注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.【寫作指導(dǎo)】一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵：Who:theMeredithfamilyWhere:inasmallcommunityWhen:onemorningWhat:Thefamilywantedtohelpapoorfamily.How:Theydecidedtomakepopcorn.大意：善良的Meredith一家?guī)椭粋€(gè)貧困家庭的故事。Meredith的孩子想出了一個(gè)主意，讓貧困家庭的孩子Bernard去賣爆米花。二、挖掘文中懸念點(diǎn)懸念1思考：Meredith一家生活沒有受到經(jīng)濟(jì)滑坡的影響嗎？懸念2思考：媽媽為什么回家跟孩子們說這些事情？懸念3思考：孩子們的主意媽媽會同意嗎？三、分析段落開頭語段首句1思考：①媽媽同意孩子的想法，他們會做哪些準(zhǔn)備呢？②到家做完爆米花之后會送到Bernard家嗎？他們將怎樣指導(dǎo)Bernard賣爆米花？③Bernard一家收到爆米花會有什么反應(yīng)？段首句2思考：①Bernard會怎樣賣爆米花？會賺到錢嗎？②Bernard會自己做爆米花嗎？③Bernard長大后會成為成功人士嗎？通過以上思路，預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下：Paragraph1：買裝爆米花的紙袋→做爆米花→送到Bernard家→教Bernard如何賣→Bernard一家的感受Paragraph2：Bernard賣爆米花→開始自己做并且賣→成功→回報(bào)社會【高分范文】WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.So,theywenttothelocalsupermarkettobuypaperbags.Whentheygothome,theymadealotofpopcornandputitinthepaperbags.Withthepopcorn,theywenttoBernard'shome.TheytoldBernardhowtosellthepopcorn.Bernardandhisparentswereverygrateful.AndtheMeredithfamilyalsofeltveryhappytohelpthisfamily.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Hetookthepopcornaroundtothehousesandsoldallhispopcorn.Heearnedalotofmoney.Then,hewantedtobeself-dependent.Therefore,heaskedMrs.Meredithtoteachhimhowtomakepopcorn.Afterthat,notonlydidhesellpopcorn,buthealsoaddedcreamandsalttothepopcorntomakeittastebetter.Bernardgrewuptobearemarkableman.HedidnotforgetthehelpoftheMeredithfamily,andhealsodidwhathecouldtohelpthoseinneed.點(diǎn)評：1.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動。①第一段中副詞very的運(yùn)用凸顯了當(dāng)時(shí)人物的心情。②第二段中形容詞remarkable的運(yùn)用形象表明了Meredith一家的幫助給Bernard帶來的影響。2.詞匯與語法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。①文章中高級詞匯grateful,earnmoney,add...to...的使用為文章的一大亮點(diǎn)。②notonly...butalso...倒裝句的使用是文章的增分點(diǎn)。③文章多處使用不定式，語言簡潔明快。練習(xí)：閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Overtheyears,I'vebeenguiltyofhurriedlyshuttingthefrontdoortomanystrangerswhentheycametomyhomeknockingwiththeintentionofsellingthings.Ihateditwhentheytriedtheirbesttopersuademetobuythethingstheypromoted.Butearlierthisyear,adearfriendofmine,Linda,hadanexperiencethatchangedmymindandattitudetowardsthese“intruders”.Lastwinter,Lindawentthroughaverymessydivorceandwasverydepressed.SoshequitherjobandleftLosAngeles,wheresheencounteredherex-husbandincollege.SheflewtoBostonontheeastcoastoftheUS.Later,shesettledinanewneighbourhoodinEastBoston.However,shortlyafterwards,thecompanywheresheworkedwentbankrupt(破產(chǎn)).Sufferingaseriesofbitterblows,shefellill,aseverecaseofflu.Shehadtostayathomeforthewholeweek,feelingextremelybadandhopeless.Earlyonemorning,Lindalayinbed,feelingpainfulallover.Thenallofasudden,therewasanupsettingknockonherfrontdoor.Strugglingoutofthebed,shedraggedherselftothewindow.There,outside,shesawayoungladycarefullyholdingsomeleaflets(傳單)andaTVsetmodel.SheknewofalargeTVsetestablishmentnearbyandassumedamessagewasabouttobegentlydelivered.“ThisisthelastthingIneedtoday，”shemutteredtoherselfandhesitantlyopenedthedoor.Coughingbitterly,Lindastuckherheadout.“Excuseme,madam...”theyoungladysaidwithasmile.“I'msorrybutIamnottheslightestbitinterestedinanyTVwhatever.”Lindainterruptedherimpatiently.“Asamatteroffact,Iamfeelingterriblyawful.”“IsthereanythingIcandoforyou,madam？”theyoungladyaskedwithconcern.“Nothanks,justleavemealone.”Lindathenshutthedoorinherface.Theyoungladypolitelyturnedandleftinsilence.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Afewhourslater,anotherknock.Lindawassurprisedbythislovelyaction.