【2023年】陜西省延安市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)測(cè)試卷(含答案)學(xué)校:________班級(jí):________姓名:________考號(hào):________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofStudents'StartingTheirOwnBusinesses.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

目前有不少大學(xué)生開(kāi)始創(chuàng)業(yè)

1．對(duì)此不少人給予了肯定

2．也有人有不同的看法

3．我認(rèn)為…

Students'StartingTheirOwnBusinesses

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetter.Supposeyouaregraduatingfromtheuniversitythissummerandyouaregoingtoapplyforajob.Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

1.假設(shè)你是一位即將畢業(yè)于復(fù)旦大學(xué)電子計(jì)算機(jī)系的學(xué)生，你從報(bào)紙上看到某公司招聘一名電子計(jì)算機(jī)工程技術(shù)口譯人員的廣告，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封求職信說(shuō)明你應(yīng)聘的理由。

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyViewonPostgraduateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.目前考古正形成熱潮

2.分析這股熱潮產(chǎn)生的原因

3.你的看法

MyViewonPostgraduateCraze

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteashortessayentitledCollegeStudents'MakingMoney.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.大學(xué)生兼職工作的現(xiàn)象

2．大學(xué)生兼職工作的原因

3．我的觀點(diǎn)

5.1.大家希望構(gòu)建一個(gè)和諧社會(huì)，但社會(huì)上存在一些與和諧社會(huì)不相符合的現(xiàn)象

2．分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的不良影響

3．從自身應(yīng)如何做起

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnForeigners'LearningChinese.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前，國(guó)久“漢語(yǔ)熱”持續(xù)升溫

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的主要原因

3.“漢語(yǔ)熱”給我的啟示

OnForeigners'LearningChinese

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:AwayfromNet-barCampaign.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.新聞媒體披露，徐州某中學(xué)1000多名學(xué)生簽名，莊嚴(yán)承諾“遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧”

2．分析“遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧”運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因

3．做出對(duì)比和評(píng)論

AwayfromNet-barCampaign

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessayentitledCollegeStudent'sJob-Hunting.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow.

1.近年來(lái)出現(xiàn)大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象。

2.產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因(如大學(xué)生追求目標(biāo)過(guò)高，專業(yè)不對(duì)口等。)

3.如何解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題(改變就業(yè)觀念，大學(xué)生在培訓(xùn)等)。

CollegeStudent'sJob-Hunting

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteashortessayentitledChoosingaJob.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.人們對(duì)擇業(yè)的不同選擇。

2．我對(duì)擇業(yè)的考慮。

3．我為什么這么考慮。

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetitle:HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Youshouldwriteatleast130wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.中國(guó)已漸漸步入老齡化社會(huì)。(65歲以上的老年人已占全國(guó)人口的7%)

2.我認(rèn)為應(yīng)如何對(duì)待老年人群。(社會(huì)關(guān)愛(ài)與福利制度，家庭溫暖，社區(qū)服務(wù)……)

3.我的結(jié)論。

HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

TheideathatprofessorsshoulddoresearchaswellasteachwasimportedfromGermanyinthelate19thcentury.

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12.

Theissueofperformers'ethicshasalwaysbeentoleratedby______.

13.Awedding-planningworkermaybethesourceofhiscolleague'sangerbecause______.

A.thelatterisjealousoftheformer'shappiness

B.thelatterhastodosomeoftheformer'swork

C.theformermayforcethelattertohelpwiththewedding

D.thelattertendstomakemistakesundertheformer'sinfluence

14.

Iftheguaranteedscoresaren'tthere,testpreparationcompaniesofferfreerepetitionofthecourseoreven______.

15.

BothMarkandCzerwinskinoticedthatsomecomputerusersreliedon___________asreminderstohelpthemcopewithdistractions.

16.

Therearemanyhistoricmysteries,sofiguringoutgoodsubjectisnotadifficulty.

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17.

CuttingbudgetforscienceresearchanddevelopmentfurthersmothersincentivesforAmericanstudentsto______.

18.

AccordingtoEdwards,themicrobesarenow______.

A.recognizedbymostpeople

B.neglectedbymostpeople

C.diedoutfromtheEarth

D.outofactionoftheEarthsystem

19.KeepingtheNetSecure

OnSeptember11traditionaltelephoneprovidersdidaheroicjobofstrugglingtorestoreservice.WhentheWorldTradeCentertowersfell,theyseverelydamagedaVerizoncentralofficewith350,000voicelinesand3.5milliondatacircuitscarryingthefinancialinformationthatisthelifebloodofWallStreetfirms.Verizonemployeesandthoseofmanyothertelecommunicationscardersworkednightandday,alongsidethefiremen,thepolice,andvolunteers,attheirownrecoveryjob.Inaboutaweektheyhadreroutedsometwomilliondatacircuits,restoredswitches,andinstalledtemporarypowersupplies.Theother1.5millioncircuitsoriginatedinbuildingsthatnolongerexist.

InthedaysaftertheattackthenumberofvoicecallsinthefiveboroughsofNewYorkCitydoubled,fromthenormal115millionadaytomorethan230million.ForthenextsixdaysVerizonwaivedchargesforitspayphonesinManhattan.Onasingledayfollowingthedisasterresidentsplacedsome22,000localcallsfreeofchargefromregularsidewalkpayphonesbelowCanalStreet,andWilliamsCommunicationsswitchedfivemillionvoicecallsinthemetropolitanarea-threetimestheaveragedailyvolume.AT&T'slong-distancevolumejumpedfromaweekdayaverageofabout300milliondomesticvoicecallstomorethan431milliononSeptember11,thebusiestweekdayeveracrossAT&T'sdomesticvoicenetwork.

Butdespitetheeffortstokeeptheminoperation,undertheextraordinarypressureofSeptember11thetraditionalvoice-telecommunicationssystemsintheNewYorkareaandtheWashington,D.C.area--bothwireandwireless--weresignificantlyovertaxed.InEastCoastcitiescell-phonenetworkscouldnotkeepupwithdemand.Manylong-distancecallsinboundtoNewYorkCitywereblocked,inparttoreservecircuitsforoutgoingcalls.OnthatdaytheInternetproveditsvalueasanessentialpartofthemodemcommunicationssystem.

MorethanhalfofAmericanowusestheInternet.Globally,usersnumbermorethan300million.VirtuallyalllargebusinessesusethepublicInternetorprivateversionsofthesametechnologytoconducttheirmostimportantactivities.Soitwasnotsurprising--althoughitwasstaggering--toseethatonSeptember11morethan1.2billioninstantmessagesweresentbyAOLusersalone.SlippingpastthecongestedvoicenetworksontothePCscreensoffriendsandfamilyaroundtheglobewerethetiesthatbindusinthemodemworld:"RUOK?""ALRIGHT?““UTHERE?"

AsvoicenetworksblockedincomingcallstoNewYorkinordertorelievecongestion,somecarderspushedtheirvoicetrafficovertheInternet.ITXC,whichspecializesinInternetvoiceservices,sawitsdomesticwholesalebusinessdoubleonSeptember11ascarrierssearchedfornewchannelsofcommunication;Yahoo'sPCtoPhonecallingserviceincreasedby59percent.Theperformanceofthesevoice-over-IPservicessuggeststhatinonlyahandfulofyearsmostvoicetrafficislikelytobecardedontheInternet.

WhydidtheInternetworksowellinthefaceofhugevolume?Becauseits"distributed"technologyisinherentlyrobust."Normal"phoneconnections,whetherbymeansofwiredlinenetworksorbywirelesscellularnetworks,openaspecificcircuit,orchannel,connectingthepersonwhoiscalledandthecaller.Justasifasuperhighwaylanewereopenedforonecaronly,thecircuitremainsdedicatedtotheconversationevenifnooneisspeakingatthemoment.Iftoomanycircuitsarerequestedatonetime,thesystemblockscalls.

Incontrast,Internetmessagesdon'ttravelondesignatedcircuits.Instead,themessagesarecodedinisandOs,andthendisassembledintopacketsofdata.ThepacketsgooutfromthePCdownthephonelineandintothemazeofinterconnectedfibersthatenvelopseverymetropolita

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20.Underyourdurablepowerattorney,ifyouareunable,apersoncanbegiventheauthorityto______.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.

【B4】

22.

【B5】

23.

【B7】

24.(28)

A.Toestablishhislaboratory.

B.Tohaveavacation.

C.Tovisitmembersofhisfamily.

D.Tostudydeafnessamongthefamilies.

25.(25)

A.Motivationandteamwork.

B.Candospirit.

C.Honestyandresponsibility.

D.Hard-workingandcooperation.

26.(42)

27.(24)

A.Itisasubconsciousthing.

B.Itreflectsalackofself-consciousness.

C.Itisunnecessaryindeed.

D.Itisakindofconsciousact.

28.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeachpassage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

聽(tīng)力原文：Theworld'sfirstcompletelyautomaticrailwayhasbeenbuiltunderthebusystreetsofLondon,TherailwayiscalledtheVictoriaLine,anditispartofthecompleteLondonundergroundrailway.

ThenewVictoriaLinewasopenedin1969.Thisnewlinewasverydifferentfromtheothers.Thestationsontheotherlinesneedalotofworkerstoselltickets,andtocheckandtocollectthemwhenpeopleleavethetrains.ThisisalldifferentontheVictoriaLine.Hereamachinechecksandcollectsthetickets,andtherearenoworkersontheplatforms.

Onthetrain,thereisonlyoneworker.Ifnecessary,thismancandrivethetrain.Butusuallyhejuststartsit;itrunsandstopsbyitself.Thetrainsarecontrolledbyelectricalsignalswhicharesentbytheso-called"commandspots".

Thecommandspotsarethesamedistanceapart.Eachsendsacertainsignal.Thetrainalwaysmovesatthespeedthatthecommandspotsallow.Ifthecommandspotsendsnosignals,thetrainwillstop.

Mostofthecontrolworkisdonebycomputers.Thecomputersalsofixthetrain'sspeeds,andsendthesignalstothecommandspots.

Othermachinesmakesurethatthetrainsarealwaysasafedistanceapart.Onetrainmaystaytoolongatastation;theothertrainswillthenautomaticallymoveslower.Sothereisnodangerofaccidentsontheline.

(27)

A.Workersontheplatformsandtrainswerereplacedbymachines.

B.Acompletelyautomaticlinewasaddedtoitsnetwork.

C.Itbecamethefirstcompletelyautomaticrailwayintheworld.

D.Itstrainsbecamemanual-controlled.

29.(29)

A.Thepopulationsofsmalltownsincreasedrapidly.

B.Artcriticsincitesbegantotakenoticeofregionalism.

C.Someregionalistpaintersbegananewartmovement.

D.Societybecamemoreinternationallyfocused.

30.聽(tīng)力原文：M:Youarewashingyourcarevenonvacation.Itmakesmefeelguilty.

W:Youshouldn't.It'sjustthatIhavenothingbettertodoatthemoment.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanimply?

(19)

A.She'swatchingthecarsgoby.

B.She'swashingthecarforkillingtime.

C.Themanshouldfeelwellsoon.

D.Themanworksharderthanshedoes.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.Itcanbeinferredfromthepassagethatdoctorsareabletodeterminehospitalpoliciesbecause______.

A.itisdoctorswhogenerateincomeforthehospital

B.adoctorisultimatelyresponsibleforapatient'shealth

C.mostofthepatient'sbillsarepaidbyhishealthinsurance

D.somepatientsmightrefusetoaccepttheirphysician'sadvice

32.Whichofthefollowingstatementsdoestheauthorimply?

A.Inscience.itisnotdifficulttodistinguishfactfromfiction.

B.Practical-mindedpeoplecanunderstandthemeaningandobjectivesofpurescience.

C.Scientistsengagedinthetheoreticalresearchshouldnotbeblamedforignoringthepracticalsideoftheirdiscoveries.

D.Todayfewpeoplehaveanynotionofthemeaningofscience.

33.

What'stheimpliedmeaningof"zerotoleranceforthebehavior.butnotzerocommonsensefortheconsequences"?

A.Theauthoritiesshouldnotonlybetoleranttowardsteenagemisdeedsbutalsoexertcautionaboutthepossiblenegativeresultsthepunishmentbrings.

B.Theauthoritiesshouldforgivetheteenagersfortheirmisbehaviorsandshowsympathytothem.

C.Theauthoritiesshouldshowtolerancetowardsmisbehavingteenagersandalsostudytheirmisdeeds.

D.Theauthoritiesshouldpunishthemisbehavingteenagersincasetheybreakrulesagain.

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.

【S10】

35.

【S8】

36.Thedecisiontomoveisalsoinfluencedby"personalfactors"

ofthepromisingmigrant.Thesamepush-pullfactorsandobstaclesS1.______

operatedifferentlyondifferentpeoples,sometimesbecausetheyareS2.______

ondifferentstagesoftheirlives,orjustS3.______

becausetheirvaryingabilitiesandpersonalities.TheprospectofS4.______

pullingupstakesandmovingtoanewandperhapsverystrangeenvironment

mayappearinterestingandchallengingtoayoung,footloose

manandfrighteningdifficulttoaslightlyoldermanwithawifeS5.______

andyoungchildren.Similarly,theneedtolearnanewlanguageand

customsmayintrigueonepersonandfrightenthetuber.S6.______

Regardlessfromwhypeoplemove,migrationoflargeS7.______

numberofpeoplecausesfriction,TheUnitedStatesandother"receiving"S8.______

countries(thetermusedforcountriesthatwelcomelarge

numbersofimmigrants)haveexperiencedadjustmentproblemswith

eachnewwaveofimmigrants,ThenewestarrivalsareusuallygivingS9.______

thejobswithlowestpayandareresentedbynativeswhomayhave

tocompetewiththemforthosejobs.Ithasusuallytakenseveraldecades

foreachonetogainacceptanceinthemainstreamofsocietyinS10.______

thereceivingcountry.

【S1】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S2】

38.

【S10】

39.Theterm"FurtherEducation"isthenamegiven,inBritain,toavery

broadanddiverserangeofpost-schooleducation.Someisfull-time,someis

part-timeandsomeishalf-and-halfwithperiodsatcollegealternatewithperiods【S1】______

atwork.Thereisalsoavastandvariedprovisionofeveningclasses.For

manyolderpeople,eveningstudywastheonlywayWheretheycouldpursue【S2】______

theireducationandtheythinkoftheinstitutionthatprovideditas"Night【S3】______

school".

Nowadays,however,theopportunitiesforFurtherEducationatalllevels

andforallagesaremanifold.Thecourseprovidedrangefromthemost【S4】______

elementary,directlyvocationally-orientedkind,andthoseatdegreelevelor【S5】______

beyond.Theyareprovidedinawidelysetofinstitutions.Themajorityofthe

lowerlevelcourses,relatingmainlytoapprenticeshipschemesandqualifications,

providedinCollegesofFurtherEducation.Middlelevelcoursesare【S6】______

offeredinTechnicalCollegeswiththosehavingagoodshareoflessadvanced【S7】______

workbeingcalled"Collegesoftechnology".Thegreatbulkofdegreelevel

studiesareundertakeninthePolytechnics.Buttherearethenumberof【S8】______

specializedcollegessuchastheLondonCollegeofPrinting.Infact,veryfewof

thebroaddivisionshereareclear-cut;andthereislittleoverlapping.【S9】______

Whateverarethetypesofestablishmentandtheirrangeofeducational

provision,mostofthelocalinhabitantswillprobablyrefertothemfor"the【S10】______

Techs".TheTechshaveplayedanimportantpartinBritisheducationalhistory

andtheirrolewillbenolessimportantinthefuture.

【S1】

參考答案

1.Students'StartingTheirOwnBusinessesManycollegestudentsarenowseeingself-employmentasthemoreattractiveoptionasthejobsmarketcontinuestobecompetitive.Tosomepeopletheideaofbeingastudententrepreneurisagoodone.Beingtheirownbossisagreataspirationforyoungpeopleandgivesthemanopportunitytoputtheirtheoreticalbusinessknowledgeintopractice.Tootherpeoplehowevertheideaofstartingabusinessasacollegestudentmayseemlikearadicalone.Tomakeitthroughthestart-upphaseyoungentrepreneursneedplentyofinitiativeanddrive.Andtorunthebusinessrequiresconstantcareandmanagement.Youngentrepreneursmayhavetoendureaheavyworkloadandalotofstressbuttheymaynotbephysicallyandmentallyuptothechallenge.Asyoucanseethingsarehardforcollegestudentsthesedays.It'sexpensivetogetadegreeandevenyouhaveonethereisnoguaranteethatitwillmeananythinginthesejobmarkets.Sowouldn'titbebettertolaunchyourownenterprise?Itcanhelpyoupayoffthoseexpensiveyearsatcollegeandifitsucceedsyouhaveajobguaranteedthemomentyougraduate.Students'StartingTheirOwnBusinessesManycollegestudentsarenowseeingself-employmentasthemoreattractiveoptionasthejobsmarketcontinuestobecompetitive.Tosomepeople,theideaofbeingastudententrepreneurisagoodone.Beingtheirownbossisagreataspirationforyoungpeopleandgivesthemanopportunitytoputtheirtheoreticalbusinessknowledgeintopractice.Tootherpeople,however,theideaofstartingabusinessasacollegestudentmayseemlikearadicalone.Tomakeitthroughthestart-upphase,youngentrepreneursneedplentyofinitiativeanddrive.Andtorunthebusinessrequiresconstantcareandmanagement.Youngentrepreneursmayhavetoendureaheavyworkloadandalotofstressbuttheymaynotbephysicallyandmentallyuptothechallenge.Asyoucansee,thingsarehardforcollegestudentsthesedays.It'sexpensivetogetadegreeandevenyouhaveone,thereisnoguaranteethatitwillmeananythinginthesejobmarkets.So,wouldn'titbebettertolaunchyourownenterprise?Itcanhelpyoupayoffthoseexpensiveyearsatcollege,andifitsucceedsyouhaveajobguaranteedthemomentyougraduate.

2.ALetterofApplyingforaJobDearManagerWithreferencetoyouradvertisementinthenewspaperIamwritingtoapplyforaninterpreterpostinyourcompany.AsacomputermajorgraduatedfromFudanUniversitythissummerIhavehadagoodcommandofextremelyrelevantandusefulknowledgeincomputerengineering.MoreoverIdohaveacertainamountofexperienceinthefieldasIhavetakenseveralpart-timejobswhichweredirectlyconcernedwithcomputerengineeringtothecampus.BesidesIcanspeakEnglishfluenflyandeloquentlywhichIbelievetobeessentialqualitytoaninterpreter.SincethefirstcontactIhavemaintainedastronginterestincomputer.I'msureIwouldlovetoworkinmyspecializedarea.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreplyinthenearfuture.YourssincerelyJaneMorrisALetterofApplyingforaJobDearManager,Withreferencetoyouradvertisementinthenewspaper,Iamwritingtoapplyforaninterpreterpostinyourcompany.AsacomputermajorgraduatedfromFudanUniversitythissummer,Ihavehadagoodcommandofextremelyrelevantandusefulknowledgeincomputerengineering.Moreover,IdohaveacertainamountofexperienceinthefieldasIhavetakenseveralpart-timejobs,whichweredirectlyconcernedwithcomputerengineeringtothecampus.Besides,IcanspeakEnglishfluenflyandeloquentlywhichIbelievetobeessentialqualitytoaninterpreter.Sincethefirstcontact,Ihavemaintainedastronginterestincomputer.I'msureIwouldlovetoworkinmyspecializedarea.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreplyinthenearfuture.Yourssincerely,JaneMorris

3.MyViewonPostgraduateCrazeFormanycollegestudentsatthebeginningofeachfallsemestertheywillrepeatedlybehauntedbypamphletaddistributorsemployedbyvariouspostgraduatetutoringschools.IndicatiMyViewonPostgraduateCrazeFormanycollegestudents,atthebeginningofeachfallsemester,theywillrepeatedlybehauntedbypamphletaddistributorsemployedbyvariouspostgraduatetutoringschools.Indicati解析：本文要求考生就大學(xué)生熱衷考研這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法。在布局上，根據(jù)題目中給出的提綱來(lái)展開(kāi)即可。第一段指出考研熱這種現(xiàn)象，可以從自己或者身邊的同學(xué)說(shuō)起，也可用其他的實(shí)例或報(bào)道來(lái)說(shuō)明；第二段分析造成這股考研熱潮的原因，比如圓名牌大學(xué)夢(mèng)，逃避就業(yè)壓力等；第三段闡明對(duì)這一問(wèn)題的看法，并說(shuō)明理由。

4.CollegeStudents'MakingMoneyNowadaysitisratherfashionableforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.Theyworkintheftsparetimeinrestaurantsbarsorhelpchildrenasatutor.Afewofthemevensetuptheirowncompany.Thereareseveralreasonsforthemtotakepart-timejobs.Firsttheythinkmakingmoneythroughtheireffortscanhelpthemknowthevalueoflaborsothattheycanbemoreindependentmoreconfidentandmoreeconomicallyminded.Inadditionmakingmoneyoffcampuscanhelpthemgetmoresocialexperiencerealizewhatthesocietyisreallylikewhichisgoodforthemtogetabetterjobandgraspthecommunicatingskills.Inmyopiniontousstudentsstudyinghardisthemostimportanttask.Ifwehavefinishedourlessonswemaytakesomepart-timejobs.Thusthemoreimportantthingistokeepthebalancebetweenstudyandwork...Ifwecandealwithitwellwecanbenefitalotfromit.(168words)CollegeStudents'MakingMoneyNowadays,itisratherfashionableforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.Theyworkintheftsparetimeinrestaurants,bars,orhelpchildrenasatutor.Afewofthemevensetuptheirowncompany.Thereareseveralreasonsforthemtotakepart-timejobs.First,theythinkmakingmoneythroughtheireffortscanhelpthemknowthevalueoflaborsothattheycanbemoreindependent,moreconfidentandmoreeconomicallyminded.Inaddition,makingmoneyoffcampuscanhelpthemgetmoresocialexperience,realizewhatthesocietyisreallylike,whichisgoodforthemtogetabetterjobandgraspthecommunicatingskills.Inmyopinion,tousstudents,studyinghardisthemostimportanttask.Ifwehavefinishedourlessons,wemaytakesomepart-timejobs.Thus,themoreimportantthingistokeepthebalancebetweenstudyandwork...Ifwecandealwithitwell,wecanbenefitalotfromit.(168words)解析：[寫(xiě)作思路]這篇作文屬于夾敘夾議的類型，其特點(diǎn)是往往以一個(gè)社會(huì)問(wèn)題或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象開(kāi)頭，中間部分分析原因、列舉影響或危害，最后提出解決問(wèn)題的建議或者展望未來(lái)。因此我們可以按照這種程序來(lái)展開(kāi)文章。第一段指出目前高校學(xué)生兼職的現(xiàn)象很普及，可舉在飯店、公司做兼職以及做家教辦公司等例子加以說(shuō)明。第二段闡述造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因：首先通過(guò)自己的努力掙些錢可以使學(xué)生們意識(shí)到勞動(dòng)的價(jià)值，從而獲得經(jīng)濟(jì)上的獨(dú)立。其次，在社會(huì)上兼職也可以使學(xué)生更多地了解社會(huì)，為他們以后踏上社會(huì)做好準(zhǔn)備。第三段結(jié)合自己談我們應(yīng)該怎么做：對(duì)于學(xué)生米講，最重要的還是先把學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)好；同時(shí)，還要注意保持好二者的平衡。根據(jù)以上思路便可以形成以下的作文。

5.HowtoConstructtheHarmoniousSociety①Thereismuchdiscussiontodayabouthowtoconstructaharmonioussociety.Alongwiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyoursocietybecomesmoreandmorebeautifulandcomfortable.②Howevertherearesomethingsthatareincontrastwiththeharmonioussocietysuchasspittingeverywherenoawarenessofpublicsanitationbreakingflowersrudelyandsoon.③Althoughthiskindofphenomenaisseldomyetitinfluencesourqualitiesoflives.④ForonethingtosomeextentwecannotenjoyagoodenvironmentandIbelievethatthereisnoonewhowanttoliveinascrapheap.Foranotheritinfluencesourfiguresinfrontofourforeignfriendsthattheymaylaughatus.Lastbutnotleastinthequality-orientededucationtodayitbreachesthestandardofusbeingawelcomeperson.⑤Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabovewemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthatthedevelopmentofoursocietyalsoneedsourspiritsreinforceharmonyelementwhichmakesourwholesocietylikeafamily.⑥Itneedsustochangefromourselvesandfromnowon;itrequiresustodoeasythingsagainandagain;itdemandsustoinfluencethepeoplearoundus.⑦Themorewedothenearerwearetoourharmonioussociety.HowtoConstructtheHarmoniousSociety①Thereismuchdiscussiontodayabouthowtoconstructaharmonioussociety.Alongwiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,oursocietybecomesmoreandmorebeautifulandcomfortable.②However,therearesomethingsthatareincontrastwiththeharmonioussocietysuchasspittingeverywhere,noawarenessofpublicsanitation,breakingflowersrudelyandsoon.③Althoughthiskindofphenomenaisseldom,yetitinfluencesourqualitiesoflives.④Foronething,tosomeextent,wecannotenjoyagoodenvironment,andIbelievethatthereisnoonewhowanttoliveinascrapheap.Foranother,itinfluencesourfiguresinfrontofourforeignfriendsthattheymaylaughatus.Lastbutnotleast,inthequality-orientededucationtoday,itbreachesthestandardofusbeingawelcomeperson.⑤Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthatthedevelopmentofoursocietyalsoneedsourspiritsreinforceharmonyelement,whichmakesourwholesocietylikeafamily.⑥Itneedsustochangefromourselvesandfromnowon;itrequiresustodoeasythingsagainandagain;itdemandsustoinfluencethepeoplearoundus.⑦Themorewedo,thenearerwearetoourharmonioussociety.解析：①簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明構(gòu)建和諧社會(huì)是當(dāng)今社會(huì)關(guān)注的一個(gè)話題，Thereismuchdiscussionabout議淪文常用句型，值得模仿。

②用兩個(gè)表轉(zhuǎn)折的詞語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)折，說(shuō)明社會(huì)上還存在一些與和諧社會(huì)不相符的現(xiàn)象，并舉出實(shí)例。noawarenessof為高分短語(yǔ)。

③讓步狀語(yǔ)從句使文章句式富于變化，說(shuō)明不良現(xiàn)象雖不多，卻影響生活質(zhì)量。

④從不良現(xiàn)象對(duì)生存環(huán)境、中國(guó)人的國(guó)際形象及素質(zhì)教育要求三方面闡述不和諧現(xiàn)象的影響。Foronething…Foranother…Lastbutnotleast使文章銜接自然，有條理。

⑤總結(jié)全文，點(diǎn)明主題，wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthat為亮點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)。

⑥用三個(gè)排比句說(shuō)明我們應(yīng)該如何從自身做起，為本文閃光點(diǎn)。

⑦表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，Themore…thenearer為亮點(diǎn)句型。

6.OnForeigners'LearningChinese①NowadaysChineseourmothertongueisenjoyinganunprecedentedpopularityintheworld.②OvertwohundredConfuciusInstituteshavebeensetupinsixty-ninecountriesandmanyOnForeigners'LearningChinese①Nowadays,Chinese,ourmothertongue,isenjoyinganunprecedentedpopularityintheworld.②OvertwohundredConfuciusInstituteshavebeensetupinsixty-ninecountries,andmany解析：①審題及布局。這篇作文討論國(guó)外“漢語(yǔ)熱”持續(xù)升溫的現(xiàn)象，要求分析其主要原因，并說(shuō)明給“我”的啟示。在布局上，可根據(jù)題目中給出的提綱展開(kāi)。第一段介紹很多外國(guó)人熱衷于學(xué)漢語(yǔ)，孔子學(xué)院遍地開(kāi)花；第二段說(shuō)明出現(xiàn)此現(xiàn)象的主要原因，注意要層次分明，邏輯性強(qiáng)；第三段說(shuō)明“漢語(yǔ)熱”給我的啟示與思考，可結(jié)合眼下大學(xué)生漢語(yǔ)水平低下這一事實(shí)來(lái)展開(kāi)。②語(yǔ)言。本文涉及在說(shuō)明“漢語(yǔ)熱”這一熱點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上分析原因，語(yǔ)言需客觀、簡(jiǎn)潔、縝密，注重銜接；談及個(gè)人思考時(shí)，語(yǔ)言要富有表現(xiàn)力和感情色彩；建議考生多關(guān)注社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)，勤于思考，并注意積累相關(guān)詞匯及表達(dá)。

7.AwayfromNet-barCampaignIthasbeenreportedthatamiddleschoolinXuzhouCityhasrecentlylaunchedacampaignnamed"AwayfromNet-bar".Morethanathousandstudentshavesignedfortheirsolemnpromisethattheywillnotspendasingleminuteinthenet-bars.Withthecomingofthesummervacationthiscampaignisespeciallymeaningfulforthehealthydevelopmentoftheminors.TheInternethasbroughtpeoplegreatconvenienceingettinginformationentertainingandcontactingeachotherandithasalsobenefitedsomebusinessmenespeciallytheownersofnet-bars.Whileitistruethatmostnet-barsarerunninglegallyitisalsotruethatsomeareofferingunhealthyprogramsthatinvolveviolenceandsexcontent.Sincemostmiddleschoolstudentsarepronetobeinfluencedandtheycanhardlytellwhichbarisdoingwellandwhichoneisnotitisonlyadvisablethattheyshouldstayawayfromall.Besidesstayingawayfromnet-hatsisalsogoodtostudents'physicalhealth.Bypassivelysittingtoolonginfrontofthecomputerscreenboththeireyesightandphysiquesuffer.ObviouslytheAwayfromNet-barsCampaignisanactivitythatisworthadvocatinganditmeritsotherschools'reference.AwayfromNet-b