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Howtoteachwriting1Doyourstudentsenjoywriting?Doyouenjoygivingwritingassignments?Doyourstudentsenjoywriting2Whatisdifficult?學(xué)生寫作錯(cuò)誤過(guò)多不重視或畏懼寫作難批改你辛苦付出多學(xué)生改進(jìn)不大書寫的問(wèn)題教學(xué)的整體設(shè)計(jì)和規(guī)劃不夠沒(méi)有好的訓(xùn)練方法教學(xué)資源缺乏學(xué)生不聽話Whatisdifficult?學(xué)生寫作錯(cuò)誤過(guò)多3鄉(xiāng)愁中國(guó)臺(tái)灣余光中小時(shí)侯鄉(xiāng)愁是一枚小小的郵票我在這頭母親在那頭長(zhǎng)大后鄉(xiāng)愁是一張窄窄的船票我在這頭新娘在那頭后來(lái)啊鄉(xiāng)愁是一方矮矮的墳?zāi)刮以谕忸^母親在里頭而現(xiàn)在鄉(xiāng)愁是一灣淺淺的海峽我在這頭大陸在那頭文愁中國(guó)中學(xué)莘莘學(xué)子初一時(shí)作文之愁是一枚小小的郵票我在這頭分?jǐn)?shù)在那頭初二時(shí)作文之愁是一張窄窄的船票我在這頭例文在那頭初三時(shí)啊作文之愁是一方矮矮的墳?zāi)刮以谕忸^夢(mèng)想在里頭而中考時(shí)作文之愁是一灣深深的鴻溝我在這頭改卷老師在那頭愁鄉(xiāng)愁文愁愁4Whyshouldweteach

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writewellwritebravelyWritingisonpaperThepenismightierthantheswordthinking,youornotWhetherwritewellwr6WRITINGallowslearnerstimetothinkIt’ssaferthanspeakingshowsprogressvalidassessmentintegratesotherskillsisa‘reallife’skillsuitsdifferentlearnerstylesWRITINGallowslearnersIt’ssaf7英語(yǔ)寫作是英語(yǔ)綜合能力的具體運(yùn)用是對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行全面考核的綜合性測(cè)試能夠真實(shí)地反映出學(xué)生當(dāng)前的英語(yǔ)水平和能力123《普通初級(jí)中學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(實(shí)驗(yàn))》強(qiáng)調(diào)在進(jìn)一步發(fā)展學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用能力的基礎(chǔ)上,著重提高學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)獲取信息,處理信息,分析問(wèn)題和解決問(wèn)題的能力,特別是學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)思維和表達(dá)的能力。

英語(yǔ)寫作是英語(yǔ)綜合能力的具體運(yùn)用是對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行全面考核的8七年級(jí)“寫”的分級(jí)目標(biāo)（三級(jí)目標(biāo)）1、能正確使用常用的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；2、能使用簡(jiǎn)單的圖表和海報(bào)等形式傳達(dá)信息；3、能參照范例寫出或回復(fù)簡(jiǎn)單的問(wèn)候卡和邀請(qǐng)卡；4、能用短語(yǔ)或句子描述系列圖片，編寫簡(jiǎn)單的故事。規(guī)范→準(zhǔn)確七年級(jí)“寫”的分級(jí)目標(biāo)（三級(jí)目標(biāo)）規(guī)范→準(zhǔn)確9八年級(jí)“寫”的分級(jí)目標(biāo)（四級(jí)目標(biāo)）1、能正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；2、能用詞組或簡(jiǎn)單句為自己創(chuàng)作的圖片寫出說(shuō)明；3、能寫出簡(jiǎn)短的文段，如簡(jiǎn)單的指令、規(guī)則；4、能在教師的幫助下或以小組討論的方式起草和修改作文。規(guī)范→準(zhǔn)確→流暢八年級(jí)“寫”的分級(jí)目標(biāo)（四級(jí)目標(biāo)）規(guī)范→準(zhǔn)確→流暢10九年級(jí)“寫”的分級(jí)目標(biāo)（五級(jí)目標(biāo)）1、能根據(jù)寫作要求，收集、準(zhǔn)備素材；2、能獨(dú)立起草短文、短信等，并在教師指導(dǎo)下進(jìn)行修改；3、能使用常見的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系；4、能簡(jiǎn)單描述人物或事件；5、能根據(jù)所給圖示或表格寫出簡(jiǎn)單的段落或操作說(shuō)明。規(guī)范→準(zhǔn)確→流暢→得體九年級(jí)“寫”的分級(jí)目標(biāo)（五級(jí)目標(biāo)）規(guī)范→準(zhǔn)確→流暢→得體11Whatisagoodcomposition?Whatisagoodcomposition?126分6分1314分14分14考生作文21212分考生作文21212分15考生作文315分考生作文315分163分3分17WRITINGspellinghandwritinggrammarpunctuationcreativityvocabularyWhatisthemostimportant?WRITINGspellinghandwritinggra18中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第一檔：（15---13分）完全符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確,要點(diǎn)齊全，立意高。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，具有邏輯性。卷面書寫干凈，整潔，無(wú)涂抹，字跡大小適中，疏密合適，書寫美觀。標(biāo)點(diǎn)，大小寫正確。中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第一檔：（15---13分）19導(dǎo)致學(xué)生扣分的問(wèn)題：導(dǎo)致學(xué)生扣分的問(wèn)題：20Theyhavedicidedtotryagain.Sheleavedherhometownwhenshewasyoung.Thisbookspentmetenyuan.Isthereanythingyouhavedifficultwith？詞匯掌握不牢Theyhavedicidedtotryagain21Thereisasmallboylikesplayingfootball.Everythingaregoingverywell.Ithink

dosomesportsisveryimportantforus.語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤Everythingaregoingverywel22Hebybiketoschool.

漢語(yǔ)思維方式寫作Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.Todayisraining.

漢語(yǔ)思維方式寫作Heencouragedmetol23審題不準(zhǔn)MysummervacationSummervacationiscomingthenextmonth.IhopeIcanhaveagoodtime.Mymotherisbusyeveryday,shegetsupearlyanddoeshouseworkandthengoestowork.Intheeveningwhenshecomesback,shehastocookforme.Sheisreallytired.Ilovemymother,soIwillhelphertodosomehousethissummer.審題不準(zhǔn)Mysummer24標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用不當(dāng)Shelikesdancing、skating、surfing、boatingandswimming.Hesaidhecouldplayvolleyball,basketball……"Ihaveadream,"saidMartin。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用不當(dāng)Shelikesdancing、skat25Ihopeyoucansendittomeassoonaspossible.Iloveyouverymuchandhopeyoucanhelpme.

語(yǔ)言表達(dá)不得體Playingsportscanchangestudents’healthandstudy.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)不得體Playingsportscanchan26詞匯貧乏Myschoolisinthewestofthecity.Youcaneasilyrememberthesewordsifyouusethemeveryday.Thepartyisagreatsuccess.Myschoolliesinthewestoftheschool./You’llhavenotrouble/difficultyrememberingthesewordsifyouusethemeveryday.Thepartyisagreatsuccess.詞匯貧乏27書寫不規(guī)范書寫不規(guī)范28Howtoimproveourteaching?Howtoimproveourteaching?291.Handwritingactivities2.Sentencewritingactivities3.Paragraphwritingactivities1.Handwritingactivities30中考閱卷感受：1.閱卷時(shí)間短；2.閱卷的速度快；3.閱卷老師的心理：給分中庸

最吃虧學(xué)生群：中等左右學(xué)生中考閱卷感受：最吃虧學(xué)生群：中等左右學(xué)生31如何打動(dòng)和取悅閱卷老師？以卷面感人以內(nèi)容動(dòng)人卷面，體現(xiàn)了一種態(tài)度如何打動(dòng)和取悅閱卷老師？以卷面感人32有一種態(tài)度叫“我出類拔萃”有一種態(tài)度叫“我出類拔萃”33有一種態(tài)度叫“我一絲不茍”有一種態(tài)度叫“我一絲不茍”34有一種態(tài)度叫“我努力做到最好”有一種態(tài)度叫“我努力做到最好”35有一種態(tài)度叫“你看著辦”有一種態(tài)度叫“你看著辦”36還有一種態(tài)度叫“惡心不死你”還有一種態(tài)度叫“惡心不死你”371）書寫的規(guī)格（1）應(yīng)按照字母的筆順和字母在三格中應(yīng)占的位置書寫。（2）每個(gè)字母都應(yīng)稍向右傾斜，約為5°，斜度要一致。

1）書寫的規(guī)格38（3）大寫字母都應(yīng)一樣高，占上面兩格，但不頂?shù)谝痪€。（4）小寫字母a，c，e，m，n，o，r，s，u，v，w，x，z寫在中間的一格里，上下抵線，但都不出格。（3）大寫字母都應(yīng)一樣高，占上面兩格，但不頂?shù)谝痪€。（4）小39（5）小寫字母b，d，h，k，l的上端頂?shù)谝痪€，占上面兩格。（6）小寫字母i和j的點(diǎn)、f和t的上端都在第一格中間，f和t的第二筆緊貼在第二線下（5）小寫字母b，d，h，k，l的上端頂?shù)谝痪€，占上面兩格。40（7）小寫字母fgjpqy的下端抵第四線

（8）小寫字母a，d，h，i，k，l，m，n，t和u，它們的提筆是一個(gè)上挑的小圓鉤，不能寫成銳角（7）小寫字母fgjpqy的下端抵第四線（8）小41（9）書寫單詞時(shí)，字母與字母之間的間隔要均勻、適當(dāng)，不要湊得過(guò)緊，也不要離得太遠(yuǎn)

（10）書寫句子時(shí)，單詞之間必須有適當(dāng)?shù)木嚯x，一般以空出一個(gè)小寫字母a的寬度為宜（11）標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)要寫在一定的位置上（9）書寫單詞時(shí)，字母與字母之間的間隔要均勻、適當(dāng)，不要湊得42注意：英語(yǔ)中無(wú)頓號(hào)、

注意：英語(yǔ)中無(wú)頓號(hào)、43有效訓(xùn)練方法列舉志愿者評(píng)委每排字?jǐn)?shù)......

有效訓(xùn)練方法列舉442.Sentencewritingactivities2.Sentencewritingactivities45Iveryexcited.Hemustathome.IamlikeEnglish.IwaswenttoChengdulastweek寫正確的句子Iveryexcited.Hemustathome46Ishouldgohomeseemyparentsthisweekend.Thefinalexamiscoming,everyonehastoworkhard.Therearemanystudentsinourclassliveatschool.Ishouldgohomeseemyparent47五種基本句型天天練擴(kuò)句縮句五種基本句型天天練48

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3.ThiswordprocessingprogramismorecomplexthantheoneIusedtwoyearsago.初中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)專題講座課件52例句那個(gè)16歲大的男孩子沒(méi)有關(guān)燈就出去了。第一步：找出句子主干男孩出去例句第一步：找出句子主干男孩出去53第二步：確定主干的相關(guān)詞匯 那個(gè)16歲大的男孩子沒(méi)有關(guān)燈就出去了。boy,goout第二步：確定主干的相關(guān)詞匯 那個(gè)16歲大的男孩子沒(méi)54第三步：翻譯句子主干那個(gè)16歲大的男孩子沒(méi)有關(guān)燈就出去了。Theboywentout.考慮：時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)第三步：翻譯句子主干那個(gè)16歲大的男孩子沒(méi)有55第四步：添加修飾成分The16-year-oldboywentout.The16-year-oldboywentoutwithoutturningoffthelights. 那個(gè)16歲大的男孩子沒(méi)有關(guān)燈就出去了。__________________________第四步：添加修飾成分The16-year-oldb56Makingsentencesbygivenwords;Writingsentencesforthepictures;Reorderingthesentences;Completingsentences;

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周末我們會(huì)有很多作業(yè)要做.AWehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.BWehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.Whichisbetter?周末我們會(huì)有很多作業(yè)要做.62他沒(méi)聽我課上講的東西。AHeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaidintheclass.BHedidn’tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.他沒(méi)聽我課上講的東西。63鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生使用“高端”的詞匯。=endless/oceansof

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It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.1.Ourparentsreallywishus65句式多變化句式多變化66Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.Wemetattheschoolgateand67Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcr68肯定VS否定在Mary的幫助下，我取得了成功。WithMary’shelp,Isucceeded.IcouldneversucceedwithoutMary’shelp.肯定VS否定69Weneedtohelppeople.Thepeopleareintrouble.Weneedtohelpthepeoplewhoareintrouble.運(yùn)用從句。運(yùn)用從句Weneedtohelppeople.Thepe70Theearthgoesaroundthesun.ItisafactthattheearthgoesaroundthesunTheearthgoesaroundthesun.71強(qiáng)調(diào)句；Wecanachieveourdreamsbyworkinghard.

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強(qiáng)調(diào)句；72加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法JoiningtheEn733.Paragraphwritingactivities:

3.Paragraphwritingactivities74初中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)專題講座課件75SmokingWriteacompositiononthetopicof“Smoking”SmokingWriteacompositionon76Tothinkfreelyandputdownallpossibleideasthatcometotheirminds.BrainstormingTothinkfreelyandputdowna77badforhealthcauselungcancerexpensivebadfornon-smokerspollutetheaircausefiredangerouswastemoneysmokinginpublicplaceindoorsmokingsmokinginpublicplacesbadforhealth78Mappingtoselecttheusefulideas

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Conclusion/OpinionTopi104寫作注意的幾個(gè)問(wèn)題：1.盡量使用簡(jiǎn)單句，要牢記“避繁就簡(jiǎn)”原則，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。2.把握要點(diǎn)，避免遺漏，注意發(fā)揮適度既不要多寫也不要少寫。3.注意句子與句子、段與段之間過(guò)渡自然，行文連貫，適當(dāng)使用連詞，如：and,so,or,but,What’smore;What’sworse,notonly…butalso,neither…nor等。4.字體一定要工整漂亮。寫作注意的幾個(gè)問(wèn)題：1.盡量使用簡(jiǎn)單句，要牢記“避繁就105Homework現(xiàn)在很多同學(xué)喜歡上網(wǎng)，但是老師對(duì)學(xué)生上網(wǎng)觀點(diǎn)不一，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀銓?duì)學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的觀點(diǎn)。

Homework現(xiàn)在很多同學(xué)喜歡上網(wǎng)，但是老師對(duì)學(xué)生上網(wǎng)觀點(diǎn)106示例2初中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)專題講座課件107詞組短語(yǔ)法詞組短語(yǔ)法108寫不出好作文？不會(huì)寫句子純翻譯，不注重語(yǔ)法不會(huì)用出彩的詞組句型寫不出好作文？不會(huì)寫句子純翻譯，不注重語(yǔ)法不會(huì)用出彩的詞組109詞組&短語(yǔ)Helikesplayingbasketball.打籃球playbasketball喜歡做什么事情likedoingsth.他詞組&短語(yǔ)Helikesplayingbasketba110請(qǐng)你建議帶一些禮物advisesb.todosth.bringsomepresentsIadviseallofyoutobringsomepresents.請(qǐng)你建議帶一些禮物advisesb.todosth111為了使同學(xué)們與人交往時(shí)舉止更加文雅，你校學(xué)生會(huì)正在舉辦以“Howtobehavewell?”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文。（以上背景無(wú)需描述）短文要求如下：1.學(xué)生應(yīng)該守時(shí)，守信，不撒謊，不說(shuō)臟話；2.禮貌待人，熱心助人；3.遵守交通規(guī)則；不在公共場(chǎng)所喧嘩，不亂扔垃圾；4.請(qǐng)你就此話題再補(bǔ)充一至兩個(gè)個(gè)人看法。要求：1.不要逐詞翻譯。2.在文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名和姓名。3.詞數(shù)60-80左右。短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：dirtyobeypromiseBehavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothers._________________________________________________________beontimekeeppromiseslietosb.bepolitetoothersgivesb.ahandtrafficrulesmakenoiseStep1:找詞組為了使同學(xué)們與人交往時(shí)舉止更加文雅，你校學(xué)生會(huì)正在舉辦be112beontimelietosb.bepolitetoothersgivesb.ahandtrafficrulesmakenoiseStudentsshouldandDon’t

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Step2:寫句子orthrowrubbishinpublic.keeppromises.beontimelietosb.bepolite113Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Studentsshouldbeontimean114First，……….Second，………Third，……..Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions.Howto…….Howtobehavewell?Step3:加結(jié)構(gòu)First，……….Second，………Third，…115Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions.First，Second，Third，BehavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothersStudentsshouldbeontimean116并列：and,also,notonly……butalso,neither…nor,Either….or,轉(zhuǎn)折：but,however,ontheotherhand因果：becauseof，therefore，asaresult,重要性：firstofall,themostimportantis,總結(jié)：allinall,aboveall,afterall表自己觀點(diǎn)：inmyopinion

遞進(jìn)：besides,What’smoreStep4:加關(guān)系詞并列：and,also,notonly……buta117Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions..First，Second

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What’smore,becauseofkeepingawayfromtrafficaccident.notonlybutalsoStudentsshouldbeontimean118Studentsshouldnotonlybeontimebutalsokeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions..First，Second

，Third，BehavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothersButWhat’smore,becauseofkeepingawayfromtrafficaccident.Wewillnotmakefriendswithsomeoneifhemakesnoiseorthrowsrubbishinpublic.

Step5:加從句、諺語(yǔ)Studentsshouldnotonlybeon119Behavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothers.Buthowtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions.First,studentsshouldnotonlybeontimebutalsokeeppromises.What’smore,Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Second

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whentheyneedit.Third，Let’sobeytrafficrulesinordertokeepawayfromtrafficaccident.Besides,ifsomeonemakesnoiseorthrowsrubbishinpublic,wewillnotmakefriendswithhim.

Allinall,Ithinksmileisanotherkeytobehavewell,becausewherethereisasmile,thereisafriend.Behavingwellisthesecretof120總結(jié)寫作文步驟：1.找詞組2.用詞組寫句子（沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤）3.結(jié)構(gòu)4.關(guān)系詞5，利用名言或從句，使文章出彩。總結(jié)寫作文步驟：1.找詞組2.用詞組寫句子（沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤）3121示例3視頻示例3視頻122批改批改123Thesummerholidaycomes.Moreandmorekidsbecomeunhappybecausetheyhavetoomanyactivitiestodo.Thechildrendon’thaveanylessonstodayfourafternoonsaweek.Let’sallgotheretoplay.Thestudentsdon’thavemuchtimetoplaywiththeirfriends.Weallknowitisimportantforkidstolearnhowtorelax.Itisnotgoodforbothkidsandtheirparents.ManyAmericangirlstakepartinsports，dancingandsinginggroups.Youcangotoplaysoccer,playbasketball.WhenIgrowup，Iwilltrytomakethemlivemorehappily.helppoorchildrenliveabetterlife.Whatahardlifemyparentslive.（125詞）Thesummerholidayc124Thesummerholidaycomes.Moreandmorekidsbecomeunhappybecausetheyhavetoomanyactivitiestodo.Thechildrendon’thaveanylessonstodayfourafternoonsaweek.Let’sallgotheretoplay.Thestudentsdon’thavemuchtimetoplaywiththeirfriends.Weallknowitisimportantforkidstolearnhowtorelax.Itisnotgoodforbothkidsandtheirparents.ManyAmericangirlstakepartinsports，dancingandsinginggroups.Youcangotoplaysoccer ,playbasketball.WhenIgrowup，Iwilltrytomakethemlivemorehappily.helppoorchildrenliveabetterlife.Whatahardlifemyparentslive.（125詞）happymoreSotheymoredosports.Theytodosports.Theykeephealthy.healthstudy.studentsTheyortheyTheywillSportsgoodtheynow!Iscoming9分Thesummerholidayc125HowshouldteacherscorrectwritingCorrectallthemistakes?NO.Howshouldteacherscorrectwr126對(duì)缺乏自信的孩子更需要激勵(lì)Over-correction.Correctjustonetypeofmistakes.對(duì)缺乏自信的孩子更需要激勵(lì)Over-correction127Howshouldteacherscorrectwriting2.ToagreeonalistofwrittensymbolsHowshouldteacherscorrectwr128統(tǒng)一批改符號(hào)，例如：

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