Unit6DetectivesWritingBeforeyouwrite12PretendthatyouareDetectiveKenandyouaretellingPansyabouthowyoudealtwiththerecentvase-stolencase.Thinkaboutthestoryyoureadonpage91andretellthestoryinyourownwords.A1

PretendthatyouareMrJonesandyouaretellingDetectiveKenabouthowyouplannedthewholeinsurance-cheatingcase.Thinkaboutthestoryyoureadonpage91andretellthestoryinyourownwords.12

A2Whileyouwrite123Lastweek,DetectiveKensawacrime.Thepicturesbelowshowwhathappened.B1Acrimereport123454561231SupposeyouareDetectiveKen.Tellwhatyoucanseeineachpicturewiththehelpofthegivenwords.B2Man

— standinginadoorway, holdingabrokenpair ofsunglasses

— tall,about25,brownhair

— redT-shirt,bluejeans, blackbelt,dirtytrainersSchoolboy

— whiteshirt,blueshorts

— readingabook45612323Oh!I’msorry.Thesesunglassescostme100dollars!Youmustpayforanewpair.bumpedinto,droppedsunglassesputhisfootonthemmanveryangry,toldschoolboy‘…’boyfrightened45651234ButIonlyhave20dollars.Allright.Giveittome.boysaid,‘…’mantookmoneyquicklypolicearrivedmanwascaught456B3123OnFriday,12thOctoberatabout4p.m.,IwaswalkingalongRiversideRoad.Ontheothersideoftheroad,Isaw…...Icalledthepolicerightaway.Soon,thepolicearrivedandthemanwascaught.456123456*Afteryouwrite12Later,DetectiveKenandJillbecamegoodfriends.Heinvitedhertoseeanewfilmtogether.Thepicturesontherightshowwhathappenedonthatday.Lookatthepicturescarefullyandputtheminanyorderyoulike.Thenwriteastoryaboutthesepictures.C1312345678Tomputthepicturesinthefollowingorder.C2123ThisisTom’sstory.C3123UsingSamplearticleUsing2．Writeanintroductionofyourfavouritecharacterinatleast60words.（選擇你最喜歡的一個(gè)故事人物，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的人物介紹）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Samplearticle【答案】MyfavouritecharacterisHarryPotter.HewascreatedbyfamousBritishwriterJ.K.Rowlingin1997.HarryPotterwasamagicalschoolstudentwhoworeglassesandhadnoparents.HewasknownbyeverystudentinhisschoolbecausehefoughtbravelyagainsttheDarkwizardVoldemort.Atschool,hehadtwogoodfriends,theywereRonandHermione.ItisgreatfunandexcitementformetoreadHarryPotter'sstory.SometimesIevenfeelasifI'moneofPotter'spartners.AndIalwaysthinkofhimwheneverImeetwithdifficulty.NowHarryPotterisverypopularwithyoungstudents.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文屬于話(huà)題作文，主要介紹你喜歡的一個(gè)故事人物以及它對(duì)你產(chǎn)生的影響。注意時(shí)態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用，切記不要犯時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致和單詞拼寫(xiě)等錯(cuò)誤。并靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞以及短語(yǔ)，使文章更加生動(dòng)形象。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：?jiǎn)卧~短語(yǔ)：itisadjforsbtodosth,asif,oneof+名詞的復(fù)數(shù),thinkof,whatever,meetwith以及bepopularwith等。高分句型：HarryPotterwasamagicalschoolstudentwhoworeglassesandhadnoparents中who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如itisadjforsbtodosth,asif,oneof+名詞的復(fù)數(shù),thinkof,

meetwith以及bepopularwith等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，如whenever；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。Using3．Writing（作文）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic"TheMostAttractiveStoryIHaveRead".（以“我讀過(guò)的最具吸引力的故事”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考。）*What'sthemostattractivestoryyouhaveread?What'itabout?*Whydoyoulikeit?*Howdoesitinfluenceyourlife?TheMostAttractiveStoryIHaveRead__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SamplearticleUsingSamplearticle【答案】例文：ThebenefitsofdoinghouseworkItisgoodforstudentstodosomehousework.Somepeoplethinkstudentsneednotdoanyhousework.Theythinktheonlythingstudentsneeddoistostudywell.Idon’tthinkso.Itisgoodforstudentstodosomehouseworkforthreereasons.Todosomehouseworkcankeepstudentshealthyandstrong,somehardhouseworkcanberegardedasakindofphysicalexercise.Todosomehouseworkcanshareparents’work.Havearest,andIwilldothehousework.SoIthinkitisgoodforstudentstodosomehousework.Differentpeoplehavedifferentlivinghabits.Sodoinghouseworkthismatter,therearegreatdifferences.Butsomebodydoesn’tlikedoingchores,andjuststaysathometodonothing.Ialwayshelpmyparentswithhousework.Forexample,Ilikedoinghousework.Ilikemakingthebed.IlikecookingandIlikesweepingthefloor.Becauseinmyopinion,Ithinkdoingchoreshelpstodevelopmyindependence.Anditteachesmehowtolookaftermyself.Doyoulikedoinghousework?【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于你平時(shí)所做的家務(wù)及你的感受的短文。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱(chēng)采用第一人稱(chēng)為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可適當(dāng)使用句型、短語(yǔ)使文章更通暢連貫。最后行文力求語(yǔ)句通順，邏輯清晰，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。Using5．根據(jù)所給提示，以ATheft為題，寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________案件貴重物品被盜時(shí)間5月2號(hào)晚上地點(diǎn)布朗先生的商店目擊者描述兩個(gè)小偷戴著面具，一個(gè)高大強(qiáng)壯，另一個(gè)中等個(gè)子；每個(gè)人背著一個(gè)沉重的包，氣喘吁吁警方正在現(xiàn)場(chǎng)查找指紋和其他線(xiàn)索，會(huì)盡快破案Samplearticle【答案】例文ATheftOntheeveningofMay2nd,athefthappenedinMrBrown’sshop.TwothievesbrokeintoMrBrown’sshopandalotofvaluablethingswerestolen.Thethieveswereseentorunawayfromtheshop.Onewitnesssaidthetwothieveswerewearingmasks.