Howcanwedescribeactionsvividly?

Hejumpedintothewell.

Shelayontheground.尖叫奔跑跳入井中++screamedfled/ranawayjumpedintothewell

Themanscreamed/letoutascreamoffear,ran/fledawayandjumpedintothewell.

環(huán)顧四周躺倒在地用紙蓋住臉++glancedaroundlaydownonthegroundcoveredherfacewithapieceofpaperSheglancedaround,laydownonthegroundandcoveredherfacewithapieceofpaper.

Achainofactions（動(dòng)作鏈）：動(dòng)作分解

1)Themanletoutascreamoffear,ranawayandjumpedintothewell.2)Sheglancedaround,laydownonthegroundandcoveredherfacewithapieceofpaper.

Tip1:動(dòng)作三連結(jié)構(gòu)（A,BandC結(jié)構(gòu)）1)Thevillagerscaughtsightoftheman’sreaction.2)Thevillagersraninalldirections._____________________theman’sreaction,thevillagersraninalldirections.Catchingsightof哪吒跳下來。Nezhajumpedoffthewall.

heardNezha

______mom'swords,_______and_______

offthewall.

smiledjumped動(dòng)作鏈：非謂語動(dòng)詞：

_______mom'swords,Nezhasmiledandjumpedoffthewall.

Hearing主動(dòng)被動(dòng)不定式todotobedone現(xiàn)在分詞doingbeingdonehavingdonehavingbeendone過去分詞done?

Tip2Non-finiteverbs(非謂語動(dòng)詞)Tip3:Addothermodifiers（修飾語）1)AddadverbsRowrowrowyourboat,Gentlydownthestream,Merrily,

merrily,

merrily,

merrily,Lifeisbutadream.gladly,cheerfully,joyfully,delightedly,excitedly...angrily,fearfully,anxiously...sadly,heart-brokenly,tearfully...surprisedly,astonishedly...swiftly,briskly(敏捷地),hurriedly;gently,carefully,strongly,softly,bravely....EmotionMovementThemanletoutascream_________,ranaway_________

andjumpedintothewell_________.

這位男子緊張地尖叫，趕緊跑開，勇敢地跳入井中。Practicenervouslyhurriedlybravely

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiled___________andjumpedoffthewall_______________.

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledandjumpedoffthewall.

cheerfully添加副詞：quickly/brisklywithexcitement/delight/joysurprise/amazementNezhalookedathismomgrief/sorrow/lowspirits

2)Addprepositionalphrases（介詞短語）anger/annoyancepanic/fear/horrorinhighspiritsinWhenNezhacame,thevillagersfledoutofthehouse__________________________.

inahurry/ingreatfear/inpanic

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallbriskly.

添加介詞短語：

Hearing

mom'swords,Nezhasmiled

cheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallbriskly____________________________________.inhighspirits/withexcitement/withdelight3)AddWith+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語翻譯：這位男子緊張地尖叫，拳頭攥緊(clench)。Themanletoutascreamnervously,____________________________.I’mlyingalonewithmyheadonthephone.Thinkingofyoutillithurts.withhisfistsclenched

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallbrisklyinhighspirits.

添加with結(jié)構(gòu)：

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfully____________________andjumpedoffthewallbrisklyinhighspirits.withhiseyeswideopen1.Nezhajumpedoffthewall.3.Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledandjumpedoffthewall.6.Hearing

mom'swords,Nezhasmiled

cheerfullywithhiseyeswideopenandjumpedoffthewallbrisklyinhighspirits.

5.Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallbrisklyinhighspirits.2.Nezhaheardmom'swords,smiledandjumpedoffthewall.(UseA,BandC)(Usenon-finiteverbs)(Addadverbs)(Addprepsitionalphrases)4.Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallbriskly.(Addwithstructure)【2021年高考】

Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage-Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight，Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.

Para1:

Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Para2:ThevideowaspostedtheMondaybeforeHalloween.

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