初中英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧指導(dǎo)TobeabletowriteanEnglishcompositonThewaysofcompositionwriting.Usethewaystowriteacomposition.

LearningObjectiveDiscussaboutthispicture

（2018河北）

請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察下面的圖片，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。提示

（1）Whatarethemanandthewomandoing?（2）Whatshouldyoudowhenyouseepeoplelitterlikethis?Why?要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

（2）短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：throw,environment,civilized（文明的）

Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanis___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________認(rèn)真審題，分析背景,找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。Step1審英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧

定人稱、定時(shí)態(tài)：介紹圖示中兩個(gè)人在做的事情，人稱為_______，時(shí)態(tài)為___________；介紹自己看到此類情況的做法，人稱為_______，時(shí)態(tài)為_________定主題：_____________環(huán)保、愛護(hù)環(huán)境第三人稱第一人稱現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)/一般將來時(shí)Readthetipscarefullytothinkaboutthetopic,includingthebackground.Forexample,inthispassage:用核心詞匯或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)。列Step2英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧Theman:throwaway,everywhereThewoman:stop,ask…to…,put…in…I:when,doesn’tlistento,pickup,myself,protecttheenvironmentEnding:takeaction,amorebeautifulplaceWhatareyouaskedtowriteabout?Howmanyaspects(方面)？Listthekeywordsandexpressions將列出的核心詞匯或短語整理成句子,使結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合表達(dá)習(xí)慣。Step3整英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧ThemanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhereThewomanisstoppinghim.Sheaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin.Shetellsthemanthatthecityisourhome.Iseeotherpeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,Iwillalsodoasthewomandoes.Hedoesn’tlistentome,Iwillpickitupmyselfandputininthedustbin.Ithinkthecityismyhome.weshouldprotecttheenvironment.Everyonetakesactiontoprotectit,thecitywillbeamorebeautifulplacetolive.,1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,both…and;notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示條件:if3.表示順序:first,next，then,finally;4.表示因果:because,so;5.表示選擇:or,either…or;6.表示解釋:forexample,suchas;7.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧Step4：連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。Useconnectivestojoinsentences.Turnthesentencesintoapassage美

修改詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下改變句式或添加語句，展示自己的語言功底。寫作第六步：英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧

檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫和大小寫使用正確

寫作第七步：抄將草稿認(rèn)真抄寫到答題紙上，一定注意書寫的注意事項(xiàng)。Payattentiontoyourhandwriting!寫作第五步：查153書寫注意事項(xiàng)3、一旦寫錯(cuò)，規(guī)范修改——用一條斜線劃掉即可。eg:HecanspekerEnglishverywell.HecanspekerspeakEnglishverywell.1、規(guī)范書寫，字母飽滿圓潤，格式正確。作文答題紙一般為單線，我們應(yīng)將單線作為“四線格”中的第三線并以此為基準(zhǔn)書寫，不要把它作為第四線，讓字母吊在線上。2、堅(jiān)決不能在試卷上出現(xiàn)亂涂、亂寫——給人一種凌亂的感覺。It’syourturnnow!

某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“建設(shè)綠色校園”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校上周也進(jìn)行了保護(hù)校園環(huán)境的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)環(huán)境的認(rèn)識(shí)，活動(dòng)中你做了什么，以及你的感受

要點(diǎn):（1）Whatdoyouthinkofprotectingtheenvironment?（2）Whatdidyoudointheactivity?（3）Howdidyoufeel?要求:（1）短文必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

（2）短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Atmyschool,weheldapracticalactivitylastweek_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writingpractice

思路點(diǎn)撥1.人稱:________________________________2.時(shí)態(tài)：________________________________3.寫作導(dǎo)圖：ApracticalactivityofprotectingtheenvironmentYouropinionsonthisactivity：__________________Thethingsyoudidinthisactivity:_______________Yourfeelingsatthattime：____________________________________整（成句）:審:列:美（定稿）：連(成篇)：(writeasmanywordsandexpressionsaspossible)查（糾錯(cuò)）：謄寫：Summary——書面表達(dá)寫作技巧審列整連美草稿紙答題紙抄payattentiontoyourhandwriting!查

要求：1.短文必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。

3.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Homework每年6月8號(hào)為“世界海洋日”(WorldOceansDay)，今年世界海洋日的主題是“清潔我們的海洋（CleaningOurOceans）”。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你以“SayNoToPlastics”為題，根據(jù)以下提示和要求，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。提示：1.Whyshouldwesaynotoplastics?2.Whatshouldwedoinourdailylife?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EnglishWritingSkills:1.Readthetipscarefully,includingthebackground.2.Whatareyouaskedtowriteabout?Howmanyaspects(方面)？3.Useconnectivestojoinwords,phrasesandsentences.4.Payattentiontoyourhandwriting.Onepossibleversion:

Atmyschool,weheldapracticalactivitylastmonth.It'saboutprotectingtheenvironment.Ithinkthisactivityisverynecessary.It'simportantforeveryonetotakeactionstoprotectourenvironment.Afterall,wehaveonlyoneearth.Duringtheactivity,wenotonlywateredthetreesandflowersaroundourschool,butalsocollectedthewasteontheplayground.What'smore,wegaveaspeechtocallonallpeopletorealizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Weencouragedstudentstodosomesmallthingstomakeadifferencetoourenvironment.Ittookusthreehourstofinishit.Wewereverytiredbuthappy.Theschoolseemedmorebeautifulwithourefforts.Ilovemyschool.紅色為“連”藍(lán)色為“美”

習(xí)作互改評(píng)價(jià)表批改人姓名_____被改人姓名________作文標(biāo)題________批改日期___________評(píng)價(jià)項(xiàng)目得分（在相應(yīng)處打ˇ）語言單詞拼寫和大小寫使用正確54321用詞恰當(dāng)，避免重復(fù)用詞54321主謂一致，時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)使用得當(dāng)54321字跡工整，標(biāo)點(diǎn)規(guī)范54321句法固定搭配使用準(zhǔn)確108642句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，無殘缺句108642運(yùn)用多種句式表達(dá)108642總分:______（語言________句法______）文章的亮點(diǎn):待改進(jìn)的地方:4分6中考英語作文類型提示作文表格提示(Charts)圖文提示(Pictures)漢語提示(Chinese)英語提示(English)Waysofbeginning:1.Atpresent,protectingtheenvironmentisthemostimportant.2.Itiseveryone’sdutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.1.Ibelievewecanmaketheworldabetterplacetolivein.2.Inaword,everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference.3.Inmypointofview,I’lltrymybesttomakeourcitycleanerandmorebeautiful.Waysofending:寫作第四步

連英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhere.thewomanisstophim.Sheaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin.She()tellsthemanthatthecityisourhome.

()Iseeotherpeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,Iwillalsodo()thewomandoes.()hedoesn’tlistenme,Iwillpickitupmyselfandputitinthedustbin.

()Ithinkthecityismyhome.Weshouldprotecttheenvironment.

()everyonetakesactiontoprotectit,thecitywillbeamorebeautifulplacetolivein.

alsoWhenIfasBecauseIf寫作第五步

查英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhere.Thewomanisstopping

him.Sheaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin.Shealsotellsthemanthatthecityisourhome.

WhenIseeotherpeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,Iwillalsodoasthewomandoes.Ifhedoesn’tlistentome,Iwillpickitupmyselfandputinthedustbin.BecauseIthinkthecityismyhome.Weshouldprotecttheenvironment.

Ifeveryonetakesactiontoprotectit,thecitywillbeamorebeautifulplacetolivein.

美

英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhere.Thewomanisstoppinghim.Shenotonlyaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin,butalsotellshimthatthecityisourhome.

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Iseeotherpeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,I

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alsodoasthewomandoes.Ifhedoesn’tlistentome,Iwillpickitupmyselfandputinthedustbin.Because

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regardthecityasmyhome.

Itisourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.

Inmyopinion,ifeveryonetakesactiontoprotectit,thecitywillbeamorebeautifulplacetolivein.寫作第六步

美英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhere.Thewomanisstopping

him.Sheaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin.Shealsotellsthemanthatthecityisourhome.

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