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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。人與自我——校園話題——解決問題(全新升級版——對接B3U1知心大姐)Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthemajorheadachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.Itwasasixstorybuilding.Oneachfloor,hallwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers'offices.Somewhereinthebuilding,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.Allthedifferenthallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonemittomemory.Shedecidedthatshewouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn'texist.InherfirstP.E.class,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearoundthetrackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshefearedmorethanhavingtorunawholemile.ToEva,
“amile”
wasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometohergrandfather's,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar.WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(哨子),Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeofherclassmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind."It'sjustthebeginning,"shethought.
“I’lleinlastforsure.”SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusingamindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword
“mile.”
Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved(拐彎).Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldpleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式作答。Paragraph1:WhenCoachPittsaid,"Nicework!"toheratthefinishline,Evawas
surprised.
_________________________________Paragraph2:Evadecidedtousethesame
trick
todealwiththeschoolbuilding.【解析】原文講述了高中生Eva因為方向感不強,經(jīng)常在學(xué)校的教學(xué)樓上迷路,這是Eva面對的困難,也就是在續(xù)文中要解決的問題。在一次體育課上教練要求他們跑“amile”的時候,Eva覺得困難重重因而對自己沒有信心。但她積極想辦法,以“theshadow”為參照物,將“amile”分解成“l(fā)ap”,即把大任務(wù)分解為小任務(wù),更容易完成。通過分析原文,找出主要信息句:1.Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.2.Allthedifferenthallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonemittomemory.3.“I’lleinlastforsure."4.Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusingamindwickonherself.5.Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadoweastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved(拐彎).6.Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldpleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.
【構(gòu)思】利用原文信息句和兩段首句,理清思路:方向感太差記不住學(xué)校建筑的位置——體育課跑“amile”害怕是最后一名心里非常緊張——將“mile”分解為“l(fā)ap”——受到教練的贊賞——欣喜并介紹方法——利用同樣的方法記住theschoolbuilding的各個區(qū)域——獲得感悟段落續(xù)寫:①由第一段首句和第二段首句內(nèi)容可知,第一段內(nèi)容大致是:跑的成績不錯——欣喜若狂——回顧或者是向老師同學(xué)們介紹方法。②由第二段首句,可知第二段內(nèi)容大致是:Eva用同樣的方法將“theschoolbuilding”分解為樓層或?qū)ふ覅⒄瘴铩K于記住了各個區(qū)域——領(lǐng)悟(遇到困難不要害怕或回避,主動想辦法解決問題;或?qū)⒋笕蝿?wù)分解為小任務(wù),完成起來更輕松。)下水文1WhenCoachPittsaid"Nicework!"toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.Shewasaheadofothers!Sheneverimaginedthatshecouldfinishrunningawholemilewhichshehadconsideredthemostfearful.Withherclassmatescheeringandadmiring,Evajumpedupwithexcitement,withabroadsmileonherface.Later,CoachPittaskedEvatosharehertrickofrunningsofast.She
recalledherconcentrationonherlapbylap.Whatoccurredtoherwasthatshecouldusethistricktoimproveherpoorsenseofdirection."WhydonotIhaveatry?"Shemurmuredtoherself.Evadecidedtousethetricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.Insteadofthinkinghowhugetheschoolbuildingwasandhowplexthedifferenthallwaysandroomswere,shefocuedonrememberingherclassesfirst.Afterthat,shetriedtorememberotherplaces,suchaslaboratories,teachers'offices,thelibrary,thecafeteriaandthegym.Daybyday,effortspaidoff.Shefinallygotfamiliarwitheachfloor,notworriedaboutlosingwayanymore.Fromthenon,shebegantoenjoytheschoollifeatease,gettingaroundtheschoolbuildingconfidently.Howmuchshegotthroughthetrick!下水文2:WhenCoachPitsaid“Nicework"toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.Neverhadshethoughtrunningawholemilecouldbesuchaeasyjobforher,Itoccurredtoherthatitwasthemindtricksheusedthatenabledhertofinishthecourse.Soaftercelebratinghersuccessbypletinganotherlap,Evabegantowonderwhetherthetrickwouldworkinothercases,suchas...thehugeschoolbuilding!Shecouldn'trememberhowmanytimesshehadbeenlostinthebuildingstrugglingtofindherwayinthepastweek.Wouldhertrickwork?Well,onewouldn'tknowbeforetrying.Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.Shestartedfromthegroundfloor.Insteadofconcentratingonwheretogo,Evafocusedonreachingtheflowerpotnearbytheteachers’office,thewaningsignsoutsidethelaboratoriesandannouncementboardbetweenherclassroomandothers’.Itwasn'tlongbeforeEvafinallytheexplorationofthebuildin
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