短文改錯(cuò)學(xué)校 考號(hào) 短文改短文改錯(cuò)學(xué)校 考號(hào) 短文改（∧（\）注意：1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.SheisjustadistantmemoryformeIremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycametoplayordohomeworkwithHowever,hewasthegentlestmanIhavenever（∧注意：1.ThebookI’mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidhavestartedintheearly1800’s.Haveteainthelateagternoonprovidesbridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelain注意：1.DearHereIaminthemiddleofacity，350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,”Hewasluckytofindotherone”.HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI’llnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommyandmyonlyInmyfamily，therearethreepeople，MyfatherishardworkingButgoesworkinthefieldeveryHeisn’tgoodattalkButhegetsonwellwithotherpeople.MymothermuchkindandisfriendlytoeveryBody.SowhenIhavetheproBlemturntoherforhelp.MyfriendssayIamtheteacherasksusverydifficultyquestions,I’llthinkquicklyifstandtoanswer.AthomemyfatheroftenthinksI’msilly.Hedecidetodosomething,ittakeshimmuchtimestostopThisishowIneedtoimproveintheifstandtoanswer.AthomemyfatheroftenthinksI’msilly.Hedecidetodosomething,ittakeshimmuchtimestostopThisishowIneedtoimproveinthe5．第二節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)（101.515注意：Todayhadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetestdifficulty,Ihardlytodoit.SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,askingmetolethertomyanswers.Afterthinkforsometime,Ithetest,allofuswerecalledtotheangrybecausewehadsameanswersinlethercopymyanswers.Butafterteacher'soffice.Theteacherwastests.Wewerewarnednottoagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents.Iwasveryupset.Ididn'tIwasjusthelpingafriend.Whydoesshepunish增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（A刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（注意：1.Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhealthy.WeareworriedaboutThatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,IpaidavisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.Ihadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIsteppedintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginlookingatsomeofthepictureswehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthatmissedusjustasmanyaswemissed注意：1.lookingatsomeofthepictureswehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthatmissedusjustasmanyaswemissed注意：1.IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,“That'sit.Nomoretoystoyou.”Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmaketoystolast.Myattitudechangedfromthen修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(注意：1.MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenweBeijinglastmonth.Itanywherefromthehotelinthedowntownarea,publicitiseasytogoWelivedinadouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocalItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhogoingto910注意：1.Deargoingto910注意：1.DearThankyouforthelovelydaywehavewithyou.ItwassokindforyoutoletusbringAnne'sfriend,Gina.Unfortunate,theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome.Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.InthecarparkhereGinanearlygotknockedoverascardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindalorry.TheyfinallydroppedGinaoffatherparents'andmadeownwaytoDearMother’sDayiscoming.I’msorrythatIam andcan’tsendyourflowers，soI’mwritingto Mom，IknowIhaveneverexpressedmythankto before.Butontoday，atspecialtime，Iwant youloudly：IloveyouThankyousomuch onlygivingmelife,teachmehowbe person.Thankyouforyouhaddonefor Imayoftensayit,Iloveyou.Nobodytake before.Butontoday，atspecialtime，Iwant youloudly：IloveyouThankyousomuch onlygivingmelife,teachmehowbe person.Thankyouforyouhaddonefor Imayoftensayit,Iloveyou.Nobodytake partinmyheart.WheneverIam，Iwilllove Hopeyougoodhealthandmuchhappiness YourlittleDearI'mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving. Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,cannotlive withoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycango withoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless. Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon'thaveenoughwater.Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoall withoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycango withoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless. Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon'thaveenoughwater.Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoall no26． waystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybath waterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuch Li第二節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)(共DearIt’sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow showingthem backhome.Thankyouverymuchyourcityandprovidingusforwonderfulmeals. wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewentWashingtonD．C., wherewestayedforthreedays.brotherwassomuchfond ofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentsto anothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturn workonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon. wasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyou’dliketomaketrip ourcitysomeday,IwillworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon. wasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyou’dliketomaketrip ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide. Tomwashavingmuchtroublesgettingupinthemorningandwasalwayslatewithwork.Hisbosswantedtofirehimifhedidn’tstartcomingontime，buthewenttothedoctorforahelp.ThedoctorgavehimsomemedicinetoldhimtotakethembeforehewenttoThemandidastoldandsleptreallywell，wakeupbeforethealarmhadevengoneoff.Hehadtimeforaproperlybreakfastandwasstillthefirstreachsaid“thatworks“I’hearit”saidhisboss“buwherewereyou41．10l10注意：1.InearlyJanuarythisyear，therateofUFOreportsweresteady，aroundperweeks.When，however，onMonday，January16，asciencefictionfilmtoouterspacewasshownontelevision，therewastheimmediateinreportsofsightingstoouterspacewasshownontelevision，therewastheimmediateinreportsofsightingsfromallpartsoftheStates.TheWayneTyler，whodirectlyresponsibleforthestudyofallreports，decidedtomakinghisfindingsknown.Theywroteanarticle，whichsaidthatallUFOreportscouldbeexplainedforquitenaturallybyaircraftmovements.Followthisexplanation，therewasarapiddropinthenumberreportedsightings，becausetherateremainedabovetheprevious42．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。10注意：1.Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatIwouldgotoXiamenforlongholiday.IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.Luckily，Ihadallmymoneyonmypocket，buttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIhadon.Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelenttomelotsofclothes.IfeelverythatIcouldchangemyclothesat43．TodayisSunday.I’vebeeninCanadafortwoThisisthefirsttimethatI’vebeenawaymyfamilyforsuchalongtime.WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme,I’vesoongotusedtolivewithoutmyparentsaround.Katia,likemanyotherRussiangirls,areniceandlively.Webecamefriendsshortlyafterwemeeteachother.AlthoughherEnglishisalittlehardlytounderstand,weenjoychattingandweusuallytalkaaboutourownfamily.We’rebothsurprisedthatChinesecultureorculturearesodifferent.Now,we’replanningasmallpartyforthenextSunday.There,Katiawillintroducemetosomeofherfriends,oneofwhohasbeentoChinaseveraltimes.Ijustcan’tculturearesodifferent.Now,we’replanningasmallpartyforthenextSunday.There,Katiawillintroducemetosomeofherfriends,oneofwhohasbeentoChinaseveraltimes.Ijustcan’t10（∧注意：1.DearHereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasmomexplained,hewasluckytofindotherone.HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI’llneverfallsleep.Goodnightandremember,you,mydeardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommylifeandmyonly ，注意：1．DearIamveryexcitedtolearnthatyou’recomingtoXi’anfortravel.Bothmyparentmissyoualot.Soisourfriend,Ruby.AprilisbesttimeoftheyeartovisitXi’an.Thereisonlyafewrainandtheweatherisneithertooortoocold.TherearesomanyplacesIwantedtotakeyoutoafterImyworklikeavolunteerinthelocalcharity.Whenyoucome,youcanstaywithourselves.Myhouseisaboutthreemyworklikeavolunteerinthelocalcharity.Whenyoucome,youcanstaywithourselves.MyhouseisaboutthreekilometersfarawayfromXi’anStreetwhereisfulloflocalBest10注意：1．210（11）TodayisTom’s70thbirthday,butthereisanybodywithhim．Hefeelsverydisappointing．Hissonsdidn’tcareforhimonthisspecialday．Althoughthecakesareverydelicious,buthedoesn’twanttotouchit．Hejustwantshischildrencomeandseehim．Nowadays,manyyoungpeoplearesobusyandindependentwhichtheyseldomvisittheirparents．Butbloodisthickthanwater．Ourdearparentsbroughtusupforalotofdifficulty．Thus,weandmustbringhappytothemwhentheybecome1.ItisfiveyearsnowsinceIgraduatefromNo.3HighSchool.LastSaturday,theclassthatIwasonheldaget-together,whichtookusalongtimeprepare.Itwasindeednoteasytogetinthetouchwitheverybodyandsetawelltimeforallofus.Weallenjoyedthispreciousdaygreatly,rememberthewespenttogetherandthepeopletheywerefamiliarwith.Itwasapitysomeofsomeofuswerenotpresentastheyhadgonetoabroadforfurtherbuttheycalledbackorsentgreetingcardfromdifferent參考答2】passes3】much---4】shoulder—5】toward---6】himself---參考答2】passes3】much---4】shoulder—5】toward---6】himself---9】during---10】never---5turntointo6him7Hehadadeepvoice,（whichsethimapartfromothersinoursmalltown,）hewasstrongandpowerful.and7Hehadadeepvoice,（whichsethimapartfromothersinoursmalltown,）hewasstrongandpowerful.and9theycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.1of【小題7】考查固定搭配。haveaconnectionwith/tosth 有聯(lián)系，故把bywith/to8】考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。茶是被飲用的，應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)，drink【小題7】考查固定搭配。haveaconnectionwith/tosth 有聯(lián)系，故把bywith/to8】考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。茶是被飲用的，應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)，drinkdrunk，【小題2】move-3】other-4】classmate-5】or-6】bad-8】tiring-9】sleep-10】is-1】考查副詞用法。Hereaminthemiddleofacity,350far2】考查時(shí)態(tài)。Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?moved,lastweek，3】考查代詞用法。Hewasluckytofindotherone.(another，4】考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomymyschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworldclassmates5】HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate，myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.and，6】考查形容詞，前后文邏輯。Tomakemattersbad,5】HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate，myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.and，6】考查形容詞，前后文邏輯。Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggieworse，讓事情變得更糟糕，tomake8】考查形容詞。Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI’llneverfallsleep（asleep，fallasleep10】考查主謂一致。Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismysouvenirfrommypastlifediaryyouare，1】but2】talk4】the6】difficulty8】9】10】57standup857standup8234letherto5AfterthinkAfter6allofusbothof7hadsameanswershadthe8inthetestsinthe94letsbdosthto4letsbdosthto8chemicaltest，101spendtimeonsth【考點(diǎn)定位】1spendtimeonsth【考點(diǎn)定位】6payavisitto【小題【考點(diǎn)定位】7．IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleFromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachof/∧wrong,Itoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdiangryandbrokeit.Forawhile∧parentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforetheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenIteaangryandbrokeit.Forawhile∧parentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforetheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytrain,myfathersaid,“That'sit.Nomoretoystoyou.”Mypunishmentayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImusmakemyto'last.Myattitudechangedfromthen1】little→less2】toy→toys考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)形式。根據(jù)eachoftoys3】did→wentdidgo5parentsmymyparentsmenewtoysmyme6】which→whatwhat7】tear→toremyfifth8】to→for考查介詞的用法。此處意為：不再給你買(mǎi)玩具了。toysforsb9】must→could/mightMyfatherandIstayedatSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisiBeijinglastmonth.Itisthedowntownarea,buitiseasytoto'anywherefromthehotelbypublicWelivedina double-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.to'anywherefromthehotelbypublicWelivedina double-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmymessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginThefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseveraldishItissuch∧greathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoagoingto2】but→and/soandso修飾名詞動(dòng)詞【小題9】such后加 such修飾的hotel是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，需加不定冠詞a9．DearThankyouforthelovelydaywehavewithyou.ItwassokindforyoutoletbringAnne'sfriend,Gina.e，theonlyproblemwastheTherehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresult,wasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetowasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetoservicestationandwaitedthereunlestheroadwasclear.InthecarhereGinanearlygotknockedoveras∧cardroveoutfartooquicklyabehindalorry.TheyfinallydroppedGinaoffatherparents'andmadewayto'1】have→had2】for→of。It’skindofsb.todosth.3】Unfortunate→Unfortunately6】unless→until/till7】here→therethere9】They→Wesb.sth.17．maynotsb.sth.17．maynotDearI'mwritingtotellyou∧opinionaboutwatersaving.20． Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,_cannot withoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycango22． withoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless. Manycountriesintheworldfinddon'thaveenoughwater.24． Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,shouldfirstgo drinkingwatershouldbeleftrunning.Third,weshould waystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybath28． waterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater. Limy22．or→nor與前面的neitherneither…nor23．seemed→seemsis，這里的26．though→because/since/as根據(jù)后面的treeswillhelpwaterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater. Limy22．or→nor與前面的neitherneither…nor23．seemed→seemsis，這里的26．though→because/since/as根據(jù)后面的treeswillhelpsavewaterbecause/since/as29forwhichwater，forDearIt’sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow30． backhome.Thankyouverymuchshowingthemaround31． yourcityandprovidingusforwonderfulmeals.After32． WashingtonD．C.,33． wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewentwherewestayedforthreedays.brotherwassomuch\fond34． ofthetherethathebeggedmyparentstostaying35． day.However,myfatherhadtoreturnto36． anotherworkonweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.It37． wasreallyaexperience.Ifyou’dliketomake∧tripto38． ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.39． 30．a(chǎn)ftersince“It’sbeen＋時(shí)間段＋since31．themuswe32．forwithprovideourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.39． 30．a(chǎn)ftersince“It’sbeen＋時(shí)間段＋since31．themuswe32．forwithprovidesbwithsth＝providesthsb34much“so＋adj…”為結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，much35．stayingstaybegsbtodosth37．flyflew38amakeatripto39．bettermoremorethanTomwashavingmuchtroublesgettingupinmorningandwaslatewithwork.Hisbosswantedfirehimifhestartcomingontime，buthewentthedoctorforThedoctorgavehimamedicineandtoldhimtotakethembeforehewenttoThemandidastoldandsleptreallywell，wakeupthealarmhadevengoneoff.Hehadtimeforabreakfastandwasstillthefirst∧reachthesaid“thatworks“I’mthealarmhadevengoneoff.Hehadtimeforabreakfastandwasstillthefirst∧reachthesaid“thatworks“I’mit”saidhisboss“buwherewereyou√1】troublestrouble?？疾槊~。havetroubledoingsth.故用現(xiàn)在分詞wakingInearlyJanuarythisyear，therateofUFOreportssteady，aroundthreeperweeks.When，however，onJanuary16，asciencefictionfilmaboutvisitorstospacewasshownontelevision，therewastheincreaseinreportsofsightingsfromallpartsofofficer,WayneTyler，who∧January16，asciencefictionfilmaboutvisitorstospacewasshownontelevision，therewastheincreaseinreportsofsightingsfromallpartsofofficer,WayneTyler，who∧responsibleforthestudyofallsuchreports，decidedhisfindingsknown.Theywroteanarticle，whichsaidallUFOreportscouldbeexplainedfor'quitenaturallyaircraftmovements.Followthisexplanation，therewasrapiddropinthenumberofreportedsightings，becauserateremainedabovetheprevious1】werewas主語(yǔ)為therate2】weeksweekperweek，3】to→from表“來(lái)自”要用froman5】whowas/is構(gòu)成結(jié)構(gòu)beresponsiblefor6】makingmake動(dòng)詞decidetomake7】TheyHe此處指代的是WayneTylerHe9】followfollowing此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。10】becausealthough/though/but/yetMysummer9】followfollowing此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。10】becausealthough/though/but/yetMysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuytoHangzhou.IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterIwouldtoXiamenfor∧longholiday.IboughtmyabutaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandIthatsomeonehadstolenit.LuckilyIhadallmyonbuttheonlyclot