三模英語應(yīng)用文原題目呈現(xiàn)：你校英語社團(tuán)的外教Ryan任教期滿，即將回國，學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備舉辦一場歡送會(huì)為他送行，你將代表社團(tuán)致辭，請你寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.回顧相處時(shí)光；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan,Howtimeflies!

___________________________________________分析：戰(zhàn)略：校園話題（人與自我——師生送別）題材：應(yīng)用文--英語發(fā)言稿人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)戰(zhàn)術(shù)：1.感謝；2.回憶；3.祝福（收尾）語言積累：表示感謝Onbehalfofmywholeclass,Iwouldliketoextend/convey/extendmysincere/heartfeltgratitudefor...

我代表我全班對(duì)……表示真誠的感激。Iamextremelygratefultoyoufor...我非常感謝你……Manythanksforallthethingsyouhavedoneinhelpingusto...非常感謝您為幫助我們……所做的一切。Itwasnice/kind/

thoughtful/considerate

(考慮周到的)ofyouto...ItwaswithyourhelpthatImadesuchrapidprogressinEnglish.

(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)If

ithadnotbeenforyour

(help/guidance/assistance),Iwouldn't

have

(wontheprize)

虛擬語氣Butfor/Withoutyour(help/guidance/assistance),Iwouldn't

have

(wontheprize)

虛擬語氣

Nothingwillbeabletoeraseourwonderfulmemories;wewillrememberthemforever.沒什么能抹掉我們美好的記憶，我們會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)牢記在心。IwillbemorethanpleasedifIhavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindnessby...如果我有機(jī)會(huì)通過……報(bào)答你的好意，我會(huì)非常高興Wordsfailtoexpressmygratitudedeepinmyheart.無法用言語表達(dá)我內(nèi)心真誠的感謝之情。

行文與示范：DearRyan,Howtimeflies!

Itis

totallyoutofourimagination

that

youhavebeentaughtusforthreeyears,

whichwilldefinitelyleaveusmanyunforgettablememories,

and

weall

appreciate

whatyouhavegivenus.Itisyouwho

provideduswithastage

whereweallhavebeenchangedfromstudentsonlyspeakingEnglishwordsto

dabhands/masters

withfluentEnglish.

Itisyouwho

helpedus

establish

theEnglishCorner

whichgreatly

enlargedourhorizons

bysharingwithusyourexperiencesinforeigncountries.So

atthisspecial

timeto

depart,I

amonbehalfof

everystudenttowishyourfuturelifefullofsunshine,

and

weallexpectthe

momenttomeetyouagain.(4句)錦言妙語：1.it形式主語與主語從句組合——Itis

totallyoutofourimagination

that

youhavebeentaughtusforthreeyears2.定語從句which——,

whichwilldefinitelyleaveusmanyunforgettablememories；whichgreatly

enlargedourhorizons

bysharingwithusyourexperiencesinforeigncountries3.定語從句where——whereweallhavebeenchangedfromstudentsonlyspeakingEnglishwordsto

dabhands/masters

withfluentEnglish4.強(qiáng)調(diào)句——Itisyouwho5.萬能“給讓”——provideduswithastage6.能手——dabhands/masters7.開闊視野——enlargedourhorizons8.代表——amonbehalfof9.非謂語做后置定語——timeto

depart；momenttomeetyouagain點(diǎn)評(píng)：本次市三模的小作文從命題與選材的層面即在預(yù)料之中，又有新穎之處。作為人與自我的校園話題不覺得意外，但是具體的內(nèi)容可以如此的現(xiàn)實(shí)與實(shí)際卻是“難得”并且和今年2024年高考英語藍(lán)皮書中對(duì)于寫作的要求與強(qiáng)調(diào)“不謀而合”。因此，充分說明，無論是命題人、教師還是考生，只要嚴(yán)格按照新課標(biāo)要求執(zhí)行，題可以命好、老師可以教好、學(xué)生可以學(xué)好。參考答案：DearRyan,

Howtimeflies!Thenewsofyourdeparturehasstirredamixofemotionswithinustodaysadness,

yet2.overwhelminggratitude.

Yourpresenceamongushasbeentrulyremarkable.It’snotjustyourwealthofknowledgethat

we’llmiss,butalsoyourkindness,patience,andenthusiasmthatbrightenedeachday.Themomentswe’veshared,brimmingwithlaughter,discovery,andpersonaldevelopment,aretreasuresweholddear.Yourimpactonallofusisprofoundandenduring.Withoutyourinvaluableguidance,theEnglishClubwouldn’thavebeenasenjoyableandenriching.Yourselflessdedicationisdeeplyappreciated.

Wishingyouallthebestonyourjourneyahead!改編成語法填空：DearRyan,

Howtimeflies!Thenewsofyourdeparture1._______（stir）amixofemotionswithinustodaysadness,

yet2.______(overwhelm)gratitude.

Your3.______(present)amongushasbeentrulyremarkable.It’snotjustyourwealthofknowledge4.______

we’llmiss,butalsoyourkindness,patience,andenthusiasmthatbrightenedeachday.The5.______(moments)we’veshared,brimmingwithlaughter,discovery,6.______personaldevelopment,aretreasuresweholddear.Yourimpact7._____allofusisprofoundandenduring.Withoutyourinv