讀后續(xù)寫：助人型TOC\o"1-3"\h\uPart1：經(jīng)典例文（披薩店員工救人） 1Part2：助人類故事構(gòu)造三部曲 4第一步：困難描寫（消極情緒+困難處境） 4第二步：助人過程呈現(xiàn)（（想到辦法+動(dòng)作鏈） 5第三步：皆大歡喜結(jié)局（感激+感動(dòng)+升華） 6Part3：助人場(chǎng)景描寫 7一、幫助他人之后 7二、發(fā)生水災(zāi)之后 8三、發(fā)生誤解之后 9四、發(fā)生火災(zāi)之后 10五、感受善良之后 11六、感受幸福之后 11七、發(fā)生誤解之后 12八、獲得勇氣 13九、獲得自信 14十、接收禮物之后 15十一、老師的幫助 16十二、陌生人的幫助 17Part4：靈活應(yīng)用 18例1：老夫婦幫助我 18例2：幫助老婦人 20Part5：高考真題再現(xiàn) 23真題1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省聯(lián)考】 23真題2：買爆米花助窮人【2020年7月山東卷】 25Part1：經(jīng)典例文（披薩店員工救人）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。WhentheemployeesattheDomino’spizzaplaceinSalem,Oregon,hadn’treceivedanyorderfromKirkAlexanderformorethan2weeks,theyknewsomethingwasn’tright.Kirkwasaloyalcustomerandthestaffallknewhim.Soitwasnaturalthattheygotworriedwhentheyhadnonewsabouthim.Theirconcernsavedhislife.SarahFuller,thegeneralmanagerattheDomino’sbranch,saidthatKirk,whowas48yearsold,hadbeenaloyalcustomersince2009.“Heorderseveryday,oreveryotherday,”Sarahsaid.Normally,hisordercameuponthescreenbecauseheorderedonline.Sowesawitcameacrossthescreenandwewerethinking,“Oh,Kirk’sorder.”Afterafewdayswithoutasingleorder,Sarahandthestaffstartedtoworry.AfewDomino’sdrivershadmentionedthattheyhadn’tseenhisordercomeacrosstheirscreeninawhile.Sarahcheckedthesystemandsawthatnoorderhadcomein11days.Sotheydecidedtoinvestigate.SarahdecidedtosendTracyHamblen,adeliverdriver,toKirk’splace.Whenhegotthere,heimmediatelyknewsomethingwaswrong.WhilethelightsandTVwereon,Kirkdidnotcometothedoor.Additionally,hisphonewentdirectlytovoicemail.SoTracyimmediatelycalled911.Para.1:Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Para1:Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,theyheardacryforhelpfromtheinsideofthehouse.Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.DuetothequickactionsofTracy,KirkisinstableconditionattheSalemHospital.TheDomino’semployeesreceivedalotofpraiseonlinefortheirunbelievablethoughtfulness.Buttheysaidthatitwasjustpartoftheirjobandtheywerejustdoingtheirjob.當(dāng)警察到達(dá)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)時(shí)，他們聽到了來自房子內(nèi)部的呼救聲。在里面，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)了需要立即得到醫(yī)療幫助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行動(dòng)，柯克在塞勒姆醫(yī)院的情況很穩(wěn)定。多米美樂的員工令人難以置信的體貼在網(wǎng)上得到了很多贊揚(yáng)。但他們說，這只是他們工作的一部分，他們只是在做他們的工作。Para2:Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital.HecametotheDomino’spersonallywithsomehomemadecookiestosaythank--youtoSarahandtheDomino’sstaff.TheDomino’smentionedthat“Caringforcustomersshouldnotbetakenatfacevalue.Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.”Kirk’sstoryhasmadethispizzashopevenmorepopularinthecommunity,andithasreceivedmoreorderseversince.幾天后，柯克出院了。他親自帶著一些自制的餅干來到多米諾餐廳，對(duì)莎拉和多米諾餐廳的工作人員說聲謝謝。多米美樂提到“照顧客戶不應(yīng)該是表面價(jià)值?！蔽覀儜?yīng)該記住，客戶決定了我們公司的成功，反過來我們也可以對(duì)他們的生活產(chǎn)生影響，無論大小?？驴说墓适伦屵@家披薩店在社區(qū)中更受歡迎，此后它收到了更多的訂單?！窘馕觥俊痉治觥课恼乱匀宋餅榫€索展開，講述了一個(gè)披薩店的員工，細(xì)心地發(fā)現(xiàn)近期沒有收到來自老顧客Kirk的訂單，于是派人前去查看，發(fā)現(xiàn)Kirk生病并及時(shí)報(bào)警就醫(yī)，確保了Kirk的安全。員工的善舉為披薩店贏得了更多的稱贊和訂單?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)警察趕到現(xiàn)場(chǎng)時(shí)，”可知，第一段可描寫警察將Kirk送到醫(yī)院的經(jīng)過。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“幾天后，Kirk出院了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Kirk出院后去披薩店感謝員工們拯救了他的生命以及該披薩店因?yàn)樯埔馀e動(dòng)而為自己贏得更多的訂單和顧客。續(xù)寫線索：呼救——成功被救助——感謝——店員表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)——披薩店更受歡迎

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①大聲求救：cryforhelp/shoutforhelp/screamforhelp

②受到贊揚(yáng)：receivedalotofpraise/bepraisedgreatly

③照顧，護(hù)理：caringfor/takingcareof/

情緒類

①.感謝：saythank--you/expressappreciation/showappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful

②.體貼：thoughtfulness/beingconsiderate

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.(由關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞Kirk。)

[高分句型2].Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.(that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句作remember的賓語(yǔ)。)Part2：助人類故事構(gòu)造三部曲第一步：困難描寫（消極情緒+困難處境）（1）消極情緒典型表達(dá)是：感到（這個(gè)可以有很多表達(dá)方式，并且可以結(jié)合在每一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中，可有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式和介詞短語(yǔ)）1.aflushof(表情緒的名詞)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一陣...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情緒的名詞)floodedoversb=sweptoversb

因...顫抖tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)

（2）進(jìn)一步細(xì)節(jié)描寫典型是：流淚；心里想……流淚：1.Tearsblurredone'seyes.

淚眼模糊2.One'seyesgotmisty.

眼睛模糊了3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.淚眼模糊4....beclosetotears幾乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)淚水落下

困難處境隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的衰退,鎮(zhèn)上有些人失業(yè)了。他們的許多家庭都在努力維持生計(jì)。Astheeconomywasindecline(經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退),somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet(使收支平衡).（2020.7高考山東卷）有個(gè)男人臥病在床,他的妻子和兒子因?yàn)橐疹櫵荒艹鋈スぷ鳌herewasamansickinbed(臥病在床),hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.（2020.7高考山東卷）但是有一天，一場(chǎng)颶風(fēng)襲擊了當(dāng)?shù)?，他的家被徹底摧毀了。Butoneday,ahurricanehitthearea(臺(tái)風(fēng)襲擊當(dāng)?shù)?wherehelived,completelydestroyinghishome(完全摧毀他的家).第二步：助人過程呈現(xiàn)（想到辦法+動(dòng)作鏈）（1）突然有了一個(gè)想法：一句話表示想法典型：某人想到/明白...;

有了主意Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat

從句=Ithitsbthat

從句=Itstruckmethat

從句

=Itdawnedonsbthat

從句(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace（2）動(dòng)作鏈然后他從卡車上拿到了一把鋸子，從路邊的一根大木頭上砍了一段。我們把它翻過來，把他的千斤頂放在上面，我們開始做生意。Thenhegotasaw(鋸子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.第三步：皆大歡喜結(jié)局（感激+感動(dòng)+升華）（1）皆大歡喜：過了一段時(shí)間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折過了一段時(shí)間notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

從句=Ittooksometimebefore從句不久,...

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬間

（2）有了結(jié)果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat

從句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.

接下來發(fā)生的非常奇妙（3）感謝現(xiàn)在，我非常感謝她伸出援助之手。Now,Iwasdefinitelygratefultoherforextendingahelpinghand(伸出援手).（2021屆湖南長(zhǎng)沙市一中高三月考三）Molly和Shawn星期二見面了，她太感謝他了，所有人都為她付出了一切。MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn’tthankhimenough(非常感謝他)andeveryoneinvolvedinforwhattheydidforher.（4）感動(dòng)1.不必說，他們被深深地感動(dòng)了，尤其是Bernard，他終于找到了為家人賺錢的方法。Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved(他們被深深地感動(dòng)了),especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.（2020.7高考山東卷）2.我這樣一個(gè)完全陌生的人，如此關(guān)心他，這讓他很感動(dòng)，他說他愿意工作。HewastouchedthatI,acompletestranger,caredsomuchabouthim(如此關(guān)心他)andsaidhewaswillingtowork.剎那間，淚水涌上眼眶，我感動(dòng)得說不出話來，我感到如此溫暖，仿佛胸中有九個(gè)太陽(yáng)。Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感動(dòng)得說不出話來).Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.我點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭表示感謝，眼睛里閃爍著抑制不住的淚水。Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears(眼睛因?yàn)閺?qiáng)忍的淚水而閃耀).驚訝又感動(dòng)，我盯著那張紙條，對(duì)我之前認(rèn)為所有人都漠不關(guān)心的想法感到內(nèi)疚。Stunnedandmoved(驚訝又感動(dòng)),Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.（5）升華是愛讓世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)，Bernard深深地感受到了這一點(diǎn)。Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround（是愛讓世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)）andBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.（2020.7高考山東卷）每個(gè)人都很開心，很甜蜜，露出了一副潔白的牙齒。Everyonewashappyandsweet,exposingtheirsetsofwhiteteeth（露出他們潔白的牙齒）.（2020.7高考山東卷）我決定把“愛”傳遞給別人，俗話說：“贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手有余香”。Imadeupmymindtopasson“l(fā)ove”toothers（傳遞愛給其他人）.Justasasayinggoes:“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand（贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手有余香）.”從那天起，每次我遇到需要幫助的人時(shí)，我都會(huì)向他們伸出援手，希望把墨西哥家庭提供給我的這種善意傳遞給他們。Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindness（希望傳遞善意）thatMexicanfamilyofferedme.有時(shí)，一個(gè)小小的善舉可能足以產(chǎn)生巨大的影響。Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference（會(huì)有很大不同）.Part3：助人場(chǎng)景描寫一、幫助他人之后Ijustlookedatmyfriendwithdisbeliefashetoldthestoryofthefirstdaywemet.Kylehadplannedtokillhimselfovertheweekend.HetalkedofhowhehadcleanedouthislockersohisMomwouldn’thavetodoitlaterandwascarryinghisstuffhome.Meanwhile,Ifoundhelookedhardatmeandgavemealittlesmile."Thankfully,Iwassaved.Myfriendsavedmefromdoingtheunspeakable,Iheardthegaspgothroughthecrowdasthishandsome,popularboytoldusallabouthisweakestmoment.Whenhiseyescaughtmine,Iwasabletoseetearsshimmeredinhissmilingeyes.我只是難以置信地看著我的朋友，他講述了我們第一天見面的故事。凱爾計(jì)劃周末消遣。他談到了他是如何清理他的儲(chǔ)物柜的，這樣他的媽媽就不用再做了，然后把他的東西帶回家了。同時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)他狠狠地看著我，給了我一個(gè)小小的微笑?！爸x天謝地，我得救了。我的朋友不讓我做那些無法形容的事，我聽到人群中的喘息聲，就像這個(gè)英俊、受歡迎的男孩告訴我們他最脆弱的時(shí)刻一樣。當(dāng)他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛時(shí)，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里閃爍著淚水。Ismiledbackintears.NotuntilthatmomentdidIrealizewhatbigdifferenceonesmallgesturehadmadetohim.IevensawhisMomandDadlookingatmeandsmilingthatsamegratefulsmile.Itdawnedonmethatnevershouldweunderestimatethepowerofouractions.Withonesmallgesturewecanchangeaperson'slife.Forbetterorforworse.我笑著。直到那一刻，我才意識(shí)到一個(gè)小小的手勢(shì)對(duì)他產(chǎn)生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸媽媽看著我，也帶著同樣感激的微笑。我意識(shí)到，我們永遠(yuǎn)不應(yīng)該低估我們行動(dòng)的力量。只要用一個(gè)小小的手勢(shì)，我們就可以改變一個(gè)人的生活。為好或壞。二、發(fā)生水災(zāi)之后Thewaterkeptrising,andtherewasnohopeofrescue.Thehourspassed.JasonandAndrewdidn'tdaretomoveforfearofslipping.Theydozedoffandthenjerkedthemselvesawake.Everyonceinawhile,oneofthemturnedonhisheadlamptocheckthewaterlevel.Anhourlater,thewaterlevelwentdownenoughthattheycouldtryanescape.Stifffromkeepinginonepositionfor12hours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.Jasonscreamedinpain,buthewasdeterminednottoletitstophim.水不斷上漲，沒有了救援的希望。幾個(gè)小時(shí)過去了。杰森和安德魯不敢動(dòng)，因?yàn)楹ε禄埂Ｋ麄兇蛄藗€(gè)瞌睡，然后猛地清醒過來。每隔一段時(shí)間，其中一個(gè)人就打開他的前照燈檢查水位。一個(gè)小時(shí)后，水位下降到足以讓他們嘗試逃跑。他們僵硬地保持在一個(gè)位置12小時(shí)，慢慢地展開他們的身體。杰森痛苦地尖叫著，但他決心不讓它阻止他。Slowlybutsteadily,thegroupmadetheirwayforward.Still,eachtimeJasonmovedaleg,hecriedout.Overthenext90minutes,theymadetheirwaytowardtheentrance,attimesinchest-highwater.Now,inapassagethatwashighenoughforthemtowalkupright,Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance."Lights!Iseelights!"Jasonshoutedout.Forthefirsttimesinceenteringthecave,over20hoursearlier,Jason'semotionsgotthebestofhimandtearstrickleddownhischeeks.水不斷上漲，沒有了救援的希望。幾個(gè)小時(shí)過去了。杰森和安德魯不敢動(dòng)，因?yàn)楹ε禄?。他們打了個(gè)瞌睡，然后猛地清醒過來。每隔一段時(shí)間，其中一個(gè)人就打開他的前照燈檢查水位。一個(gè)小時(shí)后，水位下降到足以讓他們嘗試逃跑。他們僵硬地保持在一個(gè)位置12小時(shí)，慢慢地展開他們的身體。杰森痛苦地尖叫著，但他決心不讓它阻止他。三、發(fā)生誤解之后Asshereachedinherbaggage,shegaspedwithsurprise.Atthatmoment,inhersightcamethepacketofcookies,whichhadbeenjustboughtbyher,unopenedatall.Ashamedandfeelinglikeathief,shefinallygotthatthecookieswerenothersbutbelongedtothemansittingnexttoher,whohadcalmlyofferedtosharehislastcookiewithher.Asuddenrushofshybloodfillingtheface,sheinstinctivelylookaroundwiththehopeoffindingtheverymantomakeanapology.當(dāng)她伸手拿行李時(shí)，她驚訝地喘了一口氣。就在這時(shí)，她看到了她剛買的一包餅干，根本沒有打開。她感到羞愧，感覺自己像個(gè)小偷，終于明白了這些餅干不是她的，而是屬于坐在她旁邊的男人，他平靜地提出和她分享他的最后一塊餅干。臉上突然涌滿了害羞的鮮血，她本能地環(huán)顧四周，希望能找到那個(gè)男人來道歉。Surprisingly,shefoundthemansittingjustbehindher.Hewasjustlookingupandmethereyes,alsowithasmileonhisface.Thewomanwasatanabsolutelossbutgavethemananervouslaughinreturn.Withaquiteopenmouth,shewasunabletosayanyapologytohim.Murmuring"Sorry,sorry..ItwasImyselfwhowastherealcookiethief."Afterawhile,shefellasleeponherseatwiththeplaneflyingsteadily.Thenextday,whenshearrivedathernewcompany,thebiggestsurprisewaswaitingforher.令人驚訝的是，她發(fā)現(xiàn)那個(gè)男人就坐在她身后。他只是抬頭看了看她的眼睛，臉上也帶著微笑。女人完全不知所措，但卻給了男人一聲緊張的笑聲作為回報(bào)。她張開嘴，不能向他道歉?！皩?duì)不起，對(duì)不起。。真正偷餅的是我自己?！边^了一會(huì)兒，她在座位上睡著了，飛機(jī)平穩(wěn)地飛著。第二天，當(dāng)她來到她的新公司時(shí)，最大的驚喜就是在等她。四、發(fā)生火災(zāi)之后Tomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Frozenwithfear,hestoodrootedtothespot.HecomprehendedthegravityofthesituationandheldJane′shandtightly.Bythen,bothofthemwerecoughingandtheireyeswerestinging.Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtheywereprobablythereforonlytwoorthreeminutes.TombeggedJanetorunforsafetyasquicklyaspossible.Janetriedtoshieldhernosefromthechokingsmokeandshookherhead.Shekeptpoundingagainstthedoor.Tomburstoutcrying.湯姆注意到火焰正在升起。他嚇得僵住了，站在原地。他明白形勢(shì)的嚴(yán)重性，緊緊地握住簡(jiǎn)的手。到那時(shí)，他們倆都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。時(shí)間似乎靜止不動(dòng)，雖然他們可能只在那里兩三分鐘。湯姆懇求簡(jiǎn)盡快跑過去尋求安全。簡(jiǎn)想保護(hù)她的鼻子免受嗆人的煙霧，搖了搖頭。她不停地敲門。湯姆突然哭了起來。Luckily,someneighborspassingbystoppedandofferedhelp.AsenseofstrengthimmediatelyreplacedthemountingfearandanxietyinJane'smind.ShetoldthemMs.Makcikmustbestillintheroom.Theyforcedthedooropenwithalltheirmight.Sureenough,Makcikwaslyinginbed,unconscious.Shewascarrieddownstairsandthenrushedtothehospital,whereshefinallycametoherself.PeopleintheneighborhoodfeltrelievedandJaneandTom'sjoywasimmense.幸運(yùn)的是，一些鄰居路過時(shí)停下來，并提供了幫助。一種力量感立刻取代了簡(jiǎn)心中日益增加的恐懼和焦慮。她告訴他們，馬克奇克女士一定還在房間里。他們竭盡全力地強(qiáng)行打開了門。果然，馬克西克正躺在床上，失去了知覺。她被帶下樓，然后被緊急送往醫(yī)院，終于蘇醒過來。附近的人都松了一口氣，簡(jiǎn)和湯姆非常高興。五、感受善良之后Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.Thenhepickeditupandtappedthemanontheshoulderandsaid,"Excuseme,sir,thisfelloutofyourpocket."Themanturnedaroundandsawthemoney.Heknewwhatwasgoingon,helookedstraightintomydad'seyes,tookmydad'shandinbothofhis,squeezedtightlyontothe$20bill,andwithhislipshakingandatearrunningdownhischeek,hereplied,"Thankyou,thankyou,sir.Thisreallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.水不斷上漲，沒有了救援的希望。幾個(gè)小時(shí)過去了。杰森和安德魯不敢動(dòng)，因?yàn)楹ε禄?。他們打了個(gè)瞌睡，然后猛地清醒過來。每隔一段時(shí)間，其中一個(gè)人就打開他的前照燈檢查水位。一個(gè)小時(shí)后，水位下降到足以讓他們嘗試逃跑。他們僵硬地保持在一個(gè)位置12小時(shí)，慢慢地展開他們的身體。杰森痛苦地尖叫著，但他決心不讓它阻止他。ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.Wedidn'tgotothecircusthatnight,whenIaskeddadwhyhedidso,Dadsaid,"Mychild,itwasadesperate,heartbreakingandembarrassingsituationforafather.Surelyhewasn'tbeggingforahandout,butheremindedmeofmyfather,whenIwasyoung."Hepausedforawhile,asifwanderinginhismemory."Weshouldappreciatewhatwehaveobtainedfromlifeandseizeeveryopportunitytohelpothers.Wedidn'tgotothecircustonight,butwedidn'tgowithout.Now,whowantsanicecream?。那天，我和我父親回到我們的車?yán)铮瑳]有任何票就開車回家了。那天晚上我們沒有去馬戲團(tuán)，當(dāng)我問爸爸為什么這么做時(shí)，爸爸說：“我的孩子，對(duì)一個(gè)父親來說，這是一個(gè)絕望、令人心碎和尷尬的情況。他當(dāng)然不是乞求施舍，但他讓我想起了我年輕時(shí)的父親。”他停頓了一會(huì)兒，仿佛在記憶中徘徊。我們應(yīng)該珍惜從生活中獲得的東西，抓住一切機(jī)會(huì)幫助別人。我們今晚沒有去馬戲團(tuán)，但我們沒有去。誰要冰淇淋？。六、感受幸福之后Thedriverresponded,"Itmustfeelgoodtobetakencareofandprotectedlikeyouareeveryday."Confusedbywhatthedrivertalkedabout,sheasked,"Whatdoyoumean?"Thedriveranswered,"Everymorninginthepastweek,afinelookinggentlemaninamilitaryuniformhasbeenstandingacrossthestreetwatchingyougettingoffthebus.Hemakessureyoucrossthestreetsafelyandhewatchesuntilyouenteryourofficebuilding.Thenheblowsyouakiss,givesyoualitesaluteandwalksaway.Youareoneluckylady.'司機(jī)回答說：“像每天一樣被照顧和保護(hù)一定會(huì)感覺很好。她對(duì)司機(jī)所說的話感到困惑，她問道，“你是什么意思？”司機(jī)回答說：“在過去的一周里，每天早上，一個(gè)漂亮的軍裝紳士都站在街對(duì)面看著你下車。他確保你安全過馬路，他看著，直到你進(jìn)入你的辦公樓。然后他打了你一個(gè)吻，向你輕輕地敬禮，然后走開了。你是一位幸運(yùn)的女士。”TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'scheeks.Shestoodmotionlesslyfacingtheoppositesideofthestreetasifgazingatsomeone.Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shedefinitelyfeltMark'spresence.Susanthoughtshewasactuallylucky,forhehadgivenheragiftmorepowerfulthansight,agiftoflovethatcanbringlightwherethereisdarkness.JustasMarkgrewalittleworried,hesawhiswifebreakintoaradiantsmileandblowakisstohisdirection.Finallyshefoundbackherselfblindbutattractiveandconfidentassheusedtobe.司機(jī)回答說：“像每天一樣被照顧和保護(hù)一定會(huì)感覺很好。她對(duì)司機(jī)所說的話感到困惑，她問道，“你是什么意思？”司機(jī)回答說：“在過去的一周里，每天早上，一個(gè)漂亮的軍裝紳士都站在街對(duì)面看著你下車。他確保你安全過馬路，他看著，直到你進(jìn)入你的辦公樓。然后他打了你一個(gè)吻，向你輕輕地敬禮，然后走開了。你是一位幸運(yùn)的女士?！逼?、發(fā)生誤解之后Aseatbesideherwasempty,andDannisoccupiedit.Hefeltawaveofangersweptoverhim."Whereismywallet?"heyelled.Theblack-hairedgirlglancedupfromherreading,withaconfusedlookonherface.Dannisstoodup,glaredatherandshouted,"Youstolemywallet!"Thecrowdsbegantogossip.Thegirlturneddeadlypale,lookingsorestlessthatwordsfailedher.Astrangesilencehungintheair.Abruptly,sheleapedfromtheseat.她旁邊的一個(gè)座位空著，丹尼斯坐著。他感到一陣憤怒席卷了他?！拔业腻X包呢？”他大叫。黑發(fā)女孩從閱讀中抬起頭來，臉上露出困惑的神色。丹尼斯站起來，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的錢包！”人群開始閑聊起來。那女孩臉色慘白，神情不安，言語(yǔ)使她失望。一種奇怪的沉默掛在空中。她突然從座位上跳了起來。ThegirlranandDannisranafterher.Afterawhile,Dannisfinallygrabbedherbythearm.Atexactlythatmoment,apolicemanapproachedthemandaskedaboutwhathappened.Dannishastenedtoexplainitwhilethegirlfrownedwithashakeofherhead.Afterfurtherenquiries,thepolicemantookoutawalletandhandedittoDannis,addingthatsomeonehadfounditinthetoilet.Whatamistakehehadmade!Overwhelmedbyguilt,Dannismadeanapologytothegirl.女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。過了一會(huì)兒，丹尼斯終于抓住了她的手臂。就在這時(shí)，一個(gè)警察走近他們，問他們發(fā)生了什么事。丹尼斯急忙解釋，而女孩皺著眉頭搖了搖頭。經(jīng)過進(jìn)一步的詢問，警察拿出一個(gè)錢包遞給丹尼斯，并補(bǔ)充說有人在廁所里發(fā)現(xiàn)了它。他犯了什么錯(cuò)誤！由于內(nèi)疚，丹尼斯向女孩道歉。八、獲得勇氣Theboystartedrunningagaintogivethekitelift.Thewindonthekitewasatoncestrongandswift,carryinghimuphighintotheair.Closinghiseyestight,hetrembledalloverinpanic,notdaringtolookdown.Butwiththeboy'sinspiringwordsinmind,hegotuphisnerveandmanagedtokeepthebalanceandlethisfeargo.Asthewindcarriedhimupward,heslowlyopenedhiseyes,onlytoseethewholetownfromabrand-newdimension!"Givemorestring,please.More!heyelledtotheboyexcitedly.Withcourage,hemadeagreatdanceintheair,makingotherkidscheeringwildly那男孩又開始跑去放風(fēng)箏了。風(fēng)箏上的風(fēng)立刻強(qiáng)烈而迅速，把他從高空吹到空中。他緊緊地閉上眼睛，驚恐得渾身發(fā)抖，不敢低頭看。但考慮到男孩鼓舞人心的話，他鼓起了勇氣，設(shè)法保持平衡，釋放了他的恐懼。當(dāng)風(fēng)帶著他向上走時(shí)，他慢慢地睜開眼睛，卻從一個(gè)全新的維度看到了整個(gè)城鎮(zhèn)！“請(qǐng)?jiān)俣鄬懶虐?。?qǐng)了解更多信息！他興奮地對(duì)那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓著勇氣在空中跳了一場(chǎng)舞，讓其他孩子瘋狂地歡呼Thekitefeltpeacefulanddelightedandnew.Withotherkitesflyingaround,hefloated,twirled,stretchedhiswingsandwavedhisragtail,abroadsmilespreadingonhisface.Thehigherhewent,thegreatertheview.Seeingthescared,timidkitenowdancingconfidently,theboywastouched,believingthatthekitehadlearnedanewlesson--thebestwaytodefeatfearistofaceitbravelyandoptimistically.風(fēng)箏感到平靜、快樂和新鮮事物。其他風(fēng)箏四處飛著，他漂浮著，旋轉(zhuǎn)著，展開翅膀，搖著破尾巴，臉上洋溢著燦爛的笑容。他走得越高，視野就越大?？吹胶ε碌?、膽小的風(fēng)箏現(xiàn)在自信地跳舞，男孩被感動(dòng)了，相信風(fēng)箏已經(jīng)吸取了新的教訓(xùn)——戰(zhàn)勝恐懼的最好方法是勇敢而樂觀地面對(duì)它。九、獲得自信EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Jennydidn'tanswer.Howcouldsheexplainaboutthewatchanditsmagic?Noonecouldunderstand.Noonecouldbelieve."ButIsawyouwearingityesterday,"MissWalkergentlyremindedhim.ForamomentLeeremainedsilentandthenheapologizedhehadjustrememberedthat.Jennywasrelievedsayingshehadfounditonthewayhomeanddecidedtoreturnitafterthespeech.Everybodywaspuzzledandaskedwhy.Jennyagainwasspeechless.每個(gè)人都把眼睛盯著珍妮，等待著解釋。珍妮沒有回答。她怎么能解釋一下這只手表和它的魔力呢？沒人能理解。沒有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴著它，”沃克小姐溫柔地提醒他。李沉默了一會(huì)兒，然后他道歉了，他只記得這一點(diǎn)。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并決定在演講后歸還。每個(gè)人都很困惑，并被問及為什么。珍妮又說不出話來了。MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.Jennywalkedslowlytothefront.Shecouldn'tthinkproperly.Allroundher,aseaoffaceswaswatching.Shefeltsofrightenedandthewatchdidn'tseemmagicalatall.SuddenlyshesawMissWalker'sencouragingeyes.Jennytookadeepbreath."I'mgoingtotalkaboutswimming…."TenminuteslaterthewholeclassstoodupapplaudingJenny'swonderfulspeech.Jennysmiledassheeventuallyrealizedtherealsourceofconfidence.沃克老師笑了笑，讓全班同學(xué)先聽珍妮的演講。珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她無法正常思考。她的四周，一片面海在看著。她感到很害怕，手表看起來一點(diǎn)也不神奇。突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓勵(lì)的眼睛。珍妮深吸了一口氣。“我要談?wù)動(dòng)斡镜氖?..。”十分鐘后全班同學(xué)起立為珍妮的精彩演講鼓掌。珍妮笑了，因?yàn)樗罱K意識(shí)到了自信的真正來源。十、接收禮物之后Iwasstoppedbymymother'seager,joyfullook."Let'sseewhatitis,honey.Hurryandopenit."Itwasablowdryer.Thoughthismayseembutasimplegift,tomeitwassomuchmore.Beinganeleven-year-oldgirl,Iwasstunned.Inmyworld,wherereceivinglatelyoutweighedgiving,mymom'sactofselflessnesswasincomprehensible.ItwasahugeactTearsfilledmyeyesandIthoughtindisbeliefabouthowmuchmymommustlovemetogiveupherChristmasso-couldhaveafewmorepresents.我被我母親急切而快樂的目光攔住了。“讓我們看看那是什么事吧，親愛的。趕快打開它?！澳鞘且粋€(gè)吹風(fēng)機(jī)。雖然這似乎只是一份簡(jiǎn)單的禮物，但對(duì)我來說，它更多了。作為一個(gè)11歲的女孩，我驚呆了。在我的世界里，最近接受的東西超過了付出，我媽媽的無私行為是不可理解的。這是一個(gè)巨大的表演，眼淚充滿了我的眼睛，我不相信我媽媽一定是多么愛我才能放棄她的圣誕節(jié)，所以可以再有幾份禮物。IhavealwaysrememberedthatChristmasfondly:Ithadsuchanimpactonme.AsanadultwithchildreninmylifewhomIadore,Icannowunderstandmymom'sactions.Iseeactually,shewasnot""givingupherChristmas"asIhadthought,butwasfindinganevengreaterjoyinherChristmasbecausegivingtrulyisbetterthanreceiving.Mymom'ssimpleactmeanttheworldtome.WheneverIlookbackonmymom'sgiving,Iwillchoosetogiveinmylife.我一直深情地記得那個(gè)圣誕節(jié)：它對(duì)我有如此的影響。作為一個(gè)在我的生活中有孩子的成年人，我現(xiàn)在可以理解我媽媽的行為。實(shí)際上，我知道，她并沒有像我想的那樣“放棄她的圣誕節(jié)”，而是在她的圣誕節(jié)中找到了更大的樂趣，因?yàn)檎嬲慕o予比接受更好。我媽媽的簡(jiǎn)單行為對(duì)我來說意味著世界。每當(dāng)我回首媽媽的付出，我都會(huì)選擇在我的生命中付出。十一、老師的幫助EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Jennydidn'tanswer.Howcouldsheexplainaboutthewatchanditsmagic?Noonecouldunderstand.Noonecouldbelieve."ButIsawyouwearingityesterday,"MissWalkergentlyremindedhim.ForamomentLeeremainedsilentandthenheapologizedhehadjustrememberedthat.Jennywasrelievedsayingshehadfounditonthewayhomeanddecidedtoreturnitafterthespeech.Everybodywaspuzzledandaskedwhy.Jennyagainwasspeechless.每個(gè)人都把眼睛盯著珍妮，等待著解釋。珍妮沒有回答。她怎么能解釋一下這只手表和它的魔力呢？沒人能理解。沒有人能相信?！暗易蛱炜匆娔愦髦?，”沃克小姐溫柔地提醒他。李沉默了一會(huì)兒，然后他道歉了，他只記得這一點(diǎn)。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并決定在演講后歸還。每個(gè)人都很困惑，并被問及為什么。珍妮又說不出話來了。MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.Jennywalkedslowlytothefront.Shecouldn'tthinkproperly.Allroundher,aseaoffaceswaswatching.Shefeltsofrightenedandthewatchdidn'tseemmagicalatall.SuddenlyshesawMissWalker'sencouragingeyes.Jennytookadeepbreath."I'mgoingtotalkaboutswimming…"TenminuteslaterthewholeclassstoodupapplaudingJenny'swonderfulspeech.Jennysmiledassheeventuallyrealizedtherealsourceofconfidence.沃克老師笑了笑，讓全班同學(xué)先聽珍妮的演講。珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她無法正常思考。她的四周，一片面海在看著。她感到很害怕，手表看起來一點(diǎn)也不神奇。突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓勵(lì)的眼睛。珍妮深深地吸了一口氣。十分鐘后，全班同學(xué)起立為珍妮的精彩演講鼓掌。珍妮笑了，因?yàn)樗罱K意識(shí)到了自信的真正來源。2.Timepassedquicklythatyear,andbeforeweallknewit,itwasthelastdayofschool.Ourschoolhadaveryspecialtraditiononthelastday.Alltheteachersfilledthesidewalk,wavinggoodbyetothekidsasthebusespulledoutwiththeirhornshonking.Butonthatparticularday,Stevenwalkedslowlytothebus,hisheaddown,tearsinhiseyes.Heboardedthebusreluctantly,hesitated,andthenranbackoffthebustohugMr.Rowe."Idon′twanttoleaveyou."Hesobbedwithred-rimmedeyes.Mr.Rowecomfortedhim,"Iwillmissyou,too."那一年時(shí)間過得很快，我們還沒意識(shí)到，那是學(xué)校的最后一天。我們學(xué)校在最后一天有一個(gè)非常特殊的傳統(tǒng)。所有的老師都擠滿了人行道，向孩子們揮手道別，車上按著喇叭離開。但就在那一天，史蒂文慢慢地走到公交車前，低著頭，熱淚盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士，猶豫了一下，然后跑回來?yè)肀r。羅伊。“我不想離開你。”他用紅邊緣的眼睛抽泣著。Mr.羅安慰他，“我也會(huì)想念你。”Manyyearslater,Mr.RoweandIweresurprisedwhenahandsomeyoungmanwalkedintoourclassroom,dressedintheMarineCorpsuniform.Theyoungmanstoodtallandproud.ItwasSteven!Mr.RoweandIcouldn'tbelieveoureyes.HesalutedandhuggedMr.Rowetightly!"Ihavecomebacktoschooltodayjusttosaythankstoyou!"Itismyhopethateveryteacherisblessedwithsuchanexperienceofaformerstudentcomingbacktosay,simplytosayaverysimplewordofTHANKS.許多年后，當(dāng)一個(gè)穿著海軍陸戰(zhàn)隊(duì)制服的英俊年輕人走進(jìn)我們的教室時(shí)，羅先生和我感到驚訝。那個(gè)年輕人站得高高的，很驕傲。是史蒂文！我和羅先生簡(jiǎn)直不敢相信我們的眼睛。他敬禮，緊緊地?fù)肀Я_先生！“我今天回到學(xué)校只是為了感謝你！“我希望每一位老師都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，一位以前的學(xué)生回來說，簡(jiǎn)單地說一個(gè)非常簡(jiǎn)單的“謝謝。十二、陌生人的幫助IwaswonderingwhattosaywhenIheardthesoundoffootstepsoutofthetent.Webothlookedup.Itwasexactlytheyoungmaninthephotobutlookedmuchstronger.Thewomansaidsomethingtohim,lookingatussmiling."NeedsomeMg?"heasked.It'samazinghewasspeakingverygoodEnglish!GeorgeandIlookedateachother,eyeslitup."Yes,andwewerewonderingifyoucouldhaveoneofourtyreschanged.""Followme!"hesaid,soundinglikesortofanorder.當(dāng)我聽到帳篷外的腳步聲時(shí)，我想說什么。我們都抬起頭來。照片上的正是那個(gè)年輕人，但看上去更強(qiáng)壯。女人對(duì)他說了些什么，看著我們微笑?！薄靶枰V嗎？”他問道。他說的英語(yǔ)很好真是太棒了！喬治和我互相看了一眼，眼睛亮了起來。“是的，我們想知道你們是否可以換一個(gè)輪胎?！薄案襾?！”他說，聽起來像是命令。Wegotupandtogetherwalkedbacktothecar.Themangrabbedthewheelwithonehandandaspannerwiththeother.Withanoutburstofshout,thetyrewasoosenedup."Youjustneedabitofeffort.Haha!"GeorgeandIstoodtheredumbfoundedwatchinghimfinishingthewholejob,gratitudeandadmirationrushinginmyheart.Theknotthathadbeentiredupbythepaininmyfoot,thecoldsoakingrainandthestubbornflattyrewaslooseneduptoo,inthewarmteafromthewoman,theheroicshoutoftheman,themountainviewinthedistanceandthejoyofbeingaleltosetoffagain.我們站起來，一起走回到車?yán)?。那個(gè)人用一只手抓住輪子，另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一聲，輪胎亮了?！澳阒恍枰冻鲆稽c(diǎn)努力。哈哈哈！”我和喬治呆地站在那里看著他完成整個(gè)工作，感激和欽佩在我心中涌動(dòng)。我腳的疼痛、冰冷的雨和頑固的平輪胎也松開了，在女人溫暖的茶里，男人的英雄吶喊，遠(yuǎn)處的山景，還有比加萊爾再次出發(fā)的喜悅。Part4：靈活應(yīng)用例1：老夫婦幫助我閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。（滿分25分）Manyyearsago,whenIwasfreshoutofschoolandworkinginDenver,Iwasdrivingtomyparents'homeinMissouriforChristmas.Istoppedatagasstation(加油站)about50milesfromOklahomaCity,whereIwasplanningtostopandvisitafriend.WhileIwasstandinginlineatthecashregister(收款臺(tái)),Isaidhellotoanoldercouplewhowerealsopayingforgas.Itookoff,buthadgoneonlyafewmileswhenblacksmokepouredfromthebackofmycar.IstoppedandwonderedwhatIshoulddo.Acarpulledupbehindme.ItwasthecoupleIhadspokentoatthegasstation.Theysaidtheywouldtakemetomyfriend's.Wechattedonthewayintothecity,andwhenIgotoutofthecar,thehusbandgavemehisbusinesscard.Iwrotehimandhiswifeathank-younoteforhelpingme.Soonafterward,IreceivedaChristmaspresentfromthem.Theirnotethatcamewithitsaidthathelpingmehadmadetheirholidaysmeaningful.Yearslater,Idrovetoameetinginanearbytowninthemorning.InlateafternoonIreturnedtomycarandfoundthatI'dleftthelightsonallday,andthebattery(電池)wasdead.ThenInoticedthattheFriendlyForddealership-ashopsellingcars-wasrightnextdoor.Iwalkedoverandfoundtwosalesmenintheshowroom.注意：1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmancametome.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________