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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。73-year-oldBarbarasatatabusstoponarainyevening,thinkingofthepastandwishingtofindherpurposeinlife.Asuddensoundawakenedher.Shegotupandslowlyapproachedthebus,aspeopleaboardimpatientlywaitedforhertogetonquicklysothebuscouldstartsoon.Barbaralookedaroundforanemptyseatbutfoundnoneandnobodywantedtogivetheirseattoher.Asthehelplesswomanlookedtowardthefarthercornerofthebus,shesawalittleboywavingather,smiling.Barbarathoughttheboyhadmistakenherforsomeoneelse.Minuteslater,hepushedthroughthecrowd,heldherhandandtookhertohisseat.Barbarasatdownandthankedtheboy.Ayoungwomannearhersmiledandsaid,“It’sokay.Davidwasjustdoinghisjob!”Sheintroducedherselfastheboy’smother,Kristen.Thenaconversationstartedbetweenthem,fromwhichBarbaralearntmoreaboutthemotherandson.Infact,theboy’sfatherdiedtwoyearsago,leavingthemotherwithagreatdebt(債務(wù))topayandfivelittlekidstofeed.Everydaywasalreadyaterriblestruggleforthem.Tomakemattersworse,theyoungestsonofthefamily,Kevin,fellseriouslyillandwasbattlingforhislifeinthehospitalnow.AstrangefeelingofsadnessandpitystruckBarbara.Movedbythesinglemother’sstory,Barbarawantedtohelp.ShefeltKristenwaslikeherwhenshewasatKristen’sage:herhusbandanddaughterdiedofillnessmanyyearsago.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。SoBarbaraaskedKristenhowshemighthelpher.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenextday,Barbaraarrivedatthehospitalwithaboxofmoney.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:73歲的芭芭拉在一個(gè)雨夜坐在公交站陷入對(duì)生活意義的迷茫沉思。上車(chē)后無(wú)人讓座,小男孩大衛(wèi)卻熱情地拉她坐到自己座位,芭芭拉由此結(jié)識(shí)了大衛(wèi)的母親克里斯汀。交談中得知,大衛(wèi)父親兩年前離世,留下巨額債務(wù)與五個(gè)年幼孩子,最小的凱文如今還重病住院,生活艱難。芭芭拉因相似經(jīng)歷心生憐憫,決定伸出援手,故事在此留下諸多懸念,引發(fā)讀者對(duì)后續(xù)發(fā)展的好奇。伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng):伏筆:芭芭拉上車(chē)后無(wú)人讓座,只有小男孩熱情招呼她。回應(yīng):暗示小男孩的善良純真與眾不同,為后文他一家接受芭芭拉幫助,雙方建立深厚情誼鋪墊。續(xù)寫(xiě)中男孩一家對(duì)芭芭拉毫無(wú)保留的信任與感激,源于最初這一善意舉動(dòng)。伏筆:提到克里斯汀身負(fù)巨債,要養(yǎng)活五個(gè)孩子,小兒子還重病?;貞?yīng):突出這家人生活絕境,使芭芭拉的幫助順理成章,也讓讀者好奇芭芭拉如何化解困境。續(xù)寫(xiě)里芭芭拉四處籌錢(qián),針對(duì)性地解決醫(yī)療費(fèi)用難題。伏筆:芭芭拉想起自己早年喪夫喪女的經(jīng)歷?;貞?yīng):解釋芭芭拉共情克里斯汀的根源,為她主動(dòng)幫忙提供心理動(dòng)機(jī)。續(xù)寫(xiě)中芭芭拉因這段經(jīng)歷更堅(jiān)定助人決心,視幫助這家人為自我救贖。伏筆:芭芭拉與克里斯汀交換電話(huà)號(hào)碼并承諾保持聯(lián)系?;貞?yīng):搭建后續(xù)溝通橋梁,讓芭芭拉介入這家人生活有了途徑。續(xù)寫(xiě)可見(jiàn)芭芭拉借此跟進(jìn)病情、組織援助,緊密參與其中。伏筆:芭芭拉上車(chē)時(shí)人們的不耐煩與小男孩的熱心形成對(duì)比。回應(yīng):強(qiáng)化小男孩善良的珍貴,凸顯人性冷暖反差。續(xù)寫(xiě)中以小男孩一家在困境中仍保持的感恩之心,回?fù)糸_(kāi)篇眾人冷漠,升華溫暖真情能抵御生活苦難的主題。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn):第一段情感線:芭芭拉急切想幫克里斯汀,內(nèi)心滿(mǎn)是同情與堅(jiān)定,克里斯汀則從猶豫、感激到燃起希望;故事線:芭芭拉詢(xún)問(wèn)幫助方式,得知醫(yī)療費(fèi)用困境后當(dāng)即解囊,兩人深入交流并約定后續(xù)行動(dòng)。第二段情感線:芭芭拉帶著眾人愛(ài)心奔赴醫(yī)院,自豪且欣慰,克里斯汀震驚、感動(dòng)至極;故事線:芭芭拉詳述募款過(guò)程,將錢(qián)交給克里斯汀,后續(xù)持續(xù)助力這家人,雙方情誼升華。主旨升華句:Inthefaceofhardships,asmallactofkindnesscansparkachainreactionoflove,lightingupthedarkestcornersoflife.(在困境面前,一個(gè)小小的善舉能引發(fā)愛(ài)的連鎖反應(yīng),照亮生命最黑暗的角落。)Truecompassionknowsnobounds;ithasthepowertohealwounds,bothforthoseinneedandforthegiver.(真正的同情無(wú)界限;它有治愈傷口的力量,既為那些需要的人,也為給予者。)Whenwereachouttoothersintheirtimeofdespair,wenotonlychangetheirlivesbutalsofindthemeaningofourown.(當(dāng)我們?cè)谒私^望之時(shí)伸出援手,我們不僅改變他們的生活,也找到自身的意義。)Thewarmthofhumanitycanmelttheiceofmisfortune,bindingstrangerstogetherinanunbreakablebondofsupport.(人性的溫暖能融化不幸的堅(jiān)冰,將陌生人緊緊連在一起,結(jié)成牢不可破的互助紐帶。)Kindnessislikeabeaconinthestorm,guidinglostsoulstowardshopeandabettertomorrow.(善良就像風(fēng)暴中的燈塔,指引迷失的靈魂走向希望與更美好的明天。)寫(xiě)作示范一:SoBarbaraaskedKristenhowshemighthelpher.Kristen'seyeswelledupwithtearsasshechokedoutthedetails.Themedicalbillshadbecomeaninsurmountablemountain,andeverydaywasaraceagainsttime.Barbara'sheartachedatthesight.Withouthesitation,sheopenedherworn-outwalletandtookoutallthecashshehadbeensavingforemergencies.“Here,takethis.It'sastart,”shesaid,hervoicetremblingwithemotion.Kristenwastakenaback,herhandsshakingasshereachedforthemoney.Shetriedtorefuse,butBarbara'sdeterminedgazemadeherrelent.Theytalkedforawhilelonger,devisingaplantoraisemorefunds.Barbarapromisedtoreachouttohercommunity,andKristen,withnewfoundhope,thankedherprofusely.Thenextday,Barbaraarrivedatthehospitalwithaboxofmoney.Shehadspenttheentiredaybeforeknockingondoors,sharingKristen'sstorywithneighborsandfriends.Toheramazement,peopleopenedtheirheartsandwallets.Asshewalkedthroughthehospitalcorridors,shesawKristenpacingnervouslyoutsidetheICU.Barbarahurriedoverandgentlyplacedtheboxinherhands.“Thisisfromallofus.WebelieveinyouandKevin,”shesaid.Kristen'seyeswidenedindisbelief,andthenthetearsflowedfreely.ShehuggedBarbaratightly,unabletofindthewords.Fromthatmomenton,Barbarabecameanintegralpartoftheirlives,andthroughhelpingthem,sherediscoveredthejoyandpurposeshehadbeenseeking.Thekindnesstheysharedbecameatestamenttothepowerofhumanconnectioninthefaceofadversity.寫(xiě)作示范二:SoBarbaraaskedKristenhowshemighthelpher.Kristenhesitated,ashamedtoadmitthefullextentofherdesperation.ButBarbara'skindeyesurgedheron.Shefinallyrevealedthatthehospitalwasthreateningtostoptreatmentduetounpaidbills.Barbara'sbrowsfurrowedinconcern.Diggingdeepintoherpockets,shepulledoutasmalljewelrybox.Insidewasapreciousnecklace,herlastheirloom.“Sellthis.Itshouldhelpfornow,”shemurmured.Kristengasped,butBarbarapresseditintoherhand.“We'reinthistogether,”sheadded.Touchedbeyondwords,Kristennodded,andtheyhuddledtogether,makingalistofpossibledonors.Barbara'sphonebuzzedwithcallstofriendsshehadn'tspokentoinyears.Thenextday,Barbaraarrivedatthehospitalwithaboxofmoney.Herfacewasflushedwithexhaustionbutalsodetermination.Thepreviousnighthadbeenawhirlwindofphonecallsandonlinepleas.She'devenvisitedlocalcharities.Now,asshehandedtheboxtoKristen,shesaid,“Ourcommunitycamethrough.Kevinwillgetthecareheneeds.”Kristenstaredatthebox,thenatBarbara,herheartswellingwithgratitude.Insidewerestacksofcashandchecks,eachoneasymbolofhope.Barbara'shandstrembledslightlyassheembracedKristen.Inhelpingthisfamily,shehadnotonlymendedtheirlivesbutalsostitchedtogetherthefragmentsofherown.Theirstorywouldnowbeoneofresilience,kindness,andtheunbreakablespiritofhumanity.【答案】范文SoBarbaraaskedKristenhowshemighthelpher.Kristenhesitatedforamoment,unsureifitwasappropriatetoaccepthelpfromastranger.ButseeingthekindnessinBarbara’seyes,shereluctantlysharedherstruggles.“Thehospitalbillsarepilingup,andwithmyhusbandgone,I’mstrugglingtokeepup,”Kristenexplained,hervoiceshakingwithemotion.“AndKevin’streatment...it’ssoexpensive.Idon’tknowhowmuchlongerwecanholdon.”Barbaralistenedintently,herheartheavywit
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