第第頁人教版八年級下冊英語Unit8HaveyoureadTreasureIslandyet？滿分話題作文范文與解析學(xué)案1．著名作家Francis曾經(jīng)說過:“讀書使人充實”。閱讀對我們的成長有著舉足輕重的作用。請你根據(jù)下面的信息，以“Readingmakesafullman”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，給出你對閱讀的看法和計劃。Whytoreadtogetknowledge,openthemind,learnaforeignlanguage……Whattoreadtextbooks,newspapers,magazines,storybooks……Yourplansreadingatleast…booksinthecomingholidayReadingmakesafullman【答案】ReadingmakesafullmanReadingisveryimportantinourlife.Wecangetknowledgethroughreading.Itcannotonlyopenourmindbutalsomakeuscleverer.Besides,readingisalsooneofthemostimportantwaystolearnaforeignlanguagelikeEnglish.Textbooks,newspapers,magazines,storybooksandotherkindsofreadingmaterialscanhelpusknowmoreabouttheoutsideworldandhelpusgrowintoexcellentpersons.I’mplanningtoreadatleasttwobooksinthecomingholiday.AndI’llspendmoretimereadingeverydayduringmyseniorhighschool.Readingmakesafullman!Let’sstartreadingnow.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于命題作文，寫出對閱讀的看法和計劃，第一段寫為什么讀書；第二段是讀什么書；第三段是你的計劃是什么。2.例文點評：文中給出要點構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點：短語：inourlife；getknowledgethroughreading.；notonly…butalso…句型：readingisalsooneofthemostimportantwaystolearnaforeignlanguagelikeEnglish.;I’mplanningtoreadatleasttwobooksinthecomingholiday.用到了現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時。2．書籍是人類進(jìn)步的階梯。書籍在賦予我們知識的同時，也向我們傳授生活的道理。生活中，你喜歡讀書嗎？哪位作家的著作使你印象深刻呢？請你以“Myfavoritewriter”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹你最喜歡的作家。Myfavoritewriter________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:MyfavoritewriterIlikereadinginmyfreetimeandIhavealreadyreadmanybookswrittenbydifferentwriters.Ofallthewriters,IlikeJ.K.Rowlingbest.J.K.RowlingbecamefamousbecauseofHarryPotter.Itsfirstnovelcameoutin1997andthelastonecameoutin2007.Thenovelsweresopopularthatbothchildrenandadultslovedtoreadthem.AlthoughIhavealreadyreadthosenovelsseveraltimes,Istillfindthemexciting.Haveyoureadthesenovelsyet?Ithinkyouwilllovethemifyoureadthem.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。以“我最喜歡的作家”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。先介紹自己最喜歡的作家是誰，再介紹這位作家的相關(guān)情況以及他的作品。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。3．音樂可以展現(xiàn)人的內(nèi)心世界，聽音樂也是人們辛苦之余最簡單、最有效的緩解疲勞的妙策。你平時喜歡聽音樂嗎？你最喜歡的歌手是誰？他/她的哪首歌是你百聽不厭的呢？請你以“Myfavoritesong”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，介紹你最喜歡的一首歌。提示詞：melody旋律；曲調(diào)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】高分范文：MyfavoritesongIhavemanyhobbiesandlisteningtomusicisoneofthem.Ihavealreadylistenedtomanysongs.Ofallthesongs,InvisibleWingsismyfavorite.Angelafirstsangitin2006.Thewordsofthesongcanalwaysgivepeopleenergy.Manypeoplesaytheirheartsarefullofhopeaftertheylistentothesong.Themelodyissobeautifulthatithasbeenpopularallovertheworld.Andithaswonmanyprizes.Haveyoulistenedtothesongyet?Ifnot,Ihopeyoucanlistentoit.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。以“我最喜歡的歌曲”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時。先介紹自己最喜歡的歌曲是什么，再介紹這首歌曲的相關(guān)情況，包括由誰演唱，給予人們哪些正能量等信息。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。4．當(dāng)前，我市各學(xué)校正在開展“好書伴我成長”活動。請你根據(jù)活動主題并結(jié)合表格信息，以“GrowingupwithGoodbooks”為題，用英語寫一篇約80個單詞的倡議書，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書的益處獲取知識、開闊視野、使人快樂存在的現(xiàn)象聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占用了大部分業(yè)余時間發(fā)出倡議多讀書，讀經(jīng)典好書。讓讀書成為我們生活的一部分。要求：1.倡議書應(yīng)包含所有要點；2.倡議書的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名與學(xué)校名稱。GrowingupwithGoodbooksMydearfriend,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyDearFriends,Readingisveryimportant.Wecangetknowledgethroughreading.Itcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeusclevererandhappier.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifwereadmoregoodbooks.Themoreweread,themorewewilllearnandthebrighterourfuturewillbecome.However,somestudentsspendmuchtimeinlisteningtomusic,watchingTVorgoingonlinetoplaygames.Ittakesmuchoftheirsparetime.SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyreadclassicssothatwecanspreadourChinesetraditionalculturetotheworld.Let’sstartreadingnow.Andletitbecomeapartofourlife!Thankyou!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如notonly…butalso，themore…themore，spendmuchtimeindoing，listentomusic，watchTV，goonline，playgames，muchof，liketodo，sothat，apartof等。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Readingisveryimportant./somestudentsspendmuchtimeinlisteningtomusic,watchingTVorgoingonlinetoplaygames.和Ourstudycanbeimprovedifwereadmoregoodbooks./SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyreadclassicssothatwecanspreadourChinesetraditionalculturetotheworld.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．李克強總理將“全民閱讀”寫入了政府工作報告，倡導(dǎo)全民熱愛閱讀，請根據(jù)以下提示和要求，用英語寫篇短文，闡述現(xiàn)狀，并表達(dá)你對閱讀的看法和打算。注意：（1）內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80-100，文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。Reality（現(xiàn)狀）QuiteafewChinesedon’treadalot1.havenofreetime2.uselessYouropinionReadingisimportant1.openupoureyesandincreaseourknowledge2.…Yourplan1.…2.…PremierLiKeqianghasputTheNationalReadinginhisgovernmentworkreporttoencouragealoveofreadinginallChinesepeople._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文PremierLiKeqianghasputTheNationalReadinginhisgovernmentworkreporttoencouragealoveofreadinginallChinesepeople.ForquiteafewChinesepeople,theysaythattheyaresobusywithdifferentactivities,soit'simpossibleforthemtohavetimeforreading.What'smore,theyconsiderituselesstoread.ButIhavetheoppositeopinion.Readingisimportantinthewholelifeforpeople.Firstly,readingopensupoureyestotheoutsideworldandincreasesourknowledge.Secondly,readingissurelyagoodwaytoimprovereadingandwritingskills.SoIplantocontinuereadingwheneverI'mfree.Also,I'llcallonmyfriendstostartreadingtofindandenjoythegreatmagicofreading.【解析】【詳解】題干分析：文章主要闡述現(xiàn)代社會人們閱讀的現(xiàn)狀，并表達(dá)對閱讀的看法和打算。例文點評：文章由李克強總理將“全民閱讀”寫入了政府工作報告，倡導(dǎo)全民熱愛閱讀，來引出下文，通過對現(xiàn)代社會人們閱讀的現(xiàn)狀的闡述，表達(dá)自己對閱讀的觀點以及自己的閱讀計劃來組成整篇文章；引用了一些短語和從句使得文章更精彩，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不單一，比較多樣化。高分亮點：短語：afew一些，bebusywith忙于……，plantocontinuereading計劃繼續(xù)閱讀句型：it'simpossibleforthemtohavetimeforreadingSoIplantocontinuereadingwheneverI'mfree.6．最近你們班要舉辦一次英語讀書報告會的分享活動。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文為此做準(zhǔn)備。提示：1.Whatbookhaveyoureadrecently?2.What’sitabout?

3.Whatdoyouthinkofit?要求：90詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I’vereadWhoMovedMyCheese.It’ssoeducationalthatI’vereadittwice.Therearefourcharactersinthebook.Oneday,theyfindlotsofcheeseandthentheyliveahappylife.Unluckily,somedayslater,theycan’tfindanycheesethere.Thensomeofthemtrytofindcheeseinotherplaces.Buttheothersjustfeelupsetanddon’ttakeanyaction.Thebooktellsustherearechangesinourlife.Wemustchangeourselvestofacethechangingenvironment,orwewon’tsucceed.【解析】【詳解】【亮點說明】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如soeducational，andthen，liveahappylife，somedayslater，trytodo，inotherplaces，inourlife，facethechangingenvironment，等。而It’ssoeducationalthatI’vereadittwice./Thebooktellsustherearechangesinourlife./Wemustchangeourselvestofacethechangingenvironment,orwewon’tsucceed.等多種復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)句式的運用更是為文章增色不少。點睛：這是一篇提綱作文。根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時，按照提示內(nèi)容逐條進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，最后連接成一篇完整的作文即可。7．假設(shè)學(xué)校讀書俱樂部正在舉辦“世界文學(xué)名著欣賞”系列活動，這周閱讀的名著是RobinsonCrusoe(《魯濱孫漂流記》)。請你根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇英文讀后感。要點提示：1.TheEnglishwriter,DanielDefoe,wrotethisnovelin1719;2.Thebooktellsaclassicadventurestoryofamanonanislandfornearly30years;3.Yourfeelingsafterreadingthebook;要求：1.語句通順符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.80詞左右開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。IreadabookcalledRobinsonCrusoethisweek._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IreadabookcalledRobinsonCrusoethisweek.ItwaswrittenbyDanielDefoewhowasanEnglishwriter.Ittellsusaclassicadventurestoryofamanonanislandfornearly30years.Duringhislivingontheisland,hesavedaman'slifeonaFriday,sohenamedhimFriday.Fromthenon,theylivedtogetherontheisland.ItisaveryinterestingandmeaningfulnovelandIlikeitverymuch.Robinsonisgreatandheistheheroinmyheart.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如writtenby，tellsb.sth.，onanisland，Duringhisliving，onaFriday，fromthenon，livetogether，verymuch，theheroinmyheart等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)ItisaveryinterestingandmeaningfulnovelandIlikeitverymuch.和ItwaswrittenbyDanielDefoewhowasanEnglishwriter./Duringhislivingontheisland,hesavedaman'slifeonaFriday,sohenamedhimFriday.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影、有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyoulikebest?”為題，按照下列提示寫一篇英語短文。提示：1.看電影：省時、有趣、易懂

2.讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美

3.我的看法及理由注意：1.根據(jù)提示可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢；

2.詞數(shù)100左右，文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）；

3.參考詞匯：originalwork或bookintheoriginal(原著)。

Filmorbook,whichdoyoulikebest?Howtoreadthebookintheoriginal?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Filmorbook,whichdoyoulikebest?Howtoreadthebookintheoriginal?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoreinformationfromtheoriginal.Andthelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.Forme,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinmyownhouse,andIamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor’sideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilm.【解析】【詳解】根據(jù)題目要求，可知本文屬于議論文，從兩個方面展開人們對不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影的兩種觀點：有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。同時表述各自的原因和理由。提煉為要點：1.看電影：省時、有趣、易懂2.讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美3.我的看法及理由。這樣的短文屬于典型議論文書寫，首先要展開問題“Howtoreadthebookintheoriginal?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.”揭示不同人對這種行為有不同看法，然后套用議論文格式：正方常用句子：

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