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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Risingtoreachforthebookonthedeskinthelivingroom,Gudrunfelloverherlittlebrother,whohadcrawledoutfromunderneathherchair.“Arnar!Whydoyoualwayshavetoberightunderme?”Thefive-year-oldgiggled.“Iwashiding,”hesaid,“andyoufoundme.”“I’mnotplaying,”Gudrunscolded.“I’mknitting.Andit’stimeforyoutogotobed.”Herparentshadgoneoutfortheevening,leavingGudrunincharge.“Letmehideoncemore,”Arnarbegged.“ThenI’llgotosleep,Ipromise.”Gudruncouldn’thelpsmiling.“Oh,allright.”Sheturnedbacktoherknitting.“I’lllookforyouwhenI’vefinishedthisrow.”“Here’saclue,”Arnarcalledasheskippedaway.“LookformewhereIalwaysam.”ButGudrunwasalreadyabsorbedinherwork.Gudrunwasn’tsurewhathadawakenedherinthemiddleofthenight.WasittheurgencyinMamma’svoiceorthefrighteningandlowrumblethatrolledthroughherroom?Gudrunfoundherselfsuddenlywideawake,drawntothewindowbyastrangeandunfamiliarbrillianceoutside.“Aneruption,”MammasaidasshebegantogatherGudrun’sclothes.“MaybeHelgafell,maybeanewvolcano.Wemustleavetheislandquickly.”“Tonight?How?”Gudrunasked,herheartpounding.“Wherewillwego?”“We’relucky.Thefishingboatswilltakeustothemainland.”MammaturnedtofaceGudrun.“Pabbihasalreadygonetotheharbor.I’mgoingtohelpMargret.”Theirelderly.neighborlivedalone.Mammaproceeded,“canyoudressArnarandtakehimtotheharborbyyourself?”“Ofcourse,”shedeclared.Everyonewouldhelptonight.Icelandershadalwaysworkedtogethertosurviveinalandruledbyvolcanoes,glaciers,andocean.Gudrundressedandrantoherbrother’sroom.“Arnar!”shecried,“Wakeup!”Hearingnoresponse,Gudrunhurriedtothebedandpulledbackherbrother’sthickcover.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.開頭已給出。Paragraph1:Arnarwasn’tthere!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep..________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意古德倫在父母外出時(shí)照顧弟弟阿爾納。阿爾納想再玩一次捉迷藏就睡覺,讓古德倫在織完一排毛線后找他,并給了“在我常待的地方找我”的線索,隨后古德倫沉浸在編織中。半夜,火山爆發(fā),媽媽告知要撤離到大陸,爸爸已前往港口,媽媽去幫助鄰居,讓古德倫給阿爾納穿好衣服帶去港口。古德倫去叫阿爾納時(shí),發(fā)現(xiàn)他不在床上。故事山分析目標(biāo):古德倫的目標(biāo)是找到弟弟阿爾納并帶他安全撤離到港口,確保弟弟的安全。阻礙:半夜火山爆發(fā),情況緊急,弟弟阿爾納失蹤,不知道他藏在哪里,增加了尋找的難度和時(shí)間緊迫性。努力:古德倫努力回憶弟弟的線索,在房間和家里可能的地方四處尋找,大聲呼喊弟弟的名字。結(jié)果:成功找到弟弟,兩人順利前往港口,和家人一起安全撤離。意外:在這緊急撤離時(shí)刻,弟弟竟然失蹤,使原本緊張的情況變得更加危急。轉(zhuǎn)折:從平靜的夜晚照顧弟弟到突然面臨火山爆發(fā)的危機(jī),再到弟弟失蹤,情節(jié)多次轉(zhuǎn)折,充滿緊張感。結(jié)局:古德倫和弟弟安全撤離,一家人團(tuán)聚,經(jīng)歷這次事件后,古德倫更加懂得責(zé)任和親情的重要性,也深刻體會(huì)到冰島人團(tuán)結(jié)互助共渡難關(guān)的精神。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:阿爾納玩捉迷藏,讓古德倫在織完一排毛線后找他,并給出“在我常待的地方找我”的線索?;貞?yīng):在續(xù)寫中,古德倫會(huì)根據(jù)這個(gè)線索,在阿爾納經(jīng)常玩?;虼牡胤?,如衣柜、床下、玩具房等地方尋找他。伏筆:父母外出,古德倫負(fù)責(zé)照顧弟弟?;貞?yīng):在尋找弟弟的過(guò)程中,古德倫意識(shí)到自己肩負(fù)的責(zé)任重大,必須冷靜找到弟弟,體現(xiàn)她在緊急情況下的成長(zhǎng)和擔(dān)當(dāng)。伏筆:半夜被媽媽叫醒得知火山爆發(fā)要撤離?;貞?yīng):這是故事的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn),在續(xù)寫中,撤離的緊迫性會(huì)一直貫穿,增加尋找弟弟的緊張氛圍,如外面的火山灰、不斷傳來(lái)的轟鳴聲等。伏筆:媽媽去幫助鄰居,讓古德倫獨(dú)自帶弟弟去港口。回應(yīng):突出古德倫要獨(dú)立完成任務(wù),在找到弟弟后,她需要獨(dú)自帶著弟弟克服各種困難前往港口,展現(xiàn)她的勇敢和獨(dú)立。伏筆:冰島人一直團(tuán)結(jié)互助共渡難關(guān)?;貞?yīng):在后續(xù)可能會(huì)體現(xiàn)在古德倫尋找弟弟的過(guò)程中,得到鄰居或其他人的幫助,或者在前往港口的路上,大家相互扶持,共同撤離。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段:詳細(xì)描述古德倫發(fā)現(xiàn)弟弟不在后的驚慌失措,她腦海中快速回憶弟弟的線索,然后開始在房間里瘋狂尋找,大聲呼喊弟弟的名字,內(nèi)心充滿恐懼和焦慮,擔(dān)心弟弟遭遇危險(xiǎn),同時(shí)描述外面火山爆發(fā)的恐怖場(chǎng)景,如不斷閃爍的火光、滾滾的濃煙等,增加緊張氛圍。第二段:古德倫終于在某個(gè)熟悉的角落找到熟睡的弟弟,如衣柜里、他平時(shí)最喜歡玩的玩具堆里等。她又氣又喜,趕緊叫醒弟弟,給他穿好衣服,帶著他在混亂中前往港口,途中可能會(huì)遇到一些小困難,如道路被火山灰掩蓋、人群擁擠等,但最終成功到達(dá)港口,和家人團(tuán)聚,感受劫后余生的喜悅和親情的溫暖。情感線起初,古德倫在照顧弟弟時(shí)比較平靜,帶著些許對(duì)弟弟調(diào)皮的無(wú)奈。火山爆發(fā)得知要撤離時(shí),她感到緊張和不安。發(fā)現(xiàn)弟弟失蹤后,恐懼和焦慮達(dá)到頂點(diǎn),害怕弟弟出事。找到弟弟時(shí),轉(zhuǎn)為又氣又喜,喜的是弟弟平安,氣的是他在這危急時(shí)刻還在睡覺。前往港口途中,她的心情依然緊張,但有了弟弟在身邊,多了一份安心,最終到達(dá)港口與家人團(tuán)聚,感受到喜悅和溫暖。故事線古德倫父母外出,她照顧弟弟,弟弟玩捉迷藏。半夜火山爆發(fā),媽媽告知要撤離,爸爸去港口,媽媽幫助鄰居,讓古德倫帶弟弟去港口。古德倫發(fā)現(xiàn)弟弟不在床上,開始驚慌尋找。古德倫根據(jù)線索在房間各處尋找弟弟。古德倫找到熟睡的弟弟,叫醒他并帶他前往港口。古德倫和弟弟成功到達(dá)港口,與家人團(tuán)聚,安全撤離。主旨升華句ThisexperiencenotonlytestedGudrun'scourageandresponsibilitybutalsovividlydemonstratedtheunwaveringspiritofunityandmutualassistancethatbindstheIcelandicpeopletogetherinthefaceofnaturaldisasters.這次經(jīng)歷不僅考驗(yàn)了古德倫的勇氣和責(zé)任感,還生動(dòng)地展現(xiàn)了冰島人民在面對(duì)自然災(zāi)害時(shí)團(tuán)結(jié)互助、堅(jiān)定不移的精神。Throughthechaosofthevolcaniceruptionandthefranticsearchforherbrother,Gudrunlearnedthetruemeaningoffamilyandthepowerofstayingcalminthemostchallengingsituations.在火山爆發(fā)的混亂和瘋狂尋找弟弟的過(guò)程中,古德倫領(lǐng)悟到了家庭的真正意義以及在最具挑戰(zhàn)性的情況下保持冷靜的力量。ThenightoftheeruptionbecameadefiningmomentforGudrun,teachingherthateveninthedarkestoftimes,hopeandlovecanguideusthrough,andthebondsofcommunityareunbreakable.火山爆發(fā)的那個(gè)夜晚成為了古德倫人生的關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻,讓她明白即使在最黑暗的時(shí)刻,希望和愛也能引領(lǐng)我們前行,社區(qū)的紐帶堅(jiān)不可摧。AsGudrunandArnarmadetheirwaytosafety,theycarriedwiththemnotonlythememoriesofthisterrifyingnightbutalsothedeep-seatedunderstandingoftheimportanceoflookingoutforoneanotherintimesofneed.當(dāng)古德倫和阿爾納安全抵達(dá)時(shí),他們不僅帶著這個(gè)恐怖夜晚的記憶,還深刻理解了在困難時(shí)刻相互照顧的重要性。ThisharrowingeventinGudrun'slifeservedasapowerfulreminderthatinthefaceofnature'sfury,humanresilience,familylove,andcommunitysupportcanovercomeanyobstacleandbringlighttothedarkestofdays.古德倫生命中的這場(chǎng)痛苦經(jīng)歷有力地提醒著我們,在大自然的憤怒面前,人類的韌性、家庭的愛和社區(qū)的支持能夠克服任何障礙,為最黑暗的日子帶來(lái)光明。寫作示范一Paragraph1:Arnarwasn’tthere!PanicinstantlygrippedGudrun.Herheartracedlikeawildhorse,andherhandstrembleduncontrollably.SheshoutedArnar'snameatthetopofherlungs,buttheonlyresponsewasthedeafeningrumbleoftheeruptingvolcano.Frantically,shescannedeverycorneroftheroom,throwingasidetoysandrummagingthroughthewardrobe.ThoughtsoftheapproachingdangerandArnar'ssafetycollidedinhermind,makingheralmostdizzywithfear.Theorangeglowfromthevolcaniceruptionseepedthroughthewindows,castingeerieshadowsonthewalls,addingtothesenseofhorror.Paragraph2:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.ReliefwashedoverGudrunlikeawarmwave,followedbyaflashofanger."Arnar,wakeup!"shecried,shakinghimvigorously.Arnaropenedhissleepyeyes,lookingconfused."Wehavetoleave,now!"Gudrunexplainedurgently.Shequicklydressedhim,andtheyrushedoutofthehouse.Thestreetswerefilledwithashandpanickedpeople.HoldingArnar'shandtightly,Gudrunpushedthroughthecrowd,makingtheirwaytotheharbor.Finally,theyreachedtheboats,andastheysailedaway,GudrunhuggedArnarclose,gratefulfortheirsafetyandthelovethatboundthemtogether.寫作示范二Paragraph1:Arnarwasn’tthere!Gudrun'seyeswidenedinhorror,andacoldsweatbrokeoutonherforehead.Shesprintedoutoftheroom,checkingthelivingroom,thekitchen,andeventhebathroom,buttherewasnosignofherlittlebrother."Arnar!Whereareyou?"shescreamed,hervoicehoarsewithfear.Thegroundtrembledbeneathherfeet,andthesmellofsulfurfilledtheair.Witheachpassingsecond,thedangergrewcloser,andGudrun'sanxietyskyrocketed.Sherackedherbrain,tryingtorecalltheclueArnarhadgivenher."LookformewhereIalwaysam."Butwherecouldthatbe?Paragraph2:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.Gudrunletoutasighofreliefmixedwithexasperation."Arnar,thisisnotimetosleep!"sheexclaimed.Arnaryawnedandrubbedhiseyes."What'sgoingon?"hemumbled."Thevolcanoiserupting,andwehavetogo!"Gudrunsaid,pullinghimup.Shethrewacoatoverhimandgrabbedhishand.Outside,theworldwasinchaos.Peoplewererunning,andtheskywasfilledwithash.GudrunandArnarmadetheirwaythroughthechaos,followingthecrowdtotheharbor.Whentheyfinallyreachedthesafetyoftheboat,Gudrunfeltasenseofcalmwashoverher.Sheknewthatnomatterwhatchallengeslayahead,theywouldfacethemtogether,asafamily.【答案】Arnarwasn'tthere!AknotofguiltformedinGudrun'sstonachasshebegantorememberArnarhadrunofftohideonelasttime.Soonafter,shehadfallenintoherownbed,completelyforgettingthegameandherbrother."Arnar!"Gudrunscreamed,lookingunderthechild'sbedandinhiscloset.TearsburnedhercheeksasthenoiseoutsideremindedGudrunthatthiswasnogame.Sheraisedafoottostampherfuryintothefloor,thenfrozeasArnar'scluesuddenlyechoedthroughher
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