續(xù)寫兩篇續(xù)寫一TakecareofeachotherIwasvisitingmysisterandwatchedasmyfifteen-year-oldnephew,Ben,emptiedthetrashwithoutbeingasked.“You’resuchagreatkid,”Itoldhim.Hesmiled.“Thetrashismyjob.I’mATTaroundhere.”Atmyconfusedlook,mysisterMandyexplainedthatATTstoodforAllThingsTrash.“EmptyingthetrashhasalwaysbeenBen’sjob.Ifithasanythingtodowithtrash,nomatterwhereitis,it’sBen’sjob.AndsweepingthefloorisAnna’sjob;sheisATSaroundhere.”Inodded.“Thatmakessense.”Afewdayslater,Iwasbackhome.Ihadadeadlineforahugeprojectatwork,andIwasreallyfeelingthepressure.BeforeIpickedupmysonfromschoolthatafternoon,Ihadboughtaroastchickenfordinner.Thatwouldbuymeanextrahourtoworkonmyproject.Now,itwas6:00p.m.,andIwasbusywithmyproject.MykidsweredownstairswatchingTV.Myeleven-year-oldson,Nathan,cameupstairsandsaid,“Mom,I’mgettinghungry.Canyouwarmupthechickennow?”“Inalittlebit,”Iansweredwithoutlookingupfromthecomputer.Tenminuteslater,myolderson,Jordan,cameintotellmethesamething.“I’lldoitsoon,”Isaid.Fifteenminutesafterthat,myeighteen-year-olddaughter,Julia,madethesamerequest.Igotangry.“Everyoneofyouisoldenoughtoputaroastchickeninthemicrowave,”Inearlyshouted.“YouguysarewatchingTVwhileI’mworkingonsomethingimportant.I’mtiredofbeingATF.”“ATF?”“AllThingsFood.It’smyresponsibilitytoplanthemeals,shopforthefood,cookthefood,andthencleanupthedishesafterward.Andsinceweeatthreetimesaday,it’sahugejob.Idon’twanttoyellatyouguysagain,butI’mbusynow,andIdefinitelycouldusesomehelp.”Twentyminuteslater,mykidscameupstairswithaplatefilledwithchickenandcheese.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenextday,whenJuliacamehomefromherjob,shewascarryingseveralbagsoffood.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【原文大意】在姐姐家的見聞：“我”去看望姐姐時(shí)，看到15歲的外甥本主動倒垃圾。本稱倒垃圾是他的工作，他是家里的“ATT”（All

Things

Trash，負(fù)責(zé)所有與垃圾有關(guān)事務(wù)

），而掃地是安娜的工作，她是“ATS”?；丶液蟮臓顩r：幾天后“我”回到家，工作上一個(gè)大項(xiàng)目臨近截止日期，壓力很大。接兒子放學(xué)前“我”買了烤雞當(dāng)晚餐。晚上6點(diǎn)，“我”忙于項(xiàng)目，孩子們在樓下看電視。11歲的兒子內(nèi)森、大兒子喬丹、18歲的女兒朱莉婭先后上樓讓“我”熱烤雞。“我”很生氣，抱怨自己是“ATF”，每天三餐，工作量大，希望孩子們能幫忙【續(xù)寫思路】根據(jù)上文和第一段首句Twentyminuteslater,mykidscameupstairswithaplatefilledwithchickenandcheese.可知，第一段主要是通過我和孩子之間的交流，推動情節(jié)的發(fā)展。具體可以寫孩子們道歉，表達(dá)對“我”壓力的理解，并邀請“我”吃飯；也可以寫“我”為剛才的態(tài)度表示歉意，并解釋壓力大的原因，以及看到孩子變化后“我”的欣慰之情；另外由第二段首句“Thenextday,whenJuliacamehomefromherjob,shewascarryingseveralbagsoffood.”可知第一段要寫孩子們決定接下來要分工做家務(wù)(ATF,ATT,ATS...)，或者“我”給他們分工做家務(wù)，以便讓“我”全力完成臨近截止日期的大項(xiàng)目。根據(jù)第二段首句Thenextday,whenJuliacamehomefromherjob,shewascarryingseveralbagsoffood.可知，孩子們已經(jīng)按照昨天的計(jì)劃開始進(jìn)入角色，可以是三個(gè)孩子一起ATF，也可以是孩子們按照ATF，ATTATW等分工合作，合理即可。之后要寫“我”看到孩子們變化后的欣慰之情。升華要緊扣題目“Takecareofeachother”，家人之間相互關(guān)心、相互照顧才能讓家庭更和睦，生活更幸福。【答案】Twentyminuteslater,mykidscameupstairswithaplatefilledwithchickenandcheese.“Mum,yourfood,”Nathansaidgently.Ilookedup,sayingwithembarrassment“Sorry,Iyelledatyouguys.”“Weunderstand,Mum.When’syourdeadline?”Jordanasked.“Intwodays,andIdon’tknowhowI’mgoingtofinish.”TearsthreatenedasIthoughtabouthowmuchworkIstillhadtodo.Seeingthis,Julialookedatherbrothersandsaid.“Forthenexttwodays,thethreeofusareATF.Let’sleaveMomalone.”(77words)Thenextday,whenJuliacamehomefromherjob,shewascarryingseveralbagsoffood.Seeingthis,herbrothersrantohelpherquickly.Anhourlater,Nathancameupstairsandhandedmeaplatecontainingaturkeysandwich,somechipsandappleslices.Hesmiled,whispering“Ihopeyourworkisgoingwell.”Ilaughed,tookabite,andthankedhimwithasmile.Ihadalwaysfeltitwasmyjobasamomtotakecareofmyfamily,buttheyshowedmethatit’sourjobtotakecareofeachother.(81words)續(xù)寫二Dadhadbeenalumberjack(伐木工）.

Asyearspassedon,hebecameangrywheneverhecouldn’tdosomethinghehaddoneasayoungerman.Fourdaysafterhissixty-seventhbirthday,Dadhadaheartattack

andwasrushedintothehospital.Hesurvived.Buthispassionforlifewasgone.Myhusband,Dick,andIinvitedDadtolivewithusonoursmallfarm.Wehopedthefreshcountrysideairwouldhelphimadjust.Withinaweekafterhemovedin,Iregretted.HecomplainedateverythingIdid.SoonIwastakingmyangeroutonDick.Webegantoquarrel.ThenextmonthIcalledeachofthementalhealthcentersaround.Iexplainedmyproblemtoeachofthem,butinvain.JustwhenIwasgivingup,oneofthem

said,“Ijustreadanarticle,

whichdescribedagroupofpatientsundertreatmentfordepression.Theirhealthhadimprovedgreatlywhengivenresponsibilityforadog.Thismighthelpyou.”Idrovetotheanimalshelterthatafternoon.AfterIfilledoutaform,anofficerledmetoarowofcages.AsInearedthelastcage,adoginthecornerstruggledtowalktothefrontandsatdown.Itwasapointer(獵犬).Thepoorconditionsputyears

onhisface.Buthiseyes,

calmandclear,lockedonmine.Ipointedtothedog.“Canyoutellmeabouthim?”Theofficerlooked,thenshookhishead.

“He’sappearedoutofnowhereandsatinfrontofthegate.WecallitCheyenne.”Idrovehomewiththedog.Reachingthehouse,Icalledloudly,“Ta-da!LookwhatIgotforyou!”Dadlooked,butthenignoredme.“Didyouhearme?”Ishouted.Westoodglaringateachother,whensuddenlythepointerwobbledtowardmydadandsatdown.Thenslowly,heraisedhispaw.Dad

remainedsilent.Thepointerwaitedpatiently.ThenDadwasonhiskneespickinguptheanimal.(349words)

Para1.Itwasthebeginningofawarmandlovingfriendship.

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_____________________________________________________________________________________Para2.Lateronenight,myhusbandandIwokeupbythebarkingofCheyenne.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________【原文大意】1.父親的變故：父親曾是伐木工，隨著年齡增長，做不了年輕時(shí)能做的事就會生氣。67歲生日后四天，父親心臟病發(fā)作被送醫(yī)，雖保住性命，但沒了對生活的熱情。2.接父親同住及矛盾：“我”和丈夫迪克邀請父親到小農(nóng)場同住，希望鄉(xiāng)村新鮮空氣能幫他調(diào)整狀態(tài)。可父親搬來一周內(nèi)，對“我”做的一切都抱怨，“我”因此和迪克吵架。

3.尋求解決辦法：第二個(gè)月，“我”聯(lián)系周邊心理健康中心求助無果。就在打算放棄時(shí)，有中心工作人員稱，讓抑郁癥患者照顧狗可改善健康狀況，這或許有用。

4.領(lǐng)狗回家：當(dāng)天下午“我”去動物收容所，填完表格后，工作人員帶“我”看籠子里的動物。在最后一個(gè)籠子旁，一只獵犬引起“我”注意，它來歷不明?！拔摇睅丶遥蚋赣H展示，父親起初無視，后獵犬走向父親，父親沉默，最終

kneel

（跪下

）抱起它。【續(xù)寫思路】根據(jù)上文和第一段首句Itwasthebeginningofawarmandlovingfriendship.可知，第一段主要圍繞父親和Cheyenne友誼發(fā)展過程展開。在Cheyenne的陪伴下，父親發(fā)生了很大變化：抱怨減少，脾氣變好，開始有自己的休閑活動，心情和身體情況改善，和“我”關(guān)系改善等均是合理內(nèi)容。根據(jù)第二段首句Lateronenight,myhusbandandIwokeupbythebarkingofCheyenne.可知，父親出現(xiàn)了突發(fā)情況，例如摔倒、生病等均可，在Cheyenne的幫助下，“我們”及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)，及時(shí)就醫(yī)，挽救了父親的生命。父親和Cheyenne有了更深的感情。升華部分的方向是人與動物的和諧關(guān)系?！敬鸢浮縄twasthebeginningofawarmandlovingfriendship.DadnamedthepointerCheyenne.EverydayhewalkedCheyennetwoorthreetimesonthefarm.Athome,CheyennefollowedDadeverywhereandwasalwayslyingquiet