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作文、習題

學習目標確定聚焦解決上節(jié)課存在問題目標Designmorecontextualexercisesandimprovecomprehensiveapplicationability.Thestudentsareableto1.comprehendthetexts,languagepatternsandgrammar.2.correctlyandaccuratelyusethelanguageincontext.“思”環(huán)節(jié)的設計問題1：問題2：WhatsuggestionsdoesSusanLuogivetoWorriedFriend?Besidessuggestions,whatelsedoesSusanLuosayinherletter?01作文分析5m02習題講解03句型本課主要內(nèi)容5m10m04語法10m05考句子10m句子檢查1.我會找到辦法自我提高，這樣明年我就能加入足球隊了。I'llfindawaytoimproveonmyownsothatIcanmaketheteamnextyear.(sothat引導目的狀語從句)2．我有點擔心在高級課程中跟不上其他學生，而且要適應所有的家庭作業(yè)也將會非常困難。(it＋be＋adj.＋todosth.)I'mabitworriedaboutkeepingupwiththeotherstudentsinmyadvancedcourse,andit'llbequitedifficulttogetusedtoallthehomework.句子檢查3．我的指導老師建議我選修高級文學，因為我喜歡英語而且成績不錯。(recommendthatsb.shoulddosth.)MyadviserrecommendedthatIshouldsignupforadvancedliteraturebecauseIlikeEnglishandI'mgoodatit.4．努力學習并非總是有趣的，但我會做好充分的準備，來迎接大學或者其他任何將要到來的事情。(V-ing作主)Studyinghardisn'talwaysfun,butI'llbewellpreparedforuniversityorwhateverelsecomesinthefuture.句子檢查5．對于你們這一代青少年來說，被電腦游戲和網(wǎng)絡世界所吸引并不稀奇。(it＋be＋adj.＋forsb.todosth.)Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.6.作為一名高中生,我知道我要更加努力地學習,習慣于承擔更多的責任。IknowI’llhavetostudyharderasaseniorhighschoolstudentandgetusedtobeingresponsibleforalotmore.句子檢查7.但是在網(wǎng)上花太多的時間是不健康的,這讓集中精力于生活中的其他事情變得非常困難。Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.

Whatisagoodwriting？

Let'senjoysomecompositions.太擠了太亂了太空了大鍋，標點呢？段呢？姐，你長發(fā)及腰的字體難掩你每句都錯的事實?。hatisagoodwriting？考情分析：歷年高考真題：建議信建議信常考題目假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他最近在漢語學習中碰到一些困難，很苦惱。希望得到你的幫助。請你給Jim寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.安慰對方2.給出相應的建議和理由假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他計劃在暑假期間學習漢語，向你咨詢漢語學習的建議。請你給Jim寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.對該學習計劃表示贊同2.給出學習建議和理由你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生來北京旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“胡同之行”或者“科技館之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議，內(nèi)容包括：1.贊同支持該計劃2.你的建議和理由困難類計劃類計劃類

2023年全國新高考卷1小作文（建議信）假定你是李華，外教Ryan準備將學生隨機分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習口語，你認為這樣分組存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.說明問題2.提出建議題目分析Analysis建議信寫作最常用的結構是：開頭段，寒暄問候和表明來意（有時需要介紹寫信人的身份）。中間段，表達建議和陳述原因。結尾段，表達希望建議被采納和禮節(jié)性祝好。注意：語氣禮貌得體。1：收件人Ryan是自己的老師，完成寫作任務的時候除了滿足“說明問題和提出建議”兩個題目硬性規(guī)定內(nèi)容；2：在提出不同想法的時候能否保持必要的禮貌和尊重是區(qū)分這篇寫作優(yōu)劣的關鍵所在。DearRyan,IamLiHua,astudentinyourspokenEnglishclass.Iamemailingtoexpressmyconcernsabouttherandompairingforourspeakingpracticesessions.WhileIappreciateyourefforttoimproveourspeakingskills,Ihavesomereservationsaboutthisapproach.Inmyopinion,randomlypairingstudentsmightnotalwaysresultinproductivesessions.ThereasonisthatstudentshavedifferentlevelsofEnglish,andpairingindividualswithsignificantlydifferentabilitiescouldmakecommunicationdifficult.Thiscouldleadtofrustrationforadvancedstudentsandmakeitchallengingforslowerlearnerstokeep

up.Therefore,Iwouldliketosuggestconsideringanalternativeapproachwherestudentscanchoosepartnersofsimilarabilityforspeakingpractice.Thiscancreateamoretailoredandeffectivepractice.Thankyouforlisteningtomyconcerns.Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Bestregards.Yours,LiHua作文分析Writealetterofadvice寫建議信1.Aletterofadviceshouldincludethefollowingparts: DateGreetingBodyCloseSignature2.建議信一般現(xiàn)在時為首選，次之為現(xiàn)在完成時,根據(jù)需要也會使用現(xiàn)在進行時，靈活運用；★提出建議時要使用情態(tài)動詞should,hadbetter,can,或句式Whynot...?等，避免使用must或may/might主體結構1.表明感同身受2.清晰陳述問題癥結3.提出建議及理由4.鼓勵對方嘗試你的建議作文分析朗讀課文P18Aletterofadviceshouldincludethefollowingparts:DateGreetingBodyCloseSignature10September2018DearWorriedFriend,Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest,Step1:(表明你的感同身受)Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.FourstepsofwritingthebodyStep2:清晰陳述問題的癥結Youthinkthatyourfriend/son/childplayscomputergamestoooften...Step3:提出建議及理由Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriends/son/daughterabout...It'snotunusualfor...to...,but...Step4:鼓勵對方嘗試你的建議Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendstotrynewhobbies.Whynot....?I'msure...Howtoputforwordyoursuggestions?Irecommend/suggestthatyoushould....Ithinkyoushould....Ithinkyou'dbetter....Whynot/don'tyou....?Howtoshowyouunderstandthefeelingsofworriedteenagersorparents?Youwrotethatyouareveryworried/angry/anxious/upset/depressed/about/withyourfriend/son...Iundersatandthatyouare.....andfeelterrible.真題再現(xiàn)假設你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom對學寫中國漢字很感興趣，但是感覺很難。請你給他寫封信。內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信目的2．你的經(jīng)驗3．練字建議審題假設你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom對學寫中國漢字很感興趣，但是感覺很難。請你給他寫封信。內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信目的2．你的經(jīng)驗3．練字建議顯性要點1．寫信目的2．你的經(jīng)驗3．練字建議隱性要點祝福片段構架寫信目的練字建議你的經(jīng)驗祝福收到消息Ihaveknownthat...你對漢字感興趣You’reinterestedinChinesecharacters.我可以幫你Icanhelpyou.______________interestedinlearningChinesecharacters________

________thegalaofthe40thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople'sRepublicofChina,_______________________________________________.LearningthatyouareinterestedinlearningChinesecharactersafterwatchingthegalaofthe70thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople’sRepublicofChina,I’dliketoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions.頭腦風暴HowcanyouhelpTom?我可以給你詳細講解中國漢字。在你練字的時候，我可以帶你一起學習更多中國文化。我可以幫你完成參賽作品。片段構架寫信目的練字建議你的經(jīng)驗祝福我有信心幫你寫一手好字。IamconfidentthatIcanbehelpfulifyouwanttowriteChinesecharacterswell.IcanofferyoudetailedexplanationsonChinesecharacters.IcanleadyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculturewhileyoupraticewritingChinesecharacters.Icanhelpyoufinishyourworksforcompetitions.IhaveacquiredagoodknowledgeofwritingChinesecharacters.IhaveagoodcommandoftraditionalChineseculture.IhaveexperienceinorganizingschoolChinesecharacterscompetitions.片段寫作IamconfidentthatIcanbehelpfulifyouwanttowriteChinesecharacterswell.IhaveacquiredagoodknowledgeofwritingChinesecharacters.IcanofferyoudetailedexplanationsonChinesecharacters.IhaveagoodcommandoftraditionalChineseculture.IcanleadyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculturewhileyoupraticewritingChinesecharacters.IhaveexperienceinorganizingschoolChinesecharacterscompetitions.Icanhelpyoufinishyourworksforcompetitions.IcanofferyoudetailedexplanationsonChinesecharacters.IhaveacquiredagoodknowledgeofwritingChinesecharacters.片段寫作IhaveacquiredagoodknowledgeofwritingChinesecharacters,whichenablesmetoofferyoudetailedexplanationsonChinesecharacters.IcanleadyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculturewhileyoupraticewritingChinesecharacters.IhaveagoodcommandoftraditionalChineseculture.WithagoodcommandoftraditionalChineseculture,IcanleadyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculturewhileyoupraticewritingChinesecharacters.片段寫作Icanhelpyoufinishyourworksforcompetitions.IhaveexperienceinorganizingschoolChinesecharacterscompetitions.ExperiencedinorganizingschoolChinesecharacterscompetitions,Icanhelpyoufinishyourworksforcompetitions.片段寫作片段寫作IamconfidentthatIcanbehelpfulifyouwanttowriteChinesecharacterswell.Tobeginwith,IhaveacquiredagoodknowledgeofwritingChinesecharacters,whichenablesmetoofferyoudetailedexplanationsonChinesecharacters.片段寫作WithagoodcommandoftraditionalChineseculture,IcanleadyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculturewhileyoupraticewritingChinesecharacters.ExperiencedinorganizingschoolChinesecharacterscompetitions,Icanhelpyoufinishyourworksforcompetitions.

建議1建議2片段構架寫信目的你的經(jīng)驗如果想練好字，要有足夠的耐心。建議1像我們初學者一樣用字帖輔助。建議2Besides,practicewithpatienceandyou’llmakeprogressintime.建議1Moreimportantly,

IstronglysuggestyouusecopybooksasweChinesedoatourbeginningstage.建議2練字建議祝福片段構架寫信目的你的經(jīng)驗希望我的建議對你有幫助，祝你順利練一手好字。（首尾呼應）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyouand

bestwishes.（首尾呼應）祝福練字建議片段寫作Besides,practicewithpatienceandyou’llmakeprogressintime.Moreimportantly,IstronglysuggestyouusecopybooksasweChinesedoatourbeginningstage.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyouand

bestwishes.思考探究成文________________LearningthatyouareinterestedinlearningChinesecharactersafterwatchingthegalaofthe70thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople’sRepublicofChina,I’dliketoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions.Howtimeflies！成文IamconfidentthatIcanbehelpfulifyouwanttowriteChinesecharacterswell._____________IhaveacquiredagoodknowledgeofwritingChinesecharacters,whichenablesmetoofferyoudetailedexplanationsonChinesecharacters.WithagoodcommandoftraditionalChineseculture,IcanleadyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculturewhileyoupraticewritingChinesecharacters.Tobeginwith,成文WithagoodcommandoftraditionalChineseculture,IcanleadyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculturewhileyoupraticewritingChinesecharacters.ExperiencedinorganizingschoolChinesecharacterscompetitions,Icanhelpyoufinishyourworksforcompetitions.___________practicewithpatienceandyou’llmakeprogressintime.

______________IstronglysuggestyouusecopybooksasweChinesedo